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~Forbidden Love~ Kingdom Hearts Fanfic, Emotional story of love and stuff HD 2.5 ultra remix

 

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Forbidden Love, a Kingdom Hearts Fanfic, Serious emotional very beautiful PG 13 CAUTION HD 2.5 ultra remix.

For so long Axel had been afraid to tell him how to feel. He'd simply watched him from the sidelines. Admiring him from a distance. He seemed so perfect... All about him, his eyes, his temper, he wasn't one to take crap from people, even the way he carried himself and his voice... He seemed to good to be true and his butt... Well let's just say he had the goods. He had almost been caught when he could not help but catch a glimpse of it earlier that day when they were out in the field killing heartless, he'd been able to get out of it then but it was enough to make anyone confused about their feelings. he could not go on like this for much longer... He had to speak out.

To think that he was even able to actually meet him. It seemed incredible, he had a crush on him since a very early age, reading about him, watching him on television, probably not the only kid to do so but he felt like it had developed into more than just a crush. Sure he doubt Sora would be happy about it, and might even view him as crazy but he was willing to live with it.

He had arranged for him to come to traverse town later that day, he was thinking it was purely to give him some magic pointers but then he would finally let him out. For so long he had kept it all in, afraid how people would react, that he had no chance well to hell with that. He had already made arrangements to leave the place once he was rejected, sure he would miss some things, hanging out with people but at least then he would have been honest with himself.

Time passed, it was almost time, he was making himself ready. If he was going to do this, he was at least going to look his best for it. He had washed his hair with strawberry shampoo, he knew he had a thing for strawberry soda and to top it off wore his pretty black coat. You could see it was pretty because it was exactly like all his other black coats save saying pretty in small letters on the wash tag. He had won it as a prize after eating multiple sea salt ice cream. It had took a long time but it had definitely been worth the brain freezes and to top it off he wore high heels, they had been a gift given by Kairi. While he didn't initially like them he wanted to look his best for him.

He showed up in Traverse Town. He saw him standing by the clock tower where he had arranged to have the meet up, unaware of Axel's arrival. For a moment he stepped back, hesitating almost but he didn't want to leave him waiting. So with conviction he headed towards the clock tower and got to the top, he saw him dressed in his normal outfit in stead of his magic gear and without hesitation he proceeded.

Hi Donald, Axel said.

Donald looked up at Axel. He greeted him by taking off his sailor cap. Such a gentleman. Donald was about to speak but before he could Axel stopped him.

Look Donald, I know I said I wanted some fire magic pointers, but I must confess that is not the reason I wanted to see you. There's something I wanted to tell you.

Donald, looking with his eyes standing calmly on his graceful flippers. at Axel didn't say a word but just waited for him to continue.

Well you see, I'm just going to come out and say this. For the longest time I've been afraid to tell you how I feel, I've always admired you, and I know you're too good for me and I have no chance with someone as good as you and you already have Daisy but... Ah I'm sorry for dragging you out here I'll just leave.

Axel turned and was about to walk away but he heard Donald utter a loud noise which due to Donald's raspy voice could just barely be made out to a "No"

Donald proceeded to go bats*** crazy with his head turning red and him doing his angry pose where he stands on one flipper and waves his hand up and down while pointing his fist towards Axel looking something like this:



After doing this for about two minutes without being interrupted and with Axel just staring at him admiring until he stopped. They just stared at each other for a few seconds. Heart icons starting to appear like it had done in the cartoons from Donald Duck.

Aw, phooey he uttered drawing Axel close to him, they embraced and kissed, in an incredibly awkward kiss due to Donald Duck having a beak mostly making it look like Donald almost was trying to eat his face. So romantic.

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Yes this is done completely out of jest, no I cannot explain how I came up with this, I think there's a beast inside that compels me to write this kind of stuff.
Forbidden Love, a Kingdom Hearts Fanfic, Serious emotional very beautiful PG 13 CAUTION HD 2.5 ultra remix.

For so long Axel had been afraid to tell him how to feel. He'd simply watched him from the sidelines. Admiring him from a distance. He seemed so perfect... All about him, his eyes, his temper, he wasn't one to take crap from people, even the way he carried himself and his voice... He seemed to good to be true and his butt... Well let's just say he had the goods. He had almost been caught when he could not help but catch a glimpse of it earlier that day when they were out in the field killing heartless, he'd been able to get out of it then but it was enough to make anyone confused about their feelings. he could not go on like this for much longer... He had to speak out.

To think that he was even able to actually meet him. It seemed incredible, he had a crush on him since a very early age, reading about him, watching him on television, probably not the only kid to do so but he felt like it had developed into more than just a crush. Sure he doubt Sora would be happy about it, and might even view him as crazy but he was willing to live with it.

He had arranged for him to come to traverse town later that day, he was thinking it was purely to give him some magic pointers but then he would finally let him out. For so long he had kept it all in, afraid how people would react, that he had no chance well to hell with that. He had already made arrangements to leave the place once he was rejected, sure he would miss some things, hanging out with people but at least then he would have been honest with himself.

Time passed, it was almost time, he was making himself ready. If he was going to do this, he was at least going to look his best for it. He had washed his hair with strawberry shampoo, he knew he had a thing for strawberry soda and to top it off wore his pretty black coat. You could see it was pretty because it was exactly like all his other black coats save saying pretty in small letters on the wash tag. He had won it as a prize after eating multiple sea salt ice cream. It had took a long time but it had definitely been worth the brain freezes and to top it off he wore high heels, they had been a gift given by Kairi. While he didn't initially like them he wanted to look his best for him.

He showed up in Traverse Town. He saw him standing by the clock tower where he had arranged to have the meet up, unaware of Axel's arrival. For a moment he stepped back, hesitating almost but he didn't want to leave him waiting. So with conviction he headed towards the clock tower and got to the top, he saw him dressed in his normal outfit in stead of his magic gear and without hesitation he proceeded.

Hi Donald, Axel said.

Donald looked up at Axel. He greeted him by taking off his sailor cap. Such a gentleman. Donald was about to speak but before he could Axel stopped him.

Look Donald, I know I said I wanted some fire magic pointers, but I must confess that is not the reason I wanted to see you. There's something I wanted to tell you.

Donald, looking with his eyes standing calmly on his graceful flippers. at Axel didn't say a word but just waited for him to continue.

Well you see, I'm just going to come out and say this. For the longest time I've been afraid to tell you how I feel, I've always admired you, and I know you're too good for me and I have no chance with someone as good as you and you already have Daisy but... Ah I'm sorry for dragging you out here I'll just leave.

Axel turned and was about to walk away but he heard Donald utter a loud noise which due to Donald's raspy voice could just barely be made out to a "No"

Donald proceeded to go bats*** crazy with his head turning red and him doing his angry pose where he stands on one flipper and waves his hand up and down while pointing his fist towards Axel looking something like this:



After doing this for about two minutes without being interrupted and with Axel just staring at him admiring until he stopped. They just stared at each other for a few seconds. Heart icons starting to appear like it had done in the cartoons from Donald Duck.

Aw, phooey he uttered drawing Axel close to him, they embraced and kissed, in an incredibly awkward kiss due to Donald Duck having a beak mostly making it look like Donald almost was trying to eat his face. So romantic.

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Yes this is done completely out of jest, no I cannot explain how I came up with this, I think there's a beast inside that compels me to write this kind of stuff.
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(edited by Zlinqx on 11-20-15 02:31 AM)     Post Rating: 3   Liked By: patar4097, Spicy, Uzar, ZeroTails,

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like this if you were expecting roxas

At any rate I just want to say that this is the pure embodiment of anything satanic in this world or any other world and that it should be banished to the gap between dimensions where justin bieber, hetalia, and the twilight saga dwell.
like this if you were expecting roxas

At any rate I just want to say that this is the pure embodiment of anything satanic in this world or any other world and that it should be banished to the gap between dimensions where justin bieber, hetalia, and the twilight saga dwell.
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yoshirulez! : Thanks for the compliment. I will take this into consideration next time I have a brain fart.
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11-19-15 11:01 PM
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Zlinqx : i forgot to include homestuck srry
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This reminds me of when I wanted to make something imitating the likes of Supper Smash Bros: Mishonh From God (yes, that is EXACTLY how it's spelled; look it up because it's a fun laugh). Only, the bad grammar would've been a part of the reason why it'd be funny.
This reminds me of when I wanted to make something imitating the likes of Supper Smash Bros: Mishonh From God (yes, that is EXACTLY how it's spelled; look it up because it's a fun laugh). Only, the bad grammar would've been a part of the reason why it'd be funny.
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This was amazing. Hands down the best Kingdom Hearts fanfiction ever penned. You are a true hero Zlinqx. Please make more.

yoshirulez! : Isn't that gap where Giygas is located? Because if it is we need to find somewhere worse.
This was amazing. Hands down the best Kingdom Hearts fanfiction ever penned. You are a true hero Zlinqx. Please make more.

yoshirulez! : Isn't that gap where Giygas is located? Because if it is we need to find somewhere worse.
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The best fanfic I've ever read in my entire life :').

I r8 8/8

can i be in the next one
The best fanfic I've ever read in my entire life :').

I r8 8/8

can i be in the next one
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yoshirulez! : homestusk is my most favoritest thing evezr how dared u Your sins are forgiven.

A user of this : Thank for kind words, I might make a Cloud x Goofy when this gets old if enough people want it and I'm bored enough (mostly the latter).

Sword legion : Really all fanfic writing communities to SOME extent. But yes in particula fanfiction.net and wattpad (had I made a cover in paint). Though I'd like to imagine my grammar at least being slightly better than some of the worst examples

SWTerra : I was thinking of writing it using much worse grammar, but didn't want it to lose its serious powerful very emotional and romantic tone. 

ZeroTails : mebe, depends Thank.

yoshirulez! : homestusk is my most favoritest thing evezr how dared u Your sins are forgiven.

A user of this : Thank for kind words, I might make a Cloud x Goofy when this gets old if enough people want it and I'm bored enough (mostly the latter).

Sword legion : Really all fanfic writing communities to SOME extent. But yes in particula fanfiction.net and wattpad (had I made a cover in paint). Though I'd like to imagine my grammar at least being slightly better than some of the worst examples

SWTerra : I was thinking of writing it using much worse grammar, but didn't want it to lose its serious powerful very emotional and romantic tone. 

ZeroTails : mebe, depends Thank.

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