Meet Luana. The Heroine Of Planet Earth! Chapter 1

On the mother planet earth peace has been restored. Since the last battle with sailor moon and the dark princess Galaxia with the sailor stars, many years ago. Sailor moon has left the planet earth, and now lives on the crystal planet. With Darien as her king and also with their lovely daughter named Rini who has come of age of 16 as well. Who will now protect the earth, if evil shall rise to claim it? Speed Leggy has already set his eyes on this mother plant. And his evil soldiers are on the way to cause chaos and unhappiness for the planet, and the people who live on it. Will the new heroine be up for the challenge, to beat down this new evil? Yet little does she know who she truly is, or know what she is. As we speak she is now at school, cramming for her last exams. As it is the last day of school before the summer holidays. She's a smart girl, so she is not struggling in any way. And then the school bell rings.

And the teacher says "Ok students, pens down please. The exams are now over. You can now enjoy your summer holiday."

Everyone jumps for joy. Since they are all excited and so they all go off to talk to their friends or other people. While her a serious person packs up her things into her bag, sighs, and walks out of the classroom without talking to anyone. People try to call out to her for a talk.

"Hey Luana! Come out and hang with us!" said one girl.

"No thanks" Luana said back.

"Luana want to go out with us?" said one boy.

"I do not do any of those things" Luana replied back.

"Hey beautiful. Wanna go out on a date with me?" said one handsome cool guy.

"Ew....no way, no how! I don't socialize with people like you! And why should I?....I don’t want to hang around with you people. I don't want any friends, I rather be alone thank you." says Luana.

Luana walks on without stopping. And so all the people who tried talking to her, muttered among themselves.

One boy said "She sure is a strange person....she's like someone who doesn't want any friends or something......"

The handsome boy said "Strange person indeed....the more reasons to chase after her!"

One girl also said "I actually feel sorry for her. I mean...what will she accomplish by being alone and without any friends?"

Someone else said "Yeah...one day she will have to learn that being alone is not everything to her and, she will have to make friends..."

And Luana says to herself as she walks "I am here to get a scholarship. Not to socialize and to make friends. Friendship will only disrupt my path. Its ridiculous."

The heroine that is going to save the earth her name is Luana. shes black young girl, at the age of 16. She also has light brown skin, long hair and a pretty face. Her name means graceful battle maiden. Like any other girl, she is very different. And she does not want for what other girls have. Such as friends, liking a boy and more. She leaves the school and heads for her home.

"Wow....what pretty scenery....looking at it makes me to feel at peace and ease" said Luana.

She also said "what a nice breeze and its also a sunny day as well....I can hear the birds singing."

The wind lightly blows on her. Making her long hair to flow up, and glow as the sun shines down on her. She looked upon branch tree, and indeed she saw for the fact that the birds were singing. She didn't smile but just watched.

"They both looks so happy....I wish I can obtain that happiness. Sadly I cannot. Anyways....I better head on home now to rest..." said Luana.

What she doesn't even know is that, she is actually a sailor scout heroine. Also what she doesn't know is that, something or someone is following her.....what could it be, friend or foe?


I hope that you liked this chapter. Chapter 2 will be posted up the next day, summoning people now. ^^

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And again if gamins summon doesn't work, please help out thank you. ^-^


Here are the links to chapter 0 and chapter 2.

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79998


https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80048

Eniitan : Yeesh gamin sure doesn't like to work: nice job on this chapter and surprisingly Luana reminds me somewhat of myself. But i hope she does learn the power of friendship and that she will be happy. Gamin'Gal :

Eniitan : its good eni. some grammar errors but fine. a tip: when you have a quote the period goes after the quote. also SO MANY ELLIPSES! (...) also way to many exclamation marks and in

"Wow....what pretty scenery....looking at it makes me to feel at peace and ease" said Luana.

She also said "what a nice breeze and its also a sunny day as well....I can hear the birds singing."

"She also said" can be OMITed (deleted).

I know I might sound like im nit picking but im trying to help without trying to be a grammar Nazi. I know that im not good at grammar (especially commas) but I know when something doesn't look right.


also the main character reminds me a little of Ami (sailor mercury if you cant remember and for those that don't know)

Yes, it makes much more sense now. Also, I kept looking at those people talking to her in the beginning suspiciously, but then I realized they were just normal high schoolers.