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07-07-14 05:44 AM
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megamanmaniac : But he did vote 49 hours after you summoned him If that still counts... Barathemos : You are very lucky. MMM, does it count?? Also, for spleen, he did a good job. But he did vote 49 hours after you summoned him If that still counts... Barathemos : You are very lucky. MMM, does it count?? Also, for spleen, he did a good job. |
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TheJmsGamer : In his post, as hard as it was for me to see, he did say spleen, which was pointed out to me by another judge. I'm not entirely sure if that was Barathemos' vote, but it would make sense that his vote would be in that post. So I gave him the benefit of the doubt.
Also, mrfe informed me that he won't be able to post his rap until tonight at the earliest, so the round may last a little longer than expected. Also, mrfe informed me that he won't be able to post his rap until tonight at the earliest, so the round may last a little longer than expected. |
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megamanmaniac : About Mrfe I saw that on your profile or on this thread don't remember one of the 2. But I think he did vote, but I'm happy for spleen. generalspleen : You did a great job Well, I'm gonna head out and shut up until the end of the tournament and go ahead and plan my story. But I'm not gonna unfavorite this thread, I wanna see the Raps Sooooo Bye guys! About Mrfe I saw that on your profile or on this thread don't remember one of the 2. But I think he did vote, but I'm happy for spleen. generalspleen : You did a great job Well, I'm gonna head out and shut up until the end of the tournament and go ahead and plan my story. But I'm not gonna unfavorite this thread, I wanna see the Raps Sooooo Bye guys! |
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Yeah, this is late. I still haven't gotten access to my laptop tonight, so this might seem somewhat choppy.
sonicmcmuffin : May the best contender win. Yo Mistah DJ, drop me a tune; We gotta get a beat rollin' to make this crowd move; I gotta show these guys that I ain't a pretender; gonna prove to mistah muffin that I'm a real contender; Mistah Muffin, you say? Pray tell, who's he? He's a pretender to the crown, a crown that really belongs to me; he may have won in the past, but it ain't hard to show; he's the king of days past, he dun lost his flow; See, people say I can't rap, that I ain't 'all that'; but I just let the words flow, and it knocks 'em flat; Pride comes before a mighty fall, ya see; I just happen to be the one that drops 'em to their knees; I been through hard times, as most of us have; regardless of the chaos, life can just seem drab; the key is not to let it ever get you down; but to focus on what really matters, then turn your life around; Now I'm done, say 'phew'; No doubt I've given you more than enough to chew; Go nap, come back, do what ya gotta do; I'll await your first rap, chillin' at my CPU. [note: leave it to my overtired mind to fail me in paragraph 4 lol. so much for a constant theme] sonicmcmuffin : May the best contender win. Yo Mistah DJ, drop me a tune; We gotta get a beat rollin' to make this crowd move; I gotta show these guys that I ain't a pretender; gonna prove to mistah muffin that I'm a real contender; Mistah Muffin, you say? Pray tell, who's he? He's a pretender to the crown, a crown that really belongs to me; he may have won in the past, but it ain't hard to show; he's the king of days past, he dun lost his flow; See, people say I can't rap, that I ain't 'all that'; but I just let the words flow, and it knocks 'em flat; Pride comes before a mighty fall, ya see; I just happen to be the one that drops 'em to their knees; I been through hard times, as most of us have; regardless of the chaos, life can just seem drab; the key is not to let it ever get you down; but to focus on what really matters, then turn your life around; Now I'm done, say 'phew'; No doubt I've given you more than enough to chew; Go nap, come back, do what ya gotta do; I'll await your first rap, chillin' at my CPU. [note: leave it to my overtired mind to fail me in paragraph 4 lol. so much for a constant theme] |
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Time to do this.. Hello there, I'm the Rapstar Pony from Britain I'll beat you so hard you'll suffer from malnutrition You won't be able to comprehend the lines I'm about to throw. You'll lose your mind and start head-bopping to the flow. When it comes to rap battles i am like royalty Crowds of people cheer for me and show their loyalty I mean my rhymes are so sweet, they'll make you diabetic Get burned so badly, you'll lose limbs and get prosthetics You gotta get more aggressive or your gonna choke Better throw some better insults, those were a joke Grow some balls, And attack me like there's no tomorrow. Otherwise when i win, this victory will seem hollow. We all have bad times their ain't no denying that but this is a rap battle, you've gotta prepare for combat.. Just look to the future, there's no turning back Now just ignore the goal and focus on the track Since when did Christians make their own rap gang Taking off the "g" in words doesn't make it slang. So go back to what your good at and just keep praying Because you've leaving this rap tourney, whilst I'm staying mrfe : Time for round 2... Had to rush this rap.. it took me like 3 mins to write... life's busy yo. Hello there, I'm the Rapstar Pony from Britain I'll beat you so hard you'll suffer from malnutrition You won't be able to comprehend the lines I'm about to throw. You'll lose your mind and start head-bopping to the flow. When it comes to rap battles i am like royalty Crowds of people cheer for me and show their loyalty I mean my rhymes are so sweet, they'll make you diabetic Get burned so badly, you'll lose limbs and get prosthetics You gotta get more aggressive or your gonna choke Better throw some better insults, those were a joke Grow some balls, And attack me like there's no tomorrow. Otherwise when i win, this victory will seem hollow. We all have bad times their ain't no denying that but this is a rap battle, you've gotta prepare for combat.. Just look to the future, there's no turning back Now just ignore the goal and focus on the track Since when did Christians make their own rap gang Taking off the "g" in words doesn't make it slang. So go back to what your good at and just keep praying Because you've leaving this rap tourney, whilst I'm staying mrfe : Time for round 2... Had to rush this rap.. it took me like 3 mins to write... life's busy yo. |
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Well, I finally am on my laptop, so hopefully this will end up better than my first one.
sonicmcmuffin : I know what you mean about the timing lol, had 5 mins to write this one. You're British, you say? Oh please. Didn't we beat you guys up in, like, 1783? Your pretentious forefathers thought they could control us but despite their self-confidence, we crushed 'em as if by boulders Now I gotta admit, your rhymes got flow but that doesn't mean that you totally rocked this show I'd rather sit at home, with a nice cup of joe got better things to do than sit here and watch you crow Of course, I realize you think your rhymes are 'so fine' but keep in mind that your rhymes won't get you a dime. See, ya gotta have skill to create a kind of flow that'll get you more than simple trash, or some exquisite play-doh. Ooo, fancy word. Can you comprehend that? Show me some skill, keep it real, or don't bother coming back. I don't wanna play games, let's skip the chit chat droppin' words with no g like I'm outrunning a David attack Now don't diss my faith, and I won't diss yours every chooses for themselves who they adore I can drop the g as well as you at least I won't be steppin' in dog poo Now this little bout's been amusing you certainly were the contender of my choosing when it's all said and done, may the best man win and I certainly hope we can do this again... sonicmcmuffin : I know what you mean about the timing lol, had 5 mins to write this one. You're British, you say? Oh please. Didn't we beat you guys up in, like, 1783? Your pretentious forefathers thought they could control us but despite their self-confidence, we crushed 'em as if by boulders Now I gotta admit, your rhymes got flow but that doesn't mean that you totally rocked this show I'd rather sit at home, with a nice cup of joe got better things to do than sit here and watch you crow Of course, I realize you think your rhymes are 'so fine' but keep in mind that your rhymes won't get you a dime. See, ya gotta have skill to create a kind of flow that'll get you more than simple trash, or some exquisite play-doh. Ooo, fancy word. Can you comprehend that? Show me some skill, keep it real, or don't bother coming back. I don't wanna play games, let's skip the chit chat droppin' words with no g like I'm outrunning a David attack Now don't diss my faith, and I won't diss yours every chooses for themselves who they adore I can drop the g as well as you at least I won't be steppin' in dog poo Now this little bout's been amusing you certainly were the contender of my choosing when it's all said and done, may the best man win and I certainly hope we can do this again... |
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Time to win this mrfe : Please sit down and enjoy your ride How did you know i was British, It shall forever be a mystery You got your Independence in 1776, You need to learn your history. Alas you may have beat us but your all just the same Keep feeding your stomach and forget to use your brain. A compliment in a rap battle? Are you sure you know how to rap Your raps are so lacklustre, I might as well take a nap Enjoy your coffee, it will be the last before your defeat I wont need sugar in my tea as Victory never tasted so sweet. My raps don't need to be fine to beat a chump like you. Why would i want dimes..People use different currencies too. Considering you said i had flow just six lines ago I'm really starting to wonder how much you really know. exquisite is a fancy word, Are you being serious I think you need to go to a doctor as your obviously quite delirious At least a chit chat has the aggression that your raps lack Oh please an attack from David.. All he does is lay on his back. I don't have a faith so you'll have a hard time I don't believe in fairy tales. I've committed a religious crime Instead of denying reality and living in fake bliss. If your god created us all equally, why do you suck at this? Now to finally put an end to this pathetic resistance You fell at the first hurdle, I'm going the distance. I'm not a man I'm a pony, you silly little mule But yes doing this again would be rather cool the end of a tedious time... lol. mrfe : Please sit down and enjoy your ride How did you know i was British, It shall forever be a mystery You got your Independence in 1776, You need to learn your history. Alas you may have beat us but your all just the same Keep feeding your stomach and forget to use your brain. A compliment in a rap battle? Are you sure you know how to rap Your raps are so lacklustre, I might as well take a nap Enjoy your coffee, it will be the last before your defeat I wont need sugar in my tea as Victory never tasted so sweet. My raps don't need to be fine to beat a chump like you. Why would i want dimes..People use different currencies too. Considering you said i had flow just six lines ago I'm really starting to wonder how much you really know. exquisite is a fancy word, Are you being serious I think you need to go to a doctor as your obviously quite delirious At least a chit chat has the aggression that your raps lack Oh please an attack from David.. All he does is lay on his back. I don't have a faith so you'll have a hard time I don't believe in fairy tales. I've committed a religious crime Instead of denying reality and living in fake bliss. If your god created us all equally, why do you suck at this? Now to finally put an end to this pathetic resistance You fell at the first hurdle, I'm going the distance. I'm not a man I'm a pony, you silly little mule But yes doing this again would be rather cool the end of a tedious time... lol. |
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The Revolutionary War ended in 1783, which was also when the Constitution was written. You sure I'm the uneducated one? The Revolutionary War ended in 1783, which was also when the Constitution was written. You sure I'm the uneducated one? |
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mrfe : Considering you said the war... it could have meant several things. Also believe it or not we don't learn anything about American History here, Regardless, Despite that one mistake. I've easily won this... Half of your lines dont make sense Regardless, Despite that one mistake. I've easily won this... Half of your lines dont make sense |
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mrfe : Considering you said the war... it could have meant several things. Also believe it or not we don't learn anything about American History here, Regardless, Despite that one mistake. I've easily won this... Half of your lines dont make sense Regardless, Despite that one mistake. I've easily won this... Half of your lines dont make sense |
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And that ends the rap battle tournament's semifinal round. Quick right? Well...lets get to the voting then (it's 2 AM and I'm too lazy to come up with anything good).
supernerd117 : lilythetigerkity : Barathemos : Time to vote you guys. mrfe's First Rap Yo Mistah DJ, drop me a tune; We gotta get a beat rollin' to make this crowd move; I gotta show these guys that I ain't a pretender; gonna prove to mistah muffin that I'm a real contender; Mistah Muffin, you say? Pray tell, who's he? He's a pretender to the crown, a crown that really belongs to me; he may have won in the past, but it ain't hard to show; he's the king of days past, he dun lost his flow; See, people say I can't rap, that I ain't 'all that'; but I just let the words flow, and it knocks 'em flat; Pride comes before a mighty fall, ya see; I just happen to be the one that drops 'em to their knees; I been through hard times, as most of us have; regardless of the chaos, life can just seem drab; the key is not to let it ever get you down; but to focus on what really matters, then turn your life around; Now I'm done, say 'phew'; No doubt I've given you more than enough to chew; Go nap, come back, do what ya gotta do; I'll await your first rap, chillin' at my CPU. sonicmcmuffin's First Rap Hello there, I'm the Rapstar Pony from Britain I'll beat you so hard you'll suffer from malnutrition You won't be able to comprehend the lines I'm about to throw. You'll lose your mind and start head-bopping to the flow. When it comes to rap battles i am like royalty Crowds of people cheer for me and show their loyalty I mean my rhymes are so sweet, they'll make you diabetic Get burned so badly, you'll lose limbs and get prosthetics You gotta get more aggressive or your gonna choke Better throw some better insults, those were a joke Grow some balls, And attack me like there's no tomorrow. Otherwise when i win, this victory will seem hollow. We all have bad times their ain't no denying that but this is a rap battle, you've gotta prepare for combat.. Just look to the future, there's no turning back Now just ignore the goal and focus on the track Since when did Christians make their own rap gang Taking off the "g" in words doesn't make it slang. So go back to what your good at and just keep praying Because you've leaving this rap tourney, whilst I'm staying mrfe's Second Rap You're British, you say? Oh please. Didn't we beat you guys up in, like, 1783? Your pretentious forefathers thought they could control us but despite their self-confidence, we crushed 'em as if by boulders Now I gotta admit, your rhymes got flow but that doesn't mean that you totally rocked this show I'd rather sit at home, with a nice cup of joe got better things to do than sit here and watch you crow Of course, I realize you think your rhymes are 'so fine' but keep in mind that your rhymes won't get you a dime. See, ya gotta have skill to create a kind of flow that'll get you more than simple trash, or some exquisite play-doh. Ooo, fancy word. Can you comprehend that? Show me some skill, keep it real, or don't bother coming back. I don't wanna play games, let's skip the chit chat droppin' words with no g like I'm outrunning a David attack Now don't diss my faith, and I won't diss yours every chooses for themselves who they adore I can drop the g as well as you at least I won't be steppin' in dog poo Now this little bout's been amusing you certainly were the contender of my choosing when it's all said and done, may the best man win and I certainly hope we can do this again... sonicmcmuffin's Second Rap How did you know i was British, It shall forever be a mystery You got your Independence in 1776, You need to learn your history. Alas you may have beat us but your all just the same Keep feeding your stomach and forget to use your brain. A compliment in a rap battle? Are you sure you know how to rap Your raps are so lacklustre, I might as well take a nap Enjoy your coffee, it will be the last before your defeat I wont need sugar in my tea as Victory never tasted so sweet. My raps don't need to be fine to beat a chump like you. Why would i want dimes..People use different currencies too. Considering you said i had flow just six lines ago I'm really starting to wonder how much you really know. exquisite is a fancy word, Are you being serious I think you need to go to a doctor as your obviously quite delirious At least a chit chat has the aggression that your raps lack Oh please an attack from David.. All he does is lay on his back. I don't have a faith so you'll have a hard time I don't believe in fairy tales. I've committed a religious crime Instead of denying reality and living in fake bliss. If your god created us all equally, why do you suck at this? Now to finally put an end to this pathetic resistance You fell at the first hurdle, I'm going the distance. I'm not a man I'm a pony, you silly little mule But yes doing this again would be rather cool supernerd117 : lilythetigerkity : Barathemos : Time to vote you guys. mrfe's First Rap Yo Mistah DJ, drop me a tune; We gotta get a beat rollin' to make this crowd move; I gotta show these guys that I ain't a pretender; gonna prove to mistah muffin that I'm a real contender; Mistah Muffin, you say? Pray tell, who's he? He's a pretender to the crown, a crown that really belongs to me; he may have won in the past, but it ain't hard to show; he's the king of days past, he dun lost his flow; See, people say I can't rap, that I ain't 'all that'; but I just let the words flow, and it knocks 'em flat; Pride comes before a mighty fall, ya see; I just happen to be the one that drops 'em to their knees; I been through hard times, as most of us have; regardless of the chaos, life can just seem drab; the key is not to let it ever get you down; but to focus on what really matters, then turn your life around; Now I'm done, say 'phew'; No doubt I've given you more than enough to chew; Go nap, come back, do what ya gotta do; I'll await your first rap, chillin' at my CPU. sonicmcmuffin's First Rap Hello there, I'm the Rapstar Pony from Britain I'll beat you so hard you'll suffer from malnutrition You won't be able to comprehend the lines I'm about to throw. You'll lose your mind and start head-bopping to the flow. When it comes to rap battles i am like royalty Crowds of people cheer for me and show their loyalty I mean my rhymes are so sweet, they'll make you diabetic Get burned so badly, you'll lose limbs and get prosthetics You gotta get more aggressive or your gonna choke Better throw some better insults, those were a joke Grow some balls, And attack me like there's no tomorrow. Otherwise when i win, this victory will seem hollow. We all have bad times their ain't no denying that but this is a rap battle, you've gotta prepare for combat.. Just look to the future, there's no turning back Now just ignore the goal and focus on the track Since when did Christians make their own rap gang Taking off the "g" in words doesn't make it slang. So go back to what your good at and just keep praying Because you've leaving this rap tourney, whilst I'm staying mrfe's Second Rap You're British, you say? Oh please. Didn't we beat you guys up in, like, 1783? Your pretentious forefathers thought they could control us but despite their self-confidence, we crushed 'em as if by boulders Now I gotta admit, your rhymes got flow but that doesn't mean that you totally rocked this show I'd rather sit at home, with a nice cup of joe got better things to do than sit here and watch you crow Of course, I realize you think your rhymes are 'so fine' but keep in mind that your rhymes won't get you a dime. See, ya gotta have skill to create a kind of flow that'll get you more than simple trash, or some exquisite play-doh. Ooo, fancy word. Can you comprehend that? Show me some skill, keep it real, or don't bother coming back. I don't wanna play games, let's skip the chit chat droppin' words with no g like I'm outrunning a David attack Now don't diss my faith, and I won't diss yours every chooses for themselves who they adore I can drop the g as well as you at least I won't be steppin' in dog poo Now this little bout's been amusing you certainly were the contender of my choosing when it's all said and done, may the best man win and I certainly hope we can do this again... sonicmcmuffin's Second Rap How did you know i was British, It shall forever be a mystery You got your Independence in 1776, You need to learn your history. Alas you may have beat us but your all just the same Keep feeding your stomach and forget to use your brain. A compliment in a rap battle? Are you sure you know how to rap Your raps are so lacklustre, I might as well take a nap Enjoy your coffee, it will be the last before your defeat I wont need sugar in my tea as Victory never tasted so sweet. My raps don't need to be fine to beat a chump like you. Why would i want dimes..People use different currencies too. Considering you said i had flow just six lines ago I'm really starting to wonder how much you really know. exquisite is a fancy word, Are you being serious I think you need to go to a doctor as your obviously quite delirious At least a chit chat has the aggression that your raps lack Oh please an attack from David.. All he does is lay on his back. I don't have a faith so you'll have a hard time I don't believe in fairy tales. I've committed a religious crime Instead of denying reality and living in fake bliss. If your god created us all equally, why do you suck at this? Now to finally put an end to this pathetic resistance You fell at the first hurdle, I'm going the distance. I'm not a man I'm a pony, you silly little mule But yes doing this again would be rather cool |
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This was a really close one. Mrfe and Sonic were neck and neck at first, but I was disappointed by Sonic's second rap. So my vote goes to mrfe. |
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Sonic, you're too cocky. Both you and Mrfe started out strong, but Mrfe just was more steady and all his raps were good . My vote goes to Mrfe. Both you and Mrfe started out strong, but Mrfe just was more steady and all his raps were good . My vote goes to Mrfe. |
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I'm voting for sonic. If read out loud most of Mrfe didn't even rhym and a lot of things didn't make sense. I don't know how you can be too cocky in a rap battle. He messed up on the year thing but he is Britsh and most people Americans don't even know that so you can't hold that against him we did gain independence that year. Which could be considered when we won. I really all liked Muffins raps. Where as Mrfes had some good parts in both but together as a whole was eh.... |
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I'm not saying this because i've lost. But seriously...It's a rap battle.. Mrfe has like maybe 2-3 lines where he actually says anything against me.. Also please read these two verses carefully Now I gotta admit, your rhymes got flow but that doesn't mean that you totally rocked this show I'd rather sit at home, with a nice cup of joe got better things to do than sit here and watch you crow Of course, I realize you think your rhymes are 'so fine' but keep in mind that your rhymes won't get you a dime. See, ya gotta have skill to create a kind of flow that'll get you more than simple trash, or some exquisite play-doh. The first line he says i've got flow... but then 5 lines later i dont... also what even is watching someone crow?? Also please read these two verses carefully Now I gotta admit, your rhymes got flow but that doesn't mean that you totally rocked this show I'd rather sit at home, with a nice cup of joe got better things to do than sit here and watch you crow Of course, I realize you think your rhymes are 'so fine' but keep in mind that your rhymes won't get you a dime. See, ya gotta have skill to create a kind of flow that'll get you more than simple trash, or some exquisite play-doh. The first line he says i've got flow... but then 5 lines later i dont... also what even is watching someone crow?? |
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And with that, we now know who will face generalspleen in the finals.
The judges have spoken...and with a vote of 2-1...mrfe advances to the finals! sonicmcmuffin gave it his all, but the judges have spoken, and they chose mrfe. Now we move on to the fourth matchup...wsit no...the 4th matchup already happened. Matchup #4 kirbmanboggle vs. generalspleen Initiated by: generalspleen Winner: generalspleen So let's move on to the fifth and final matchup. But we have some big rule canges for the final, since it's the finals. Rule change 1: You must post 3 raps now instead of two. Rule change 2: New max's and mins (Min #of lines: 24 Max # of lines: 40) mrfe : general spleen: Matchup #5 mrfe vs. generalspleen Initiated by: mrfe Winner: LET THE FINAL MATCHUP....BEGIN!!!!!!!! Note - This was rushed, I know. I'm sorry about the bad quality of this The judges have spoken...and with a vote of 2-1...mrfe advances to the finals! sonicmcmuffin gave it his all, but the judges have spoken, and they chose mrfe. Now we move on to the fourth matchup...wsit no...the 4th matchup already happened. Matchup #4 kirbmanboggle vs. generalspleen Initiated by: generalspleen Winner: generalspleen So let's move on to the fifth and final matchup. But we have some big rule canges for the final, since it's the finals. Rule change 1: You must post 3 raps now instead of two. Rule change 2: New max's and mins (Min #of lines: 24 Max # of lines: 40) mrfe : general spleen: Matchup #5 mrfe vs. generalspleen Initiated by: mrfe Winner: LET THE FINAL MATCHUP....BEGIN!!!!!!!! Note - This was rushed, I know. I'm sorry about the bad quality of this |
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Well... Here goes. Let's do this!
generalspleen : May the best rapper win. No holding back, no regrets. Let's put up a show! 2 year anniversary, you know it's true; spittin' lyrics faster than you can tie your shoe; Better back it up, or you're gonna take a beating; Stop and take a breath, this moment's fleeting; Gimme a fightin' chance, and I'll knock you down; Watch me rap and rap, as the clock goes 'round; As the day burns on, you'll be praying for rain; cuz from my mouth comes words faster than flames; See, I'm a newb to this game of rhymes; honestly, I just can't find the time; but if I come to play, gonna bring my A-game; I'll send y'all running, with buried heads in shame; Honestly, yo, I just have to say; I'm honored to be here, to battle against you today; No matter the outcome, no matter the praise; People will be swayin, craving the rave; Now I realize that I can't stay, gotta hand over the stage; but know I'll be back, rapping so good you'll rage ; Perhaps you're a past champ, but that won't prove nothin'; yesterday can't make you a champ, just look at mr muffin; As I'm wrapping up, ready to go; I'm certainly stoked to hear your flow; You can bet your biscuits, I'll be back; We'll have a legitimate rap battle, jack. generalspleen : May the best rapper win. No holding back, no regrets. Let's put up a show! 2 year anniversary, you know it's true; spittin' lyrics faster than you can tie your shoe; Better back it up, or you're gonna take a beating; Stop and take a breath, this moment's fleeting; Gimme a fightin' chance, and I'll knock you down; Watch me rap and rap, as the clock goes 'round; As the day burns on, you'll be praying for rain; cuz from my mouth comes words faster than flames; See, I'm a newb to this game of rhymes; honestly, I just can't find the time; but if I come to play, gonna bring my A-game; I'll send y'all running, with buried heads in shame; Honestly, yo, I just have to say; I'm honored to be here, to battle against you today; No matter the outcome, no matter the praise; People will be swayin, craving the rave; Now I realize that I can't stay, gotta hand over the stage; but know I'll be back, rapping so good you'll rage ; Perhaps you're a past champ, but that won't prove nothin'; yesterday can't make you a champ, just look at mr muffin; As I'm wrapping up, ready to go; I'm certainly stoked to hear your flow; You can bet your biscuits, I'll be back; We'll have a legitimate rap battle, jack. |
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mrfe : may the best man win. And dont hold any punches. Give it your all. Lets make this tourney one for the record books! Here i go! Welcome to the finals Mr iron. May the best man win. Next up is the man with the Jeff the killer-like grin. The names stunna and don't you forget it. I'll leave ya blown away with how fast I can spit it! I don't know about you but you know about me. I have a plethora of words at my arsenal as you will see. Btw I can tie my shoes in 3 seconds flat. If that's the best you got your gonna flunk this test. What do you think this is a techno rave show? Your in the wrong genre. This is a rap battle Yo! If your thinking that then you need to go. I think your brains fried. You need some blood flow. Check my biscuits? Man I got solid steel buns. Your biscuits are brown since you always have the runs. I'm the pinnacle of perfection. Your just a dying Sun. Don't challenge me. I won't hesitate to pull out my gun! I'm about to go bilingual here so try to keep up you baka. I'll slice you up with my dai-katana. I could use a kunai, tanto, or washikashi. My rhymes are so fly I rap like tadashi! Back to speaking english so you can comprehend. What words I'm dissin you with first hand. I know your slow so try and understand. That when I'm done with you you'll be burried in the sand. I would love to stay and battle and destroy you more. At this point and time your raps are a bore. Plus I'm at the beach and there are girls galore. So I'm gonna go before you start make me snore. Welcome to the finals Mr iron. May the best man win. Next up is the man with the Jeff the killer-like grin. The names stunna and don't you forget it. I'll leave ya blown away with how fast I can spit it! I don't know about you but you know about me. I have a plethora of words at my arsenal as you will see. Btw I can tie my shoes in 3 seconds flat. If that's the best you got your gonna flunk this test. What do you think this is a techno rave show? Your in the wrong genre. This is a rap battle Yo! If your thinking that then you need to go. I think your brains fried. You need some blood flow. Check my biscuits? Man I got solid steel buns. Your biscuits are brown since you always have the runs. I'm the pinnacle of perfection. Your just a dying Sun. Don't challenge me. I won't hesitate to pull out my gun! I'm about to go bilingual here so try to keep up you baka. I'll slice you up with my dai-katana. I could use a kunai, tanto, or washikashi. My rhymes are so fly I rap like tadashi! Back to speaking english so you can comprehend. What words I'm dissin you with first hand. I know your slow so try and understand. That when I'm done with you you'll be burried in the sand. I would love to stay and battle and destroy you more. At this point and time your raps are a bore. Plus I'm at the beach and there are girls galore. So I'm gonna go before you start make me snore. |
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generalspleen : You're up next. 2 down, one to go.
You're called Stunner, they say? You still have yet to blow me away; If you've got a name like that, live up to it; otherwise the competition will cut you up and serve you on a dish; If you're hoping to make it, go all the way; You'll have to work on your flow, not sit and play; Beating me will be tough, darn near impossible; When we're through, your career will be a fossil; As I'm sittin' here, droppin' ALL the g's; you're gettin' sent home, all the judges agree; You gotta show skill, strut your stuff; Give 'em flow, it's what they want; Now you said you got speed, you think you're faster than me; but I'm tellin' you now, speed ain't gonna be the deciding factor with me; Tying your shoes is no complex feat; try doing it upside-down, or while hanging by your feet; If you can do that, perhaps I'll listen; but as of right now, something's just missin'; I really look forward to your rap, that number 2; just be sure to give it your all, and don't rap like a foo'; On the count of three, DJ, drop him a beat; I want to beat him at his best, not when he's weak; and if he gets this rollin', kills this rap; at least he'll be trying, which is all I ask; You're called Stunner, they say? You still have yet to blow me away; If you've got a name like that, live up to it; otherwise the competition will cut you up and serve you on a dish; If you're hoping to make it, go all the way; You'll have to work on your flow, not sit and play; Beating me will be tough, darn near impossible; When we're through, your career will be a fossil; As I'm sittin' here, droppin' ALL the g's; you're gettin' sent home, all the judges agree; You gotta show skill, strut your stuff; Give 'em flow, it's what they want; Now you said you got speed, you think you're faster than me; but I'm tellin' you now, speed ain't gonna be the deciding factor with me; Tying your shoes is no complex feat; try doing it upside-down, or while hanging by your feet; If you can do that, perhaps I'll listen; but as of right now, something's just missin'; I really look forward to your rap, that number 2; just be sure to give it your all, and don't rap like a foo'; On the count of three, DJ, drop him a beat; I want to beat him at his best, not when he's weak; and if he gets this rollin', kills this rap; at least he'll be trying, which is all I ask; |
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I meant to mention this earlier but it slipped my mind. General spleen is sick and is unable to post his rap. Since he has informed me about this, I've given him permission to post his rap after he overcomes his illness (assuming that he does not take too long to recover).
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