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09-22-14 04:21 PM
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Where Did Amor Disappear Off Too? Chapter 6


Back on planet Speed Leggy. Leggy has just finishing informing the elites of evil. He told them to go back to his throne room, and to wait for his return.

"So we have finally found a worthy foe to fight with" said Muavil.

"I can't wait to destroy her!" said Starrite.

"I hope to finish her off myself. I think its best for me to handle that girl" said Raiyne.

"Whoa! Hold on you guys. I am the one to break her to a million of pieces!" Said Megabyte.

They all laughed at Megabyte which got him very annoyed.

"Yeah right. We can all see how well that ended" said Muavil as he chuckled.

Megabyte replied back saying "Don't you underestimate me!"

"Hey, cool it Megabyte" said Starrite.

"Ugh fine" said Megabyte.

"Well, well, well"

Said Speed Leggy as he walked into the room, with his pet zebra on the leash.

"What is going on here?" He asked.

"Well my lord. Megabyte is being an idiot again" said Raiyne.

She closed her eyes after saying that.

Megabyte shouted back "Am not!!"

"Do you want to be sleeping with the fishes Megabyte?" said Leggy.

Megabyte perked up his behaviour, knowing what leggy meant by that.

"No master...." said Megabyte.

"Good. Go back to earth, find that girl and kill her. You fail me again, and you know what happens" said Leggy.

"Yes my lord" said Megabyte.

He left with that, and departed for earth.

"You three will stay with me. And we will watch the battle from here." said Leggy.

And all of them said "Yes sire!"

The sun began to rise on earth to start a new day. Luana still sleeping. She is dreaming of some happiness. The sunlight made its way though her bedroom curtains, and onto her face. Also the sound of singing birds woke her up. One of her eyes opened slowly. And then she stretched out her whole body, while still laying down on her bed. She sighed, and then she thought

"I still can not believe all of the things that happened yesterday.....What road of future lies for me, now that I am responsible to protect the earth? There are still something's I have yet to understand about my past...."

She got up and sat on her bed.

"I wonder where Amor went? After we helped the people she went away without telling me."

The sunny day that brightened up the sky, suddenly turned dark. And rain started to pour badly. Opening the curtains and looking through them Luana was a bit annoyed.

"Guessed that you change your mind huh? I do hope Amor is fine out there...speaking of which I need to go out shopping for food" said Luana.

Luana gets up to get herself ready to go out. She takes her long purple umbrella, and makes her way to the store.

Meanwhile in space Megabyte was on his way to earth.

"She will pay, pay pay! I will not fail this time! I will kill her with my bear hands and break her real good too muhahaha!!!!!" said Megabyte.

He sped up his flying. On her way back from the store Luana saw two children with raincoats together near something. So she decided to take a look. As she got closer one little girl said

"The poor kitty.... we have to get help or it will die!"

And the little boy next to her said "I know sis, but what can we do?"

Luana asked the two children "What's the matter kids?"

And they both looked up with sad faces and said.

"The poor kitty is sick please help!"

"Ok. Stand aside please" said Luana

Luana was in shock of who she saw. And her eyes widened in sadness, and she slowly said

"Amor...."

It was Amor who was laying down in a carbon box. And she looked terribly sick! Luana did not hesitate to waste time. And she said

"You two hold these bags please"

"Ok!" they both said.

Good thing she had an extra sweater on. She too it off and put Amor in it to keep her warm.

"And also follow me please" said Luana.

"Yes ma'am!" said the children.

They all ran until they all reached Luanas house.

"Come in please you two. And put the bags in the kitchen" said Luana.

"We will!" said the little boy and the little girl

Luana placed Amor carefully on the long chair, she ran to her bedroom to get a pillow and a small blanket. She placed Amors head on the soft pillow, and then covered her with a warm blanket. Luana also put the heater on, for the room to be warm.

The little boy said "Lady we have done as you said!"

Luana replied back saying "Thank you...."

And the little girl said "We need to be off now bye, bye!"

They both left and closed the door behind them. Luana went to sit over near the long chair, and put one of her hand over Amors forehead, who is weakly trying to breath.

"Oh Amor.....you silly girl you got yourself sick with the fever." said Luana.

Luana ran to the kitchen to get a hot wipe cloth to put on top of Amors forehead. She placed it on, and it seems to be working as Amors reaction changed to being calm and restful. Luana whispered into one of Amors cat ears and said

"Hey....get better ok? I need you. So don't go dying on me now please..."

And with that Luana went to the kitchen, to cook for her and Amor. After 3 hours later Amor woke up, slowly looked around and said

"Huh.....how did I end up getting here?...."

"Amor are you awake? How are you feeling much better?" Said Luana coming out from the kitchen.

"Um yeah....thanks for asking." said Amor.

Amor gets up to leave the house.

"Where do you think you are going?!" shouted Luana.

"Back to my home of course. Where else." said Amor.

Luana said back "A home that is not proper?! Listen to yourself! You were really sick!"

"Its better to stay there. And besides you don't want friends or need them. Is that not what you told me?"
said Amor.

Luana bowing her head in shame, slowly went forward to pick Amor up with her hands and said

"Hey. Listen Amor..."

She said this with her head still down.

"I was wrong ok? You're are right. I can't always be alone. I have to make friends, and try to trust people. You have proved that to me. So please I beg of you don't leave me.....I have finally learned what it means to have a friend. Its not as bad as I thought it would be... I thought I was alone as I didn't know anything of my past. But you came and told me all these things. It made me to be happy a bit, knowing that I was not alone anymore. It was stupid of me to think that being alone would help me. And only seeing that the only way to avoid people, and not to be social too. You are the only person to forced me to see what a friend is....if you go now. I wouldn't know what to do. I don't know anything about myself you do...."

Luana rises her head and said

"Thank you Amor"

And for the first time in her 16 years, Luana smiled.

"You can live with me from now on as my pet ok?" said Luana.

Amor looking at Luana. She was already balling with tears, with also a smile on her face. Luana cuddled Amor, and put her cheek against Amor's to feel.

"Ok with that done are you hungry? I have made some dinner" said Luana smiling.

"Yes please!" said Amor back to her normal self.

Aww....that was so touching, do you think so too? Lets end the chapter here for now. But will Luana be prepared to face megabyte again? There is one way to find out. And that’s to wait for the next chapter!


Summon time~

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Where Did Amor Disappear Off Too? Chapter 6


Back on planet Speed Leggy. Leggy has just finishing informing the elites of evil. He told them to go back to his throne room, and to wait for his return.

"So we have finally found a worthy foe to fight with" said Muavil.

"I can't wait to destroy her!" said Starrite.

"I hope to finish her off myself. I think its best for me to handle that girl" said Raiyne.

"Whoa! Hold on you guys. I am the one to break her to a million of pieces!" Said Megabyte.

They all laughed at Megabyte which got him very annoyed.

"Yeah right. We can all see how well that ended" said Muavil as he chuckled.

Megabyte replied back saying "Don't you underestimate me!"

"Hey, cool it Megabyte" said Starrite.

"Ugh fine" said Megabyte.

"Well, well, well"

Said Speed Leggy as he walked into the room, with his pet zebra on the leash.

"What is going on here?" He asked.

"Well my lord. Megabyte is being an idiot again" said Raiyne.

She closed her eyes after saying that.

Megabyte shouted back "Am not!!"

"Do you want to be sleeping with the fishes Megabyte?" said Leggy.

Megabyte perked up his behaviour, knowing what leggy meant by that.

"No master...." said Megabyte.

"Good. Go back to earth, find that girl and kill her. You fail me again, and you know what happens" said Leggy.

"Yes my lord" said Megabyte.

He left with that, and departed for earth.

"You three will stay with me. And we will watch the battle from here." said Leggy.

And all of them said "Yes sire!"

The sun began to rise on earth to start a new day. Luana still sleeping. She is dreaming of some happiness. The sunlight made its way though her bedroom curtains, and onto her face. Also the sound of singing birds woke her up. One of her eyes opened slowly. And then she stretched out her whole body, while still laying down on her bed. She sighed, and then she thought

"I still can not believe all of the things that happened yesterday.....What road of future lies for me, now that I am responsible to protect the earth? There are still something's I have yet to understand about my past...."

She got up and sat on her bed.

"I wonder where Amor went? After we helped the people she went away without telling me."

The sunny day that brightened up the sky, suddenly turned dark. And rain started to pour badly. Opening the curtains and looking through them Luana was a bit annoyed.

"Guessed that you change your mind huh? I do hope Amor is fine out there...speaking of which I need to go out shopping for food" said Luana.

Luana gets up to get herself ready to go out. She takes her long purple umbrella, and makes her way to the store.

Meanwhile in space Megabyte was on his way to earth.

"She will pay, pay pay! I will not fail this time! I will kill her with my bear hands and break her real good too muhahaha!!!!!" said Megabyte.

He sped up his flying. On her way back from the store Luana saw two children with raincoats together near something. So she decided to take a look. As she got closer one little girl said

"The poor kitty.... we have to get help or it will die!"

And the little boy next to her said "I know sis, but what can we do?"

Luana asked the two children "What's the matter kids?"

And they both looked up with sad faces and said.

"The poor kitty is sick please help!"

"Ok. Stand aside please" said Luana

Luana was in shock of who she saw. And her eyes widened in sadness, and she slowly said

"Amor...."

It was Amor who was laying down in a carbon box. And she looked terribly sick! Luana did not hesitate to waste time. And she said

"You two hold these bags please"

"Ok!" they both said.

Good thing she had an extra sweater on. She too it off and put Amor in it to keep her warm.

"And also follow me please" said Luana.

"Yes ma'am!" said the children.

They all ran until they all reached Luanas house.

"Come in please you two. And put the bags in the kitchen" said Luana.

"We will!" said the little boy and the little girl

Luana placed Amor carefully on the long chair, she ran to her bedroom to get a pillow and a small blanket. She placed Amors head on the soft pillow, and then covered her with a warm blanket. Luana also put the heater on, for the room to be warm.

The little boy said "Lady we have done as you said!"

Luana replied back saying "Thank you...."

And the little girl said "We need to be off now bye, bye!"

They both left and closed the door behind them. Luana went to sit over near the long chair, and put one of her hand over Amors forehead, who is weakly trying to breath.

"Oh Amor.....you silly girl you got yourself sick with the fever." said Luana.

Luana ran to the kitchen to get a hot wipe cloth to put on top of Amors forehead. She placed it on, and it seems to be working as Amors reaction changed to being calm and restful. Luana whispered into one of Amors cat ears and said

"Hey....get better ok? I need you. So don't go dying on me now please..."

And with that Luana went to the kitchen, to cook for her and Amor. After 3 hours later Amor woke up, slowly looked around and said

"Huh.....how did I end up getting here?...."

"Amor are you awake? How are you feeling much better?" Said Luana coming out from the kitchen.

"Um yeah....thanks for asking." said Amor.

Amor gets up to leave the house.

"Where do you think you are going?!" shouted Luana.

"Back to my home of course. Where else." said Amor.

Luana said back "A home that is not proper?! Listen to yourself! You were really sick!"

"Its better to stay there. And besides you don't want friends or need them. Is that not what you told me?"
said Amor.

Luana bowing her head in shame, slowly went forward to pick Amor up with her hands and said

"Hey. Listen Amor..."

She said this with her head still down.

"I was wrong ok? You're are right. I can't always be alone. I have to make friends, and try to trust people. You have proved that to me. So please I beg of you don't leave me.....I have finally learned what it means to have a friend. Its not as bad as I thought it would be... I thought I was alone as I didn't know anything of my past. But you came and told me all these things. It made me to be happy a bit, knowing that I was not alone anymore. It was stupid of me to think that being alone would help me. And only seeing that the only way to avoid people, and not to be social too. You are the only person to forced me to see what a friend is....if you go now. I wouldn't know what to do. I don't know anything about myself you do...."

Luana rises her head and said

"Thank you Amor"

And for the first time in her 16 years, Luana smiled.

"You can live with me from now on as my pet ok?" said Luana.

Amor looking at Luana. She was already balling with tears, with also a smile on her face. Luana cuddled Amor, and put her cheek against Amor's to feel.

"Ok with that done are you hungry? I have made some dinner" said Luana smiling.

"Yes please!" said Amor back to her normal self.

Aww....that was so touching, do you think so too? Lets end the chapter here for now. But will Luana be prepared to face megabyte again? There is one way to find out. And that’s to wait for the next chapter!


Summon time~

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Good story. I can't help feeling bad for megabyte though x3.
Good story. I can't help feeling bad for megabyte though x3.
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Eniitan : wait did she just invite two little kids to her house with no adults around? these kids need to learn to not trust strangers and definitely don't enter their home.
Eniitan : wait did she just invite two little kids to her house with no adults around? these kids need to learn to not trust strangers and definitely don't enter their home.
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Poor Megabyte... everyone's so mean to him. On a happier note, the ending with Amor and Luana was really cute!
Poor Megabyte... everyone's so mean to him. On a happier note, the ending with Amor and Luana was really cute!
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I like your story so far. And just like a proper storywriter, you have someone everything bad happens to. xD
I like your story so far. And just like a proper storywriter, you have someone everything bad happens to. xD
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