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MONSTER: A TALE OF A AKAIAN Chapter 3 ‘The ZZED Mountain’
08-08-14 06:08 AM
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All chapters: The following morning Faded, Monster and Shellana had a lot of fun. They played video games, Which Shellana did not play since she moved to earth and played it with monster. Shellana moved from Planet Akaia to Planet earth 15 years ago
TheFadedWarrior – So you are saying that there are no Video games on planet asia. Monster – Akaia Faded Akaia. Shellana – Yes. TheFadedWarrior – I would not want to live there. Shellana – I wanted to stay. But because of a outbreaking war my father decided to leave, And he actually became mayor of a city. But I’d rather not talk about him. TheFadedWarrior – Why? Shellana – He had a hatred for saiyans. He told me that if I would ever talk with a saiyan, The saiyan would not survive. TheFadedWarrior - Hey, You almost killed Monster then! Shellana – I told him that I could not talk to him, Because he was half saiyan. But he refused. And, Normally Female Akaians could not fly. But He thaught me. We runned so far my father could not find out, We thought. Monster – His guards found out and tried to execute me, Being the bastard that I am I broke free and flew away. TheFadedWarrior – That’s a pretty sad ending. And so The three talked about funny things. Monster – No one knows about Shellana yet, I’ll tell eirinn to tell David. Monster went to Eirinn’s house. Knock Knock Eirinn opened the door Well hi, Monster. Monster – I have found the girl. Eirinn – Oh yeah, David told me about that, I’ll tell david immediately. Monster went to Gameboy1023’s house which he shared with yoshirulez! Gameboy1023 opened the door. Gameboy1023 – Hi monster! Monster – Hey Gameboy, Just thought I’d visit. Gameboy1023 – Sure come in. Monster – Thank you! Monster – That’s a cool idea. Monster told Gameboy about everything. Gameboy1023 – Maybe she can come with us! Monster – Great idea! Gameboy1023 – Hey let’s play.. Pacman! Monster – Great Idea! Monster and Gameboy played pacman. Until monster said ‘’I think that It’s time to go back’’ Gameboy1023 – I understand. I’ll have to think of a day to go to VizzedBurgers! Monster – Ok! The following few weeks went nice, They went to VizzedBurgers With: Gameboy1023, Monster, Shellana,TheFadedWarrior, Eirinn And yoshirulez!. The day broke, Monster and Shellana would go to the ZZED mountain. Someone knocked the door, it was green! And than Gameboy1023 Knocked the door. They said that they wanted to go to the mountain too to help. Then they looked out of the window and saw a limousine, Out of it stepped, Juuldude with sunglasses and a suit!? He knocked the door. Juuldude – I want to help too. Monster – Don’t you guys get it, This will be very dangerous. Green – We will do everything to save the land of V! Shellana – This is not a good idea! Shellana – Are you sure that everything will be ok? Monster – No. Shellana – I don’t agree, But Come than.
They Made their way to the mountain, Their first obstacle to even getting to their was a robot, No not the same model as the one Shellana killed before, A model that was 4 times as big and 10 times as strong. Greenluigi stepped forward and said ‘’Let me handle this’’ Greenluigi – Haaaa…….. Greenluigi punched the robot. And it fell down. Than green jumped Hit him with a arm which went right trough the robot. Monster – You have really improved! Green – I said that I was on vacation. But I was actually training in a faraway land. Monster – That’s great! They went forward and made it to the mountain, They looked for a entrance until Eirinn found it. They went in the mountain. And there was the first obstacle! Spikes slowly falling down. They had no idea how to stop it. Until Faded realized how to. TheFadedWarrior -We have to go Turn one spike go inside and turn it off. That one spike will make a Door appear. Monster – Are you sure? TheFadedWarrior - Yes. I’ll do this He turned every spike, Even though that hurt really bad. He turned the right one Went inside and turned it off, The spikes were no longer falling down. Shellana – Great job, Faded! TheFadedWarrior – No problem! I mean it was about my life so you know that I would save it. They went higher in the mountain thanks to TheFadedWarrior finding the door. Behind the door there was a Stairway. And there was another trap! This time it was a giant monster. As big as a tree. In fact it was a tree! A living tree! Greenluigi said ‘’We need to fix this with teamwork guys!’’ Gameboy1023, Monster and Shellana Fighted the monster, Green got thrown to the ground but this was THE opening for juuldude, He punched the monster in the stomach and it fell over. And then Shellana cut off the head of the tree monster with her sword. Don’t forget that Female akaians are often Assasins. Shellana – Nice work guys! Juuldude – Thank you! Monster – Thanks Shella, We would be nowhere without you. I would have probably been killing innocents for planets if it was not for you. Shellana – You would never do that. Monster – I am a saiyan. So it could have happened. TheFadedWarrior – Can we go on? Shellana – Of course. They went on the trap again. But this time. They entered a room full of fire. You could not fly over it, The room was full. It had material that Nothing else would go up in flames. Juuldude – Great, How are ever going to do this? Eirinn – My sentiments excactly. Shellana – This is no problem. Haaa! A wave went through the flames, And the Flames were gone, However the next trap, Was not gonna be as easy.
Meanwhile at David. David – I want to know how everyone is doing. I have the feeling that they won’t come soon. But that they will come back.
All chapters: The following morning Faded, Monster and Shellana had a lot of fun. They played video games, Which Shellana did not play since she moved to earth and played it with monster. Shellana moved from Planet Akaia to Planet earth 15 years ago
TheFadedWarrior – So you are saying that there are no Video games on planet asia. Monster – Akaia Faded Akaia. Shellana – Yes. TheFadedWarrior – I would not want to live there. Shellana – I wanted to stay. But because of a outbreaking war my father decided to leave, And he actually became mayor of a city. But I’d rather not talk about him. TheFadedWarrior – Why? Shellana – He had a hatred for saiyans. He told me that if I would ever talk with a saiyan, The saiyan would not survive. TheFadedWarrior - Hey, You almost killed Monster then! Shellana – I told him that I could not talk to him, Because he was half saiyan. But he refused. And, Normally Female Akaians could not fly. But He thaught me. We runned so far my father could not find out, We thought. Monster – His guards found out and tried to execute me, Being the bastard that I am I broke free and flew away. TheFadedWarrior – That’s a pretty sad ending. And so The three talked about funny things. Monster – No one knows about Shellana yet, I’ll tell eirinn to tell David. Monster went to Eirinn’s house. Knock Knock Eirinn opened the door Well hi, Monster. Monster – I have found the girl. Eirinn – Oh yeah, David told me about that, I’ll tell david immediately. Monster went to Gameboy1023’s house which he shared with yoshirulez! Gameboy1023 opened the door. Gameboy1023 – Hi monster! Monster – Hey Gameboy, Just thought I’d visit. Gameboy1023 – Sure come in. Monster – Thank you! Monster – That’s a cool idea. Monster told Gameboy about everything. Gameboy1023 – Maybe she can come with us! Monster – Great idea! Gameboy1023 – Hey let’s play.. Pacman! Monster – Great Idea! Monster and Gameboy played pacman. Until monster said ‘’I think that It’s time to go back’’ Gameboy1023 – I understand. I’ll have to think of a day to go to VizzedBurgers! Monster – Ok! The following few weeks went nice, They went to VizzedBurgers With: Gameboy1023, Monster, Shellana,TheFadedWarrior, Eirinn And yoshirulez!. The day broke, Monster and Shellana would go to the ZZED mountain. Someone knocked the door, it was green! And than Gameboy1023 Knocked the door. They said that they wanted to go to the mountain too to help. Then they looked out of the window and saw a limousine, Out of it stepped, Juuldude with sunglasses and a suit!? He knocked the door. Juuldude – I want to help too. Monster – Don’t you guys get it, This will be very dangerous. Green – We will do everything to save the land of V! Shellana – This is not a good idea! Shellana – Are you sure that everything will be ok? Monster – No. Shellana – I don’t agree, But Come than.
They Made their way to the mountain, Their first obstacle to even getting to their was a robot, No not the same model as the one Shellana killed before, A model that was 4 times as big and 10 times as strong. Greenluigi stepped forward and said ‘’Let me handle this’’ Greenluigi – Haaaa…….. Greenluigi punched the robot. And it fell down. Than green jumped Hit him with a arm which went right trough the robot. Monster – You have really improved! Green – I said that I was on vacation. But I was actually training in a faraway land. Monster – That’s great! They went forward and made it to the mountain, They looked for a entrance until Eirinn found it. They went in the mountain. And there was the first obstacle! Spikes slowly falling down. They had no idea how to stop it. Until Faded realized how to. TheFadedWarrior -We have to go Turn one spike go inside and turn it off. That one spike will make a Door appear. Monster – Are you sure? TheFadedWarrior - Yes. I’ll do this He turned every spike, Even though that hurt really bad. He turned the right one Went inside and turned it off, The spikes were no longer falling down. Shellana – Great job, Faded! TheFadedWarrior – No problem! I mean it was about my life so you know that I would save it. They went higher in the mountain thanks to TheFadedWarrior finding the door. Behind the door there was a Stairway. And there was another trap! This time it was a giant monster. As big as a tree. In fact it was a tree! A living tree! Greenluigi said ‘’We need to fix this with teamwork guys!’’ Gameboy1023, Monster and Shellana Fighted the monster, Green got thrown to the ground but this was THE opening for juuldude, He punched the monster in the stomach and it fell over. And then Shellana cut off the head of the tree monster with her sword. Don’t forget that Female akaians are often Assasins. Shellana – Nice work guys! Juuldude – Thank you! Monster – Thanks Shella, We would be nowhere without you. I would have probably been killing innocents for planets if it was not for you. Shellana – You would never do that. Monster – I am a saiyan. So it could have happened. TheFadedWarrior – Can we go on? Shellana – Of course. They went on the trap again. But this time. They entered a room full of fire. You could not fly over it, The room was full. It had material that Nothing else would go up in flames. Juuldude – Great, How are ever going to do this? Eirinn – My sentiments excactly. Shellana – This is no problem. Haaa! A wave went through the flames, And the Flames were gone, However the next trap, Was not gonna be as easy.
Meanwhile at David. David – I want to know how everyone is doing. I have the feeling that they won’t come soon. But that they will come back.
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imamonster : That's a great chapter Monsi! I really have improved, haven't I? Will you do more informations about Green being a Kokiri :3? Oh and monsi there is something you need to know. We don't say 'A Akaian' we say 'An Akaian' every words that starts with A, E, I, O, U and Y, you must say 'An Eagle' per example. Ok? juuldude : It looks like you joined the adventure, user used your computer and LOST AGAINST DEATHMELON  juuldude : It looks like you joined the adventure, user used your computer and LOST AGAINST DEATHMELON |
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