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MONSTER: A tale of an akaian: Chapter 9 ‘More than just angry’

 

10-04-14 01:51 PM
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All chapters
Chapter 1 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78954
Chapter 2 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78965
Chapter 3 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78980
Chapter 4 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78990
Chapter 5 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79003
Chapter 6 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79721
 Chapter 7 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79745
 CHAPTER 9 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79773
MONSTER: A tale of an akaian: Chapter 9 ‘More than just angry’

 

Green was training incredibly hard, It is quite extraordinary.

 

Than the day came.

The first day of the tournament!

Meanwhile at monster and shellana.

Monster and Shellana had been traveling for a week.

Monster – Are you sure that you know where you are going?

Shellana – I am!

Monster – Hey seriously, Why did you get upset after I misunderstood what you meant, With ‘’I like you’’ What does it mean anyway, I know that you like me, Otherwise you would not have asked me to come with you!

Shellana – I.. like you.. But more than that. I …

A voice came up.

And a man showed up, He had a white beard and a giant hat.

Man – Don’t you realise it, The girl is in love with you.

Monster – Wha!? Man, Go back to your fellow mental people.

Shellana –Potanto.. It’s true.

Monster – A saiyan, With a akaian? It’s… not possible. Like your dad said.

Shellana – What does it matter.. Have you forgotten about your parents?

Man – Come on tell her, Do you like her or don’t you?

Monster was silent.

The man punched him in the face.

Man – Go ahead SAY IT!

Shellana – Wait a minute..

Shellana tried to remove the man’s hat. Which covered up his entire face.

Shellana – I recognize that voice,  Father!?

The man removed his hat, and indeed It was shellana’s father.

Shellana’s father – Shellana, I’m so sorry.

Shellana – I don’t take apologies.

Monster – Hmph, Look at what a excuse you have become, Like  I said Mental!

Shellana – And now you are going to open your mouth!?

Monster – IT’S JUST THAT… i.. always loved you.

Shellana’s father – It’s not like I did not notice you know.

Shellana – Father you filthy!

Shellana’s father – I.. Know that I was wrong.

Monster – Let him alone, He’s pathetic.

Shellana – Maybe, But I’m not sure.

Shellana’s father – I am pathetic, And you have every right to … BE DEAD!

Monster – What the!?

Shellana’s father suddenly punched Monster in the stomach and kicked him, Sending Monster flying.

Shellana – What the hell are you doing!?

Shellana’s father – The saiyan race must not grow, Even if he is a halfblood, All saiyans need to be destroyed.

Shellana – STOP IT!!

Monster – Hmph.  Haha! Can you overcome.. This?  Monster turned aqua akaia.

Shellana’s father – How… But.. your half and I can’t turn in to a aqua akaian!

Monster – You don’t have the heart.

Shellana’s father – No matter! I can still take you on!

Monster – You can? Come try!

Shellana’s father Threw a punch at monster.

Meanwhile at green’s tournament

Green’s first match was also the first match of the entire tournament. It was the winner of last’s tournament, He was big, But not incredibly big like some of the other competitiors. He was bald and had pro wrestling attire.

The announcer yelled ‘’LET THE MATCH BEGIN!!’’

Green and his opponent whose name was Haru, Went In to a punching style of fighting, Throwing punch after punch. Punch after punch was blocked. Green had the better of things, He then kicked Haru in the face and threw a knee in his stomach.

Announcer – It looks like green the saiyan, Or.. earthling HAS THE BETTER OF THINGS RIGHT NOW!!

Green was controlling with countless punches. Haru tried to block the punches but failed.

Ultimately green turned the lights off with a devastating kick to the head

Announcer – WE HAVE A WINNER, GREEN!!!

Green – Scratch that green part, I’m not green, I’m Oni.

Announcer – Oni?

Green – And.. I am .. A PROUD SAIYAN!

Announcer – INTERESTING, BUT LADIES AND GENTLEMAN, GREE… I MEAN ONI IS GOING TO THE NEXT ROUND BY TAKING APART FAVOURITE HARU!!

Meanwhile at The Monster VS Shellana’s father fight.

Shellana’s father’s punch to Shellana’s and monster’s surprise hit, Knocking Monster unconscious.

Shellana’s Pupils disappeared.

Shellana’s Father – What the!? Shellana! What’s going on?

Water rose from the ground where shellana was standing.

Monster woke up

Monster – Impossible, A female could never become a  Aqua akaia.. But.. this is not the Aqua Akaia form, it’s different, She has no control over herself.

Shellana walked towards her father, with water behind here, And than.

Shellana punched her father. Nearly killing him in the process

Monster -  Impossible? What is this!?

Shellana kicked her father sending him flying, And possibly killing him.

After that Shellana Fell on the ground.

Shellana was on the ground laying.

Monster walked toward her.

Monster – Shellana..?

Shellana woke up.

Monster – can you remember what happened!?

Shellana – Slightly yes. You got knocked out by my father,and.. than this anger.. I had no control over anything I did!

Monster – I noticed.

Meanwhile at juuldude and Faded!

Juuldude – Hmph… This is getting boring.. No monster, and hey Shellana was not too bad to hang out with either!

TheFadedwarrior – I know.

Someone knocked the door.

Juuldude opened it

Juuldude – Who are you?

??? – I am green.

Juuldude – No you are not, Green is on another planet!

TheFadedWarrior – Hey! That’s that one dude green got his nickname from right?

Juuldude – Nickname?

Green – Yeah, He’s actually called Oni.

TheFadedWarrior – Never knew that.

Juuldude – But.. why are you here?

Green – I need to talk to Monster.

Juuldude – Though luck pal. He’s on a training vacation with Shellana.

Green – Shellana? I see.

Meanwhile at monster and shellana

Shellana – Potanto.. Did.. you mean it?

Monster – I did, however.. I still don’t see how it’s possible that a mere saiyan could be in love with a akaian.

Shellana – Your mother.. and your father. Your mother is akaian, and your father is saiyan.

Monster -  My father was a cold blooded Saiyan, And my mother was.. An assassin. My parents do not matter.

Shellana –  I.. still love you.

Monster – I.. am sorry.

Shellana – For what?

Monster – For thinking that way about it. I.. love you too.

Shellana – Let’s go to the others.

Shellana And monster flew to Faded and temporarily juuldude’s home, Which is Monster’s home too. Where green was also still.

TheFadedWarrior – Hey monster, are you blushing? Yeah Monster’s blushing haha!

Monster – Shut up or I’ll kill you. What’s greenluigi doing here?

Green – I have to tell you something. A planet nearby Namek has been destroyed, And.. Earth is next.

 

 

TO BE CONTINUED…

juuldude:
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All chapters
Chapter 1 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78954
Chapter 2 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78965
Chapter 3 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78980
Chapter 4 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78990
Chapter 5 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79003
Chapter 6 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79721
 Chapter 7 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79745
 CHAPTER 9 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79773
MONSTER: A tale of an akaian: Chapter 9 ‘More than just angry’

 

Green was training incredibly hard, It is quite extraordinary.

 

Than the day came.

The first day of the tournament!

Meanwhile at monster and shellana.

Monster and Shellana had been traveling for a week.

Monster – Are you sure that you know where you are going?

Shellana – I am!

Monster – Hey seriously, Why did you get upset after I misunderstood what you meant, With ‘’I like you’’ What does it mean anyway, I know that you like me, Otherwise you would not have asked me to come with you!

Shellana – I.. like you.. But more than that. I …

A voice came up.

And a man showed up, He had a white beard and a giant hat.

Man – Don’t you realise it, The girl is in love with you.

Monster – Wha!? Man, Go back to your fellow mental people.

Shellana –Potanto.. It’s true.

Monster – A saiyan, With a akaian? It’s… not possible. Like your dad said.

Shellana – What does it matter.. Have you forgotten about your parents?

Man – Come on tell her, Do you like her or don’t you?

Monster was silent.

The man punched him in the face.

Man – Go ahead SAY IT!

Shellana – Wait a minute..

Shellana tried to remove the man’s hat. Which covered up his entire face.

Shellana – I recognize that voice,  Father!?

The man removed his hat, and indeed It was shellana’s father.

Shellana’s father – Shellana, I’m so sorry.

Shellana – I don’t take apologies.

Monster – Hmph, Look at what a excuse you have become, Like  I said Mental!

Shellana – And now you are going to open your mouth!?

Monster – IT’S JUST THAT… i.. always loved you.

Shellana’s father – It’s not like I did not notice you know.

Shellana – Father you filthy!

Shellana’s father – I.. Know that I was wrong.

Monster – Let him alone, He’s pathetic.

Shellana – Maybe, But I’m not sure.

Shellana’s father – I am pathetic, And you have every right to … BE DEAD!

Monster – What the!?

Shellana’s father suddenly punched Monster in the stomach and kicked him, Sending Monster flying.

Shellana – What the hell are you doing!?

Shellana’s father – The saiyan race must not grow, Even if he is a halfblood, All saiyans need to be destroyed.

Shellana – STOP IT!!

Monster – Hmph.  Haha! Can you overcome.. This?  Monster turned aqua akaia.

Shellana’s father – How… But.. your half and I can’t turn in to a aqua akaian!

Monster – You don’t have the heart.

Shellana’s father – No matter! I can still take you on!

Monster – You can? Come try!

Shellana’s father Threw a punch at monster.

Meanwhile at green’s tournament

Green’s first match was also the first match of the entire tournament. It was the winner of last’s tournament, He was big, But not incredibly big like some of the other competitiors. He was bald and had pro wrestling attire.

The announcer yelled ‘’LET THE MATCH BEGIN!!’’

Green and his opponent whose name was Haru, Went In to a punching style of fighting, Throwing punch after punch. Punch after punch was blocked. Green had the better of things, He then kicked Haru in the face and threw a knee in his stomach.

Announcer – It looks like green the saiyan, Or.. earthling HAS THE BETTER OF THINGS RIGHT NOW!!

Green was controlling with countless punches. Haru tried to block the punches but failed.

Ultimately green turned the lights off with a devastating kick to the head

Announcer – WE HAVE A WINNER, GREEN!!!

Green – Scratch that green part, I’m not green, I’m Oni.

Announcer – Oni?

Green – And.. I am .. A PROUD SAIYAN!

Announcer – INTERESTING, BUT LADIES AND GENTLEMAN, GREE… I MEAN ONI IS GOING TO THE NEXT ROUND BY TAKING APART FAVOURITE HARU!!

Meanwhile at The Monster VS Shellana’s father fight.

Shellana’s father’s punch to Shellana’s and monster’s surprise hit, Knocking Monster unconscious.

Shellana’s Pupils disappeared.

Shellana’s Father – What the!? Shellana! What’s going on?

Water rose from the ground where shellana was standing.

Monster woke up

Monster – Impossible, A female could never become a  Aqua akaia.. But.. this is not the Aqua Akaia form, it’s different, She has no control over herself.

Shellana walked towards her father, with water behind here, And than.

Shellana punched her father. Nearly killing him in the process

Monster -  Impossible? What is this!?

Shellana kicked her father sending him flying, And possibly killing him.

After that Shellana Fell on the ground.

Shellana was on the ground laying.

Monster walked toward her.

Monster – Shellana..?

Shellana woke up.

Monster – can you remember what happened!?

Shellana – Slightly yes. You got knocked out by my father,and.. than this anger.. I had no control over anything I did!

Monster – I noticed.

Meanwhile at juuldude and Faded!

Juuldude – Hmph… This is getting boring.. No monster, and hey Shellana was not too bad to hang out with either!

TheFadedwarrior – I know.

Someone knocked the door.

Juuldude opened it

Juuldude – Who are you?

??? – I am green.

Juuldude – No you are not, Green is on another planet!

TheFadedWarrior – Hey! That’s that one dude green got his nickname from right?

Juuldude – Nickname?

Green – Yeah, He’s actually called Oni.

TheFadedWarrior – Never knew that.

Juuldude – But.. why are you here?

Green – I need to talk to Monster.

Juuldude – Though luck pal. He’s on a training vacation with Shellana.

Green – Shellana? I see.

Meanwhile at monster and shellana

Shellana – Potanto.. Did.. you mean it?

Monster – I did, however.. I still don’t see how it’s possible that a mere saiyan could be in love with a akaian.

Shellana – Your mother.. and your father. Your mother is akaian, and your father is saiyan.

Monster -  My father was a cold blooded Saiyan, And my mother was.. An assassin. My parents do not matter.

Shellana –  I.. still love you.

Monster – I.. am sorry.

Shellana – For what?

Monster – For thinking that way about it. I.. love you too.

Shellana – Let’s go to the others.

Shellana And monster flew to Faded and temporarily juuldude’s home, Which is Monster’s home too. Where green was also still.

TheFadedWarrior – Hey monster, are you blushing? Yeah Monster’s blushing haha!

Monster – Shut up or I’ll kill you. What’s greenluigi doing here?

Green – I have to tell you something. A planet nearby Namek has been destroyed, And.. Earth is next.

 

 

TO BE CONTINUED…

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imamonster: Great chapter! I liked the part where Shellana became furious and began to control water. That's similar to Gohan wow!! Keep up the good work !! Also, you'll be in my next special episode: Legend of greenluigi Special: Five nights at Daulpher's. This is a parody of the game "Five nights at Freddy's."
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