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MONSTER: A TALE OF AN AKAIAN Chapter 6 'The army of The land of V'
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All chapters All chapters Chapter 1 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78954 Chapter 2 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78965 Chapter 3 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78980 Chapter 4 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78990 Chapter 5 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79003 MONSTER: A TALE OF AN AKAIAN CHAPTER 6
The battle of Shellana and Rocko was still going on.
Shellana Kicked Rocko and tried to slice him up, She only got his arm, But A brick came out of the wall again and became his arm. Monster – The only way that Shellana can end this if she makes him give up. She can blow him up to nothingness, But he said that he will help us if Shellana beats him. Shellana – Alright, I’m done, Let’s end this. HAAAAAAA Monster – SHELLANA! Don’t. Hurt him so bad that he has to give up. Shellana – That’s easier said than done, but I can do it. Shellana stopped charging her energy and gave her swords to monster. Rocko - I see that you give up, NOW LEAVE! Shellana – Not Quite. Rocko – So you are going to do this by hand? Hahaha! I’M A ROCK Shellana blasted beams at him, 1000’s of them, They would not kill him but they would hurt him. Rocko – Aaaah, NOOOO Rocko fell to the ground. Shellana did this for a few minutes until Rocko Said ‘’Alright I give up!’’ Shellana – You promised it, So don’t break your promise, Come with us. Rocko – Alright, I’ll come. Rocko broke the wall, Behind the what was the wall, Is of course the exit door. It was late and everybody went to The next Morning Everyone woke up and ate some sandwiches. After breakfast, it was time to walk the staircase again. And yes, Another room, They entered it.
There were a bunch of small circles with blue light, It flashed on and off. Juuldude – What is this? Rocko – This is the light room, If you stand under one of these lights, You will be burned alive. Juuldude – Why did I ask. Monster - I’ll just dodge the lights! Green – I’m afraid that it is not that easy. You have to deactivate the light. Rocko – Indeed, Uhm what is your name? Green – Well, My real name is technically not green, But call me green. Juuldude – So green the smarty-pants, How do we do that? Green - I actually have no Idea. Juuldude – Wow, You are useful! Green – AT LEAST I TRY TO HELP! Shellana – Stop it! Shellana punched green and Juuldude. Juuldude – OUCH! What was that for!? Green – Aaah that hurts! Shellana - … We don’t want more problems. Juuldude – Whatever.. Rocko – I know how to deactivate it! Someone has to break the sealing. Monster – Seriously? Is it that easy. I’ll just punch it open. Rocko – Uh no that’s not a good ide-aaa Monster punched the sealing, The sealing was so hard. Monster his hand hurt. Monster – Why did you not tell me? It hurts! Rocko – Seriously? Monster, Fire a blast at it. Monster – Suishio BLAST!!! A crystal blast rocked through the sealing. Juuldude – Well done Monster! Green – I’ll deactivate it. Green flew up to the sealing, There were a bunch of wires, He had to just cut one of the wires. He cut the blue one with his new special move, It had no name, It was a giant blade that came out of his hands. Monster – Well done green! The lights are gone! The blue lights were gone, Green returned to the others and they could just walk to the exit door. Monster – Well that was easier than excpected. Rocko – We still have one more room to go until the final one! I have never met people that have come this far. They walked the staircase again And there it was, The final door before the Final one. Monster opened the door Rocko- Well, You guys don’t need to do anything. Juuldude – Sweet!! Monster – Shut up juul. Green – I really wanted to do something! Monster – I hear something. Rocko – I have to do this. Monster – What? Rocko – I have to face the bigger and viewed as stronger than me, Bouldero. Monster – Wow.. The writer really could not come up with more original names. Bouldero – Helloooo, Girls. Juuldude – Wait, what? Bouldero – No one haz ever made it thiz far. Monster – No it’s HAS, not HAZ, Oh yeah it’s also this, Not thiz. Bouldero – Hazz, haz, Thiz. I CAN’T HELP IT. Juuldude – Geez, We are going home now. Rocko – NO, I WILL DEFEAT BOULDERO. Bouldero – Bring it on Girl! Bouldero – But firzt, Check out my new Handbag!! Monster – Fiirstt. Rocko – Why would we like to see a handbag in a fight. Bouldero – Well maybe becauze.. Itz beautiful AND CAN ZLAP YOU IN THE FACE! The handbag of Bouldero came crashing on his face like a meteor, The handbag was incredibly hard, And had glitters all over it.
Rocko – Aah! Rocko fell on the ground after getting hit by the handbag. Bouldero - Hahahahaahahaha! Oh rocko, You alwayz knew that I Was stronger and better at everything. Rocko Stood up. Rocko – At least I can speak proper English. Bouldero – Hahahaha! Zchool is booringg, ZHOPPING IS BEATIFUL. Rocko – Oh shut up! Haaaa! Rocko punched Bouldero in the face, His nose flew off. Green – It is gonna regenerate. Bouldero stood there for a few minutes, But the nose did not come back. Rocko – Oh yeah I completely forgot! You cannot regenerate! Bouldero – MY AMAZING NOZE MY BEAUTIFUL NOZE! OH NO! I AM ANGRY NOW! Meanwhile at David. David – I wonder.. What is going on in that mountain. Light Knight stood next to him And said ‘’David, Intruders they are trying to hijack the place. David – Tell The army. Light Knight – of course Sir. Light knight told the army of the Land of V to fight against the intruders. Light Knight – They look incredibly strong, Don’t take risks. But don’t let them destroy our beloved land. Entire army – YES, SIR. Light Knight – NOW GO! The entire army ran to the intruders.
Meanwhile at monster and the rest. Rocko – Deep inside you know that I am stronger, brother. Monster – Brother!?
TO BE CONTINUED juuldude : Eirinn : All chapters Chapter 1 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78954 Chapter 2 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78965 Chapter 3 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78980 Chapter 4 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=78990 Chapter 5 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=79003 MONSTER: A TALE OF AN AKAIAN CHAPTER 6
The battle of Shellana and Rocko was still going on.
Shellana Kicked Rocko and tried to slice him up, She only got his arm, But A brick came out of the wall again and became his arm. Monster – The only way that Shellana can end this if she makes him give up. She can blow him up to nothingness, But he said that he will help us if Shellana beats him. Shellana – Alright, I’m done, Let’s end this. HAAAAAAA Monster – SHELLANA! Don’t. Hurt him so bad that he has to give up. Shellana – That’s easier said than done, but I can do it. Shellana stopped charging her energy and gave her swords to monster. Rocko - I see that you give up, NOW LEAVE! Shellana – Not Quite. Rocko – So you are going to do this by hand? Hahaha! I’M A ROCK Shellana blasted beams at him, 1000’s of them, They would not kill him but they would hurt him. Rocko – Aaaah, NOOOO Rocko fell to the ground. Shellana did this for a few minutes until Rocko Said ‘’Alright I give up!’’ Shellana – You promised it, So don’t break your promise, Come with us. Rocko – Alright, I’ll come. Rocko broke the wall, Behind the what was the wall, Is of course the exit door. It was late and everybody went to The next Morning Everyone woke up and ate some sandwiches. After breakfast, it was time to walk the staircase again. And yes, Another room, They entered it.
There were a bunch of small circles with blue light, It flashed on and off. Juuldude – What is this? Rocko – This is the light room, If you stand under one of these lights, You will be burned alive. Juuldude – Why did I ask. Monster - I’ll just dodge the lights! Green – I’m afraid that it is not that easy. You have to deactivate the light. Rocko – Indeed, Uhm what is your name? Green – Well, My real name is technically not green, But call me green. Juuldude – So green the smarty-pants, How do we do that? Green - I actually have no Idea. Juuldude – Wow, You are useful! Green – AT LEAST I TRY TO HELP! Shellana – Stop it! Shellana punched green and Juuldude. Juuldude – OUCH! What was that for!? Green – Aaah that hurts! Shellana - … We don’t want more problems. Juuldude – Whatever.. Rocko – I know how to deactivate it! Someone has to break the sealing. Monster – Seriously? Is it that easy. I’ll just punch it open. Rocko – Uh no that’s not a good ide-aaa Monster punched the sealing, The sealing was so hard. Monster his hand hurt. Monster – Why did you not tell me? It hurts! Rocko – Seriously? Monster, Fire a blast at it. Monster – Suishio BLAST!!! A crystal blast rocked through the sealing. Juuldude – Well done Monster! Green – I’ll deactivate it. Green flew up to the sealing, There were a bunch of wires, He had to just cut one of the wires. He cut the blue one with his new special move, It had no name, It was a giant blade that came out of his hands. Monster – Well done green! The lights are gone! The blue lights were gone, Green returned to the others and they could just walk to the exit door. Monster – Well that was easier than excpected. Rocko – We still have one more room to go until the final one! I have never met people that have come this far. They walked the staircase again And there it was, The final door before the Final one. Monster opened the door Rocko- Well, You guys don’t need to do anything. Juuldude – Sweet!! Monster – Shut up juul. Green – I really wanted to do something! Monster – I hear something. Rocko – I have to do this. Monster – What? Rocko – I have to face the bigger and viewed as stronger than me, Bouldero. Monster – Wow.. The writer really could not come up with more original names. Bouldero – Helloooo, Girls. Juuldude – Wait, what? Bouldero – No one haz ever made it thiz far. Monster – No it’s HAS, not HAZ, Oh yeah it’s also this, Not thiz. Bouldero – Hazz, haz, Thiz. I CAN’T HELP IT. Juuldude – Geez, We are going home now. Rocko – NO, I WILL DEFEAT BOULDERO. Bouldero – Bring it on Girl! Bouldero – But firzt, Check out my new Handbag!! Monster – Fiirstt. Rocko – Why would we like to see a handbag in a fight. Bouldero – Well maybe becauze.. Itz beautiful AND CAN ZLAP YOU IN THE FACE! The handbag of Bouldero came crashing on his face like a meteor, The handbag was incredibly hard, And had glitters all over it.
Rocko – Aah! Rocko fell on the ground after getting hit by the handbag. Bouldero - Hahahahaahahaha! Oh rocko, You alwayz knew that I Was stronger and better at everything. Rocko Stood up. Rocko – At least I can speak proper English. Bouldero – Hahahaha! Zchool is booringg, ZHOPPING IS BEATIFUL. Rocko – Oh shut up! Haaaa! Rocko punched Bouldero in the face, His nose flew off. Green – It is gonna regenerate. Bouldero stood there for a few minutes, But the nose did not come back. Rocko – Oh yeah I completely forgot! You cannot regenerate! Bouldero – MY AMAZING NOZE MY BEAUTIFUL NOZE! OH NO! I AM ANGRY NOW! Meanwhile at David. David – I wonder.. What is going on in that mountain. Light Knight stood next to him And said ‘’David, Intruders they are trying to hijack the place. David – Tell The army. Light Knight – of course Sir. Light knight told the army of the Land of V to fight against the intruders. Light Knight – They look incredibly strong, Don’t take risks. But don’t let them destroy our beloved land. Entire army – YES, SIR. Light Knight – NOW GO! The entire army ran to the intruders.
Meanwhile at monster and the rest. Rocko – Deep inside you know that I am stronger, brother. Monster – Brother!?
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I sound like a douche in this story I don't want to work and I am very sarcastic. It's quite the opposite of how I usually am but I like it! I can't wait to see the next chapter I don't want to work and I am very sarcastic. It's quite the opposite of how I usually am but I like it! I can't wait to see the next chapter |
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Although I'm not a baddy type, I usually like the baddies who sometimes show that they can be nice as well. A bit like me and Shellana in this story. And you don't see yourself as a favourite character? |
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imamonster : Well great chapter there! Yay a new member in our team :3!! Why did Green got punched :C? He was supposed to say it with a '' on it . Lol I'm off to the next chapter. |
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