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MONSTER: A tale of an akaian chapter 14 ''The terifying second form of Gror''
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hapter 1 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78954 Chapter 6 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79721 Chapter 11 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80758 chapter 12 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=81262
The entire crowd looked on at Green who had fired the Spina ray! ‘’What can son goku do!?’’ Yelled the announcer. The Spina ray flew towards Goku and hit him sending him down the ring and underground. ‘’My goodness, I have to start the count now, One! Two! Three!’’ Said the announcer in shock. Oni said to himself ‘’That.. took everything out of me.. If he gets up now.. I don’t know if I’ll stand a chance.’’ ‘’Four! Five! Six!’’ The announcer said ‘’My legs.. their shaking..’’ Oni thought ‘’Seven! Eight! Nine Te.. Impossible.. Goku has survived!’’ The announcer told the incredibly small audience. The audience only consisted of about 13 people, the rest all ran away when Oni turned in to a great ape. ‘’Jeez.. I thought I was done for there.. I don’t even have enough energy for a super saiyan higher than super saiyan 2! Incredible, Oni!’’ The damaged Goku said. ‘’I should have expected this.. I can’t take you, Kakarot..’’ Goku turned super saiyan 2 and said ‘’Even if I beat you.. You are incredibly strong.. remember that.’’ Oni fell over on the ground. ‘’Oh my! Oni has fell on the ground! One.. Two… Three.. Four.. Five.. Six.. Seven… Eight.. Nine……….. TEN! We have a winner! His birthname is Kakarot, But people on earth call him Son Goku He has won the tournament’’ The announcer yelled Goku – To think that I have such a gentle.. yet powerful younger brother.. I’m proud of you, Oni. Everyone! Don’t get him to a doctor, Wait here! The announcer replied ‘’But he needs a doctor!’’ Goku flew to his room where his magical beans were, Beans that can completely heal you instantly when you digest them. Goku went back while the doctors were already bringing him to the hospital because of a broken arm. Goku stopped before the doctors, and put the bean in Oni’s mouth. The assistant of the doctor was in shock and said ‘’What are you doing’’ ‘’Just look’’ Goku replied Oni stood up and said ‘’ I feel great again.. Kakarot you won didn’t you? Goku – Yeah I did, But you were incredible too. ‘’Wha.. what did you do?’’ the surpised doctors said when they saw green fine and well. ‘’Well, these are magical beans. When you eat them they heal you instantly!’’ Goku told the doctors ‘’You can have this entire bag of magical beans if you want’’ Goku said and gave them the bag. Goku and Oni exited the stadium. Oni – Hey, where is your spaceship? Goku – Oh, it’s a few minutes flying from here, Well See ya! Oni – Bye, Kakarot! Oni went back to his spaceship and was flying back to earth.. Little did he know one of his best friends was dead.. Meanwhile at TheFadedWarrior VS Gror Punch, Punch. Kick, Kick. Faded was beating up Gror. Faded punched Gror to the ground, Gror stood up. ‘’Grgh.. Ugh..’’ He grunted in pain ‘’MONSTER! You go to the underworld with Shellana and green, I’ll stay here!’’ Said Faded. Monster – We’ll go. Do you have the keys for Juul’s house? His time machine is still there. ‘’Here!’’ Faded said while he threw the reserve keys to Monster. Monster – Thanks… Good luck. Monster and green went inside Juul’s house. The time machine stood in the backyard. ‘’Thanks Juul..’’ Monster said while a small tear fell from his eyes to the ground. They all entered the time machine. Green – Alright, what we need to do. Is go to exactly one year from now, then go back 50 years, and then go forward a thousand. ‘’And you’re sure that it’s gonna work’’ Asked Monster. ‘’No.. but it’s our only hope..’’ Green replied. Green – Fasten your seatbelts, Cause here we go!! The extra large time machine left off to one year from now, Green pressed a lot of buttons and they went back and than forward again, It was black for a long period… However small bubbles and spikes emerged from the floor. Monster – Look out! Everyone fly! One of the spikes nearly broke the time machine but Monster was able to lift it just in time. Meanwhile.. Oni landed in The land of V.. where he was introduced… By the body of juul.. Oni – Impossible.. what happened.. Juul’s eyes are still open.. Oni closed Juul’s eyes. Oni – What is this power I’m sensing.. It’s incredible.. Wait a minute.. that’s faded’s energy! And there is a incredibly strong opponent too, but Faded’s power is far beyond even that! Oni flew towards Faded. Oni looked on at the beating that Gror was getting. And then gror spoke.. ‘’You have pushed me.. Now, you will see my transformation! Witness true fear!’’ The big yellow Yiran screamed while the back of his head grew and turned blue. He became a bit larger and the short green hair disappeared. Big long spikes grew on his back. Oni – Faded, Look out! Even you will not be able to defeat him, We have to run awa- ‘’NO!’’ Faded screamed with an angry face. ‘’He killed Juul, and he’s going to know what payback means’’ Faded continued. ‘’But that’s really impossible, don’t you realize what power he has? You are blinded by sorrow and anger! You have to do what’s right!’’ Oni replied with a serious yet thoughtful face. ‘’Green!?’’ Deg2000 told Oni with a shocked face ‘’I’m not green, I’m oni. I’ll give you the details later’’ Oni replied ‘’Ha..Hahahaha! Don’t worry you won’t have to feel the pain of missing your pathetic human friend for long, You’ll meet him soon in the otherworld’’ The transformed Gror said while he was not able to control his laughter. ‘’Oni isn’t it now? Get the hell out of here, now!’’ Faded said ‘’But you don’t understand!’’ ‘’I SAID, GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE’’ Faded yelled. ‘’I won’t! If I have to I’ll fight you!” Oni replied. ‘’Hahaha! Having some problems? I’ll fix it for ya’’ The laughing Gror said. ‘’Oni.. Don’t you sense that power? Even you can’t take Faded right now.’’ Deg2000 said ‘’I.. know.. Faded! If you end up dying there is no way we can bring you back!’’ ‘’You already know about that, but how?’’ Deg asked. ‘’David told me.’’ Oni replied. ‘’Like I care!’’ Faded yelled at Oni. Oni and deg flew to green’s house, Which he shared with mega mewtwo X. Meanwhile at Monster and the others.. ‘’What is this’’ Monster asked. ‘’I think that we reached it! The underworld I mean’’ Green said. ‘’And according to this map, We’ll need to find 10 crystals to fight one underworld demon.’’ Green continued.’’ What will happen!? Will our heroes get the 10 crystals and save earth!? And will Faded survive the transformed Gror? That and more, On the exciting next chapter of MONSTER: A tale of An akaian! greenluigi:Eirinn : appelmoesFTW : hapter 1 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78954 Chapter 6 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79721 Chapter 11 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80758 chapter 12 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=81262
The entire crowd looked on at Green who had fired the Spina ray! ‘’What can son goku do!?’’ Yelled the announcer. The Spina ray flew towards Goku and hit him sending him down the ring and underground. ‘’My goodness, I have to start the count now, One! Two! Three!’’ Said the announcer in shock. Oni said to himself ‘’That.. took everything out of me.. If he gets up now.. I don’t know if I’ll stand a chance.’’ ‘’Four! Five! Six!’’ The announcer said ‘’My legs.. their shaking..’’ Oni thought ‘’Seven! Eight! Nine Te.. Impossible.. Goku has survived!’’ The announcer told the incredibly small audience. The audience only consisted of about 13 people, the rest all ran away when Oni turned in to a great ape. ‘’Jeez.. I thought I was done for there.. I don’t even have enough energy for a super saiyan higher than super saiyan 2! Incredible, Oni!’’ The damaged Goku said. ‘’I should have expected this.. I can’t take you, Kakarot..’’ Goku turned super saiyan 2 and said ‘’Even if I beat you.. You are incredibly strong.. remember that.’’ Oni fell over on the ground. ‘’Oh my! Oni has fell on the ground! One.. Two… Three.. Four.. Five.. Six.. Seven… Eight.. Nine……….. TEN! We have a winner! His birthname is Kakarot, But people on earth call him Son Goku He has won the tournament’’ The announcer yelled Goku – To think that I have such a gentle.. yet powerful younger brother.. I’m proud of you, Oni. Everyone! Don’t get him to a doctor, Wait here! The announcer replied ‘’But he needs a doctor!’’ Goku flew to his room where his magical beans were, Beans that can completely heal you instantly when you digest them. Goku went back while the doctors were already bringing him to the hospital because of a broken arm. Goku stopped before the doctors, and put the bean in Oni’s mouth. The assistant of the doctor was in shock and said ‘’What are you doing’’ ‘’Just look’’ Goku replied Oni stood up and said ‘’ I feel great again.. Kakarot you won didn’t you? Goku – Yeah I did, But you were incredible too. ‘’Wha.. what did you do?’’ the surpised doctors said when they saw green fine and well. ‘’Well, these are magical beans. When you eat them they heal you instantly!’’ Goku told the doctors ‘’You can have this entire bag of magical beans if you want’’ Goku said and gave them the bag. Goku and Oni exited the stadium. Oni – Hey, where is your spaceship? Goku – Oh, it’s a few minutes flying from here, Well See ya! Oni – Bye, Kakarot! Oni went back to his spaceship and was flying back to earth.. Little did he know one of his best friends was dead.. Meanwhile at TheFadedWarrior VS Gror Punch, Punch. Kick, Kick. Faded was beating up Gror. Faded punched Gror to the ground, Gror stood up. ‘’Grgh.. Ugh..’’ He grunted in pain ‘’MONSTER! You go to the underworld with Shellana and green, I’ll stay here!’’ Said Faded. Monster – We’ll go. Do you have the keys for Juul’s house? His time machine is still there. ‘’Here!’’ Faded said while he threw the reserve keys to Monster. Monster – Thanks… Good luck. Monster and green went inside Juul’s house. The time machine stood in the backyard. ‘’Thanks Juul..’’ Monster said while a small tear fell from his eyes to the ground. They all entered the time machine. Green – Alright, what we need to do. Is go to exactly one year from now, then go back 50 years, and then go forward a thousand. ‘’And you’re sure that it’s gonna work’’ Asked Monster. ‘’No.. but it’s our only hope..’’ Green replied. Green – Fasten your seatbelts, Cause here we go!! The extra large time machine left off to one year from now, Green pressed a lot of buttons and they went back and than forward again, It was black for a long period… However small bubbles and spikes emerged from the floor. Monster – Look out! Everyone fly! One of the spikes nearly broke the time machine but Monster was able to lift it just in time. Meanwhile.. Oni landed in The land of V.. where he was introduced… By the body of juul.. Oni – Impossible.. what happened.. Juul’s eyes are still open.. Oni closed Juul’s eyes. Oni – What is this power I’m sensing.. It’s incredible.. Wait a minute.. that’s faded’s energy! And there is a incredibly strong opponent too, but Faded’s power is far beyond even that! Oni flew towards Faded. Oni looked on at the beating that Gror was getting. And then gror spoke.. ‘’You have pushed me.. Now, you will see my transformation! Witness true fear!’’ The big yellow Yiran screamed while the back of his head grew and turned blue. He became a bit larger and the short green hair disappeared. Big long spikes grew on his back. Oni – Faded, Look out! Even you will not be able to defeat him, We have to run awa- ‘’NO!’’ Faded screamed with an angry face. ‘’He killed Juul, and he’s going to know what payback means’’ Faded continued. ‘’But that’s really impossible, don’t you realize what power he has? You are blinded by sorrow and anger! You have to do what’s right!’’ Oni replied with a serious yet thoughtful face. ‘’Green!?’’ Deg2000 told Oni with a shocked face ‘’I’m not green, I’m oni. I’ll give you the details later’’ Oni replied ‘’Ha..Hahahaha! Don’t worry you won’t have to feel the pain of missing your pathetic human friend for long, You’ll meet him soon in the otherworld’’ The transformed Gror said while he was not able to control his laughter. ‘’Oni isn’t it now? Get the hell out of here, now!’’ Faded said ‘’But you don’t understand!’’ ‘’I SAID, GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE’’ Faded yelled. ‘’I won’t! If I have to I’ll fight you!” Oni replied. ‘’Hahaha! Having some problems? I’ll fix it for ya’’ The laughing Gror said. ‘’Oni.. Don’t you sense that power? Even you can’t take Faded right now.’’ Deg2000 said ‘’I.. know.. Faded! If you end up dying there is no way we can bring you back!’’ ‘’You already know about that, but how?’’ Deg asked. ‘’David told me.’’ Oni replied. ‘’Like I care!’’ Faded yelled at Oni. Oni and deg flew to green’s house, Which he shared with mega mewtwo X. Meanwhile at Monster and the others.. ‘’What is this’’ Monster asked. ‘’I think that we reached it! The underworld I mean’’ Green said. ‘’And according to this map, We’ll need to find 10 crystals to fight one underworld demon.’’ Green continued.’’ What will happen!? Will our heroes get the 10 crystals and save earth!? And will Faded survive the transformed Gror? That and more, On the exciting next chapter of MONSTER: A tale of An akaian! greenluigi:Eirinn : appelmoesFTW : |
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That was a really awesome chapter monster just wow well interested to see what the others will do about gror now just wow well interested to see what the others will do about gror now |
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appelmoesFTW : Thanks, dude. I am interested too (Acutally i'm already four chapters ahead, So I know excactly what's going to happen) Glad that you enjoyed it, Can't wait for you're story. |
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Yeah I know also prologue 1 November chapter 1 4 November also prologue 1 November chapter 1 4 November |
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