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MONSTER: A TALE OF AN AKAIAN Chapter 13 Goodbye, My friend... ''
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Chapter 1 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78954 Chapter 6 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79721 Chapter 11 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80758 chapter 12 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=81262 Green – It’s down there. Descend! They all stood before the small house, It was a small house somewhere in the woods. It was build with solid rock. Green knocked on the door and yelled ‘’Hey, open up! It’s me green’’ The door opened up and before them stood a small man, However, he looked very wise. He said ‘’Hey, come in!’’ Green – So, how are you doing Ja? Ja replied ‘’I’ve been doing soo good dude, I recently like jumped so high DUDE!’’ Juuldude whispered to Faded ‘’He’s even more crazy than you.’’ Green – Yeaah.. That’s good. Well anyway. Could you tell us more about how to get to the underworld? Ja – The Underwooorlddd, it’s crazy!! You have to like press some buttons In the time machine!! Green – Ok, I understand. But what buttons excactly? Ja – Well. I still have a old piece of paper lying around here, Wait here I’ll be right back dudes! Ja left the room and Juuldude asked ‘’When I first saw him, I thought he was wise. What’s up with him?’’ Green – Living in a forest alone for 150 years gets boring after a while. Juuldude – 150 Years!? How’s that even possible? Green – I don’t even know. Ja opened the door again and said ‘’Look what I got! Is this what ya’ wanted sherrif?’’ Green looked at it and said ‘’I think it is, Let me have it for a bit.’’ Juuldude – And? Green – This is it! Juuldude – And I just recently got a brand new capsule corp time machine! Green – This is great! We can go now! Meanwhile at Oni Oni was completely transformed in to a great ape. He was no longer Oni. He was a mindless Giant ape! Goku – I have to go for the tail, Destructo disc!! The destructo disc is a sharp disc of energy that can cut through nearly everything. But it missed. Goku – Darn it! I can’t destroy the moon because it is a very important source on this planet! I have to knock him out myself, Without killing him! Oni picked up a piece of the ring and threw it at goku, Who destroyed the piece with a energy blast. Goku – I’ll hit you with my energy blast! Ka..mee…haa..mee…HAA!! The blue beam of energy hit Oni who fell on the ground. Goku – Now! Destructo disc!! The destructo disc cut through Oni’s tail. Oni was back to his normal self and fell on the ground. There were still very few people standing there, and the announcer was still there. Announcer – I.. I.. the count! One… Two… Three.. Four.. Five.. Six.. Seven.. Eight! Oni stood up and said ‘’What happened? I turned in to a great ape didn’t I? Goku – Yeah, You did! Oni – This fight is not ever yet Goku! Announcer – What a event! The saiyan turned in to a great ape, But the other finalist cut off his tail and brought him back to normal! Meanwhile Monster and the others were flying back to The land of V. There it was! They went to say hello to everyone, They were happy. But.. They could hear a big explosion, And trees fell to the ground. Juuldude – What the!? ??? –I’m back. Juuldude – What the!? Green – Behind you! Juuldude – Hu- Aaah! The mysterious being punched Juul in the back. TheFadedWarrior - No you are not hurting my friend! Faded kicked the mysterious man and sent him flying through pillars of rock. TheFadedWarrior – Juul! Are you alright!? That bastard! Green – Wow.. You are amazing Faded. TheFadedWarrior – He’s…. He’s… Dea… Tears rolled over his face. TheFadedWarrior stared at the being that killed juul who stood up from the loads of rocks on top of him. The killer.. Was Gror. TheFadedWarrior kept staring at Gror.. Gror – All humans come around. TheFadedWarrior - …. AAAAAAAAAH!! Monster – What the!? This power! Shellana – Humans can unlock incredible power when you unlock one of their emotions, This is it at display. Green – He’s gone even further beyond me! That means he will be able to destroy Gror easily. Monster – No. Yirans get an incredible power upgrade if you mix anger and near death. Very similar to what saiyans have. Green – That’s why I sensed incredible power from Gror! Even with Faded’s power upgrade can he defeat Gror? Monster - … I hope… Juul.. Deg2000 saw everything and rushed towards Monster and said ‘’Juul! Is he Ok!?’’ Monster closed his eyes and shook his head. Monster – Green, YOU IDIOT! You should have killed Gror when you got the chance! If you did, Faded’s best friend would not be in the otherworld right now! Green – I.. know. Monster – Tch, Filthy Kokiri’s. Shellana – Why did you get mad at him now, and not when juuldude got killed. Monster – Because.. It’s now just getting to me! He is the reason gror killed one of the most if not the most important person in Faded’s life! Deg2000 – You know the killer? Monster – We do, And green could have killed him. I even told him to. Deg2000 – I see.. Monster – Can we revive him by summoning shenron? Green – I’m afraid not Monster – Wha!? Why? Green – I remember that you went through a portal to get out of the rgr right? Monster – Yes. Green – Once you go through dimensions, If your dead. You stay dead. And I think that Faded knows that too. Monster – … Grrgh..
TheFadedWarrior told Gror ‘’I’ll kill you.’’ Gror – Oh really? Hahaahaha! You Humans make me laugh! TheFadedWarrior rushed towards Gror and punched him in the face repeatedly and then kicked him in the stomach. Gror – Grrgh.. Aaah! Meanwile at Oni VS Goku Oni kicked goku but he blocked, Goku then punched Oni in the face and kicked him sending Oni flying. However oni jumped off the wall and back to goku Oni kicked Goku on the head, This time it hit. Oni proceeded to punch goku, But Goku dodged most punches. Goku – You have really improved, Oni. You are really good. I’ll need this! Haaa!! Goku went super saiyan 4!! Oni – Wha!? Hmm, let’s see. They rushed at eachother, However this time Goku had the clear advantage… until! Oni – spina ray times 20!! The spina ray times 20 flew towards the super saiyan 4 goku! Will it hit? Can goku still win this? To be continued.. Chapter 1 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78954 Chapter 6 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79721 Chapter 11 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=80758 chapter 12 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=81262 Green – It’s down there. Descend! They all stood before the small house, It was a small house somewhere in the woods. It was build with solid rock. Green knocked on the door and yelled ‘’Hey, open up! It’s me green’’ The door opened up and before them stood a small man, However, he looked very wise. He said ‘’Hey, come in!’’ Green – So, how are you doing Ja? Ja replied ‘’I’ve been doing soo good dude, I recently like jumped so high DUDE!’’ Juuldude whispered to Faded ‘’He’s even more crazy than you.’’ Green – Yeaah.. That’s good. Well anyway. Could you tell us more about how to get to the underworld? Ja – The Underwooorlddd, it’s crazy!! You have to like press some buttons In the time machine!! Green – Ok, I understand. But what buttons excactly? Ja – Well. I still have a old piece of paper lying around here, Wait here I’ll be right back dudes! Ja left the room and Juuldude asked ‘’When I first saw him, I thought he was wise. What’s up with him?’’ Green – Living in a forest alone for 150 years gets boring after a while. Juuldude – 150 Years!? How’s that even possible? Green – I don’t even know. Ja opened the door again and said ‘’Look what I got! Is this what ya’ wanted sherrif?’’ Green looked at it and said ‘’I think it is, Let me have it for a bit.’’ Juuldude – And? Green – This is it! Juuldude – And I just recently got a brand new capsule corp time machine! Green – This is great! We can go now! Meanwhile at Oni Oni was completely transformed in to a great ape. He was no longer Oni. He was a mindless Giant ape! Goku – I have to go for the tail, Destructo disc!! The destructo disc is a sharp disc of energy that can cut through nearly everything. But it missed. Goku – Darn it! I can’t destroy the moon because it is a very important source on this planet! I have to knock him out myself, Without killing him! Oni picked up a piece of the ring and threw it at goku, Who destroyed the piece with a energy blast. Goku – I’ll hit you with my energy blast! Ka..mee…haa..mee…HAA!! The blue beam of energy hit Oni who fell on the ground. Goku – Now! Destructo disc!! The destructo disc cut through Oni’s tail. Oni was back to his normal self and fell on the ground. There were still very few people standing there, and the announcer was still there. Announcer – I.. I.. the count! One… Two… Three.. Four.. Five.. Six.. Seven.. Eight! Oni stood up and said ‘’What happened? I turned in to a great ape didn’t I? Goku – Yeah, You did! Oni – This fight is not ever yet Goku! Announcer – What a event! The saiyan turned in to a great ape, But the other finalist cut off his tail and brought him back to normal! Meanwhile Monster and the others were flying back to The land of V. There it was! They went to say hello to everyone, They were happy. But.. They could hear a big explosion, And trees fell to the ground. Juuldude – What the!? ??? –I’m back. Juuldude – What the!? Green – Behind you! Juuldude – Hu- Aaah! The mysterious being punched Juul in the back. TheFadedWarrior - No you are not hurting my friend! Faded kicked the mysterious man and sent him flying through pillars of rock. TheFadedWarrior – Juul! Are you alright!? That bastard! Green – Wow.. You are amazing Faded. TheFadedWarrior – He’s…. He’s… Dea… Tears rolled over his face. TheFadedWarrior stared at the being that killed juul who stood up from the loads of rocks on top of him. The killer.. Was Gror. TheFadedWarrior kept staring at Gror.. Gror – All humans come around. TheFadedWarrior - …. AAAAAAAAAH!! Monster – What the!? This power! Shellana – Humans can unlock incredible power when you unlock one of their emotions, This is it at display. Green – He’s gone even further beyond me! That means he will be able to destroy Gror easily. Monster – No. Yirans get an incredible power upgrade if you mix anger and near death. Very similar to what saiyans have. Green – That’s why I sensed incredible power from Gror! Even with Faded’s power upgrade can he defeat Gror? Monster - … I hope… Juul.. Deg2000 saw everything and rushed towards Monster and said ‘’Juul! Is he Ok!?’’ Monster closed his eyes and shook his head. Monster – Green, YOU IDIOT! You should have killed Gror when you got the chance! If you did, Faded’s best friend would not be in the otherworld right now! Green – I.. know. Monster – Tch, Filthy Kokiri’s. Shellana – Why did you get mad at him now, and not when juuldude got killed. Monster – Because.. It’s now just getting to me! He is the reason gror killed one of the most if not the most important person in Faded’s life! Deg2000 – You know the killer? Monster – We do, And green could have killed him. I even told him to. Deg2000 – I see.. Monster – Can we revive him by summoning shenron? Green – I’m afraid not Monster – Wha!? Why? Green – I remember that you went through a portal to get out of the rgr right? Monster – Yes. Green – Once you go through dimensions, If your dead. You stay dead. And I think that Faded knows that too. Monster – … Grrgh..
TheFadedWarrior told Gror ‘’I’ll kill you.’’ Gror – Oh really? Hahaahaha! You Humans make me laugh! TheFadedWarrior rushed towards Gror and punched him in the face repeatedly and then kicked him in the stomach. Gror – Grrgh.. Aaah! Meanwile at Oni VS Goku Oni kicked goku but he blocked, Goku then punched Oni in the face and kicked him sending Oni flying. However oni jumped off the wall and back to goku Oni kicked Goku on the head, This time it hit. Oni proceeded to punch goku, But Goku dodged most punches. Goku – You have really improved, Oni. You are really good. I’ll need this! Haaa!! Goku went super saiyan 4!! Oni – Wha!? Hmm, let’s see. They rushed at eachother, However this time Goku had the clear advantage… until! Oni – spina ray times 20!! The spina ray times 20 flew towards the super saiyan 4 goku! Will it hit? Can goku still win this? To be continued.. |
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imamonster : Wow that's a good one!! Wait, juul died!??  . And Monsi said filthy Kokiris to Green. HEY!! THAT'S RACIST  !!! Just kidding. I hope Oni crushes Goku to death!!! HAAHHAHA LOL. Excited to see the next chapter  . And Monsi said filthy Kokiris to Green. HEY!! THAT'S RACIST !!! Just kidding. I hope Oni crushes Goku to death!!! HAAHHAHA LOL. Excited to see the next chapter |
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greenluigi : I know! Monster's racist! I hope that Oni crushes goku too! |
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imamonster : nice story dude |
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appelmoesFTW : Thanks man! I appreciate it. However, Four words are most of the time considered a bit spammy try to make all of your posts 10 words, don't worry I also made those mistakes. Everyone does when they're new to the board. So when is you're story going to be released? So when is you're story going to be released? |
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Ok thanks for the warning my tale will probably be released at 1 November but it could be later due to me forgetting my tale will probably be released at 1 November but it could be later due to me forgetting |
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Alright, I see. I'm excited and I even told my friend about it. He makes stories too. |
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Ok then who is this friend that makes stories I'm gonna read his stories as well I think who is this friend that makes stories I'm gonna read his stories as well I think |
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appelmoesFTW : His name is: greenluigi: Meet appelmoesFTW, my real life friend. Green's reviews are called Legend of greenluigi. I'm a character in it! Green's reviews are called Legend of greenluigi. I'm a character in it! |
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