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09-20-14 04:29 PM
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Hello everyone. I was going to discontinue this fanfic because of some reasons. I will now not stop it. I thought it would not be right of me to do that, because people seem to enjoy reading this. I will now not anyone allow to say changes of it, and will carry this on. I hope that you like this next chapter.



Finally The Heroine Sailor Ceres Is Born! Chapter 4

Luana finally gets outside to see a lot of house buildings in shambles. House rooftops, trees and flowerbed places were either damaged real bad, or broken halfway.

"No....How cruel! Why would someone do, such a thing?! The trees and the flowers were so pretty to always look at!" said Luana.

As shocked as she was to see the damaged that has been done. She quickly looks on for Amor shouting.

"Amor where are you?!"

Not looking at where she was going. Luana bumped into a young boy.

"Ouch! Hey watch where you are going!" said Luana

And the young boy says back, while rubbing his head.

"Says you! We bumped into each other while running! All girls are the same always blaming us boys."

"I don't have time to deal with you. I am looking for someone!" said Luana.

She got back up and continued on her search for Amor.

"I see nothing but, smoked houses and damaged properties. Where could she be?" said Luana.

"Luana over here, quickly!" said a familiar voice.

she turned around to see Amor in the corner of the street.

"Amor what are you doing over there?! Come over here its way too dangerous!" said Luana.

"Shhh. Come and have a look!" Amor whispered.

They both peeked to see the other street road, and to see what was going on. They both saw someone the person, who was beating up an earthling really badly.

Amor whispered.

"I bet he's the cause for attacking the town!"

And Luana whispers back.

"Yeah.....no kidding. Do you know who this guy is?"

"I sure do! He is one of the evil soldiers who works for Speed Leggy! I saw him in my memories that my parents left in me. He is not the only evil solider around." said Amor.

"What?! There's more of them?!" asked Luana.

"Yes Luana. And those people are evil to the core. They will not show any mercy whatsoever to anyone! Why does Speed Leggy want to attack the earth? Could it be that he has learned about your survival? But, that’s impossible....if I can also remember, his name is Dark Lord Megabyte." said Amor.

"Dark Lord Megabyte? That’s a weird name for a villain" said Luana.

"Oh the poor guy someone has to help him!" said Amor.

"Your right. I'll go and help him!" says Luana.

Luana ran off to the scene, and leaving Amor behind.

Amor shouted saying "Luana no! Its too dangerous you will get killed!"

Luana was long gone by the time Amor said that.

amor sighs and said "I can't let her fight alone...."

So amor dashes off quickly to catch up with her.

"Please let me go! Whatever have I done to you?! If you want. I'll give you all of the money that I have!" said one man.

"Shut up you weak earthling. I don't need your *money* my master told me to kill, I will do so in order for him to be pleased. Muahahaha!!!!!" said Megabyte

"Hey you drop the guy!"

"And who dares to stand in my way, and to say that?" asked megabyte

"I do!" says Luana coming out from the corner.

"Oh. Look what we have here. A girl who thinks that, she's brave and tough now hmm?" said megabyte.

"Just let him go you freak" said Luana.

"Me a freak?!" said megabyte in shock.

He lets go of the guy that he was about to kill. But, megabyte did not realize this. So the man took a chance to run away without letting megabyte know.

"How dare you say that?!"

"Uh...I just did you freak" said Luana.

"Grrrr" says megabyte.

This made him to grow into rage.

"Who do you think you are missy?! You are going to pay big time! You think that you can challenge me, an evil solider?!" says megabyte.

Luana replied back "Well now...I will never know unless I try too"

"You are in way over your head girl! Do you know how much power and magic that, I possess?! You are a weakling compared to me. You don't have any power, whatsoever to defeat me!" said megabyte.

Megabyte uses one of his magic, to form a ball to attack Luana.

And he said "Gahahaha!!! Try to defend yourself from this magic ball of mine, you stupid girl!"

Luana though a bit scared, she tries to defend for herself.

"Look out Luana!" screams Amor.

She jumps in front of Luana. And then counter attacks the magic ball, with both of her paws.

"Woo....looks like I made it just in time!" said Amor.

"Amor? You saved me? Thank you...." said Luana.

Amor said back "Hey that’s what friends are for Luana."

"I thought I told you..."

Amor cuts her off and says

"We will talk about that later. We have more pressing matters to deal with!"

"And who the hell is this cat?!" said megabyte

Something started to beat fast within Luanas heart. Like a pulse beating. some kind of light started to glow her whole body.

"What's....going on?" asks Luana as her face goes pale

Amor who was in shock she said "Could this be?...."

And the light got brighter. The light got so bright, that it was way too much for megabyte to handle. This made him to take a few step backwards.

"What is this blinding light?! Its killing my eyes make it stop! It burns!" said megabyte covering his eyes.

some sort of a heart compact was made, from the light that came within Luanas heart. And the light still continued to glow.

"No way...." said amor.

"What's this thing in the palm of my hand Amor?" asked Luana.

"That’s a transformation compact! Quickly transform!" said Amor.

"Eh? Transformation compact? You've got to be kidding me...." said Luana.

"This is no joke! I promise to tell you everything about it, after this battle!" said Amor.

"Um ok then..." said Luana.

Not knowing what to do the light guided her, for her transformation. And Luana shouted out with the heart compact in the sky

"Ceres power make up!"

A blind of more light occurred. And with that, made Luana disappear into it.

"What is this?!" screamed megabyte

"Your worse nightmare, that’s what!" said Amor

A few seconds later the light began to fade. And then break out. With Luana transformed her eyes slowly began to open and she said

"I am Sailor Ceres! In the name of love, and on behalf of Ceres. I will flourish you in eternal bliss!"


My, things are starting to get interesting now aren't they? Look out for chapter 5!

Btw I had to change Megabyte text colour. as the other was too dark to read. Oh another thing....I will have to post chapter 5 really early because, I have to do my mums cake. and cook for the house as my family is coming around over, on sunday to celebrate her birthday. and knowing what i am like I will pass out, and forget to post it. it will be more likely that I post it when i wake up in the morning. so i thought to give you heads up.

Summon time~

legacyme3 :
Jordanv78 :
deg2000 :
Dragonlord Stephi :
A user of this :
hunter0409 :
maguc :
TheReaper7290 :
Popeye116 :
Gingercream1 :

Someone please summon gamin for me. Thank you ^-^


Hello everyone. I was going to discontinue this fanfic because of some reasons. I will now not stop it. I thought it would not be right of me to do that, because people seem to enjoy reading this. I will now not anyone allow to say changes of it, and will carry this on. I hope that you like this next chapter.



Finally The Heroine Sailor Ceres Is Born! Chapter 4

Luana finally gets outside to see a lot of house buildings in shambles. House rooftops, trees and flowerbed places were either damaged real bad, or broken halfway.

"No....How cruel! Why would someone do, such a thing?! The trees and the flowers were so pretty to always look at!" said Luana.

As shocked as she was to see the damaged that has been done. She quickly looks on for Amor shouting.

"Amor where are you?!"

Not looking at where she was going. Luana bumped into a young boy.

"Ouch! Hey watch where you are going!" said Luana

And the young boy says back, while rubbing his head.

"Says you! We bumped into each other while running! All girls are the same always blaming us boys."

"I don't have time to deal with you. I am looking for someone!" said Luana.

She got back up and continued on her search for Amor.

"I see nothing but, smoked houses and damaged properties. Where could she be?" said Luana.

"Luana over here, quickly!" said a familiar voice.

she turned around to see Amor in the corner of the street.

"Amor what are you doing over there?! Come over here its way too dangerous!" said Luana.

"Shhh. Come and have a look!" Amor whispered.

They both peeked to see the other street road, and to see what was going on. They both saw someone the person, who was beating up an earthling really badly.

Amor whispered.

"I bet he's the cause for attacking the town!"

And Luana whispers back.

"Yeah.....no kidding. Do you know who this guy is?"

"I sure do! He is one of the evil soldiers who works for Speed Leggy! I saw him in my memories that my parents left in me. He is not the only evil solider around." said Amor.

"What?! There's more of them?!" asked Luana.

"Yes Luana. And those people are evil to the core. They will not show any mercy whatsoever to anyone! Why does Speed Leggy want to attack the earth? Could it be that he has learned about your survival? But, that’s impossible....if I can also remember, his name is Dark Lord Megabyte." said Amor.

"Dark Lord Megabyte? That’s a weird name for a villain" said Luana.

"Oh the poor guy someone has to help him!" said Amor.

"Your right. I'll go and help him!" says Luana.

Luana ran off to the scene, and leaving Amor behind.

Amor shouted saying "Luana no! Its too dangerous you will get killed!"

Luana was long gone by the time Amor said that.

amor sighs and said "I can't let her fight alone...."

So amor dashes off quickly to catch up with her.

"Please let me go! Whatever have I done to you?! If you want. I'll give you all of the money that I have!" said one man.

"Shut up you weak earthling. I don't need your *money* my master told me to kill, I will do so in order for him to be pleased. Muahahaha!!!!!" said Megabyte

"Hey you drop the guy!"

"And who dares to stand in my way, and to say that?" asked megabyte

"I do!" says Luana coming out from the corner.

"Oh. Look what we have here. A girl who thinks that, she's brave and tough now hmm?" said megabyte.

"Just let him go you freak" said Luana.

"Me a freak?!" said megabyte in shock.

He lets go of the guy that he was about to kill. But, megabyte did not realize this. So the man took a chance to run away without letting megabyte know.

"How dare you say that?!"

"Uh...I just did you freak" said Luana.

"Grrrr" says megabyte.

This made him to grow into rage.

"Who do you think you are missy?! You are going to pay big time! You think that you can challenge me, an evil solider?!" says megabyte.

Luana replied back "Well now...I will never know unless I try too"

"You are in way over your head girl! Do you know how much power and magic that, I possess?! You are a weakling compared to me. You don't have any power, whatsoever to defeat me!" said megabyte.

Megabyte uses one of his magic, to form a ball to attack Luana.

And he said "Gahahaha!!! Try to defend yourself from this magic ball of mine, you stupid girl!"

Luana though a bit scared, she tries to defend for herself.

"Look out Luana!" screams Amor.

She jumps in front of Luana. And then counter attacks the magic ball, with both of her paws.

"Woo....looks like I made it just in time!" said Amor.

"Amor? You saved me? Thank you...." said Luana.

Amor said back "Hey that’s what friends are for Luana."

"I thought I told you..."

Amor cuts her off and says

"We will talk about that later. We have more pressing matters to deal with!"

"And who the hell is this cat?!" said megabyte

Something started to beat fast within Luanas heart. Like a pulse beating. some kind of light started to glow her whole body.

"What's....going on?" asks Luana as her face goes pale

Amor who was in shock she said "Could this be?...."

And the light got brighter. The light got so bright, that it was way too much for megabyte to handle. This made him to take a few step backwards.

"What is this blinding light?! Its killing my eyes make it stop! It burns!" said megabyte covering his eyes.

some sort of a heart compact was made, from the light that came within Luanas heart. And the light still continued to glow.

"No way...." said amor.

"What's this thing in the palm of my hand Amor?" asked Luana.

"That’s a transformation compact! Quickly transform!" said Amor.

"Eh? Transformation compact? You've got to be kidding me...." said Luana.

"This is no joke! I promise to tell you everything about it, after this battle!" said Amor.

"Um ok then..." said Luana.

Not knowing what to do the light guided her, for her transformation. And Luana shouted out with the heart compact in the sky

"Ceres power make up!"

A blind of more light occurred. And with that, made Luana disappear into it.

"What is this?!" screamed megabyte

"Your worse nightmare, that’s what!" said Amor

A few seconds later the light began to fade. And then break out. With Luana transformed her eyes slowly began to open and she said

"I am Sailor Ceres! In the name of love, and on behalf of Ceres. I will flourish you in eternal bliss!"


My, things are starting to get interesting now aren't they? Look out for chapter 5!

Btw I had to change Megabyte text colour. as the other was too dark to read. Oh another thing....I will have to post chapter 5 really early because, I have to do my mums cake. and cook for the house as my family is coming around over, on sunday to celebrate her birthday. and knowing what i am like I will pass out, and forget to post it. it will be more likely that I post it when i wake up in the morning. so i thought to give you heads up.

Summon time~

legacyme3 :
Jordanv78 :
deg2000 :
Dragonlord Stephi :
A user of this :
hunter0409 :
maguc :
TheReaper7290 :
Popeye116 :
Gingercream1 :

Someone please summon gamin for me. Thank you ^-^


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Gamin'Gal : You're hard to summon

Also, you might be surprised to see me posting here Enii, but that's because you wanted somebody to summon Gamin'Gal and for some reason my summons usually work
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Also, you might be surprised to see me posting here Enii, but that's because you wanted somebody to summon Gamin'Gal and for some reason my summons usually work
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Yay, new chapter :3 Awesome as always, Enii.

Just one thing...if you don't want to continue this, or put it on a hiatus, we will understand. It's no use writing a story if YOU don't want to, or like to. It could just be me, but I think it would be better to do something because of you, I.E. Continue the series only if you want to.

One last thing, how do you pronounce Launa? Is it like Laura, but with an N, or La-u-na?
Yay, new chapter :3 Awesome as always, Enii.

Just one thing...if you don't want to continue this, or put it on a hiatus, we will understand. It's no use writing a story if YOU don't want to, or like to. It could just be me, but I think it would be better to do something because of you, I.E. Continue the series only if you want to.

One last thing, how do you pronounce Launa? Is it like Laura, but with an N, or La-u-na?
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maguc : Yes I do know how to pronounce her name lol. It is correctly as I have done it, it is not Laura. Its Luana. I have done my research before hand to make sure things were in order. ^-^
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Eniitan : sorry got to this late. I was helping my brother with dark souls until late last night and was too tired to read.

I liked "I am Sailor Ceres! In the name of love, and on behalf of Ceres. I will flourish you in eternal bliss!" as you hid what shes the goddess of in your wording. love = fertility and motherly relationships. flourish = agriculture and crop grains.

very clever eni very clever.
Eniitan : sorry got to this late. I was helping my brother with dark souls until late last night and was too tired to read.

I liked "I am Sailor Ceres! In the name of love, and on behalf of Ceres. I will flourish you in eternal bliss!" as you hid what shes the goddess of in your wording. love = fertility and motherly relationships. flourish = agriculture and crop grains.

very clever eni very clever.
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