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BV Series Hey, all. Most of you are going to be quite disappointed, but
Why is the series getting a remake? The beginning of the series was bad. Bad grammar, lack of
But, you can simply get back to where you were, and
I want to add many more scenes. I want to make my series
I listed the reasons with the answers of these two questions
I’m officially back in writing. Sorry for being a very lazy
What does ‘BV’ stand for? The term ‘BV’ stand for ‘Better
Legend of Green, Season 1 BV, chapter
The curse has been released! The scene was completely white. There wasn’t a sky, no
“W-where am I!?” he asked to himself as he’s looking the
“Why is the flapping of this bird so strong!?” He said,
“GAAAAAHH!” the giant bird growled. “Euh…” he stepped back. “N-nice birdy! Don’t get too close!”
“GAAAAHH!” the beast growled again, but this time with a
“Only one way to survive, then.” He began. “RUN!!” he
“GAAHHHH!” the beast growled again. This time, the monster
“GAAHHHHH!!!” the bird suddenly blasted a red beam from its
“Oh no!” The young boy noticed the beam. “AH-“ “AAAAAHHHHHH!!” he suddenly screamed and stood up from his
“What time is it?” he looked into the clock that was next to
Author note: I’m not a seven year old. I’m 13. Don’t worry,
Green had a small smile to his face, as his BD remembered his
Meanwhile, in the clouds… Didn’t I tell you that even in the clouds, there are lots of
“We’ll be gone for a couple of hours. You’ll stay here with
“What?! I hate cleaning!” the young blonde-purple haired boy
“Thundero, please, we all have an important meeting, except
“Fine!” he said with a heavy breath. Thundero and Gulley
“I don’t understand these adults…” Gulley began. “Every time,
“I know…” Thundero said in a deep voice. “Let’s just clean
“Now, which door leads to the basement, yet?” asked Gulley,
“The one in the right, stupid.” His friend replied with a
“I have Amnesia, so take it easy. I don’t have the best
“I hate this place…” Gulley said, feeling terrified. “Dude, it’s just a dumb room. No one is gonna kill you. We,
“You’re right…” Gulley said in a deep voice, feeling embarrassed.
“You know.” Began the younger God. “I forgot how fun it was
“Yeah… sweeping is fun.” They were repeating the same action
“Be careful! You may slip over the water!” warned Thundero to
“Hey, have you ever seen this door?” stood Gulley to a box,
“No. I wonder where it leads to… Should we access it?” asked
“Of course. If it’s a new room that we never knew about, then
“This is quite a dirty door. As if someone never accessed it
“Let’s open it, already!” said an impatient Gulley. Thundero
“What is this room?” asked Gulley, as he’s gazing the
“I have no idea. No one ever told us about this room.” Said a
“Thanks to my good visions, I can see a man, locked in a
“PLEASE!” the stranger begged. “Open this door to me! I can’t
“Should we open the door for him?” whispered Gulley to
“I guess. We will do a good deed, then!” said Thundero,
“Dude.” The older cousin whispered again. “He may not look as
“I’ll open the door for him, and we’ll see what happens!” Thundero
“Yes… thank you.” The tall man thanked the boys. “You’re welcome.” Said Thundero. The tall man walked to the
“Could it be?!” he suddenly began.”I…AM FINALLY FREE! After
“Oh no… We’re in big trouble…” stepped back Thundero. “I told you shouldn’t have done that.” Said Gulley, feeling a
“Shut up, you two!” the man turned to the boys. “How about I
“I, Daulpher, shall make the green guy pay for what he has
What was he talking about? ‘Green guy’, what does the message
imamonster: juuldude: BV Series Hey, all. Most of you are going to be quite disappointed, but
Why is the series getting a remake? The beginning of the series was bad. Bad grammar, lack of
But, you can simply get back to where you were, and
I want to add many more scenes. I want to make my series
I listed the reasons with the answers of these two questions
I’m officially back in writing. Sorry for being a very lazy
What does ‘BV’ stand for? The term ‘BV’ stand for ‘Better
Legend of Green, Season 1 BV, chapter
The curse has been released! The scene was completely white. There wasn’t a sky, no
“W-where am I!?” he asked to himself as he’s looking the
“Why is the flapping of this bird so strong!?” He said,
“GAAAAAHH!” the giant bird growled. “Euh…” he stepped back. “N-nice birdy! Don’t get too close!”
“GAAAAHH!” the beast growled again, but this time with a
“Only one way to survive, then.” He began. “RUN!!” he
“GAAHHHH!” the beast growled again. This time, the monster
“GAAHHHHH!!!” the bird suddenly blasted a red beam from its
“Oh no!” The young boy noticed the beam. “AH-“ “AAAAAHHHHHH!!” he suddenly screamed and stood up from his
“What time is it?” he looked into the clock that was next to
Author note: I’m not a seven year old. I’m 13. Don’t worry,
Green had a small smile to his face, as his BD remembered his
Meanwhile, in the clouds… Didn’t I tell you that even in the clouds, there are lots of
“We’ll be gone for a couple of hours. You’ll stay here with
“What?! I hate cleaning!” the young blonde-purple haired boy
“Thundero, please, we all have an important meeting, except
“Fine!” he said with a heavy breath. Thundero and Gulley
“I don’t understand these adults…” Gulley began. “Every time,
“I know…” Thundero said in a deep voice. “Let’s just clean
“Now, which door leads to the basement, yet?” asked Gulley,
“The one in the right, stupid.” His friend replied with a
“I have Amnesia, so take it easy. I don’t have the best
“I hate this place…” Gulley said, feeling terrified. “Dude, it’s just a dumb room. No one is gonna kill you. We,
“You’re right…” Gulley said in a deep voice, feeling embarrassed.
“You know.” Began the younger God. “I forgot how fun it was
“Yeah… sweeping is fun.” They were repeating the same action
“Be careful! You may slip over the water!” warned Thundero to
“Hey, have you ever seen this door?” stood Gulley to a box,
“No. I wonder where it leads to… Should we access it?” asked
“Of course. If it’s a new room that we never knew about, then
“This is quite a dirty door. As if someone never accessed it
“Let’s open it, already!” said an impatient Gulley. Thundero
“What is this room?” asked Gulley, as he’s gazing the
“I have no idea. No one ever told us about this room.” Said a
“Thanks to my good visions, I can see a man, locked in a
“PLEASE!” the stranger begged. “Open this door to me! I can’t
“Should we open the door for him?” whispered Gulley to
“I guess. We will do a good deed, then!” said Thundero,
“Dude.” The older cousin whispered again. “He may not look as
“I’ll open the door for him, and we’ll see what happens!” Thundero
“Yes… thank you.” The tall man thanked the boys. “You’re welcome.” Said Thundero. The tall man walked to the
“Could it be?!” he suddenly began.”I…AM FINALLY FREE! After
“Oh no… We’re in big trouble…” stepped back Thundero. “I told you shouldn’t have done that.” Said Gulley, feeling a
“Shut up, you two!” the man turned to the boys. “How about I
“I, Daulpher, shall make the green guy pay for what he has
What was he talking about? ‘Green guy’, what does the message
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imamonster : juuldude : Summon failed. Also, it's not my fault that when I paste it, the chapter is harder to me. I don't know why it does to me when I want to paste a chapter. juuldude : Summon failed. Also, it's not my fault that when I paste it, the chapter is harder to me. I don't know why it does to me when I want to paste a chapter. |
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greenluigi : I already told you, copy it with the microsoft word function..
Anyway, this was alright. but it seems like you don't know what amnesia means. Anyway, this was alright. but it seems like you don't know what amnesia means. |
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