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09-27-13 08:39 PM
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So I am taking a (really easy) Digital Media class in school. Our Term 1 project is to create a business and then make a logo, magazine ad, radio ad, etc. for that business. I chose to use Vizzed instead of making my own business. I figured David would be ok with it. I actually figured he would encourage it. This thread states that he encourages advertising, so I assumed this is ok. Anyway, I just finished my magazine ad (it will not actually go into a magazine). Here it is:



I debated over whether or not to summon David, but I decided not to. If a mod thinks that David should see it, please summon him.

What do you think? I will also be posting my other things such as the radio ad. The big logo in the middle is the logo that I made.
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Hmm... the ad is a little busy, but being someone with no artistic flare at all, I'd feel bad saying anything else about it. haha.  I think one of the things I like the most (oddly enough), are the exclamations in the yellow starts. Those to me are probably the key features of the site.. especially the "safe" part.

I know it took you a lot of time though... so good job! I hope you get a good grade for it. I'm guessing you had to design your own logo?
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09-27-13 08:48 PM
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Singelli : Thanks! Yeah I had to design my own. I don't like how it came out. The reason it is so busy is because I finished really early and didn't want to just sit there and wait.
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tgags123: Nice, but let me offer some ways on how to improve it.

In the middle of the ad, I think it should have a unique color for the controller.

Too many words. Ads should be short, simple, and easy to understand. If there is a possible way to make it shorter, more people may look at it.

It will make it cooler if you can make it an animated .gif

But overall, good. Nice ad, keep up the good work! Just wondering, where do you plan on putting this ad at?
I also love the safe & free part, because that's what most people ask here.

Maybe I can try and help you make a ad, if you want me too.
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09-27-13 08:59 PM
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Matthew2321 : I laughed when you said to put a .gif in it. When was the last time you saw a .gif in a magazine? XD. I am not actually putting this ad anywhere, it is for a school project. My teacher made me put that many words because I NEED to explain the who, what, where, when, and why.
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Not bad yet, I would make a suggestion and tell you to add more color to it (maybe complementary colors will do the trick). Anyway besides that it looks like you got it all done.
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tgags123 : Oh, I must of read your thread wrong or something, I thought this was for putting on other websites. Well good luck on your school project, hope you do good.

I still think that the game controller and Vizzed at the middle should be colored differently.

And by-the-way, you should use .png because, it looks the best.
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tgags123 : I agree with Singelli.  It's a bit busy, but it is effective.  It got my attention and held it since I'm a member of the site, but those unfamiliar with Vizzed might be a bit wary after viewing this.  Others will flock to the site at the sight of the poster.  I thought it was funny how you referred to yourself as "a vizzed user".  
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This cn be colored a little more, like the controller, as Matt said. But other than that, this is a good ad. I like it, it looks like you put a nice amount of effort into it. Keep it up.
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 nice job mate hope u get the best grade in your class :'3 you deserve it for the good and hard job u have done and also I wouldn't be able to make something like u have done but that's just me XD but well done mate all I say is add a little more color but its up to u is u want to change that bit but  is it was me I would change it to have a bit more color as that's what makes people wanna reed/look more so take my advise is u like to or not but good look mate  
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It looks really nice, though the logo in the middle looks rather strange and out of place.
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This is pretty good tgags! I wish my school could host lessons like that. My schools IT lesson is pretty much searching on google! I am in year 9, not Year 5 (I don't know how the USA grade system works so good luck working out what I mean ). Well your work inspired me so I made my own! I hope you like it though it is only done on MS paint!



If my layout is making it hard to see the image here is a direct link. //s13.postimg.org/g5xu1wz0n/Vizzed_ad.png
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AWESOME ad bro!! David would be soo HAPPY with this!! It must have took a lot of EFFORT to complete this poster!!
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That's actually really good. Nice job tgags! I'm sure Davideo7 will appreciate it. Keep spreading the word!
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That is an amazing word of advertising art right there! XD That's so cool dude. I like the incorporation of links above, the stats example for a profile, and the screenshot from the game room. The explanation on the bottom of the ad is a welcoming one as well. The fact you point out "safe", "free", and "family friendly" and that there is no age requirement to sign up and that everyone is treated the same can make a big difference. That makes it clear this place isn't something to fear like a lot of other gaming forum sites. 

If you make anything else like this or somehow make this ad even better than what it is i'd really like to see it. This is some awesome creativity and effort on your part.
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