My Own Sailor Moon fanfic

This is based on sailor moon story. But, something I have created myself. I hope...you like it. Also I got to thank the people who took the time to create their characters for this. So thank you....I am sorry this is very late. Like I said a promise is a promise.


Prologue To The Fanfic Chapter 0

Not so far off into the distance of space, lurks an evil planet called Speed Leggy. This planet is a cold place, with poor people surviving to live. All that defined Speed Leggy was killed ruthlessly with no mercy. The air is not clean to breath in. Everything on the planet was so lifeless no trees and leaves the sky is dark with no blue light. And everyone who was on that planet, was as gloomy as they can be. And lost the happiness that the planet once had. And for those who worshiped leggy lived in luxury of course. Such as his evil soldiers. The ruler of this planet was Leggy himself. He has more luxury than anyone has on his own home planet, and he didn't care for the poor. He sits on his crown chair throne, with a sinister look on his face of evil....onto the right of the chair is his trusty pet zebra. And Leggy pets him in the most unusual way. He calls forth his evil soldiers who are. Dark Evil Lord Megabyte, Starrite, Muvail and Raiyne and Speed Leggy speaks out saying "Are the preparations to take over earth, completed yet?" "Yes my lord." Raiyne replies back. "Those foolish earthlings don't know what's coming to them! Their peaceful days will be over!" says Starrite. "Yes Starrite indeed you are right. You." Speed Leggy points at Megabyte. And Megabyte points to himself and says "Me?" "Yes you. Step forward" said Leggy. And he says "I am going to give you a simple job. Go to the planet earth and wipe out the earthlings that you can kill. Think you can handle that, wimp?" Megabyte says back "Your majesty I've said sorry so many times! Am I still not worthy to fight for you anymore?!!" Megabyte cries while saying this. And Leggy said back "In some ways you are still *useful* and don't cry before me please, its pitiful" this got Leggy annoyed. "Oh thank you master! I will not fail you again!" said Megabyte. Megabyte runs off, before he leaves Leggy calls him back for one more thing and says "You better not fail me again wimp, or I will kill you myself" he uses his death stare to make sure that message sinks in. Megabyte turns around in fear and says back "Master....why is it that you call me a wimp and not by my name?"


Then Speed Leggy says back "Oh. Its because I like calling you that. Simple. Got a problem with it?" this time Leggy uses an elemental magic,that glows in his hand. As well as another death stare, to intimidate Megabyte. "No nothing at all!" says Megabyte. Who is sweating bullets in fear of the worse, and almost wets himself due to that intimidation. "Good." said Leggy "Be off now, and remember what I just told you." Leggy goes back to sitting on his throne after that, Raiyne asks "My lord if I may have permission to talk?" "Talk away." said Leggy. "Are you sure that you want him to do the job? I mean he's an idiot for crying out loud, and also he doesn't do anything right." said Raiyne. "Yes that is true Raiyne" said Leggy. "Then why him? Cannot any of us elites of evil go?" says Raiyne. Muavil says "Raiyne. Must you ask so many questions? I am sure he has a special mission for us elites, am I right lord Leggy?" "Indeed you are Muavil" said Leggy. "Oh.....my lord please forgive me for asking such things..." said Raiyne "Its ok" said Leggy. "And besides that wimp in the past, was somewhat decent. He managed to blow up some planets on his own" Speed Leggy goes into thinking. He has something on his mind which is bothering him so he says "Raiyne, Muavil and Starrite remember the planet Ceres that we destroyed so many years ago? I have a feeling not everyone was killed. If you find any reports that someone did survive. Kill that person with no mercy" "Yes lord leggy!" said all three of them. "Good. I know you three will not fail me, so be off too. Use the low-class minions to kill such weaklings as the earthlings. There is no need for you to blast them, as that will be a waste of time. So be off" All three bowed, saluted before Leggy, then they left. Leggy chucked evilly with the palm of one of this arms, on his chin. And said "Let the party begin...."


I hope you liked this chapter. I did a colour text for a reason, so that the character speeches stand out, so you know when they do speak.

Summoning people who are in this, and the supporters as well. Just to let you know this fanfic has finally been released and all....Sorry for the long wait. If the colour texts are too weird please say

legacyme3 : Please say if your character's speeches are ok. edit I changed the colour black wasn't looking good. is this ok? If you don't like it please tell me to change it as you wish. Is he evil enough for you?
imamonster : Feedback please
Dragonlord Stephi : Feedback please
hunter0409 : Feedback please
A user of this :
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sonicthehedgehog57 :
Gamin'Gal:
Gamin'Gal:
Gamin'Gal:
maguc :

If gamin's summon doesn't work again. please help out by summoning her for me please.

I keep my promises, and I hate the break them. And again I am sorry that this is late. I have been rather busy....

Here is the link to chapter 1 and chapter 2

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80024


https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80048

Eniitan : oh can't wait for this the beginning seems very interesting and eerie I like it Enii keep it going.

Gamin'Gal : WORK!!!!

Sorry to say but I have never played or even seen the Sailor Moon series but I can say for a fact that I enjoyed this introduction and can't wait for the first chapter.

This is pretty good, Enii, I can't wait to read more of it. And it's fine if you don't update this too much, take your time so it can be good, and so you can work on it to be the best it can be.

I also like the color idea, it's pretty original, from what I've seen, and it makes it really easy to see who is talking, and easy to differentiate.

I know literally nothing about the Sailor Moon series, but this fanfic seems pretty awesome . 

It's evil enough, I'd think?

Use your best judgement. This is your fan fiction. Not mine

legacyme3 : Your the best evil character I have done. Like seriously when I read back those messages I just crack up. I also say oh eni how can you be this evil come up with something so harsh? If I think of something to say I just say to myself. Think of what leggy says. I enjoy portraying your character, and I love him to bits. Even though hes evil hes also way too funny. I think you will like what dialogues that I have place for him.
Is it ok for me to continue to summon you to this please? When I read your part I am like that's leggy all over! XD

deg2000 :
TheReaper7290 : I have good news. Surprisingly I have chapter 1 to 3 done so far

Popeye116 : Thank you

This was an interesting start! I can't wait for more! Each character has a distinct voice, and I wonder how it will develop throughout the course of the fic.The only suggestion I would make is to separate each speaker by the start of a new paragraph- although you do have the colors, which helps, it can still be a little more coherent. Plus, it makes each work look more professional and longer (the aesthetics are always just a bonus in my mind). 

Eniitan : aww its only 3 chapters.


I like it eni. when I first got here I said "woah!" because of all the colored (I can tell your from England because you spell it "colour" instead of how we spell it in America "color")text but then I realized its speech.

what got me and made me laugh was how similar it is to the show. queen beryl sends a minion to earth to cause chaos then the other minions make fun of him and call him names while he's gone and doubt his abilities. this is literally what happens all of season one.

also if you need help with Starrite's mindset or what he would say/do in a situation don't be afraid to ask me because id like to see how this unfolds.