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MONSTER: A TALE OF A AKAIAN CHAPTER 2 ‘Shellana’
08-07-14 04:44 PM
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Chapter 1https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78954 MONSTER: A TALE OF A AKAIAN CHAPTER 2 ‘Shellana’
Deg2000 Went back to his home, Which he shared with Eirinn Eirinn Was cooking. Deg2000 – Hey eir Eirinn – Well hi! Deg2000 – What do you think.. About monster? Eirinn – I think that David was right, He was probably just looking for a rabbit. Deg2000 - .. Maybe your right… So what are we eating? Eirinn – Well.. My food got burned so We will have to go to VizzedBurgers. Deg2000 – Oh ok.
Meanwhile With david. Someone knocked the door. David – Come In! It was Light Knight. David – Knight! Light Knight – Hello sir. Do you know more about monster? David – I don’t. But I have to.. Light Knight – I understand. There is also a error in the RGR. David -Tell Triune to fix that. Light Knight – Yes sir. Meanwhile monster was in his room, Thinking. Monster said to himself ‘’How.. How could she be so fast! And so agile, How she used those swords… It was almost like.. almost like… …. No, There is no way.’’ Faded knocked on the door. TheFadedWarrior – Yeah monster Food is finished, We are eating Captain Falcon SHOW ME YO MOVES SPECIAL FRIES! Monster – Coming! Monster and Faded Ate. TheFadedWarrior - *Num* Num* Why are you so silent? Monster – I can’t believe this but.. Can you keep a secret. TheFadedWarrior – I can. I think… Monster – If I find out that you told someone, It won’t be your birthday soon TheFadedWarrior – Well actually It’s almost my birthday so It will be my birthday soon. Monster – IT MEANS THAT I WILL PUNCH YOU IN THE FACE. TheFadedWarrior – Oh ok, So what’s the secret? Monster – In the night of 2 days ago, I saw a girl.. So fast.. She was nearly as fast as me. TheFadedWarrior – Was she pretty? I MEAN That can’t be! Monster – Well it did happen TheFadedWarrior – Are you sure that it was not a dream? Monster – I’m sure that it’s not a dream, I felt the pain after I followed her running, I had never run so fast in my life. She got away Because of a mistake by me. Don’t tell anyone ok? TheFadedWarrior – I won’t tell anyone, Don’t worry. Monster – Good.
The following morning David wook up very early, To ask Monster about some things. It was 5:00 AM David rang the doorbell. Monster was awake and heard it. He opened the door. David – I knew that you would not be Monster – You were correct sir. But why would you come to my house, At this time, In fact why would you come to my house at any time? David – Because I want to know about what you were doing 3 days ago. And don’t tell me that it was nothing. Monster – Well… I.. Saw someone. David – Who? Monster – That’s the thing that has been bothering me, I don’t know. She was nearly as fast as me! David – That’s.. Nearly impossible. Monster – I see what you did there. Well anyway It’s true.. And when I told her my name, My real name Potanto She screamed What and flew away. David – She could fly!? Monster – Yes she could David – Who thaught her that? Monster – I don’t know! David – What do you want to do about this? Monster – Well sir.. I’ll go look for her with.. Hey is green back from his vacation? David – Well yes he is in his house now Monster – I’ll wait a bit and I’ll ask him to come with me. David – Ok, Well Good luck. Monster – Thank you sir. David went back to his castle. At 9:00 AM Monster rushed to Green’s house, Which he shared with Mega Mewto X Monster – Is green awake? Mega Mewtwo X – He is, GREEN! MONSTER WANT S TO SEE YOU! Green – Monster!! Long time no see! Monster Told green about everything and asked him if he would hep monster to look for the girl. Green – Of course I will! Monster – Thanks.. bro! So they went to look for the girl, For the entire day, But they could not find her. They did this for a month, Until they found her! This time she did nothing, She just stood there when she saw the two. The Girl – Potanto…. Monster – Who… wait! Shellana? The Girl – Potanto.. How.. Monster – How long has it been… Shellana – Well.. We are 19 now. Monster - It has been 8 years since I last saw you than. Shellana Hugged Monster. Green – Don’t go all emotional on me. Monster – Well.. Green. Let me tell you the story. We grew up together.. She.. Is a Akaian. A fullblooded one, And as you know I am half. My hart grew dark, But she stopped it. She kept me company, And she made me happy when I was felt down. A real friend. Green –I understand. Monster – BUT Her father did not want a Saiyan to be talking to her daughter. Even though I was half Saiyan Half Akaian. I gave her something to remember me She still has it on. You see, Her father was mayor And did not want any Saiyan to live in his city. I got removed from the city. Shellana – Of course I still have it on. I would never remove it. Green – I see.. Well I know! You can stay here in the Land Of V! Shellana – For a few weeks, As I need to tell something to monster in Private. They returned to their homes. Monster – Bye green! Thanks for all of the help man! Green – No prob! Monster rang the Doorbell. Faded opened the door. TheFadedWarrior – Who is the girl? Monster closed the door and said ‘’This is the girl I was talking about’’ TheFadedWarrior – Really? Monster – Yeah. Now if you can excuse us. Monster and shellana went to monster’s room/ Shellana – I wanted to tell you something, The robot I was fighting was created by a man with bad intentions. He comes from a faraway planet. Monster – Where is he? Shellana – He has made a basement in the ZZED Mountain. Monster – Where excactly? Shellana – I don’t know.. Monster – But that is one of the biggest mountains in the world! Shellana – And full of traps, but we have to stop him before he ruins the Land Of V! A quite nice place actually. Monster – I agree. Shellana – Well we can wait for a few weeks. But we have to do it sooner rather than later. Monster – I understand. That evening Faded Shellana and Monster were watching TV. They went to bed Faded Asked‘’ In which room will she be Monster – Since your room is a mess she won’t be TheFadedWarrior – I hoped you would say that, Also the extra bed is in the basement. Monster – Okay, I’ll get it. Monster and shellana talked long about their memories. TO BE CONTINUED
Chapter 1https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78954 MONSTER: A TALE OF A AKAIAN CHAPTER 2 ‘Shellana’
Deg2000 Went back to his home, Which he shared with Eirinn Eirinn Was cooking. Deg2000 – Hey eir Eirinn – Well hi! Deg2000 – What do you think.. About monster? Eirinn – I think that David was right, He was probably just looking for a rabbit. Deg2000 - .. Maybe your right… So what are we eating? Eirinn – Well.. My food got burned so We will have to go to VizzedBurgers. Deg2000 – Oh ok.
Meanwhile With david. Someone knocked the door. David – Come In! It was Light Knight. David – Knight! Light Knight – Hello sir. Do you know more about monster? David – I don’t. But I have to.. Light Knight – I understand. There is also a error in the RGR. David -Tell Triune to fix that. Light Knight – Yes sir. Meanwhile monster was in his room, Thinking. Monster said to himself ‘’How.. How could she be so fast! And so agile, How she used those swords… It was almost like.. almost like… …. No, There is no way.’’ Faded knocked on the door. TheFadedWarrior – Yeah monster Food is finished, We are eating Captain Falcon SHOW ME YO MOVES SPECIAL FRIES! Monster – Coming! Monster and Faded Ate. TheFadedWarrior - *Num* Num* Why are you so silent? Monster – I can’t believe this but.. Can you keep a secret. TheFadedWarrior – I can. I think… Monster – If I find out that you told someone, It won’t be your birthday soon TheFadedWarrior – Well actually It’s almost my birthday so It will be my birthday soon. Monster – IT MEANS THAT I WILL PUNCH YOU IN THE FACE. TheFadedWarrior – Oh ok, So what’s the secret? Monster – In the night of 2 days ago, I saw a girl.. So fast.. She was nearly as fast as me. TheFadedWarrior – Was she pretty? I MEAN That can’t be! Monster – Well it did happen TheFadedWarrior – Are you sure that it was not a dream? Monster – I’m sure that it’s not a dream, I felt the pain after I followed her running, I had never run so fast in my life. She got away Because of a mistake by me. Don’t tell anyone ok? TheFadedWarrior – I won’t tell anyone, Don’t worry. Monster – Good.
The following morning David wook up very early, To ask Monster about some things. It was 5:00 AM David rang the doorbell. Monster was awake and heard it. He opened the door. David – I knew that you would not be Monster – You were correct sir. But why would you come to my house, At this time, In fact why would you come to my house at any time? David – Because I want to know about what you were doing 3 days ago. And don’t tell me that it was nothing. Monster – Well… I.. Saw someone. David – Who? Monster – That’s the thing that has been bothering me, I don’t know. She was nearly as fast as me! David – That’s.. Nearly impossible. Monster – I see what you did there. Well anyway It’s true.. And when I told her my name, My real name Potanto She screamed What and flew away. David – She could fly!? Monster – Yes she could David – Who thaught her that? Monster – I don’t know! David – What do you want to do about this? Monster – Well sir.. I’ll go look for her with.. Hey is green back from his vacation? David – Well yes he is in his house now Monster – I’ll wait a bit and I’ll ask him to come with me. David – Ok, Well Good luck. Monster – Thank you sir. David went back to his castle. At 9:00 AM Monster rushed to Green’s house, Which he shared with Mega Mewto X Monster – Is green awake? Mega Mewtwo X – He is, GREEN! MONSTER WANT S TO SEE YOU! Green – Monster!! Long time no see! Monster Told green about everything and asked him if he would hep monster to look for the girl. Green – Of course I will! Monster – Thanks.. bro! So they went to look for the girl, For the entire day, But they could not find her. They did this for a month, Until they found her! This time she did nothing, She just stood there when she saw the two. The Girl – Potanto…. Monster – Who… wait! Shellana? The Girl – Potanto.. How.. Monster – How long has it been… Shellana – Well.. We are 19 now. Monster - It has been 8 years since I last saw you than. Shellana Hugged Monster. Green – Don’t go all emotional on me. Monster – Well.. Green. Let me tell you the story. We grew up together.. She.. Is a Akaian. A fullblooded one, And as you know I am half. My hart grew dark, But she stopped it. She kept me company, And she made me happy when I was felt down. A real friend. Green –I understand. Monster – BUT Her father did not want a Saiyan to be talking to her daughter. Even though I was half Saiyan Half Akaian. I gave her something to remember me She still has it on. You see, Her father was mayor And did not want any Saiyan to live in his city. I got removed from the city. Shellana – Of course I still have it on. I would never remove it. Green – I see.. Well I know! You can stay here in the Land Of V! Shellana – For a few weeks, As I need to tell something to monster in Private. They returned to their homes. Monster – Bye green! Thanks for all of the help man! Green – No prob! Monster rang the Doorbell. Faded opened the door. TheFadedWarrior – Who is the girl? Monster closed the door and said ‘’This is the girl I was talking about’’ TheFadedWarrior – Really? Monster – Yeah. Now if you can excuse us. Monster and shellana went to monster’s room/ Shellana – I wanted to tell you something, The robot I was fighting was created by a man with bad intentions. He comes from a faraway planet. Monster – Where is he? Shellana – He has made a basement in the ZZED Mountain. Monster – Where excactly? Shellana – I don’t know.. Monster – But that is one of the biggest mountains in the world! Shellana – And full of traps, but we have to stop him before he ruins the Land Of V! A quite nice place actually. Monster – I agree. Shellana – Well we can wait for a few weeks. But we have to do it sooner rather than later. Monster – I understand. That evening Faded Shellana and Monster were watching TV. They went to bed Faded Asked‘’ In which room will she be Monster – Since your room is a mess she won’t be TheFadedWarrior – I hoped you would say that, Also the extra bed is in the basement. Monster – Okay, I’ll get it. Monster and shellana talked long about their memories. TO BE CONTINUED
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imamonster : That's so cute! FIRST REMOVE YOUR LAYOUT!!! SECOND, the girl named Shellana creeps me out. IDK why. Finally I appeared  !juuldude : You probably didn't appear cause you are playing Super Carrotta and keep losing against DeathMelon !juuldude : You probably didn't appear cause you are playing Super Carrotta and keep losing against DeathMelon |
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"VizzedBurgers" Nice. lol
Man, it's been a while since I've gotten to read your stories (I plan to catch up on them again though), and I really enjoyed this. I love how you just turned Vizzed into a village (or city or whatever it may be. Bear in mind I'm a few stories behind). It's pretty cool imagining Vizzed that way. lol Are there any descr All green and...forest villagey. xD I'm great at describing things, I know.Man, it's been a while since I've gotten to read your stories (I plan to catch up on them again though), and I really enjoyed this. I love how you just turned Vizzed into a village (or city or whatever it may be. Bear in mind I'm a few stories behind). It's pretty cool imagining Vizzed that way. lol Are there any descr All green and...forest villagey. xD I'm great at describing things, I know. |
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greenluigi : Why? lol You'll get to know more about her character in the future so maybe she will become less creepy juuldude : Hmm, I think that I can do that. Eirinn : Thank you, And no there are not really, But that's what I love, Having to use your imagination. Cool that you imagine like the kokiri forest. That's a cool way to imagine it. juuldude : Hmm, I think that I can do that. Eirinn : Thank you, And no there are not really, But that's what I love, Having to use your imagination. Cool that you imagine like the kokiri forest. That's a cool way to imagine it. |
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