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MONSTER: A TALE OF AN AKAIAN Chapter 4 'Tentacles Oh Tentacles

 

08-08-14 03:50 PM
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All chapters:
Chapter 1 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78954
Chapter 2 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78965
Chapter 3 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78980


MONSTER: A TALE OF AN AKAIAN Chapter 4 ‘Tentacles Oh Tentacles’

 

Monster and the others were walking up the staircase in the ZZED Mountain

And then there was another door, The entrance of a trap no doubt. But they had to overcome it.

Monster opened the door. But, There was a entire forest in it. Full of trees and you could not see what’s ahead. It was as big as a normal forest.

Monster – Let me first make a path. SUISHOU BLAST!!!!!!!

A Crystal Blast came out of Monster’s hands and made a path.

GameBoy1023 – Great stuff Monster!

Shellana – I see that you practiced that move.

Monster – Yeah, Now let’s follow the path.

It was a straight path, But it was too far away to see what was at the end of the path.

For a few minutes they could walk without problem until…

Juuldude – What in the world!?

Massive tentacles came out of the ground, Hundreds of them.

Eirinn – Not good! Not good….

TheFadedWarrior screamed ‘’SHOW ME YO MOVES!’’ And one of the tentacles hit him in the face.

Monster – FADED!

Shellana cut off a tentacle to prevent it from killing monster.

Shellana – Not to be mean faded, BUT PLEASE GET UP!!

Faded got up.

TheFadedWarrior – Was that everything huh?

Another tentacle tried to hit him but he jumped over the tentacle in gave it a knee, Killing  the Tentacle.

Juuldude – We have to kill every Tentacle One by one?

Shellana – It would not work if I would cut every single one of them at once, Or even more than one, They would prevent me.

GameBoy1023 - Time.. to get Gameboyi!

Gameboy1023 Cut off two tentacles with his bare hands!?

Shellana – Wow, Gameboy! How did you do that.

GameBoy1023 – I.. don’t know!

Monster – That’s amazing Gameboy!

GameBoy did it again!

But the third time, It di did not go that smoothly. A tentacle picked him up and threw him to the ground.But now Another Tentacle picked him up and pulled him under the ground. GameBoy1023 Was under the ground!

Juuldude – That’s… strange.

Eirinn – I have an idea, You guys go on, And I will go under the ground to find Gameboy.

Monster – Are you sure?

Eirinn – Yes I found out that under the ground is his body so, if I pull it’s uvula It will, Ugh spit us out.

Monster – Whatever you say. Do it!

Eirinn was right. It was the inside of his mouth.

Eirinn Screamed ‘’Gameboy!’’ Gameboy!!!’’

No response.

Eirinn went inside his stomach.

Eirinn said to himself ‘’This is really gross, But I have to save a friend.’’

Eirinn went further and further, But could not find GameBoy!

Meanwhile at monster and the others.

They were still fighting the tentacle monster.
juuldude – How….?

Monster – We can’t kill it, Eirinn and Gameboy could not get out if we do kill it.

Juuldude – We have to do what I am best at, I  MEAN We have to do what’s wise, Find a way around the Tentacles!

Monster – But how?

They were looking for a way around… It seemed impossible.

Monster – Wait! Who can fly and who can’t?

Shellana – I can!

TheFadedWarrior – I can! Thanks to you.

Greenluigi – I can!

Juuldude – I can’t..

Monster – I’ll have to teach you when we get back.

Juuldude – If we do get back.

Monster – But anyway, Look above, There is this little narrow space where are no Tentacles. Juuldude Hold me.

Monster flew to the Narrow place.

Juuldude – THIS IS SCARY!!

Everyone was trough the narrow place and they were back at the staircase!

Green – That was close!

Meanwhile at Eirinn.

Eirinn Still had not found Gameboy.

Eirinn – Screaming won’t help, He would never hear me.

But then He heard Gameboy.

Eirinn screamed ‘’GAMEBOY!! IT’S ME EIRINN!!!’’

Gameboy1023 replied screaming ‘’I’M HERE!
Eirinn had found GameBoy1023.

GameBoy1023 – Do you know how to get out of here?

Eirinn – Follow me.

They climbed their way back to the tongue Eirinn Pulled the Uvula

When they were out they runned back to the entrance to the Forest Since they could both not fly there would be no way for them to continue the journey to the top of the mountain. They went back home.

Meanwhile at monster and the others.

Monster – I wonder how many more obstacles there are, Since I’m starting to love this!

Shellana – This is a Massive mountain, It will take a while. They went to sleep on the cold hard Stairway.

The next day Everyone woke up very early and it was time to continue their journey to the top of the mountain.

Juuldude – Do we have any food?

Shellana – Of course, We would not survive without it.

Monster – Hey guys, How did you even know that we were going to the mountain.

Green – David told us.

Monster – I see, And juul, How in the world did you get that limousine.

Juuldude – Well you see, I won it thanks to a robopon competition. They are all crazy fans and the main price was A limousine, I was planning to stay longer on my vacation over there, But Eirinn called me up and told everything.

Monster – Who actually drove the limousine?

Juuldude – It was my friend that has a driving license. Who was with me on vacation.

Monster – I hope that he did not win that License thanks to a Robopon competiton.

Juuldude – He did actually.

Monster – OH MY GOD

They ate and they went to walking up the staircase again.

Meanwhile at Eirinn

GameBoy1023 was having a sleepover at Eirinn and Deg2000’s house.

Eirinn told deg everything.

Deg2000 – Really? That is so cool! And that.. Is just gross.

Eirinn – I know! But somehow we are save.

GameBoy1023 – Let’s hope it stays that way.

Eirinn – How do you think Monster and the other’s are doing?

Deg2000 – Their doing fine, They can do it.

Eirinn – But, It feels like every trap got a bit harder..

GameBoy1023 – If they get back, I wonder what stories they have to tell.

Eirinn – I do too.

Will monster and the rest survive?

TO BE CONTINUED

juuldude:

All chapters:
Chapter 1 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78954
Chapter 2 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78965
Chapter 3 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78980


MONSTER: A TALE OF AN AKAIAN Chapter 4 ‘Tentacles Oh Tentacles’

 

Monster and the others were walking up the staircase in the ZZED Mountain

And then there was another door, The entrance of a trap no doubt. But they had to overcome it.

Monster opened the door. But, There was a entire forest in it. Full of trees and you could not see what’s ahead. It was as big as a normal forest.

Monster – Let me first make a path. SUISHOU BLAST!!!!!!!

A Crystal Blast came out of Monster’s hands and made a path.

GameBoy1023 – Great stuff Monster!

Shellana – I see that you practiced that move.

Monster – Yeah, Now let’s follow the path.

It was a straight path, But it was too far away to see what was at the end of the path.

For a few minutes they could walk without problem until…

Juuldude – What in the world!?

Massive tentacles came out of the ground, Hundreds of them.

Eirinn – Not good! Not good….

TheFadedWarrior screamed ‘’SHOW ME YO MOVES!’’ And one of the tentacles hit him in the face.

Monster – FADED!

Shellana cut off a tentacle to prevent it from killing monster.

Shellana – Not to be mean faded, BUT PLEASE GET UP!!

Faded got up.

TheFadedWarrior – Was that everything huh?

Another tentacle tried to hit him but he jumped over the tentacle in gave it a knee, Killing  the Tentacle.

Juuldude – We have to kill every Tentacle One by one?

Shellana – It would not work if I would cut every single one of them at once, Or even more than one, They would prevent me.

GameBoy1023 - Time.. to get Gameboyi!

Gameboy1023 Cut off two tentacles with his bare hands!?

Shellana – Wow, Gameboy! How did you do that.

GameBoy1023 – I.. don’t know!

Monster – That’s amazing Gameboy!

GameBoy did it again!

But the third time, It di did not go that smoothly. A tentacle picked him up and threw him to the ground.But now Another Tentacle picked him up and pulled him under the ground. GameBoy1023 Was under the ground!

Juuldude – That’s… strange.

Eirinn – I have an idea, You guys go on, And I will go under the ground to find Gameboy.

Monster – Are you sure?

Eirinn – Yes I found out that under the ground is his body so, if I pull it’s uvula It will, Ugh spit us out.

Monster – Whatever you say. Do it!

Eirinn was right. It was the inside of his mouth.

Eirinn Screamed ‘’Gameboy!’’ Gameboy!!!’’

No response.

Eirinn went inside his stomach.

Eirinn said to himself ‘’This is really gross, But I have to save a friend.’’

Eirinn went further and further, But could not find GameBoy!

Meanwhile at monster and the others.

They were still fighting the tentacle monster.
juuldude – How….?

Monster – We can’t kill it, Eirinn and Gameboy could not get out if we do kill it.

Juuldude – We have to do what I am best at, I  MEAN We have to do what’s wise, Find a way around the Tentacles!

Monster – But how?

They were looking for a way around… It seemed impossible.

Monster – Wait! Who can fly and who can’t?

Shellana – I can!

TheFadedWarrior – I can! Thanks to you.

Greenluigi – I can!

Juuldude – I can’t..

Monster – I’ll have to teach you when we get back.

Juuldude – If we do get back.

Monster – But anyway, Look above, There is this little narrow space where are no Tentacles. Juuldude Hold me.

Monster flew to the Narrow place.

Juuldude – THIS IS SCARY!!

Everyone was trough the narrow place and they were back at the staircase!

Green – That was close!

Meanwhile at Eirinn.

Eirinn Still had not found Gameboy.

Eirinn – Screaming won’t help, He would never hear me.

But then He heard Gameboy.

Eirinn screamed ‘’GAMEBOY!! IT’S ME EIRINN!!!’’

Gameboy1023 replied screaming ‘’I’M HERE!
Eirinn had found GameBoy1023.

GameBoy1023 – Do you know how to get out of here?

Eirinn – Follow me.

They climbed their way back to the tongue Eirinn Pulled the Uvula

When they were out they runned back to the entrance to the Forest Since they could both not fly there would be no way for them to continue the journey to the top of the mountain. They went back home.

Meanwhile at monster and the others.

Monster – I wonder how many more obstacles there are, Since I’m starting to love this!

Shellana – This is a Massive mountain, It will take a while. They went to sleep on the cold hard Stairway.

The next day Everyone woke up very early and it was time to continue their journey to the top of the mountain.

Juuldude – Do we have any food?

Shellana – Of course, We would not survive without it.

Monster – Hey guys, How did you even know that we were going to the mountain.

Green – David told us.

Monster – I see, And juul, How in the world did you get that limousine.

Juuldude – Well you see, I won it thanks to a robopon competition. They are all crazy fans and the main price was A limousine, I was planning to stay longer on my vacation over there, But Eirinn called me up and told everything.

Monster – Who actually drove the limousine?

Juuldude – It was my friend that has a driving license. Who was with me on vacation.

Monster – I hope that he did not win that License thanks to a Robopon competiton.

Juuldude – He did actually.

Monster – OH MY GOD

They ate and they went to walking up the staircase again.

Meanwhile at Eirinn

GameBoy1023 was having a sleepover at Eirinn and Deg2000’s house.

Eirinn told deg everything.

Deg2000 – Really? That is so cool! And that.. Is just gross.

Eirinn – I know! But somehow we are save.

GameBoy1023 – Let’s hope it stays that way.

Eirinn – How do you think Monster and the other’s are doing?

Deg2000 – Their doing fine, They can do it.

Eirinn – But, It feels like every trap got a bit harder..

GameBoy1023 – If they get back, I wonder what stories they have to tell.

Eirinn – I do too.

Will monster and the rest survive?

TO BE CONTINUED

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Trololol I am the only one that not can fly yet I have a limousine? And of course I'm the hungry one This story is really cool ima, I can't wait until the next one appears
Trololol I am the only one that not can fly yet I have a limousine? And of course I'm the hungry one This story is really cool ima, I can't wait until the next one appears
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Great job man you should write a book I bet you would be great at it .I really love this story I look forward to reading chapter 5.
Great job man you should write a book I bet you would be great at it .I really love this story I look forward to reading chapter 5.
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