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Luana Makes A Friend. And Finds Two Orphan Little Girls. Chapter 9 Carrying off from chapter 8 a new heroine has appeared to help out Sailor Ceres! Sailor kaneko? Said Sailor Ceres. Hey there! Sorry for the late entry! Said Sailor Kaneko. She helped up Sailor Ceres back onto her feet. Crap now what? I can't take both of them on my own! said Raiyne. Can you still fight? Asked Sailor Kaneko. Yeah...now that you are here. Thanks for the help. said Sailor Ceres. Amor somehow recovers from raiynes attack, walked up to Sailor Kaneko and said Wow.... Kaneko looked down at amor smiled and she said. Why hello there kitty cat. We can do formal greetings later. now we fight! Said Sailor Ceres. Right on! Said Sailor Kaneko. Amor please go to a safe place. said Sailor Ceres. Amor went off as Ceres said. Sailor Ceres and Kaneko went into their fighting stance. with this the battle carried on between Sailor Ceres and Raiyne with now Kaneko helping Ceres out. Screw this...I can take both of you on my own! Raiyne came in to attack the two. Ceres and Kaneko looked at each other and nodded their heads. They both did the same as Raiyne got closer Kaneko and Ceres said Double kick! Raiyne got stunned for the fact of how much power they had working together. And she said Ugh! People were cheering on for Sailor Ceres and Kaneko. Grrrrrr....said Raiyne With no choice she flew away quickly and said back. Mark my words this isn't over yet! We will finish this battle another day! Before they knew it Raiyne was no where to be seen. Amor came out and said Good job sailor scouts! Thanks amor but I owe Sailor Kaneko my thanks more. said Sailor Ceres Aww....it was nothing! It was the least I can do to help out! Sorry to cut this short. But I have to make like a tree and leave. See ya! Sailor Kaneko made some ninja jumps to leave. We should do the same amor lets be off! said Sailor Ceres. Right! said Amor Before the crowed people could thank the sailor scouts they were gone. Luana and Amor now back at home, thought about the battle. Wow....said Amor I know right? Said Luana I didn't expect this at all...said Amor What I am more annoyed is that my love heartbeat flash attack was useless! It means now that I have to come up with a better powerful attack....said Luana This is going to be one tough battle...said Amor But hey. At least we have gained a new ally. said Luana smiling. But the problem is that we don't know what she looks like in her normal form. Said Amor Sadly you are right amor. But let's hope that we know soon enough.. said Luana Well...looks like theres only a few days left of your summer holidays...said Amor How time flies and changes too..said Luana Meanwhile in the elite house of evil Raiyne was confronting to Speed Leggy, about what happened. What?! Not only you could not find those children but another sailor scout appeared?! Asked Leggy Yes sadly my lord....I was about to kill Sailor Ceres until that new sailor scout appeared! Said Raiyne This is troublesome....said Leggy As Leggy desperately tries to think of a plan. some days passed on earth with no fighting going on. Luana got ready for a new school term. Wow you look great! Said Amor Thanks! Said Luana Now I can't go into the school. so I'll stay outside up on the tree branch ok? Said Amor Thats fine by me amor. Lets go! Said Luana As Luana and Amor were on their way to the school. they heard someone say Alright mom I heard that for the second time! she yelled back They looked over to see that a girl with a ginger hair just come out of a house. Luana said she must be a transfer student. Amor asked how do you know that? Look at her uniform. said Luana. I see....said Amor. Well lets go. said Luana. They finally got to the school. Have a nice day luana. I'll be waiting here until school finishes. said Amor. See you later amor, and stay out of trouble! said Luana. I will! said Amor She got into her classroom and sat down. The teacher shortly came in and he said Please take your seats. We have a new student joining us today class. So please be nice to her. You may come in now. The young girl came in and Luana was surprised as this was the same girl that she saw on her way to the school. and the young girl said Hello...my name is Kyla. Nice to meet you all. Miss kyla there is a seat next to Luana. so if you would please. Said the teacher. Kyla made her way to her seat and sat down quietly. Luana looked over at Kyla for a bit when she looked, Luanas head switched quickly looking at the other way before she got caught. Then lunch time came in. The people who used to speak to Luana muttered among themselves and said Hey.....don't you think that luana is a bit different now? asked one of them. The girl said Yeah....I think you are right. I do wonder what made her to change.... Luana braved herself up yo talk to kyla and she said. Um hello.... Kyla replied back with a smile saying Why hello there. Please.do not be afraid I don't bite The others looked at luana surprisenly and one young boy said Well would you look at that.....shes talking to someone So...said Kyla you saw me this morning? She asked Yes said Luana but I feel that we have met somewhere else before.... You think so? Asked Kyla Yes said Luana Both of them kept on talking. while the other group of people just sat and watched as their convo went on. The young girl said I feel jealous now...I should had tried harder before, and then she would had been my friend! Yeah....no kidding. hey look... Luana and Kyla started to laugh and giggle. She has never given off that expression before! She looks quite cute like that....said the handsome boy. Hey your a cool person to talk too. Wanna be my friend? asked Kyla. Me? Be your friend?.... Said Luana startled a bit to the question. Kyla nodded her head, and the rest of the others hoped for a no from her. and Luana started to smile who said Sure why not. The others were in disbelief of what they just saw to their shock. And the young girl said Since when is she able to smile like that?! And the young boy said Shes very pretty when she smiles like that.... Hey hands off she's mine! Said the handsome boy. So school ended. before Amor could come down from the tree, branch she saw Luana walk out of the school building with someone. As Kyla and Luana approached the tree that Amor was sitting on. she jumped down and Amor caught both of them by surprise. She went up to Kyla slowly and took a good sniff around her. Amor! You silly girl....said Luana picking her up. Amor you say? Asked kyla she thought and then she noticed something from before Yes. Sorry about that she's my cat...said Luana No biggie said Kyla Hey I need to be off now. I'll see ya at school tomorrow Luana! she said. Bye! said luana who waved at her. See ya said Kyla, and she left Amor what has gotten into you? Asked Luana as they walked. That girl....I sensed the same presence with her as I had with sailor kaneko.... Said Amor. You don't mean kyla is....said Luana. She is said Amor. Wow that's a shocker said Luana. Not so far off from the school two little girls got kicked out from the toy store due to them not having any money. a little girl and her baby sister is seen outside the toy store. A little 10 year old girl named Idaline asks herself Great...now what do we do? A baby girl next to her called Dacia at the age of 6 months had a sad face and was about to cry. Idaline seeing this, she tried to calm her down. but it was too late and Dacia. cried so loud and some sort of sonic sound wave came out from that cry! Amor somehow quickly sensed this. Her and Luana were not far off. so she jumped off from Luana and said I sensed something quick follow me Luana! They both ran until they got to a place that was a toy store, but now a damaged building. Idaline said Oh boy....you have really done it now Dacia... And Idaline spots Luana and Amor not so far off. what will she do now? Go to them for help? or run away with her baby sister? Look out for Chapter 10! I would really like to apologize to those who were reading my fanfction from the beginning...I didn't mean for it to take so long. I just wanted to finish all of the chapters, then post it up. I still hope you guys are willing to give me a chance in a way to do that...a matter of fact I got a new phone. I can't use it as of yet, and I was told I had to transfer all my stuff on my old phone to the computer somehow. so I transferred them all onto vizzed in my pm box. so I'll be posting the chapters up again as usual... Time for the summons legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : maguc : TheReaper7290 : hunter0409 : A user of this : Popeye116 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal: Any fail summons please help with thank you  And also if you would like to read this. and you have only just seen this chapter here is Chapter 0 to Chapter 8, if you would like to catch up on what has been happening story wise. ^^ Chapter 0 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79998 Chapter 1 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80024 Chapter 2 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80048 Chapter 3 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80063 Chapter 4 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80091 Chapter 5 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80102 Chapter 6 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80127 Chapter 7 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80148 Chapter 8 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80166 Luana Makes A Friend. And Finds Two Orphan Little Girls. Chapter 9 Carrying off from chapter 8 a new heroine has appeared to help out Sailor Ceres! Sailor kaneko? Said Sailor Ceres. Hey there! Sorry for the late entry! Said Sailor Kaneko. She helped up Sailor Ceres back onto her feet. Crap now what? I can't take both of them on my own! said Raiyne. Can you still fight? Asked Sailor Kaneko. Yeah...now that you are here. Thanks for the help. said Sailor Ceres. Amor somehow recovers from raiynes attack, walked up to Sailor Kaneko and said Wow.... Kaneko looked down at amor smiled and she said. Why hello there kitty cat. We can do formal greetings later. now we fight! Said Sailor Ceres. Right on! Said Sailor Kaneko. Amor please go to a safe place. said Sailor Ceres. Amor went off as Ceres said. Sailor Ceres and Kaneko went into their fighting stance. with this the battle carried on between Sailor Ceres and Raiyne with now Kaneko helping Ceres out. Screw this...I can take both of you on my own! Raiyne came in to attack the two. Ceres and Kaneko looked at each other and nodded their heads. They both did the same as Raiyne got closer Kaneko and Ceres said Double kick! Raiyne got stunned for the fact of how much power they had working together. And she said Ugh! People were cheering on for Sailor Ceres and Kaneko. Grrrrrr....said Raiyne With no choice she flew away quickly and said back. Mark my words this isn't over yet! We will finish this battle another day! Before they knew it Raiyne was no where to be seen. Amor came out and said Good job sailor scouts! Thanks amor but I owe Sailor Kaneko my thanks more. said Sailor Ceres Aww....it was nothing! It was the least I can do to help out! Sorry to cut this short. But I have to make like a tree and leave. See ya! Sailor Kaneko made some ninja jumps to leave. We should do the same amor lets be off! said Sailor Ceres. Right! said Amor Before the crowed people could thank the sailor scouts they were gone. Luana and Amor now back at home, thought about the battle. Wow....said Amor I know right? Said Luana I didn't expect this at all...said Amor What I am more annoyed is that my love heartbeat flash attack was useless! It means now that I have to come up with a better powerful attack....said Luana This is going to be one tough battle...said Amor But hey. At least we have gained a new ally. said Luana smiling. But the problem is that we don't know what she looks like in her normal form. Said Amor Sadly you are right amor. But let's hope that we know soon enough.. said Luana Well...looks like theres only a few days left of your summer holidays...said Amor How time flies and changes too..said Luana Meanwhile in the elite house of evil Raiyne was confronting to Speed Leggy, about what happened. What?! Not only you could not find those children but another sailor scout appeared?! Asked Leggy Yes sadly my lord....I was about to kill Sailor Ceres until that new sailor scout appeared! Said Raiyne This is troublesome....said Leggy As Leggy desperately tries to think of a plan. some days passed on earth with no fighting going on. Luana got ready for a new school term. Wow you look great! Said Amor Thanks! Said Luana Now I can't go into the school. so I'll stay outside up on the tree branch ok? Said Amor Thats fine by me amor. Lets go! Said Luana As Luana and Amor were on their way to the school. they heard someone say Alright mom I heard that for the second time! she yelled back They looked over to see that a girl with a ginger hair just come out of a house. Luana said she must be a transfer student. Amor asked how do you know that? Look at her uniform. said Luana. I see....said Amor. Well lets go. said Luana. They finally got to the school. Have a nice day luana. I'll be waiting here until school finishes. said Amor. See you later amor, and stay out of trouble! said Luana. I will! said Amor She got into her classroom and sat down. The teacher shortly came in and he said Please take your seats. We have a new student joining us today class. So please be nice to her. You may come in now. The young girl came in and Luana was surprised as this was the same girl that she saw on her way to the school. and the young girl said Hello...my name is Kyla. Nice to meet you all. Miss kyla there is a seat next to Luana. so if you would please. Said the teacher. Kyla made her way to her seat and sat down quietly. Luana looked over at Kyla for a bit when she looked, Luanas head switched quickly looking at the other way before she got caught. Then lunch time came in. The people who used to speak to Luana muttered among themselves and said Hey.....don't you think that luana is a bit different now? asked one of them. The girl said Yeah....I think you are right. I do wonder what made her to change.... Luana braved herself up yo talk to kyla and she said. Um hello.... Kyla replied back with a smile saying Why hello there. Please.do not be afraid I don't bite The others looked at luana surprisenly and one young boy said Well would you look at that.....shes talking to someone So...said Kyla you saw me this morning? She asked Yes said Luana but I feel that we have met somewhere else before.... You think so? Asked Kyla Yes said Luana Both of them kept on talking. while the other group of people just sat and watched as their convo went on. The young girl said I feel jealous now...I should had tried harder before, and then she would had been my friend! Yeah....no kidding. hey look... Luana and Kyla started to laugh and giggle. She has never given off that expression before! She looks quite cute like that....said the handsome boy. Hey your a cool person to talk too. Wanna be my friend? asked Kyla. Me? Be your friend?.... Said Luana startled a bit to the question. Kyla nodded her head, and the rest of the others hoped for a no from her. and Luana started to smile who said Sure why not. The others were in disbelief of what they just saw to their shock. And the young girl said Since when is she able to smile like that?! And the young boy said Shes very pretty when she smiles like that.... Hey hands off she's mine! Said the handsome boy. So school ended. before Amor could come down from the tree, branch she saw Luana walk out of the school building with someone. As Kyla and Luana approached the tree that Amor was sitting on. she jumped down and Amor caught both of them by surprise. She went up to Kyla slowly and took a good sniff around her. Amor! You silly girl....said Luana picking her up. Amor you say? Asked kyla she thought and then she noticed something from before Yes. Sorry about that she's my cat...said Luana No biggie said Kyla Hey I need to be off now. I'll see ya at school tomorrow Luana! she said. Bye! said luana who waved at her. See ya said Kyla, and she left Amor what has gotten into you? Asked Luana as they walked. That girl....I sensed the same presence with her as I had with sailor kaneko.... Said Amor. You don't mean kyla is....said Luana. She is said Amor. Wow that's a shocker said Luana. Not so far off from the school two little girls got kicked out from the toy store due to them not having any money. a little girl and her baby sister is seen outside the toy store. A little 10 year old girl named Idaline asks herself Great...now what do we do? A baby girl next to her called Dacia at the age of 6 months had a sad face and was about to cry. Idaline seeing this, she tried to calm her down. but it was too late and Dacia. cried so loud and some sort of sonic sound wave came out from that cry! Amor somehow quickly sensed this. Her and Luana were not far off. so she jumped off from Luana and said I sensed something quick follow me Luana! They both ran until they got to a place that was a toy store, but now a damaged building. Idaline said Oh boy....you have really done it now Dacia... And Idaline spots Luana and Amor not so far off. what will she do now? Go to them for help? or run away with her baby sister? Look out for Chapter 10! I would really like to apologize to those who were reading my fanfction from the beginning...I didn't mean for it to take so long. I just wanted to finish all of the chapters, then post it up. I still hope you guys are willing to give me a chance in a way to do that...a matter of fact I got a new phone. I can't use it as of yet, and I was told I had to transfer all my stuff on my old phone to the computer somehow. so I transferred them all onto vizzed in my pm box. so I'll be posting the chapters up again as usual... Time for the summons legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : maguc : TheReaper7290 : hunter0409 : A user of this : Popeye116 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal: Any fail summons please help with thank you And also if you would like to read this. and you have only just seen this chapter here is Chapter 0 to Chapter 8, if you would like to catch up on what has been happening story wise. ^^ Chapter 0 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79998 Chapter 1 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80024 Chapter 2 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80048 Chapter 3 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80063 Chapter 4 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80091 Chapter 5 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80102 Chapter 6 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80127 Chapter 7 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80148 Chapter 8 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80166 |
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Two Little Orphan Girls Named Idaline And Dacia Chapter 10 Two little kids? Said Luana They are not just any children. They are special and different in a way...Said Amor. Dacia now what do we do?...said Idaline as she hugged her looking scared. Luana brave herself to ask. Are you the ones who did this? And what if I said yes? Said Idaline with a snappy answer. Look...we somehow was near this area to hear what happened....please we don't want any trouble...said Luana. I don't trust you! All people are the same they are horrible! said Idaline who yelled back. And with that she ran away with Dacia. Oh great....said Amor. Now what do we do? asked Luana. We be patient with them until they can trust you. said Amor. Ok lets get out of here before we get caught. said Luana. Luana and Amor finally reached home from school. Wow....what a day... Said Luana. Hmm....said Amor. Amor what are you thinking about? Asked luana. Amor replied back Well...about those two little girls that we saw not so long ago.... I am worried about them too....said Luana. While Amor and Luana thought about what to do about the little girls. Back at the elites hq speed leggy contacts Rayine again ordering her to find those two girls. Rayine left to search for them. And this time she manages to find them. Sending a small blast to stop their tracks. Idaline says You....we saw you before in the children's theme park! You are correct little one. And I can tell you it was quite bothersome looking for the both of you everywhere. My lord asked me to find you and bring both of you back with me weather you like it or not. No we won't go with you ever! Screamed Idaline. She quickly grabbed her sister and tried to make a run for it. Raiyne flew and landed in front of them Leave us alone! Said Idaline starting to cry. As Rayine walked up to grab them both. Dacia was looking so sad and Idaline noticed this, she whispered in Dacia ear saying Use that attack that you used like before at the toy store. Idaline covered her ears, and Dacia an uncontrollable baby used that sonic wave like sound! What the hell is this?! Screamed Rayine. All Idaline hopes for was help from anyone, and again Amors cat ears twitched and she said Luana its them quick lets go! Right! said Luana. Amor and Luana dashed to the scene. Oh no! That's Rayine! Said Amor Is she trying to kidnap them?! I won't allow it! Said Luana She went to find somewhere to transform Idaline yelled saying Dacia keep at it until help arrives! while still covering her ears. Raiyne struggled to fight the sound wave. As it was so loud that it made her to fall onto both of her knees. I will not allow a child to get the best of me. said Raiyne muttering to herself. She quickly used an attack to stop Dacia from further doing any more loud wave sounds! No....said Idaline. Now both of you be good girls and come with me! Said Raiyne as she struggled to stand up from the attack. Never! Said idaline Somebody please help us! No one can help you. Only I can! Said Rayine finally gaining back her composure. Are you sure about that? Said a voice in the distance. Oh look who it is. said Rayine Trying to capture two innocent little girls. That's just wrong! And I will not allow that. In the name of Ceres I will flourish you! Said Sailor Ceres. Idaline happily said and jumped for joy Yay! Its Sailor Ceres! Please take your sister and go to a safe place said Sailor Ceres. Sure thing! Anything for you! Said Idaline. She left with her sister for safety You....I will not allow you to get in the way of my mission! Screamed Rayine. She dashed on forward to attack Ceres, but Ceres blocked it off. Need some help? Asked a familiar voice on top of a building. And knowing who it was Ceres said Yeah I sure do! The person came flying down it was Sailor kaneko! Rayine flared up angrily and said And you! Back off! Na...no can do. I am here to help Ceres as I please. And I will cleanse that sin of yours with my light! Said Sailor Kaneko Fine! Said Rayine She came back in for another attack Ceres and kaneko dodged the attack. Sailor Kaneko said Shock beam! For the first time ever being reckless due to her anger, Rayine got paralyzed. Quickly finish her off Ceres this attack won't hold out for long! Said Sailor Kaneko But....my attack is useless against her you saw what she did last time! said Sailor Ceres Try to believe in yourself. You have more attacks to unlock within you! Said Sailor Kaneko Alright I'll give it a try! Said Sailor Ceres She went into focus and unlocked another new attack. Projectile seeds wind attack! This attack was a lot more stronger than her last. A current of high wind with seeds in it raced towards Rayine. To her shock she was still stuck and trying to break free. The wind hit her and made Rayine trapped inside causing her to scream out of pain. This was hurting her a lot. The wind took off somewhere with Rayine still trapped inside it. Wow....said Sailor Ceres. Told ya. said Sailor Kaneko. Idaline came out with her sister and said Thanks so much for your help! No problem. said Sailor Ceres. With no one in sight. Sailor Ceres and Kaneko both detransformed. I thought very much that it was you. said Luana. Well...at least we both know what we look like in normal mode now. said Kyla. Idaline shocked to see Luana as Sailor Ceres, was having a hard time to speak up. Luana sighed and said If you want you can still run away again. I won't force you by asking questions.... Amor came out from no where and said No Luana! They are just children! This surprised idaline even more. Oh...hey Amor said Kyla. Hey! She said back happily then turned back to Luana Well Luana? What choice do we have? Amor please listen as well as they are children. They both have their own say of what they want to do. And its not right to make decisions for them as they will not like it. And besides.....they don't trust anyone remember? Said Luana. Well Luana. If that is what you want then, I won't argue back with you. said Amor. Let's go you guys. said Luana. As Amor, Kyla and Luana walked off to their homes. Idaline sat on the ground with her sister trying to think about the right way to go about their living, and trusting people. Shortly Amor and Luana were back home, luana went straight into the kitchen to make dinner. Amor watched funny cartoons on the telly. There was a knock on the door and Amor said Luana! Someone is at the door! Ok I'll go and see who it is. said Luana. She opened the door to see no one at first. And then something was pulling on her apron and she looked down. To her surprise she saw Idaline with Dacia. Luana still upset she glared and asked What do you want? Idaline feeling guilty about what she did before and said she says We followed you after the battle.... Why? asked Luana still upset with her. I thought about what you said about trusting people and whatnot....said Idaline. Dacia began to giggle happily And so? Asked Luana And so we needed to seek help from the right person, or people. said Idaline. I am not going to lie. I was really upset with what you said before which was not nice at all. Not all people are as horrible as you think. There are a lot more people out there who are really nice. said Luana lowing her voice further more. Idaline a bit scared she said out I am sorry ok?! Please forgive me for my stupid actions before! Said idaline begging and closing her eyes. Luana sighed and said That's all that you needed to say.... And besides I am a huge fan of yours as Sailor Ceres! Said Idaline. She squealed I can't believe that you are her! You are my hero! Luana blushed a bit and said Why thank you. Please come in before you get cold. Yay! said Idaline filled with happiness. She picked up her sister, and then happily made her way into the house Amor we have visitors. said Luana. Amor looks and was surprised to see who it was. Have a seat please. said Luana. Idaline and Dacia made themselves comfortable Um...my name is Idaline. And this baby is called Dacia, she's my sister as you know...said Idaline. Well my name is Luana and my cat is called Amor. Idaline where are both of you from? Asked Luana. We are orphans. Somehow both of us got onto this planet, we are looking for our mommy. said Idaline. Dacia started to play and clap happily. And since then you have been searching for her? Asked Luana. Idaline nodded her head. Amor its ok you can talk. said Luana. Are you sure? she asked. They heard you talk before so what's the problem? Said Luana. Well....I could startle them as they have not seen a talking cat before. said Amor. Idaline eyes widened and she said Wow a talking cat! So Idaline.. Please tell us more about what happened to your mommy? asked Amor. Yes please tell us....said Luana Idaline puts on her serious face to tell her story. I will end this chapter here. What will Amor and Luana discover about Idaline and Dacia? Better wait for chapter 11 to find out! legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : maguc : TheReaper7290 : hunter0409 : A user of this : Popeye116 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal : Two Little Orphan Girls Named Idaline And Dacia Chapter 10 Two little kids? Said Luana They are not just any children. They are special and different in a way...Said Amor. Dacia now what do we do?...said Idaline as she hugged her looking scared. Luana brave herself to ask. Are you the ones who did this? And what if I said yes? Said Idaline with a snappy answer. Look...we somehow was near this area to hear what happened....please we don't want any trouble...said Luana. I don't trust you! All people are the same they are horrible! said Idaline who yelled back. And with that she ran away with Dacia. Oh great....said Amor. Now what do we do? asked Luana. We be patient with them until they can trust you. said Amor. Ok lets get out of here before we get caught. said Luana. Luana and Amor finally reached home from school. Wow....what a day... Said Luana. Hmm....said Amor. Amor what are you thinking about? Asked luana. Amor replied back Well...about those two little girls that we saw not so long ago.... I am worried about them too....said Luana. While Amor and Luana thought about what to do about the little girls. Back at the elites hq speed leggy contacts Rayine again ordering her to find those two girls. Rayine left to search for them. And this time she manages to find them. Sending a small blast to stop their tracks. Idaline says You....we saw you before in the children's theme park! You are correct little one. And I can tell you it was quite bothersome looking for the both of you everywhere. My lord asked me to find you and bring both of you back with me weather you like it or not. No we won't go with you ever! Screamed Idaline. She quickly grabbed her sister and tried to make a run for it. Raiyne flew and landed in front of them Leave us alone! Said Idaline starting to cry. As Rayine walked up to grab them both. Dacia was looking so sad and Idaline noticed this, she whispered in Dacia ear saying Use that attack that you used like before at the toy store. Idaline covered her ears, and Dacia an uncontrollable baby used that sonic wave like sound! What the hell is this?! Screamed Rayine. All Idaline hopes for was help from anyone, and again Amors cat ears twitched and she said Luana its them quick lets go! Right! said Luana. Amor and Luana dashed to the scene. Oh no! That's Rayine! Said Amor Is she trying to kidnap them?! I won't allow it! Said Luana She went to find somewhere to transform Idaline yelled saying Dacia keep at it until help arrives! while still covering her ears. Raiyne struggled to fight the sound wave. As it was so loud that it made her to fall onto both of her knees. I will not allow a child to get the best of me. said Raiyne muttering to herself. She quickly used an attack to stop Dacia from further doing any more loud wave sounds! No....said Idaline. Now both of you be good girls and come with me! Said Raiyne as she struggled to stand up from the attack. Never! Said idaline Somebody please help us! No one can help you. Only I can! Said Rayine finally gaining back her composure. Are you sure about that? Said a voice in the distance. Oh look who it is. said Rayine Trying to capture two innocent little girls. That's just wrong! And I will not allow that. In the name of Ceres I will flourish you! Said Sailor Ceres. Idaline happily said and jumped for joy Yay! Its Sailor Ceres! Please take your sister and go to a safe place said Sailor Ceres. Sure thing! Anything for you! Said Idaline. She left with her sister for safety You....I will not allow you to get in the way of my mission! Screamed Rayine. She dashed on forward to attack Ceres, but Ceres blocked it off. Need some help? Asked a familiar voice on top of a building. And knowing who it was Ceres said Yeah I sure do! The person came flying down it was Sailor kaneko! Rayine flared up angrily and said And you! Back off! Na...no can do. I am here to help Ceres as I please. And I will cleanse that sin of yours with my light! Said Sailor Kaneko Fine! Said Rayine She came back in for another attack Ceres and kaneko dodged the attack. Sailor Kaneko said Shock beam! For the first time ever being reckless due to her anger, Rayine got paralyzed. Quickly finish her off Ceres this attack won't hold out for long! Said Sailor Kaneko But....my attack is useless against her you saw what she did last time! said Sailor Ceres Try to believe in yourself. You have more attacks to unlock within you! Said Sailor Kaneko Alright I'll give it a try! Said Sailor Ceres She went into focus and unlocked another new attack. Projectile seeds wind attack! This attack was a lot more stronger than her last. A current of high wind with seeds in it raced towards Rayine. To her shock she was still stuck and trying to break free. The wind hit her and made Rayine trapped inside causing her to scream out of pain. This was hurting her a lot. The wind took off somewhere with Rayine still trapped inside it. Wow....said Sailor Ceres. Told ya. said Sailor Kaneko. Idaline came out with her sister and said Thanks so much for your help! No problem. said Sailor Ceres. With no one in sight. Sailor Ceres and Kaneko both detransformed. I thought very much that it was you. said Luana. Well...at least we both know what we look like in normal mode now. said Kyla. Idaline shocked to see Luana as Sailor Ceres, was having a hard time to speak up. Luana sighed and said If you want you can still run away again. I won't force you by asking questions.... Amor came out from no where and said No Luana! They are just children! This surprised idaline even more. Oh...hey Amor said Kyla. Hey! She said back happily then turned back to Luana Well Luana? What choice do we have? Amor please listen as well as they are children. They both have their own say of what they want to do. And its not right to make decisions for them as they will not like it. And besides.....they don't trust anyone remember? Said Luana. Well Luana. If that is what you want then, I won't argue back with you. said Amor. Let's go you guys. said Luana. As Amor, Kyla and Luana walked off to their homes. Idaline sat on the ground with her sister trying to think about the right way to go about their living, and trusting people. Shortly Amor and Luana were back home, luana went straight into the kitchen to make dinner. Amor watched funny cartoons on the telly. There was a knock on the door and Amor said Luana! Someone is at the door! Ok I'll go and see who it is. said Luana. She opened the door to see no one at first. And then something was pulling on her apron and she looked down. To her surprise she saw Idaline with Dacia. Luana still upset she glared and asked What do you want? Idaline feeling guilty about what she did before and said she says We followed you after the battle.... Why? asked Luana still upset with her. I thought about what you said about trusting people and whatnot....said Idaline. Dacia began to giggle happily And so? Asked Luana And so we needed to seek help from the right person, or people. said Idaline. I am not going to lie. I was really upset with what you said before which was not nice at all. Not all people are as horrible as you think. There are a lot more people out there who are really nice. said Luana lowing her voice further more. Idaline a bit scared she said out I am sorry ok?! Please forgive me for my stupid actions before! Said idaline begging and closing her eyes. Luana sighed and said That's all that you needed to say.... And besides I am a huge fan of yours as Sailor Ceres! Said Idaline. She squealed I can't believe that you are her! You are my hero! Luana blushed a bit and said Why thank you. Please come in before you get cold. Yay! said Idaline filled with happiness. She picked up her sister, and then happily made her way into the house Amor we have visitors. said Luana. Amor looks and was surprised to see who it was. Have a seat please. said Luana. Idaline and Dacia made themselves comfortable Um...my name is Idaline. And this baby is called Dacia, she's my sister as you know...said Idaline. Well my name is Luana and my cat is called Amor. Idaline where are both of you from? Asked Luana. We are orphans. Somehow both of us got onto this planet, we are looking for our mommy. said Idaline. Dacia started to play and clap happily. And since then you have been searching for her? Asked Luana. Idaline nodded her head. Amor its ok you can talk. said Luana. Are you sure? she asked. They heard you talk before so what's the problem? Said Luana. Well....I could startle them as they have not seen a talking cat before. said Amor. Idaline eyes widened and she said Wow a talking cat! So Idaline.. Please tell us more about what happened to your mommy? asked Amor. Yes please tell us....said Luana Idaline puts on her serious face to tell her story. I will end this chapter here. What will Amor and Luana discover about Idaline and Dacia? 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Idaline And Dacia's Story Chapter 11 Ok...we don't know who our real mommy is. But I have always had a sense of connection to her. said Idaline. Oh....said Amor We have been living in the orphanage for sometime now...said Idaline. I see...said Luana. Idaline continued on saying And also we don't know why but we had always had some kind of powers...when Dacia is sad and is about to cry, she cries so loudly that it breaks windows. And adults get very mad when she does that. Amor then asks What's your power then Idaline? I....don't know. Mine has not been unlocked yet fully as far as I can know. All I can do is sense and that's about it. Idaline said this sadly Hmm...what a complete mystery that is. said Luana. It sure is. Said Amor. Well that's the story so far. Said Idaline. Ok lets eat and then head for bed. said Luana. Yay food! Said Idaline jumping for joy again. Luanas food is the best to eat! Oh yeah. Luana when you go to school tomorrow you better tell Kyla. She's a part of the team and needs to know that, as well. Said Amor. Everyone ate and went to How can I face Lord Leggy this way? I have foolishly not completed any of my missions. I have ashamed myself as the elite of evil! That new attack Sailor Ceres did was far too powerful! Dam it all! I rather had died than to have lived to see what lord leggy has to say about my failures! Rayine said a voice in the distance. Raiyne trembled, knowing who that voice belonged too. She stood up and made her way to the main room. In a bubble looking like appeared Leggy. What is your report so far? He asked Raiyne looking the other way with one of her arms on her side. While the other crossed over holding that arm on the side. She couldn't say a word, as she had a look of fear on her face. Leggy called out to her again, but his voice lowered he said it scarily which caused Rayine to shiver, and also feel tense She finally answered saying Yes my lord.... Why did it take you this long to reply back to me? Are you hiding something that I should know? Said leggy Rayine shook in fear and said I...was not able to defeat the sailor scouts.... Why? he asked back. Well because....Rayine choked out trying to say the reason. Because? Said Leggy Because of Sailor Ceres.....she gained a new ability of power! I was overwhelmed by this new power of hers! It was far too powerful than I thought! Even me got hurt by it! I was not able to handle it at all! I see....said Leggy. Raiyne who felt really pressured to say this. She somehow calmed down and got her composer back. I was not able to finish my missions as you asked me of. I failed them all....said Raiyne. I still have use for you. said Leggy. Raiyne looks up at him and says What must I do? Here is what you are going to do. said Leggy After her meeting with Leggy Raiyne wondered off into the streets late at night. She transformed into her human form. She took a long walk thinking about what she wanted she said Let me go to this earth school. Maybe I can learn what I need too from that place. On earth a new day starts Luana gets up early to get herself ready for school, and to make breakfast as well. Amor please look after Idaline and Dacia. said Luana. Ok leave it to me! Said Amor. Luana why can't we come with you? Asked Idaline pouting her face. Raiyne is out to get you and your sister. I can't take any chances for that. Both of you will be safe here. Said Luana Ok....said Idaline with a sad face. Hey....said Luana. She bends down to look at Idaline and raise her chin a bit to have eye contact. What's with the sad face? She asked. Well....I'm going to miss you...said Idaline. I'll get to school and come home as quickly as I can ok? While I do that, can you smile for me the whole day? I'll try too....said Idaline. Good! Said Luana Luana grabbed her bag and opened the door. Have a nice day Luana. And please remember to tell Kyla of our discussion concerning these two ok? Said Amor. I will don't worry. said Luana as she waved goodbye to them. Luana closed the door and set off to go to Kylas house. She came around a street corner and she heard a familiar voice saying I'll do the shopping later on mom! Right now I need to get to school! The person came out of the house and it was Kyla! She walks and then she looks up. Oh? She spotted Luana in the distance, and waved to her and said Hi there! Luana waves back and runs up to her. Shall we get going to school then? You bet! Said Kyla Both of them made their way to the school and sat in their seats. The teacher came in some mins after and said Class. The school has a half day today. All the students cheered on loudly, as Luana and Kyla looked at each other they both giggled. But. said the teacher There is a new exchange student joining us today. Please come in if you will. The young girl came in her skin colour was not right, and same with her uniform. Hmm...something's not right said Luana whispering to Kyla. I totally agree with you on that. Kyla whispered back. Please introduce yourself. said the teacher. Um hello my name is Charlotte April imbre, but please call me Charlotte for short. Its a pleasure to meet you all. Take your seat please over there. Said the teacher pointing to her seat. Charlotte made her way to sit down. This aura....said Kyla It's coming from Charlotte Luana. I see... said Luana. Lunch time came around, and everyone went away to do their own thing. Luana and kyla were talking to each other until Charlotte came up to them saying May I join you? Kyla looked at Luana who looked back at Kyla, confused then looked up at Charlotte and said Uh...sure. Thanks! Said Charlotte. She sat down with them and asked So. How long have you two been friends for? Well....said Kyla For quite some time now. I see. You two have a nice bond with one another due to your friendship. Said Charlotte smiling. Enough about us. What about you? I mean if you don't mind telling us a bit of yourself said Luana. Well....I don't know where I was born or who my real family are....I've always had horrible past of that, so I have always been alone...I don't really have any friends sadly. I hope to come to a day that I won't be alone anymore and obtain something called *happiness.* Said Charlotte. Oh no....Charlotte. I am really sorry about that...said Luana. Um...its ok. I'm used to it by now..said Charlotte. Well me and Kyla need to get ourselves some food. So please excuse us. It was really nice talking to you. said Luana. Same for you. said Charlotte smiling again sweetly. As Luana and Kyla walked off. What they did not know that Charlotte did an evil grin of smile. Before everyone knew it school finished at the blink of an eye. All the students made their way home. As Luana and Kyla were about to reach the school gates, Charlotte catches up with them and says I hope to see you two the next day of school! I got to go home now bye! Kyla said Bye Charlotte! Charlotte left. Luana and Kyla discussed about her as they walked. Hmm.....shes a strange one...said Luana. And about her not having friends is pretty quite sad. Maybe we should friend her? Said Kyla. I dunno Kyla....said Luana. Oh come on! It won't be so bad as long as we don't say about us being the sailor scouts. Said kyla. Ok...but I will blame you and say told you so if anything we find out about her turns bad. said Luana. Fair enough. said Kyla. Luana still in need of wanting to tell Kyla what happen she said Kyla. There is something important that you need to know about those two little girls that you saw the other day.... And so Luana told Kyla everything from top to bottom. Kyla said Wow...talk about peer pressure. I know....said Luana I know! Lets head for my house first ok? They are both staying there. Ok! Said Kyla. Kyla and Luana entered the house Hello? Amor, Idaline Dacia?! Where are you guys?! I finished school early today! Amor came out of the kitchen with a sad face. Amor where's Idaline and Dacia? Asked Luana. Well....your not going to like what I have to say..said Amor. What happened? asked Kyla. Both of them somehow left the house on their own....said Amor. WHAT??!!!! Screamed Luana Where were you when this happened? said who Kyla asked again. I was in the bathroom having a pee in the toliet...Luana I'm so sorry. I should have kept a better eye on those two...said Amor still very sad with her cat ears hanged down low. Luana said back Its not your fault Amor, both of them are mischievous. I'll give them both a good yell. Kyla and Amor lets move! All three of them rushed out to find Idaline and Dacia. Idaline and Dacia were wondering around the streets. Idaline wondering in her thoughts said Hmm....I think we should head back to Luana's place...it was wrong of us to sneak out without letting Amor know..shes probably worried and angry by now. And with that both of them made their way back, but little do they know that Raiyne spotted them both she flies down. But something seems different about her. And she says I finally found you twits. smiling evilly as she said that. Oh no! Will the others get there on time before Idaline and Dacia gets captured?! legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : maguc : TheReaper7290 : hunter0409 : A user of this : Popeye116 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal : Ok...we don't know who our real mommy is. But I have always had a sense of connection to her. said Idaline. Oh....said Amor We have been living in the orphanage for sometime now...said Idaline. I see...said Luana. Idaline continued on saying And also we don't know why but we had always had some kind of powers...when Dacia is sad and is about to cry, she cries so loudly that it breaks windows. And adults get very mad when she does that. Amor then asks What's your power then Idaline? I....don't know. Mine has not been unlocked yet fully as far as I can know. All I can do is sense and that's about it. Idaline said this sadly Hmm...what a complete mystery that is. said Luana. It sure is. Said Amor. Well that's the story so far. Said Idaline. Ok lets eat and then head for bed. said Luana. Yay food! Said Idaline jumping for joy again. Luanas food is the best to eat! Oh yeah. Luana when you go to school tomorrow you better tell Kyla. She's a part of the team and needs to know that, as well. Said Amor. Everyone ate and went to How can I face Lord Leggy this way? I have foolishly not completed any of my missions. I have ashamed myself as the elite of evil! That new attack Sailor Ceres did was far too powerful! Dam it all! I rather had died than to have lived to see what lord leggy has to say about my failures! Rayine said a voice in the distance. Raiyne trembled, knowing who that voice belonged too. She stood up and made her way to the main room. In a bubble looking like appeared Leggy. What is your report so far? He asked Raiyne looking the other way with one of her arms on her side. While the other crossed over holding that arm on the side. She couldn't say a word, as she had a look of fear on her face. Leggy called out to her again, but his voice lowered he said it scarily which caused Rayine to shiver, and also feel tense She finally answered saying Yes my lord.... Why did it take you this long to reply back to me? Are you hiding something that I should know? Said leggy Rayine shook in fear and said I...was not able to defeat the sailor scouts.... Why? he asked back. Well because....Rayine choked out trying to say the reason. Because? Said Leggy Because of Sailor Ceres.....she gained a new ability of power! I was overwhelmed by this new power of hers! It was far too powerful than I thought! Even me got hurt by it! I was not able to handle it at all! I see....said Leggy. Raiyne who felt really pressured to say this. She somehow calmed down and got her composer back. I was not able to finish my missions as you asked me of. I failed them all....said Raiyne. I still have use for you. said Leggy. Raiyne looks up at him and says What must I do? Here is what you are going to do. said Leggy After her meeting with Leggy Raiyne wondered off into the streets late at night. She transformed into her human form. She took a long walk thinking about what she wanted she said Let me go to this earth school. Maybe I can learn what I need too from that place. On earth a new day starts Luana gets up early to get herself ready for school, and to make breakfast as well. Amor please look after Idaline and Dacia. said Luana. Ok leave it to me! Said Amor. Luana why can't we come with you? Asked Idaline pouting her face. Raiyne is out to get you and your sister. I can't take any chances for that. Both of you will be safe here. Said Luana Ok....said Idaline with a sad face. Hey....said Luana. She bends down to look at Idaline and raise her chin a bit to have eye contact. What's with the sad face? She asked. Well....I'm going to miss you...said Idaline. I'll get to school and come home as quickly as I can ok? While I do that, can you smile for me the whole day? I'll try too....said Idaline. Good! Said Luana Luana grabbed her bag and opened the door. Have a nice day Luana. And please remember to tell Kyla of our discussion concerning these two ok? Said Amor. I will don't worry. said Luana as she waved goodbye to them. Luana closed the door and set off to go to Kylas house. She came around a street corner and she heard a familiar voice saying I'll do the shopping later on mom! Right now I need to get to school! The person came out of the house and it was Kyla! She walks and then she looks up. Oh? She spotted Luana in the distance, and waved to her and said Hi there! Luana waves back and runs up to her. Shall we get going to school then? You bet! Said Kyla Both of them made their way to the school and sat in their seats. The teacher came in some mins after and said Class. The school has a half day today. All the students cheered on loudly, as Luana and Kyla looked at each other they both giggled. But. said the teacher There is a new exchange student joining us today. Please come in if you will. The young girl came in her skin colour was not right, and same with her uniform. Hmm...something's not right said Luana whispering to Kyla. I totally agree with you on that. Kyla whispered back. Please introduce yourself. said the teacher. Um hello my name is Charlotte April imbre, but please call me Charlotte for short. Its a pleasure to meet you all. Take your seat please over there. Said the teacher pointing to her seat. Charlotte made her way to sit down. This aura....said Kyla It's coming from Charlotte Luana. I see... said Luana. Lunch time came around, and everyone went away to do their own thing. Luana and kyla were talking to each other until Charlotte came up to them saying May I join you? Kyla looked at Luana who looked back at Kyla, confused then looked up at Charlotte and said Uh...sure. Thanks! Said Charlotte. She sat down with them and asked So. How long have you two been friends for? Well....said Kyla For quite some time now. I see. You two have a nice bond with one another due to your friendship. Said Charlotte smiling. Enough about us. What about you? I mean if you don't mind telling us a bit of yourself said Luana. Well....I don't know where I was born or who my real family are....I've always had horrible past of that, so I have always been alone...I don't really have any friends sadly. I hope to come to a day that I won't be alone anymore and obtain something called *happiness.* Said Charlotte. Oh no....Charlotte. I am really sorry about that...said Luana. Um...its ok. I'm used to it by now..said Charlotte. Well me and Kyla need to get ourselves some food. So please excuse us. It was really nice talking to you. said Luana. Same for you. said Charlotte smiling again sweetly. As Luana and Kyla walked off. What they did not know that Charlotte did an evil grin of smile. Before everyone knew it school finished at the blink of an eye. All the students made their way home. As Luana and Kyla were about to reach the school gates, Charlotte catches up with them and says I hope to see you two the next day of school! I got to go home now bye! Kyla said Bye Charlotte! Charlotte left. Luana and Kyla discussed about her as they walked. Hmm.....shes a strange one...said Luana. And about her not having friends is pretty quite sad. Maybe we should friend her? Said Kyla. I dunno Kyla....said Luana. Oh come on! It won't be so bad as long as we don't say about us being the sailor scouts. Said kyla. Ok...but I will blame you and say told you so if anything we find out about her turns bad. said Luana. Fair enough. said Kyla. Luana still in need of wanting to tell Kyla what happen she said Kyla. There is something important that you need to know about those two little girls that you saw the other day.... And so Luana told Kyla everything from top to bottom. Kyla said Wow...talk about peer pressure. I know....said Luana I know! Lets head for my house first ok? They are both staying there. Ok! Said Kyla. Kyla and Luana entered the house Hello? Amor, Idaline Dacia?! Where are you guys?! I finished school early today! Amor came out of the kitchen with a sad face. Amor where's Idaline and Dacia? Asked Luana. Well....your not going to like what I have to say..said Amor. What happened? asked Kyla. Both of them somehow left the house on their own....said Amor. WHAT??!!!! Screamed Luana Where were you when this happened? said who Kyla asked again. I was in the bathroom having a pee in the toliet...Luana I'm so sorry. I should have kept a better eye on those two...said Amor still very sad with her cat ears hanged down low. Luana said back Its not your fault Amor, both of them are mischievous. I'll give them both a good yell. Kyla and Amor lets move! All three of them rushed out to find Idaline and Dacia. Idaline and Dacia were wondering around the streets. Idaline wondering in her thoughts said Hmm....I think we should head back to Luana's place...it was wrong of us to sneak out without letting Amor know..shes probably worried and angry by now. And with that both of them made their way back, but little do they know that Raiyne spotted them both she flies down. But something seems different about her. And she says I finally found you twits. smiling evilly as she said that. Oh no! 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Idaline and Dacia gets captured Chapter 12 Leaving off from chapter 11 Raiyne finds Idaline and dacia again! No...not you again...said Idaline shaking in fear. She grabbed her sister in order to run away. Your not getting away again from me this time. said Raiyne. She used her fire magic to block off their path in case they tried to run away. Raiyne made her way to grab the both of them. Idaline still scared looks at dacia who was frightened. Idaline perks up to be confidant to fight. She said to herself If dacia has powers then so do I...but, how do I bring it out? Raiyne continues her march on the long road who is halfway where Idaline and Dacia is at. Idaline says to Dacia stay here ok? Dacia got the message Idaline stood up and walked towards Raiyne a little. And so Raiyne said Oh....what is this? You think you can take me on? Well....its better to try than to run away! Said Idaline. What a brave little girl you are. I commend you for that. said Raiyne Yeah as if I'll believe that! Said Idaline. She started to run towards Raiyne. Lets see what you've got little girl. said Raiyne. I'll show you! Said Idaline. She got more closer to Raiyne. Thought of a move, and Idaline said this is for mommy! Collision course! Idaline kicked Raiyne right in the stomach like a horse would do. Ugh! That was not very nice....said Raiyne. Uh oh.... said Idaline who tried to run back to where her sister was, but Raiyne grabbed her. Hey! Let me go! Screamed Idaline as she struggled to break free. Sighs* that's one down and one to go. Said Raiyne. Raiyne made her way over to get Dacia. Dacia run away! Yelled Idaline. Dacia who is still very much a baby can't run Raiyne finally got to her as she picks her up Dacia does something. She grabs one of Raiynes hand, hold it firm and then she bites her hand so hard. It made Raiyne to scream so loud that she dropped them both on the ground without knowing. Good job Dacia! Said Idaline. She quickly picks her up and then runs away again. Ahh!!! How could you do that?! It hurts! My beautiful hand! Look at what you have done to it! That's it playtime is over! Raiyne quickly recovers and captures the both of them again, with her incredible fast speed. Let us go right now! Yelled Idaline. Oh....shut up. Said Raiyne. She uses a Oh no...you guys have a look! Said Amor. Luana and Kyla did so. and they both gasped because they saw Raiyne flew by with Idaline and Dacia! Oh great now what?! Asked Kyla. We follow them that's what! Said Luana. And so the three followed Raiyne to where she was heading. Which lead to a huge forest. Luana did not lose sight of Raiyne, and continued on with the others. until they came to a house brick looking like. Raiyne descended from the sky and landed onto the ground. She entered the house. While the 3 people who saw her concealed themselves in the bushes. Alright said Luana this may be our toughest battle yet. We must get those two back at all costs! I hear you. said Kyla who was ready to kick some butt. You can never know what kind of attacks she will pull. Be careful on that you two. said Amor. Time to transform said Luana. Meanwhile in the HQ, Rayine put Idaline and Dacia in a cage so that they will stay put. She went to go and contact planet Speed Leggy. Leggy appeared and asked again What is your new report? Rayine shows Leggy the captive girls. Good you finally have caught them. When ready head back to space with them. Yes my lord. said Raiyne. Idaline woke up and looked around. She was in a cage with her sister. I'm scared....said Idaline. Raiyne went to the cage to check on them, and she saw that Idaline was awake first. Your awake I see. said Rayine Idaline didn't answer her back. She simply stuck her tongue at Raiyne. Rayine got annoyed by this and also her left eye twitched saying Why you little... The others will come for us and beat you to a pulp! We shall see about that brat. Enjoy your stay we will be heading off to space soon. said Raiyne. She walked away, and Idaline whispered Luana please find us! As Raiyne was about to leave the room, she sensed something disturbing and she said Whos there?! Oh...it seems you have sensed our presence. said a voice. Show yourselves! Demanded Raiyne. Are you sure you really want that? Said another voice. Show yourself! Or the girls will suffer the consequences! Said Raiyne She used her fast speed to get to where the cage was. Then two figure likes descended from the sky and Raiyne said I should had known it was you two... Its Sailor Ceres and Sailor Kaneko! Said Idaline. Capturing little girls for bad unknown reasons. That is unreasonable I will flourish you! Said Sailor Ceres. I see you still have not seen the light yet. Let me help you with that by cleansing your sins! Said Sailor Kaneko. Be my guest. This time I will destroy you both! Said Raiyne The battle to save Idaline and Dacia begins! Will Sailor Ceres and Kaneko be able to get them both back from Raiyne? legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : TheReaper7290 : A user of this : hunter0409 : Popeye116 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal : Idaline and Dacia gets captured Chapter 12 Leaving off from chapter 11 Raiyne finds Idaline and dacia again! No...not you again...said Idaline shaking in fear. She grabbed her sister in order to run away. Your not getting away again from me this time. said Raiyne. She used her fire magic to block off their path in case they tried to run away. Raiyne made her way to grab the both of them. Idaline still scared looks at dacia who was frightened. Idaline perks up to be confidant to fight. She said to herself If dacia has powers then so do I...but, how do I bring it out? Raiyne continues her march on the long road who is halfway where Idaline and Dacia is at. Idaline says to Dacia stay here ok? Dacia got the message Idaline stood up and walked towards Raiyne a little. And so Raiyne said Oh....what is this? You think you can take me on? Well....its better to try than to run away! Said Idaline. What a brave little girl you are. I commend you for that. said Raiyne Yeah as if I'll believe that! Said Idaline. She started to run towards Raiyne. Lets see what you've got little girl. said Raiyne. I'll show you! Said Idaline. She got more closer to Raiyne. Thought of a move, and Idaline said this is for mommy! Collision course! Idaline kicked Raiyne right in the stomach like a horse would do. Ugh! That was not very nice....said Raiyne. Uh oh.... said Idaline who tried to run back to where her sister was, but Raiyne grabbed her. Hey! Let me go! Screamed Idaline as she struggled to break free. Sighs* that's one down and one to go. Said Raiyne. Raiyne made her way over to get Dacia. Dacia run away! Yelled Idaline. Dacia who is still very much a baby can't run Raiyne finally got to her as she picks her up Dacia does something. She grabs one of Raiynes hand, hold it firm and then she bites her hand so hard. It made Raiyne to scream so loud that she dropped them both on the ground without knowing. Good job Dacia! Said Idaline. She quickly picks her up and then runs away again. Ahh!!! How could you do that?! It hurts! My beautiful hand! Look at what you have done to it! That's it playtime is over! Raiyne quickly recovers and captures the both of them again, with her incredible fast speed. Let us go right now! Yelled Idaline. Oh....shut up. Said Raiyne. She uses a Oh no...you guys have a look! Said Amor. Luana and Kyla did so. and they both gasped because they saw Raiyne flew by with Idaline and Dacia! Oh great now what?! Asked Kyla. We follow them that's what! Said Luana. And so the three followed Raiyne to where she was heading. Which lead to a huge forest. Luana did not lose sight of Raiyne, and continued on with the others. until they came to a house brick looking like. Raiyne descended from the sky and landed onto the ground. She entered the house. While the 3 people who saw her concealed themselves in the bushes. Alright said Luana this may be our toughest battle yet. We must get those two back at all costs! I hear you. said Kyla who was ready to kick some butt. You can never know what kind of attacks she will pull. Be careful on that you two. said Amor. Time to transform said Luana. Meanwhile in the HQ, Rayine put Idaline and Dacia in a cage so that they will stay put. She went to go and contact planet Speed Leggy. Leggy appeared and asked again What is your new report? Rayine shows Leggy the captive girls. Good you finally have caught them. When ready head back to space with them. Yes my lord. said Raiyne. Idaline woke up and looked around. She was in a cage with her sister. I'm scared....said Idaline. Raiyne went to the cage to check on them, and she saw that Idaline was awake first. Your awake I see. said Rayine Idaline didn't answer her back. She simply stuck her tongue at Raiyne. Rayine got annoyed by this and also her left eye twitched saying Why you little... The others will come for us and beat you to a pulp! We shall see about that brat. Enjoy your stay we will be heading off to space soon. said Raiyne. She walked away, and Idaline whispered Luana please find us! As Raiyne was about to leave the room, she sensed something disturbing and she said Whos there?! Oh...it seems you have sensed our presence. said a voice. Show yourselves! Demanded Raiyne. Are you sure you really want that? Said another voice. Show yourself! Or the girls will suffer the consequences! Said Raiyne She used her fast speed to get to where the cage was. Then two figure likes descended from the sky and Raiyne said I should had known it was you two... Its Sailor Ceres and Sailor Kaneko! Said Idaline. Capturing little girls for bad unknown reasons. That is unreasonable I will flourish you! Said Sailor Ceres. I see you still have not seen the light yet. Let me help you with that by cleansing your sins! Said Sailor Kaneko. Be my guest. This time I will destroy you both! Said Raiyne The battle to save Idaline and Dacia begins! Will Sailor Ceres and Kaneko be able to get them both back from Raiyne? legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : TheReaper7290 : A user of this : hunter0409 : Popeye116 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal : |
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In Comes Starrite, And His Thirst For Revenge Chapter 13 Left off from chapter 12. The sailor scouts followed Raiyne in order to save Idaline and Dacia from her! Will they both be able to do it? Sailor scouts please help! Said Idaline trying to break free from the cage. Hold on Idaline we're coming! Said Sailor Ceres. You need to get pass me to get to them. And I am afraid that I can not allow that to happen. Lord Leggy wants those girls, and I will do so by bringing them to him. Said Raiyne. We won't allow that to happen! Said Sailor Kaneko. This may be my last introduction to you. The pounding of the rain will drown my sorrows....and your screams. Sailor scouts prepare to meet your doom! Said Raiyne. She attacked them both head on. Causing them to hit the wall. Is it me...or has she somehow gotten stronger? Said Sailor Ceres trying to get up. No. She's gotten a lot more stronger. said Sailor Kaneko struggling to stand. Yeah....but we can not afford to lose this battle. Idaline and Dacias life's are at stake! Said Sailor Ceres. I'm with you on that. Lets do our best to get them back. We would need to use any attacks that we have. Said Sailor Kaneko. If that doesn't work we go to plan B. said Sailor Ceres. Plan B? Asked Kaneko looking confused. Unlock more new attacks. It will be highly effective, and Raiyne like last time will not be able to handle it. said Ceres. I love that plan. said Kaneko smirking. Alright lets get back to the fight. said Ceres. They both marched forward towards Raiyne. That's nice that you were both able to withstand my attack like that. I am a lot more stronger than I was before. Lord Leggy gave me unimaginable powers to defeat you. It seems to be working. said Raiyne. No wonder....said Ceres. Sailor scouts you can do this! Beat up that witch! Said Idaline. Brat. What did you just call me? Said Raiyne looking at her. With Raiyne looking the other way distracted Ceres and Kaneko came in with a punch. This made Raiyne to ski backwards. I let my guard down next time that won't happen. said Raiyne. She flew towards the sailor scouts, and used water attack. Oh no...look out! said sailor Ceres. Raiyne used her water attack on them, followed by a thunder and lightning attack. This pained Sailor Ceres and Kaneko badly. Raiyne lets the water disperse to see the results. Sailor scouts don't give up! I believe in you! Shouted Idaline as she watched in horror. Raiyne used another water attack, which formed a ice spear. She was about to attack the sailor scouts and Ceres cried out saying Wait Raiyne! She stopped and said Why should I wait? The chance for me to kill you now is at hand. Kaneko said Is this what you really want? Of course it is! Said Raiyne answering back. Let me ask you a question...are you Charlotte in your human form? Asked Ceres. No I am not! Said Raiyne. It can't be... so that aura I felt was from you? Said Kaneko in disbelief. Raiyne said back I am not this Charlotte that you speak of! Quit fighting that, we know the truth...said Ceres. I may be her what of it? asked Raiyne. Ceres asked again I've been thinking ever since about what you said to us back then. Was all that a lie? And if you wanted too you could had killed us at school when you had the chance. Why didn't you? So I can find out your weakness. Friendships are so easy to obtain, and to destroy as well. So I thought to destroy you by befriending you. Said Raiyne. Kaneko thought then said I think that's not the truth. Raiyne. No Charlotte. What do you want in life? Is it happiness you once said before long ago? What's the point in all of this now sailor scouts? said Raiyne who was getting a bit annoyed by these questions being asked. We want to help you. said Ceres. Me need help? Ha! I beg to differ! Said Raiyne laughing out loud. Be honest is this really what you want? Said Kaneko I can't change things now in my life. Even if I want my own happiness and to stop doing evil things! Enough is enough! Screamed Raiyne. She used the ice spear to attack, and sailor Ceres and Kaneko dodges it. They both went far by back flipping. Stop Raiyne! We can sort this out! Shouted Ceres. Raiyne replied back shouting out There's nothing to sort out! Raiyne went to attack Ceres head on. They both went into a deadlock. Sailor Ceres! Said sailor Kaneko Hold on I'm coming! No wait Kaneko stay there, I'll sort this out! Said sailor Ceres. Raiyne was trying her best to drop the deadlock between her and Ceres. Raiyne please listen to me. I know exactly you feel...said Ceres. Why do you pity me? Its too late theres no chance to have that happiness! Said Raiyne. It's never to late for a second chance! What would you rather do, go through this destructive path that leggy set out for you? Or change to better yourself to get that happiness? Raiynes budge over Ceres was slowly getting weaker. Her arms went down slowly from fighting stance, and she turned away and said I...I dunno. I'm confused, and have lost my way ever since lord Leggy took me in. Ceres put her hand on Raiynes shoulder. For some reason she didn't shrug that off. And felt some kind of warmth coming from Ceres. Ceres said. Raiyne this is enough. Lets stop fighting, and I will see to that help you have a bright future. That's a promise. What makes you so sure of that? why do you care so much about me? And how can you be this determined to help me. After all of the things that I have done? said Raiyne. Ceres answers back saying my friends are my strength they give me the determination that I need. I learned that from them. She looks at kaneko and idaline to smile at them. I know what it feels like to be alone trust me on that. You know I never met these guys. I liked being alone, but they told me otherwise saying being alone doesn't always help you. I see....so that was it. said Raiyne. A slow clap came from the distance. That was so sweet and touching, that I could barf That's pitiful. Said a voice among the shadows. Who's there?! Said Ceres. An unknown figure body came out from the darkness, and Raiyne said Its Starrite.... So lord Leggy was right after all about you Raiyne. he said. Right about what? She asked. Betraying us. You are no longer needed. I was informed to personally to take care of you. Said Starrite. Meaning? said sailor Kaneko. Are you dumb or something? To destroy her of course! said Starrite. Raiyne had a shock on her face and asked Why?..... You failed enough times that's why. You failed just like megabyte did. Said Starrite Oh boy...said Kaneko. This could get ugly... My name is Starrite, 2nd elite in command. Sailor scouts I now have my chance to destroy you for my revenge this is for Queen Beryl! Said Starrite. He rushed on, to attack the sailor scouts. Oh boy now Starrtie joins the picture...how bad will this get for the sailor scouts?! legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : TheReaper7290 : A user of this : hunter0409 : Popeye116 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal : Left off from chapter 12. The sailor scouts followed Raiyne in order to save Idaline and Dacia from her! Will they both be able to do it? Sailor scouts please help! Said Idaline trying to break free from the cage. Hold on Idaline we're coming! Said Sailor Ceres. You need to get pass me to get to them. And I am afraid that I can not allow that to happen. Lord Leggy wants those girls, and I will do so by bringing them to him. Said Raiyne. We won't allow that to happen! Said Sailor Kaneko. This may be my last introduction to you. The pounding of the rain will drown my sorrows....and your screams. Sailor scouts prepare to meet your doom! Said Raiyne. She attacked them both head on. Causing them to hit the wall. Is it me...or has she somehow gotten stronger? Said Sailor Ceres trying to get up. No. She's gotten a lot more stronger. said Sailor Kaneko struggling to stand. Yeah....but we can not afford to lose this battle. Idaline and Dacias life's are at stake! Said Sailor Ceres. I'm with you on that. Lets do our best to get them back. We would need to use any attacks that we have. Said Sailor Kaneko. If that doesn't work we go to plan B. said Sailor Ceres. Plan B? Asked Kaneko looking confused. Unlock more new attacks. It will be highly effective, and Raiyne like last time will not be able to handle it. said Ceres. I love that plan. said Kaneko smirking. Alright lets get back to the fight. said Ceres. They both marched forward towards Raiyne. That's nice that you were both able to withstand my attack like that. I am a lot more stronger than I was before. Lord Leggy gave me unimaginable powers to defeat you. It seems to be working. said Raiyne. No wonder....said Ceres. Sailor scouts you can do this! Beat up that witch! Said Idaline. Brat. What did you just call me? Said Raiyne looking at her. With Raiyne looking the other way distracted Ceres and Kaneko came in with a punch. This made Raiyne to ski backwards. I let my guard down next time that won't happen. said Raiyne. She flew towards the sailor scouts, and used water attack. Oh no...look out! said sailor Ceres. Raiyne used her water attack on them, followed by a thunder and lightning attack. This pained Sailor Ceres and Kaneko badly. Raiyne lets the water disperse to see the results. Sailor scouts don't give up! I believe in you! Shouted Idaline as she watched in horror. Raiyne used another water attack, which formed a ice spear. She was about to attack the sailor scouts and Ceres cried out saying Wait Raiyne! She stopped and said Why should I wait? The chance for me to kill you now is at hand. Kaneko said Is this what you really want? Of course it is! Said Raiyne answering back. Let me ask you a question...are you Charlotte in your human form? Asked Ceres. No I am not! Said Raiyne. It can't be... so that aura I felt was from you? Said Kaneko in disbelief. Raiyne said back I am not this Charlotte that you speak of! Quit fighting that, we know the truth...said Ceres. I may be her what of it? asked Raiyne. Ceres asked again I've been thinking ever since about what you said to us back then. Was all that a lie? And if you wanted too you could had killed us at school when you had the chance. Why didn't you? So I can find out your weakness. Friendships are so easy to obtain, and to destroy as well. So I thought to destroy you by befriending you. Said Raiyne. Kaneko thought then said I think that's not the truth. Raiyne. No Charlotte. What do you want in life? Is it happiness you once said before long ago? What's the point in all of this now sailor scouts? said Raiyne who was getting a bit annoyed by these questions being asked. We want to help you. said Ceres. Me need help? Ha! I beg to differ! Said Raiyne laughing out loud. Be honest is this really what you want? Said Kaneko I can't change things now in my life. Even if I want my own happiness and to stop doing evil things! Enough is enough! Screamed Raiyne. She used the ice spear to attack, and sailor Ceres and Kaneko dodges it. They both went far by back flipping. Stop Raiyne! We can sort this out! Shouted Ceres. Raiyne replied back shouting out There's nothing to sort out! Raiyne went to attack Ceres head on. They both went into a deadlock. Sailor Ceres! Said sailor Kaneko Hold on I'm coming! No wait Kaneko stay there, I'll sort this out! Said sailor Ceres. Raiyne was trying her best to drop the deadlock between her and Ceres. Raiyne please listen to me. I know exactly you feel...said Ceres. Why do you pity me? Its too late theres no chance to have that happiness! Said Raiyne. It's never to late for a second chance! What would you rather do, go through this destructive path that leggy set out for you? Or change to better yourself to get that happiness? Raiynes budge over Ceres was slowly getting weaker. Her arms went down slowly from fighting stance, and she turned away and said I...I dunno. I'm confused, and have lost my way ever since lord Leggy took me in. Ceres put her hand on Raiynes shoulder. For some reason she didn't shrug that off. And felt some kind of warmth coming from Ceres. Ceres said. Raiyne this is enough. Lets stop fighting, and I will see to that help you have a bright future. That's a promise. What makes you so sure of that? why do you care so much about me? And how can you be this determined to help me. After all of the things that I have done? said Raiyne. Ceres answers back saying my friends are my strength they give me the determination that I need. I learned that from them. She looks at kaneko and idaline to smile at them. I know what it feels like to be alone trust me on that. You know I never met these guys. I liked being alone, but they told me otherwise saying being alone doesn't always help you. I see....so that was it. said Raiyne. A slow clap came from the distance. That was so sweet and touching, that I could barf That's pitiful. Said a voice among the shadows. Who's there?! Said Ceres. An unknown figure body came out from the darkness, and Raiyne said Its Starrite.... So lord Leggy was right after all about you Raiyne. he said. Right about what? She asked. Betraying us. You are no longer needed. I was informed to personally to take care of you. Said Starrite. Meaning? said sailor Kaneko. Are you dumb or something? To destroy her of course! said Starrite. Raiyne had a shock on her face and asked Why?..... You failed enough times that's why. You failed just like megabyte did. Said Starrite Oh boy...said Kaneko. This could get ugly... My name is Starrite, 2nd elite in command. Sailor scouts I now have my chance to destroy you for my revenge this is for Queen Beryl! Said Starrite. He rushed on, to attack the sailor scouts. Oh boy now Starrtie joins the picture...how bad will this get for the sailor scouts?! legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : TheReaper7290 : A user of this : hunter0409 : Popeye116 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal : |
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Hey everyone just a quick message from me. I am releasing two chapters today. Because it is a certain someone's birthday. And for her present I decided to release chapter 14 and 15 today. Enjoy, as from tomorrow its back to one chapter a day. ^-^ Raiyne does the unthinkable and goes missing. Did Starrite kill her? Chapter 14 Leaving off from chapter 13 the sailor scouts meet Starrite, their next foe to fight, as he rushes to attack Ceres first with his incredible speed. No Ceres look out! Shouted Kaneko Light ball attack! Starrite deflected her attack. He almost got to Ceres. She could not move out of the way on time she closed her eyes knowing she would get attacked. When she opened them she couldn't believe who saved her. Raiyne did! Raiyne why would you....said Ceres in shock. You helped me. All I can do is return the favour....hurry you must leave here at once! Take the girls with you. I'll hold him off as long as I can! Said Raiyne. Raiyne....how dare you get in my way! Move aside! Shouted Starrite. Not a chance. said Raiyne Kaneko quickly caught up with Ceres, and they both hustled quickly to the cage to grab the girls. Lets go! Said Amor coming out of nowhere. But Raiyne....we can't just leave her! Said Ceres. Kaneko said Ceres. We have too or Starrite will try to take the girls! She's only doing what she feels, that she has to do right ok? Idaline said Poor Raiyne. I hope she makes it out alive... You do not need to worry about me just get out of here! shouted Raiyne. The others left the HQ. Raiyne looked back and was glad that the others made it out to safety. You let them go....why?! Screamed starrite. Funny that you ask this question. I am not so sure myself. Maybe I do want to change things in my life. said Raiyne. I'll end your life before that happens! Screamed Starrite. The battle between Starrite and Raiyne started. And then it ended unknowingly. The others got back to Luanas place to rest by this time its nearly evening. Everyone sat down on a chair thinking about what has happened to Raiyne. I really hope that she's ok...said Luana. I don't want to see her getting killed by that Starrite guy. said Idaline. I'm worried about her too...said Kyla. All we can hope for that she survives his attack...said Amor. Why is that Amor? Asked Luana. Because Starrite is really powerful. So he can easily dispose of her sadly...said Amor with her ears hanged low. No.....said Kyla. Not wanting to believe it. Idaline asked Is there anyway that we can go back to help her? She said to leave....I guess that she knew what she was getting herself into, let alone to know how powerful he is. said Amor. Hmm....said Luana What are you thinking about Luana? Asked Kyla. If I was Raiyne I would say don't worry. Trust and believe that I'll be fine. Said Luana. Luana....said Amor. Guys believe in Raiyne that she will be ok. Besides shes a lot more tougher than she looks! Said Luana giving them some encouragement. I have to agree with you on that. Kyla said happily. Yeah I believe in Raiyne! Said Idaline jumping around. I'm with you all of the way Luana! I trust your judgement on her. Said Amor smiling. I also believe that we will meet her again soon. So until that time comes we must continue to believe in her. Said Luana with confidence. Anyways I gotta go and do some shopping before heading back to my house. said Kyla. Ok, see you at school tomorrow. said Luana waving. Bye Kyla! Idaline waved to her. Stay safe Kyla. said Amor. Thanks guys. See ya soon! Said Kaneko. Who waved back at them. And with that she left. Luana I'm hungry....please make us something to eat? Asked Idaline. Sure. Its about time that I cooked some dinner anyway. said Luana. Luana made food. With their stomachs now full everyone went to I must get to them they can only help me...I must not get caught by him or I'll die! But how can I with these injuries? I mustn't give up hope she taught me that! Where are you?! Screamed another voice in the distance Oh no! Whispered the other voice Another new day dawned on earth and as usual Luana made breakfast and got herself ready. And this time she made sure that Idaline doesn't run off with her sister. She put a cage like thing around Idaline ankle. Why are you doing that Luana! Said Idaline who was upset. That's called punishment for not doing as you were told too yesterday. said Luana with a stern look on her face. But, what if I need the toilet?! Said Idaline Here's a bowl you can use for that. said Luana placing it near Idaline. Your cruel....said Idaline. Well. I wouldn't have to be if you ONLY had listened to me. This is called *tough love* get used to it. snapped Luana and having her voice going more colder than that. Idaline shivers a bit due to what Luana said. So she said I understand.... Good. I'm only doing whats best. said Luana. I'll make sure to behave this time...said Idaline Well see you later. If you need anything else please ask Amor. said Luana. Luana left the house to get to Kylas place. Luana walked to Kylas house still thinking about Raiyne and what has happened to her. She heard Kylas voice saying I'm off to school now mom! Luana walked up to her. Hi Kyla, how are you? Kyla answered back saying I'm good lets head to the school now. They got there, and just as they expected Raiyne wasn't around. Kyla said Maybe we should look for her after school? Yeah we should....said Luana. School ended. Luana and Kyla rushed out of the school to start their search for Raiyne. Both of them decided to split up. Kyla searched the whole town, while Luana went off site such as looking in the forest. They both somehow found each other again. She's not in the woods. said Luana. Neither she is in town. I searched the whole area! Said kyla. But I've found you how do you like that? Said a voice. Luana and Kyla gasped as they knew who the voice belonged too! So this is what you look like in your normal form. said the voice. How do you know that?! Said Luana. I have my resources. said the voice. The figure showed itself. Starrite......said Kyla. That's right. Glad you dumb girl remembered my name. said Starrite. Where is Raiyne, and what have you done to her?! Shouted Luana. Starrite began to laugh evilly and he said Raiyne is no more I disposed of her so easily! You liar! Screamed Luana. Luana was about to go and beat up Starrite still in her normal form. But, she felt a pull back by Kyla. Luana, hey calm down! Think straight that's not how the leader should act like! Said Kyla. Your right, prepare for battle Kyla! Said Luana. Still fuming a bit. Starrite has found the sailor scouts. Will they be able to take on this new evil? An Unexpected Surprise, And Amors Hidden Visions From The Past. Chapter 15 Both Luana and Kyla transformed. Your going to pay for what you have done to Raiyne! Said sailor Ceres. She zoomed on straight to attack Starrite head on. And on her own. Surprisingly Ceres punches him so hard, that he crashed into a building. Woah.....said sailor Kaneko in shock of her attack strength. This drained a lot of Sailor Ceres strength. So she panted a bit. He came out from the building and said Not too bad. while dusting of some dirt and rubble's off his clothes. Lets see if you can dodge my attack now. said Starrite smirking evilly. He threw some magic stars at her. Sailor Ceres dodges then all except for one, which stunned her. Oh no! Ceres I'm coming! Said Sailor Kaneko. Oh no you don't. said Starrite. he used his teleportation move to attack Kaneko. She saw this coming dodging his attack. He caught her off guard by throwing one of his magic stars at her. Haha! That was too easy! Shouted Starrite. Ceres and kaneko were quite in a bind as they couldn't move from the stun that starrite did, by throwing his stars at them. They both tried to break free. Its useless. My stuns are 100% unbreakable! said Starrite. He turns to Ceres points at her and says You...you're the first to die. Isn't that just nice and peachy? He started to walk over to her slowly. Then a voice in the distance said Stop right there! Who are you to say that?! Said Starrite turning around to see who spoke to him like that. A figure like girl came out to reveal herself Impossible...how can there be another sailor scout?! Said Starrite in disbelief. Ceres and Kaneko looked at each other in surprise of the new sailor scout who appeared out of nowhere. And who was in front of them This girl walked on slowly towards Starrite saying My name is Sailor Imiron. Sailor Imiron? He said Yes that's right. Let the sound of my rain drown the evil out from you! I'll take you on! Show me what you've got! Yelled Starrite. Very well. said Sailor Imiron Sailor Imiron raised one of her arms in the air slowly, and dropped it a flash of straight lightning hit directly onto Starrites body he screamed out. And sailor Imiron said Had enough yet? Not a chance! Said Starrite. Ok. she said with confidence. Next sailor Imiron did a ninja like with her arms and hands *something like from naruto if you get what I mean* and out from nowhere a water flushed Starrite, then she freezed it. Next she used some water to break the stun effect off from sailor Ceres and Kaneko. Sailor Imiron cried out saying Now's your chance ceres attack him now! I won't allow that to happen! Said Starrite. He broke free from the frozen ice to attack the sailor scouts! Without thinking Ceres said while her eyes were closed Falling plow attack! A whistle noise came from the sky. And a large plow fell on top of Starrite giving him the shock of his life, by being done in by a plow attack! Then Ceres got her weapon out and said Projectile seeds wind attack! This was the same attack which Raiyne could not handle. So this attack also made Starrite to be in pain as well. The wind took off somewhere else all you can hear Starrite saying is We will meet again sailor scouts, and next time you'll not be so lucky! Ahh!!! So Kaneko and Ceres both checked to see that they were both fine. And then draw they both their attention to the mysterious sailor scout who helped them. Sailor Imiron in the distance smiles at them. As she was about to leave Ceres called out saying Wait! She stopped and looked back. Thanks for your help.  No problem. said Imiron still smiling. Uh...would you care to join us? Asked Kaneko Sorry....not for now. The time is not right yet. When it is. Then you will soon learn the truth of how I came to be a sailor scout. said Imiron. But then who are you? Asked Ceres. Sorry. That either I can't reveal as of yet. said Imiron. She jumped off the building leaving, things at that. Wow...another sailor scout. said Ceres. Yeah no kidding....said Kaneko The girls detransformed. Lets head on home now. said Luana. Ok see ya later Luana. Make sure to tell the others of this news. said Kyla. Will do. said Luana. Luana got back home. She saw the girls watching tv and said Guys I'm back! Sorry for being a bit late.. Hey! Welcome back home! Said Amor getting of the couch to greet Luana. Welcome back said Idaline smiling. Dacia giggled. Then crawled to Luana to greet her as well. Luana picked her up and gave her a cuddle. Luana placed Dacia back onto the couch to take off the chain on Idalines ankle she said Punishment is now over. Thanks Luana! Said Idaline now free to walk about as she pleased. Guys....there's something important that you need to know...said Luana. What is it Luana? Asked Idaline. So Luana explained the situation as of what happened. No way....another sailor scout?! Said Amor who freaked out. But how can that be?! Said idaline who also freaked out as well. I too, am not sure about that...said Luana. Did you try to find out who she is? Asked Amor. I tried to. But she disappeared. said Luana. What a mystery....said Idaline. It sure is. said Amor In any case lets have dinner now. said Luana Good idea! Said Amor. Luana went to the kitchen to prepare dinner while the others kept on watching tv. They all ate and went to This dream is about the information to do with the princess. Amor saw more as she was about to find out who the princess was. But the dream ended. She woke up panting. For breath as that took a lot out from her. She quietly said I've been having these strange dream visions and every time I get to the part of finding who the princess is the dream cuts off...I'm gonna try to get some more Amor curled to another comfortable position to get back to Hmm...what does this mean you guys? Maybe the princess is still alive? You have to read the next chapter to find out more! And also who is that new mysterious sailor scout who helped out Sailor Ceres and Kankeo?! legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : TheReaper7290 : A user of this : hunter0409 : Popeye116 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal : New summon. SaphThePikachu : Raiyne does the unthinkable and goes missing. Did Starrite kill her? Chapter 14 Leaving off from chapter 13 the sailor scouts meet Starrite, their next foe to fight, as he rushes to attack Ceres first with his incredible speed. No Ceres look out! Shouted Kaneko Light ball attack! Starrite deflected her attack. He almost got to Ceres. She could not move out of the way on time she closed her eyes knowing she would get attacked. When she opened them she couldn't believe who saved her. Raiyne did! Raiyne why would you....said Ceres in shock. You helped me. All I can do is return the favour....hurry you must leave here at once! Take the girls with you. I'll hold him off as long as I can! Said Raiyne. Raiyne....how dare you get in my way! Move aside! Shouted Starrite. Not a chance. said Raiyne Kaneko quickly caught up with Ceres, and they both hustled quickly to the cage to grab the girls. Lets go! Said Amor coming out of nowhere. But Raiyne....we can't just leave her! Said Ceres. Kaneko said Ceres. We have too or Starrite will try to take the girls! She's only doing what she feels, that she has to do right ok? Idaline said Poor Raiyne. I hope she makes it out alive... You do not need to worry about me just get out of here! shouted Raiyne. The others left the HQ. Raiyne looked back and was glad that the others made it out to safety. You let them go....why?! Screamed starrite. Funny that you ask this question. I am not so sure myself. Maybe I do want to change things in my life. said Raiyne. I'll end your life before that happens! Screamed Starrite. The battle between Starrite and Raiyne started. And then it ended unknowingly. The others got back to Luanas place to rest by this time its nearly evening. Everyone sat down on a chair thinking about what has happened to Raiyne. I really hope that she's ok...said Luana. I don't want to see her getting killed by that Starrite guy. said Idaline. I'm worried about her too...said Kyla. All we can hope for that she survives his attack...said Amor. Why is that Amor? Asked Luana. Because Starrite is really powerful. So he can easily dispose of her sadly...said Amor with her ears hanged low. No.....said Kyla. Not wanting to believe it. Idaline asked Is there anyway that we can go back to help her? She said to leave....I guess that she knew what she was getting herself into, let alone to know how powerful he is. said Amor. Hmm....said Luana What are you thinking about Luana? Asked Kyla. If I was Raiyne I would say don't worry. Trust and believe that I'll be fine. Said Luana. Luana....said Amor. Guys believe in Raiyne that she will be ok. Besides shes a lot more tougher than she looks! Said Luana giving them some encouragement. I have to agree with you on that. Kyla said happily. Yeah I believe in Raiyne! Said Idaline jumping around. I'm with you all of the way Luana! I trust your judgement on her. Said Amor smiling. I also believe that we will meet her again soon. So until that time comes we must continue to believe in her. Said Luana with confidence. Anyways I gotta go and do some shopping before heading back to my house. said Kyla. Ok, see you at school tomorrow. said Luana waving. Bye Kyla! Idaline waved to her. Stay safe Kyla. said Amor. Thanks guys. See ya soon! Said Kaneko. Who waved back at them. And with that she left. Luana I'm hungry....please make us something to eat? Asked Idaline. Sure. Its about time that I cooked some dinner anyway. said Luana. Luana made food. With their stomachs now full everyone went to I must get to them they can only help me...I must not get caught by him or I'll die! But how can I with these injuries? I mustn't give up hope she taught me that! Where are you?! Screamed another voice in the distance Oh no! Whispered the other voice Another new day dawned on earth and as usual Luana made breakfast and got herself ready. And this time she made sure that Idaline doesn't run off with her sister. She put a cage like thing around Idaline ankle. Why are you doing that Luana! Said Idaline who was upset. That's called punishment for not doing as you were told too yesterday. said Luana with a stern look on her face. But, what if I need the toilet?! Said Idaline Here's a bowl you can use for that. said Luana placing it near Idaline. Your cruel....said Idaline. Well. I wouldn't have to be if you ONLY had listened to me. This is called *tough love* get used to it. snapped Luana and having her voice going more colder than that. Idaline shivers a bit due to what Luana said. So she said I understand.... Good. I'm only doing whats best. said Luana. I'll make sure to behave this time...said Idaline Well see you later. If you need anything else please ask Amor. said Luana. Luana left the house to get to Kylas place. Luana walked to Kylas house still thinking about Raiyne and what has happened to her. She heard Kylas voice saying I'm off to school now mom! Luana walked up to her. Hi Kyla, how are you? Kyla answered back saying I'm good lets head to the school now. They got there, and just as they expected Raiyne wasn't around. Kyla said Maybe we should look for her after school? Yeah we should....said Luana. School ended. Luana and Kyla rushed out of the school to start their search for Raiyne. Both of them decided to split up. Kyla searched the whole town, while Luana went off site such as looking in the forest. They both somehow found each other again. She's not in the woods. said Luana. Neither she is in town. I searched the whole area! Said kyla. But I've found you how do you like that? Said a voice. Luana and Kyla gasped as they knew who the voice belonged too! So this is what you look like in your normal form. said the voice. How do you know that?! Said Luana. I have my resources. said the voice. The figure showed itself. Starrite......said Kyla. That's right. Glad you dumb girl remembered my name. said Starrite. Where is Raiyne, and what have you done to her?! Shouted Luana. Starrite began to laugh evilly and he said Raiyne is no more I disposed of her so easily! You liar! Screamed Luana. Luana was about to go and beat up Starrite still in her normal form. But, she felt a pull back by Kyla. Luana, hey calm down! Think straight that's not how the leader should act like! Said Kyla. Your right, prepare for battle Kyla! Said Luana. Still fuming a bit. Starrite has found the sailor scouts. Will they be able to take on this new evil? An Unexpected Surprise, And Amors Hidden Visions From The Past. Chapter 15 Both Luana and Kyla transformed. Your going to pay for what you have done to Raiyne! Said sailor Ceres. She zoomed on straight to attack Starrite head on. And on her own. Surprisingly Ceres punches him so hard, that he crashed into a building. Woah.....said sailor Kaneko in shock of her attack strength. This drained a lot of Sailor Ceres strength. So she panted a bit. He came out from the building and said Not too bad. while dusting of some dirt and rubble's off his clothes. Lets see if you can dodge my attack now. said Starrite smirking evilly. He threw some magic stars at her. Sailor Ceres dodges then all except for one, which stunned her. Oh no! Ceres I'm coming! Said Sailor Kaneko. Oh no you don't. said Starrite. he used his teleportation move to attack Kaneko. She saw this coming dodging his attack. He caught her off guard by throwing one of his magic stars at her. Haha! That was too easy! Shouted Starrite. Ceres and kaneko were quite in a bind as they couldn't move from the stun that starrite did, by throwing his stars at them. They both tried to break free. Its useless. My stuns are 100% unbreakable! said Starrite. He turns to Ceres points at her and says You...you're the first to die. Isn't that just nice and peachy? He started to walk over to her slowly. Then a voice in the distance said Stop right there! Who are you to say that?! Said Starrite turning around to see who spoke to him like that. A figure like girl came out to reveal herself Impossible...how can there be another sailor scout?! Said Starrite in disbelief. Ceres and Kaneko looked at each other in surprise of the new sailor scout who appeared out of nowhere. And who was in front of them This girl walked on slowly towards Starrite saying My name is Sailor Imiron. Sailor Imiron? He said Yes that's right. Let the sound of my rain drown the evil out from you! I'll take you on! Show me what you've got! Yelled Starrite. Very well. said Sailor Imiron Sailor Imiron raised one of her arms in the air slowly, and dropped it a flash of straight lightning hit directly onto Starrites body he screamed out. And sailor Imiron said Had enough yet? Not a chance! Said Starrite. Ok. she said with confidence. Next sailor Imiron did a ninja like with her arms and hands *something like from naruto if you get what I mean* and out from nowhere a water flushed Starrite, then she freezed it. Next she used some water to break the stun effect off from sailor Ceres and Kaneko. Sailor Imiron cried out saying Now's your chance ceres attack him now! I won't allow that to happen! Said Starrite. He broke free from the frozen ice to attack the sailor scouts! Without thinking Ceres said while her eyes were closed Falling plow attack! A whistle noise came from the sky. And a large plow fell on top of Starrite giving him the shock of his life, by being done in by a plow attack! Then Ceres got her weapon out and said Projectile seeds wind attack! This was the same attack which Raiyne could not handle. So this attack also made Starrite to be in pain as well. The wind took off somewhere else all you can hear Starrite saying is We will meet again sailor scouts, and next time you'll not be so lucky! Ahh!!! So Kaneko and Ceres both checked to see that they were both fine. And then draw they both their attention to the mysterious sailor scout who helped them. Sailor Imiron in the distance smiles at them. As she was about to leave Ceres called out saying Wait! She stopped and looked back. Thanks for your help. No problem. said Imiron still smiling. Uh...would you care to join us? Asked Kaneko Sorry....not for now. The time is not right yet. When it is. Then you will soon learn the truth of how I came to be a sailor scout. said Imiron. But then who are you? Asked Ceres. Sorry. That either I can't reveal as of yet. said Imiron. She jumped off the building leaving, things at that. Wow...another sailor scout. said Ceres. Yeah no kidding....said Kaneko The girls detransformed. Lets head on home now. said Luana. Ok see ya later Luana. Make sure to tell the others of this news. said Kyla. Will do. said Luana. Luana got back home. She saw the girls watching tv and said Guys I'm back! Sorry for being a bit late.. Hey! Welcome back home! Said Amor getting of the couch to greet Luana. Welcome back said Idaline smiling. Dacia giggled. Then crawled to Luana to greet her as well. Luana picked her up and gave her a cuddle. Luana placed Dacia back onto the couch to take off the chain on Idalines ankle she said Punishment is now over. Thanks Luana! Said Idaline now free to walk about as she pleased. Guys....there's something important that you need to know...said Luana. What is it Luana? Asked Idaline. So Luana explained the situation as of what happened. No way....another sailor scout?! Said Amor who freaked out. 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The Mysterious Sailor Scout Reveals Herself! Chapter 16 Everyone woke up. All except Amor who was still Idaline would you please go and wake up Amor? Sure! She said Idaline went to the room. As she was about to tap Amor to wake up. She saw that Amor wasn't looking to well. So she ran to the kitchen and said Luana quick! There's something wrong with Amor! Luana took Dacia and made her way into the bedroom to see what the matter was. She saw Amor sweating and meowing a bit in her This isn't good I have to wake her up now! Luana gave Dacia to Idaline for her to hold. And then Luana went over onto the bed lightly tapped Amor saying Amor you need to wake up. Come on snap out of it! Amor shot up like a missile and meowing very loudly. She descended back onto the bed panting for breath. Luana picked her up an put one of her hands on Amors forehead to examine her Amor are you ok? she asked in worry. No...said Amor trying to find a way to talk. Amor what happened? Your like sweating badly! Said Idaline who was panicking of the site. Even Dacia on the look of her face was worried. Well....said Amor. Amor was still having some trouble to talk. Hmm....I'll stay at home today to look after you. said Luana. No...it..won't...have...to come to that.......said Amor trying to breath. Yes it does your sick! Said Idaline. Luana phoned Kyla that she won't be able to go to school. Luana.....I'm...so sorry..said Amor. Hey.. It's not your fault ok? Said Luana patting Amor then stroking her fur for comfort. Idaline said You need to rest Amor... Luana took a blanket, and Amor to the living room for her to rest. Idaline said Hmm...Amor needs to be healed. What can we do Luana? I am going to have to wait until Kyla gets here to look after you. so that I can go and buy some medicine for her...said Luana. Wise choice. said Idaline. Let's just watch some TV for now....said Luana. She went into the couch sat down. Placed Amor on her lap, and then used the blanket to cover her. Idaline asked again Will Amor be ok? She will be fine.... she's a strong fighter. said Luana. Time flied by, and before you know it Kyla came rushing in she saw amor still unwell. She also had a worried face on. Kyla took over from Luana while she went to go and get herself ready to go and buy medication for Amor. As Luana was about to leave Kyla said Stay safe Luana. Yeah...you know that Starrite is on the prowl...said Idaline. I'll be fine guys. I'll just do it very quickly. said Luana. She left and hurried on to get medication for Amor. Now where are you going in such a hurry? Said a voice on top of a building. Ugh you again....said Luana on pause from running. Yes its me again. And the names is Starrite. Listen. Why don't you do me a favour and leave, or play somewhere else with someone? I've got more pressing matters to deal with than to fight you. Said Luana darkly while glaring at him. Raising one of his eyebrows Starrite said Oh you would just love that, wouldn't you? I'm guessing we will have to do this the hard way? *Sighs* Fine. Let's make this a quick battle. Ceres power make up! She transformed, and went into fighting stance. Lets make it more annoying for you shall we? Said Starrite smirking. He summoned a bunch of minions of his own to further slow down Ceres, from where she was heading too. Great....I really don't have the time for this...said Sailor Ceres. She started to fight them one by one. And when Ceres was almost finished defeating them, Starrite summoned more. This annoyed her a lot. You are really cruel you know that?! I have a friend who is sick right now! Said Ceres while she was fighting. Then do better by defeating my minions quickly. You don't want to keep that friend of yours waiting now do you? Starrite smirked as he said that. Then from out from nowhere a flush of huge wave of water destroys Starrite's minions! Grrrr.....who goes there?! Shouted Starrite. I do. said the voice. The figure jumped down to meet Sailor Ceres. You.... you spoiled my fun! said Starrite. Trying to block Sailor Ceres path while she is trying to save her friends life. How cruel are you? I'll use my waters of good to stop you! Said Sailor Imiron. Thanks....said Ceres. If we both fight him head on, then you should be able to make it back on time. said Imiron. Right on! Said Ceres. Starrite used his stars to attack, while Imiron used water to deflect it. Starrite got angry, and then try to use a punch attack. Imiron and Ceres blocked it off. They both came in with a double punch into starrites stomach, without him sensing it Gah! He cried out in pain. Ceres used a new attack and said Vine flower bind! Some vines sprouted up and binded Starrite. He wasn't able to move since Ceres bind him very well, as he struggled too. Lightning attack! Said Imiron. This pained Starrite badly then Ceres said Projectile seeds wind attack! Starrite couldn't do anything by now. So this attack swept him away. Good. That should teach him. said Imiron. Yeah.... Thanks for the help again Imiron. Imiron felt dizzy and fell down onto the ground. Hey! You ok?! Said Ceres trying to hold her upright. Ha....it seems that I used up too much strength...your gonna find out who I am now when this happens...said Imiron. She detransformed due to fatigue. No way....said Ceres. Told you....said the familiar voice. Ceres also detransformed. RAIYNE?! Said Luana in shock Wow what a discovery! Raiyne a sailor scout heroine! What's her story of this? To find that out wait for the next chapter! legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : maguc : TheReaper7290 : A user of this : hunter0409 : Popeye116 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal : SaphThePikachu : The Mysterious Sailor Scout Reveals Herself! Chapter 16 Everyone woke up. All except Amor who was still Idaline would you please go and wake up Amor? Sure! She said Idaline went to the room. As she was about to tap Amor to wake up. She saw that Amor wasn't looking to well. So she ran to the kitchen and said Luana quick! There's something wrong with Amor! Luana took Dacia and made her way into the bedroom to see what the matter was. She saw Amor sweating and meowing a bit in her This isn't good I have to wake her up now! Luana gave Dacia to Idaline for her to hold. And then Luana went over onto the bed lightly tapped Amor saying Amor you need to wake up. Come on snap out of it! Amor shot up like a missile and meowing very loudly. She descended back onto the bed panting for breath. Luana picked her up an put one of her hands on Amors forehead to examine her Amor are you ok? she asked in worry. No...said Amor trying to find a way to talk. Amor what happened? Your like sweating badly! Said Idaline who was panicking of the site. Even Dacia on the look of her face was worried. Well....said Amor. Amor was still having some trouble to talk. Hmm....I'll stay at home today to look after you. said Luana. No...it..won't...have...to come to that.......said Amor trying to breath. Yes it does your sick! Said Idaline. Luana phoned Kyla that she won't be able to go to school. Luana.....I'm...so sorry..said Amor. Hey.. It's not your fault ok? Said Luana patting Amor then stroking her fur for comfort. Idaline said You need to rest Amor... Luana took a blanket, and Amor to the living room for her to rest. Idaline said Hmm...Amor needs to be healed. What can we do Luana? I am going to have to wait until Kyla gets here to look after you. so that I can go and buy some medicine for her...said Luana. Wise choice. said Idaline. Let's just watch some TV for now....said Luana. She went into the couch sat down. Placed Amor on her lap, and then used the blanket to cover her. Idaline asked again Will Amor be ok? She will be fine.... she's a strong fighter. said Luana. Time flied by, and before you know it Kyla came rushing in she saw amor still unwell. She also had a worried face on. Kyla took over from Luana while she went to go and get herself ready to go and buy medication for Amor. As Luana was about to leave Kyla said Stay safe Luana. Yeah...you know that Starrite is on the prowl...said Idaline. I'll be fine guys. I'll just do it very quickly. said Luana. She left and hurried on to get medication for Amor. Now where are you going in such a hurry? Said a voice on top of a building. Ugh you again....said Luana on pause from running. Yes its me again. And the names is Starrite. Listen. Why don't you do me a favour and leave, or play somewhere else with someone? I've got more pressing matters to deal with than to fight you. Said Luana darkly while glaring at him. Raising one of his eyebrows Starrite said Oh you would just love that, wouldn't you? I'm guessing we will have to do this the hard way? *Sighs* Fine. Let's make this a quick battle. Ceres power make up! She transformed, and went into fighting stance. Lets make it more annoying for you shall we? Said Starrite smirking. He summoned a bunch of minions of his own to further slow down Ceres, from where she was heading too. Great....I really don't have the time for this...said Sailor Ceres. She started to fight them one by one. And when Ceres was almost finished defeating them, Starrite summoned more. This annoyed her a lot. You are really cruel you know that?! I have a friend who is sick right now! Said Ceres while she was fighting. Then do better by defeating my minions quickly. You don't want to keep that friend of yours waiting now do you? Starrite smirked as he said that. Then from out from nowhere a flush of huge wave of water destroys Starrite's minions! Grrrr.....who goes there?! Shouted Starrite. I do. said the voice. The figure jumped down to meet Sailor Ceres. You.... you spoiled my fun! said Starrite. Trying to block Sailor Ceres path while she is trying to save her friends life. How cruel are you? I'll use my waters of good to stop you! Said Sailor Imiron. Thanks....said Ceres. If we both fight him head on, then you should be able to make it back on time. said Imiron. Right on! Said Ceres. Starrite used his stars to attack, while Imiron used water to deflect it. Starrite got angry, and then try to use a punch attack. Imiron and Ceres blocked it off. They both came in with a double punch into starrites stomach, without him sensing it Gah! He cried out in pain. Ceres used a new attack and said Vine flower bind! Some vines sprouted up and binded Starrite. He wasn't able to move since Ceres bind him very well, as he struggled too. Lightning attack! Said Imiron. This pained Starrite badly then Ceres said Projectile seeds wind attack! Starrite couldn't do anything by now. So this attack swept him away. Good. That should teach him. said Imiron. Yeah.... Thanks for the help again Imiron. Imiron felt dizzy and fell down onto the ground. Hey! You ok?! Said Ceres trying to hold her upright. Ha....it seems that I used up too much strength...your gonna find out who I am now when this happens...said Imiron. She detransformed due to fatigue. No way....said Ceres. Told you....said the familiar voice. Ceres also detransformed. RAIYNE?! Said Luana in shock Wow what a discovery! Raiyne a sailor scout heroine! What's her story of this? To find that out wait for the next chapter! legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : maguc : TheReaper7290 : A user of this : hunter0409 : Popeye116 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal : SaphThePikachu : |
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Raiynes background story Chapter 17 Leaving off from chapter 16. Luana finds out who is Sailor Imiron and shockingly it was Raiyne! You've got to be kidding me...mumbled Luana. Raiyne sighed and said back its no joke...I'm still trying to process this too you know. But how? We thought you were a goner! Said Luana who shrieked at her. Calm down....We can't talk here we need to go to a safe place. Starrite might come back. Said Raiyne. She got back up from the ground. Sure... Are you ok to walk? Asked Luana. Yeah I am. said Raiyne. I was trying to find medicine for.. Rayine cut her off saying. For Amor. Hey....How did you know that?! Luana asked in shock and surprise. Well...I somehow sensed it. There's no need to buy meds. Not so long ago I learned a new spell. Said Raiyne. Uh......Ok then? We go back to my place then follow me. said Luana. They both ran back to her house, and Luana asked Raiyne to stay outside for a bit. Hey guys I'm back home...said Luana. Idaline said Welcome back! Kyla asked Did you manage to get the medication for Amor? No sadly...I ran into Starrite and an unexpected surprise...said Luana. And what might that have been? Said Kyla Luana still in the doorway said Please come in... Raiyne showed herself to the others with a shy look on her face, and said Long time no see.... No way....said Idaline. You've got to be kidding me...said Kyla. Yes.. Its really me I didn't think that I would still be alive after my fight with Starrite....anyways Amor is sick where is she? asked Raiyne She;s Raiyne asked again What is her status so far? Well....shes not sweating as much as she was before...she seemed to have calmed down a little. said Kyla Luana closed the door, and Raiyne walked over to Amor. She bent down and put both of her hands over Amors body. some green light appeared out from Raiynes hands. This went on for 2 mins, and then she took her hands off and said There... She should now feel as good as new. said Raiyne releasing her hand off. What did you do? asked Luana. I used some healing magic. said Raiyne. Healing magic? That's so cool! Said Idaline Thank you Raiyne. said Kyla smiling. Now Raiyne. We all have the right to know what happened, and how you became a sailor scout as well. said Luana. Yeah.....your right. I will tell you. said Raiyne . Kyla. Please take Amor and put her on my bed in my bedroom. said Luana. Sure. said Kyla. Kyla went to do that and came back to the living room. Everyone got comfortable to hear of Raiynes story So...Starrite beat me up badly. So I used a flash attack to get away from him. With the injuries that I had. I couldn't make it that far, and was stuck in the forest the flash wore off and Starrite then tried to hunt me down... thank goodness it was dark or he would had found me. I hid for a while until I got to town, still weak I was trying to find you. I almost passed out. In front of me I saw a young woman, my visions were blurry. But she seemed to have a kind look on her face so she decided to help me out...I was staying in her house for a recovery. I dunno while I was resting a shine of light appeared and this *Showing everyone her compact* They all gasped in shock. Came out from the light....I figured it was a transformation compact. Then I asked why me? I don't deserve to be a sailor scout not after all of the evil things that I have done.... I see....said Kyla. Wow...you got lucky..said Idaline. So that's why?...asked Luana. Yes. But I still don't understand why me? Said Raiyne. Raiyne...remember our last fight that I was talking about second chances? Maybe that's why. said Luana. So...I still had some light within me to be a sailor scout? Said Raiyne. Maybe. said Kyla. I still think there is more to that story Raiyne. said Luana. we will find that out soon enough. On the TV the news came up the newscaster was saying of damage in the local shopping place. The camera viewed in and it was Starrite! He was blowing things up and hurting the innocent! He screamed out Come out sailor scouts fight me right now! Oh you want us? That's what you will get! Said Luana. Come on guys lets go and get him! Said Kyla. If only he can see that the light is not so bad... said Raiyne. Raiyne or Charlotte are you going to fight with us? Asked Luana. Yes. As I said I have revealed myself. Just call me Charlotte from now on. Its better that 3 people take him on lets go! Said Charlotte. Luana said Idaline please take care of Amor and your sister. If she wakes up please fill her in on what has happened so far. Right will do! Said Idaline. The three young girls left to face Starrite. Meanwhile people were screaming and running away in fear, as Starrite was making a lot of chaos. Not again! Said one man. Now what?! Said another person. Don't worry I am sure help is on the way! Said one woman. Starrite overhearing what that woman said went up to her and said Since you are so positive I'm going to kill you for that. Before he could Luana said Don't you lay one finger on her! Oh so you have finally shown up. Where's that dumb friend of yours? Asked Starrite Right here! And the name is Kyla! Said Kyla. Oh goodie. I can now take on the both of you! Said Starrite. Why don't you make that three? Said a familiar voice coming out from a corner place. It can't be....how can you still be alive?! Said Starrite Anything is possible. said Charlotte winking to Luana and Kyla. Is this how you plan on taking me down Raiyne?! Said Starrite. Raiyne is no more. The name is Charlotte April Imbre. Said Charlotte. You will pay dearly for this outrage! Said Starrite losing his temper again. Time to transform! Said Luana Ceres power! Kaneko power! Imiron power! Make up! They transformed on front of the towns people. So...those girls are the sailor scouts huh? Said the young boy I thought as much that black girl I bump into was different... Now you'll have to deal with the 3 of us! Said Sailor Ceres. How will they face off Starrite in this battle? See the next chapter to find out! legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : maguc : TheReaper7290 : A user of this : hunter0409 : Popeye116 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal : SaphThePikachu : Raiynes background story Chapter 17 Leaving off from chapter 16. Luana finds out who is Sailor Imiron and shockingly it was Raiyne! You've got to be kidding me...mumbled Luana. Raiyne sighed and said back its no joke...I'm still trying to process this too you know. But how? We thought you were a goner! Said Luana who shrieked at her. Calm down....We can't talk here we need to go to a safe place. Starrite might come back. Said Raiyne. She got back up from the ground. Sure... Are you ok to walk? Asked Luana. Yeah I am. said Raiyne. I was trying to find medicine for.. Rayine cut her off saying. For Amor. Hey....How did you know that?! Luana asked in shock and surprise. Well...I somehow sensed it. There's no need to buy meds. Not so long ago I learned a new spell. Said Raiyne. Uh......Ok then? We go back to my place then follow me. said Luana. They both ran back to her house, and Luana asked Raiyne to stay outside for a bit. Hey guys I'm back home...said Luana. Idaline said Welcome back! Kyla asked Did you manage to get the medication for Amor? No sadly...I ran into Starrite and an unexpected surprise...said Luana. And what might that have been? Said Kyla Luana still in the doorway said Please come in... Raiyne showed herself to the others with a shy look on her face, and said Long time no see.... No way....said Idaline. You've got to be kidding me...said Kyla. Yes.. Its really me I didn't think that I would still be alive after my fight with Starrite....anyways Amor is sick where is she? asked Raiyne She;s Raiyne asked again What is her status so far? Well....shes not sweating as much as she was before...she seemed to have calmed down a little. said Kyla Luana closed the door, and Raiyne walked over to Amor. She bent down and put both of her hands over Amors body. some green light appeared out from Raiynes hands. This went on for 2 mins, and then she took her hands off and said There... She should now feel as good as new. said Raiyne releasing her hand off. What did you do? asked Luana. I used some healing magic. said Raiyne. Healing magic? That's so cool! Said Idaline Thank you Raiyne. said Kyla smiling. Now Raiyne. We all have the right to know what happened, and how you became a sailor scout as well. said Luana. Yeah.....your right. I will tell you. said Raiyne . Kyla. Please take Amor and put her on my bed in my bedroom. said Luana. Sure. said Kyla. Kyla went to do that and came back to the living room. Everyone got comfortable to hear of Raiynes story So...Starrite beat me up badly. So I used a flash attack to get away from him. With the injuries that I had. I couldn't make it that far, and was stuck in the forest the flash wore off and Starrite then tried to hunt me down... thank goodness it was dark or he would had found me. I hid for a while until I got to town, still weak I was trying to find you. I almost passed out. In front of me I saw a young woman, my visions were blurry. But she seemed to have a kind look on her face so she decided to help me out...I was staying in her house for a recovery. I dunno while I was resting a shine of light appeared and this *Showing everyone her compact* They all gasped in shock. Came out from the light....I figured it was a transformation compact. Then I asked why me? I don't deserve to be a sailor scout not after all of the evil things that I have done.... I see....said Kyla. Wow...you got lucky..said Idaline. So that's why?...asked Luana. Yes. But I still don't understand why me? Said Raiyne. Raiyne...remember our last fight that I was talking about second chances? Maybe that's why. said Luana. So...I still had some light within me to be a sailor scout? Said Raiyne. Maybe. said Kyla. I still think there is more to that story Raiyne. said Luana. we will find that out soon enough. On the TV the news came up the newscaster was saying of damage in the local shopping place. The camera viewed in and it was Starrite! He was blowing things up and hurting the innocent! He screamed out Come out sailor scouts fight me right now! Oh you want us? That's what you will get! Said Luana. Come on guys lets go and get him! Said Kyla. If only he can see that the light is not so bad... said Raiyne. Raiyne or Charlotte are you going to fight with us? Asked Luana. Yes. As I said I have revealed myself. Just call me Charlotte from now on. Its better that 3 people take him on lets go! Said Charlotte. Luana said Idaline please take care of Amor and your sister. If she wakes up please fill her in on what has happened so far. Right will do! Said Idaline. The three young girls left to face Starrite. Meanwhile people were screaming and running away in fear, as Starrite was making a lot of chaos. Not again! Said one man. Now what?! Said another person. Don't worry I am sure help is on the way! Said one woman. Starrite overhearing what that woman said went up to her and said Since you are so positive I'm going to kill you for that. Before he could Luana said Don't you lay one finger on her! Oh so you have finally shown up. Where's that dumb friend of yours? Asked Starrite Right here! And the name is Kyla! Said Kyla. Oh goodie. I can now take on the both of you! Said Starrite. Why don't you make that three? Said a familiar voice coming out from a corner place. It can't be....how can you still be alive?! Said Starrite Anything is possible. said Charlotte winking to Luana and Kyla. Is this how you plan on taking me down Raiyne?! Said Starrite. Raiyne is no more. The name is Charlotte April Imbre. Said Charlotte. You will pay dearly for this outrage! Said Starrite losing his temper again. Time to transform! Said Luana Ceres power! Kaneko power! Imiron power! Make up! They transformed on front of the towns people. So...those girls are the sailor scouts huh? Said the young boy I thought as much that black girl I bump into was different... Now you'll have to deal with the 3 of us! Said Sailor Ceres. How will they face off Starrite in this battle? See the next chapter to find out! legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : maguc : TheReaper7290 : A user of this : hunter0409 : Popeye116 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal : SaphThePikachu : |
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imamonster : Please do not forget that you are in this fanfiction. Which you may have ima. Muavils Entry Chapter 18 Starrite wasted no time but to attack the scouts. Is that the best that you can do? Said Sailor Imiron taunting him. How dare you say that! Yelled Starrite. She has a point. I mean you always say about beating us and whatnot. And you still have not be able to kill us. said Sailor Kaneko Starrite I am going to tell you as you told me. said Imiron. Which is? He asked That you also failed just like Megabyte. This made Starrite to boil inside. If you wanna die so badly, then I'll kill you 3 right now! Starrite used his magic to form a powerful attack to finish off the sailor scouts. The girls got ready to block it as Starrite unleashed the massive looking energy ball. It took a direct hit onto the sailor scouts. The attack seemed to work. Starrite went over to the place to see nothing but dust. He laughed out loud saying That's what you get for underestimating my strength! The pedestrians that were stop around, were all in disbelief as of in what just happened. No....this can't be happening! Said one man. Those poor girls....said another person. I don't believe that they are dead, its not true! Said one young woman. Oh really? Said Starrite hearing. Then why don't you come and see for yourself then? No....said the young woman. What did you say? asked Starrite who did not hear her the first time. And putting one of his hands on his ears to hear again. I am not going anywhere near you jerk! She shouted at him. What?! You disobey me? Starrite?! For that you will be killed! He started to walk over to the girl, until a voice up in the sky said Oh no you don't! Starrite felt his body slam onto the ground. He had a hard time getting back up and then said Who's punch did that belong to?! He looked to see the people happy, and also having smiles on their faces. He turned around to see why. Its impossible...I destroyed you 3 how did you survive my attack?! He exclaimed. It was suppose too? Too bad it did not. We are a lot more stronger than you led on to think. said one voice belonging to Sailor Ceres. You did have us there. That attack gave us some serious injures. said another voice belonging to Sailor Kaneko. Good thing I know how to heal....said the other voice belonging to Sailor Imiron. Starrite just looked up at the scouts in shock, and Imiron said What? Cat got your tongue? He glared back and bowed down his head in shame. I threw every attack that I have, but still you were able to beat me! I will never complete my revenge! Starrite punched the ground hard with his fist. What revenge? Ceres asked Before he could reply, he felt another presence. And Imiron felt it too knowing who it was. You are longer needed Starrite. said a voice of a figure like person descending from the sky. Its Muavil......said Starrite shaking. And so this must be Raiynes newly found form. Imiron glared up back at Muavil. Oh. Feisty now aren't we? He smirked I am guessing that lord Leggy sent you here...said Starrite. Quiet you failure. he snapped. Starrite flinched to what Muavil said so he kept quiet. Lord Leggy was disappointed. So he sent me in to No....please! Anything but that attack! Cried Starrite If you had not failed so many times, then I wouldn't have too. Goodbye Starrite Sensing what Muavil was going to do, Imiron charged to attack him. Seeing her coming his way, Muavil slowly raised up one of his arms, and said Mua beam. The attack made a direct hit, and sent Imiron flying into a building badly, which made her pass out. Ceres and Kaneko screamed in horror. They rushed to go and help their companion out. With them out of the way Muavils shot his attention back to Starrite. Please think about this Muavil! Begged Starrite. You've had too many chances and blew it. glared Muavil. He raised up his arm again and said Zuna shadow. The sky went dark and shadows appeared. Starrite was going to try and escape when some shadows have already caught his arms and legs preventing him from getting away. One main shadow made its way to Starrite slowly. With nothing that they can do the scouts watched what was happening. Oh no what is going to happen to Starrite now?! And what will happen with the scouts now that Imiron took the force of a deadly attack?! legacyme3 : Jordanv78 : deg2000 : maguc : TheReaper7290 : A user of this : hunter0409 : Dragonlord Stephi : Gamin'Gal : SaphThePikachu : imamonster : Please do not forget that you are in this fanfiction. Which you may have ima. Muavils Entry Chapter 18 Starrite wasted no time but to attack the scouts. Is that the best that you can do? Said Sailor Imiron taunting him. How dare you say that! Yelled Starrite. She has a point. I mean you always say about beating us and whatnot. And you still have not be able to kill us. said Sailor Kaneko Starrite I am going to tell you as you told me. said Imiron. Which is? He asked That you also failed just like Megabyte. This made Starrite to boil inside. If you wanna die so badly, then I'll kill you 3 right now! Starrite used his magic to form a powerful attack to finish off the sailor scouts. The girls got ready to block it as Starrite unleashed the massive looking energy ball. It took a direct hit onto the sailor scouts. The attack seemed to work. Starrite went over to the place to see nothing but dust. He laughed out loud saying That's what you get for underestimating my strength! The pedestrians that were stop around, were all in disbelief as of in what just happened. No....this can't be happening! Said one man. Those poor girls....said another person. I don't believe that they are dead, its not true! Said one young woman. Oh really? Said Starrite hearing. Then why don't you come and see for yourself then? No....said the young woman. What did you say? asked Starrite who did not hear her the first time. And putting one of his hands on his ears to hear again. I am not going anywhere near you jerk! She shouted at him. What?! You disobey me? Starrite?! For that you will be killed! He started to walk over to the girl, until a voice up in the sky said Oh no you don't! Starrite felt his body slam onto the ground. He had a hard time getting back up and then said Who's punch did that belong to?! He looked to see the people happy, and also having smiles on their faces. He turned around to see why. Its impossible...I destroyed you 3 how did you survive my attack?! He exclaimed. It was suppose too? Too bad it did not. We are a lot more stronger than you led on to think. said one voice belonging to Sailor Ceres. You did have us there. That attack gave us some serious injures. said another voice belonging to Sailor Kaneko. Good thing I know how to heal....said the other voice belonging to Sailor Imiron. Starrite just looked up at the scouts in shock, and Imiron said What? Cat got your tongue? He glared back and bowed down his head in shame. I threw every attack that I have, but still you were able to beat me! I will never complete my revenge! Starrite punched the ground hard with his fist. What revenge? Ceres asked Before he could reply, he felt another presence. And Imiron felt it too knowing who it was. You are longer needed Starrite. said a voice of a figure like person descending from the sky. Its Muavil......said Starrite shaking. And so this must be Raiynes newly found form. Imiron glared up back at Muavil. Oh. Feisty now aren't we? He smirked I am guessing that lord Leggy sent you here...said Starrite. Quiet you failure. he snapped. Starrite flinched to what Muavil said so he kept quiet. Lord Leggy was disappointed. So he sent me in to No....please! Anything but that attack! Cried Starrite If you had not failed so many times, then I wouldn't have too. Goodbye Starrite Sensing what Muavil was going to do, Imiron charged to attack him. Seeing her coming his way, Muavil slowly raised up one of his arms, and said Mua beam. The attack made a direct hit, and sent Imiron flying into a building badly, which made her pass out. Ceres and Kaneko screamed in horror. They rushed to go and help their companion out. With them out of the way Muavils shot his attention back to Starrite. Please think about this Muavil! Begged Starrite. You've had too many chances and blew it. glared Muavil. He raised up his arm again and said Zuna shadow. The sky went dark and shadows appeared. Starrite was going to try and escape when some shadows have already caught his arms and legs preventing him from getting away. One main shadow made its way to Starrite slowly. With nothing that they can do the scouts watched what was happening. Oh no what is going to happen to Starrite now?! 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Oo~ Things certainly aren't looking good. (Bump, so if someone wishes to ignore this post, please do so) Things certainly aren't looking good. (Bump, so if someone wishes to ignore this post, please do so) |
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Bumping this thread for the next chapter. Good luck Luna! ^^ |
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Eniitan : This looks like an interesting. I really enjoy on how much effort you put into this fan fiction. I hope you keep up the good work Eni. Edited: -Thread close upon request by Eniitan- Edited: -Thread close upon request by Eniitan- |
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