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BV Series



Hey, all. Most of you are going to be quite disappointed, but
I am thinking of rebooting my series. I never said it was ‘dead’. There are
couples of reasons why I took this decision, and I will list the most important
ones. First of all…



Why is the series getting a remake?



The beginning of the series was bad. Bad grammar, lack of
punctuation etc… Also, I want to get a new fresh start, so people will
understand more the meaning of each sentences I write.



But, you can simply get back to where you were, and
continue at the pace! Why remaking everything?



I want to add many more scenes. I want to make my series
clear, and I’ll make it a bit more original.



I listed the reasons with the answers of these two questions
above.



I’m officially back in writing. Sorry for being a very lazy
and retired writer, but I’m back, at least. Oh, and this question must be
answered:



What does ‘BV’ stand for?





The term ‘BV’ stand for ‘Better
version’. Basically, it’s a remastered version of my series. If you have any
questions about my series, send me a PM. Also, you get to see the very first
chapter in BV in this thread! That’s right! After 1.5 years the series began,
the very first chapter will be re-released in BV right now!





Legend of Green, Season 1 BV, chapter
1:



The curse has been released!



The scene was completely white. There wasn’t a sky, no
houses, no villages, no people, no ocean, no islands… NO NOTHING! Just,
completely white. It was, like, as white as the snow. Suddenly, from very far
away, a short boy was slowly approaching. It was noticed by his black
silhouette. The boy was wearing a green hat, blue overalls, green long sleeves,
green shirt, blue jeans, and brown boots. He has big eyes, black eye color, and
black irises.



“W-where am I!?” he asked to himself as he’s looking the
scene around him. “Don’t tell me it’s another of these stupid dreams!” He got
mad. He was no ordinary boy. Lately, he has been having very awkward dreams, as
if someone was hunting him down… What was special about him? Does he have
hidden abilities? No one knows, including him. Why is he having all of these
strange dreams? How did he recognize himself in a dream? Or, was the ‘dream’
actually happening right now? No one ones. Suddenly, the young boy hears a bird
flapping wings.



“Why is the flapping of this bird so strong!?” He said,
feeling scared. “Is it a beast?” The bird found the young boy. It had long red
and black wings, black ears, blue eyes, and its whole skin was red and black.
The bird was in the shape of the letter ‘Y’.



“GAAAAAHH!” the giant bird growled.



“Euh…” he stepped back. “N-nice birdy! Don’t get too close!”
he was trying to calm the bird down, trying not to hurt him.



“GAAAAHH!” the beast growled again, but this time with a
louder and sharper voice.



“Only one way to survive, then.” He began. “RUN!!” he
screamed as he turned his back, and started to run away from the monster.



“GAAHHHH!” the beast growled again. This time, the monster
began pursuing the young boy. We can hear the fast footsteps the boy makes. He
doesn’t know where he is going. He didn’t care much about the awkwardness
that’s around him. He cares that he musn’t die, and be safe.



“GAAHHHHH!!!” the bird suddenly blasted a red beam from its
wide mouth. It was so big, and it did a big noise.



“Oh no!” The young boy noticed the beam. “AH-“



“AAAAAHHHHHH!!” he suddenly screamed and stood up from his
bed. “Huh?” he looked around him. “I knew it was just a silly dream...” he said
in a deep voice.



“What time is it?” he looked into the clock that was next to
him. “3 AM!?” he said, shockingly. “Well, I gotta wake up few hours later, and
I better this day, because it will be my BD! I, Green, will be turning 7 years
old!”



Author note: I’m not a seven year old. I’m 13. Don’t worry,
my story counterpart is a lot different than me…



Green had a small smile to his face, as his BD remembered his
specialness today. He happily went back to his puffy and wooden bed, closed his
eyes, and went to sleep.



Meanwhile, in the clouds…



Didn’t I tell you that even in the clouds, there are lots of
population? No? Well, now you know it! There’s a giant castle called the ‘Goddess
Castle’. What is it? Basically, it’s where lives the Goddess Royal Family!
Everybody in Cloud Town shows lots of respect towards the family. However, very
deep inside the castle, there’s a very dark secret that no one has yet to
cover, until today…



“We’ll be gone for a couple of hours. You’ll stay here with
Gulley to clean the basement.” Said a tall woman, wearing a blue dress.



“What?! I hate cleaning!” the young blonde-purple haired boy
complained.



“Thundero, please, we all have an important meeting, except
for you two. Someone has to clean the basement today, and that goes for you,
boys.” She ordered.



“Fine!” he said with a heavy breath. Thundero and Gulley
hates when their families leave them alone. They hate being home alone. They
were wondering why every time they have to leave them alone for a meeting or
something.



“I don’t understand these adults…” Gulley began. “Every time,
they leave children alone. They need more responsibility!” he said in a loud,
serious voice.



“I know…” Thundero said in a deep voice. “Let’s just clean
the basement, and we’ll play together later.” Those two were the youngest in
the Goddess Royal Family, except that Gulley is older than 2 months than
Thundero. They are the best cousins and friends in the whole world. Thundero
hates being treated as a ‘very cute guy’, as he’s the youngest. Anyway, the two
friends head to the main, wide room. It was a big wide square room. This is the
most important place in the castle. It is also called the ‘Dining Room’.



“Now, which door leads to the basement, yet?” asked Gulley,
as he was looking the multiple doors that was around the room. He doesn’t have
a strong memory. He often forgets things, even the simplest one.



“The one in the right, stupid.” His friend replied with a
mocking voice, as he pointed the left door.



“I have Amnesia, so take it easy. I don’t have the best
memory.” Gulley said with a ““ expression. The two opened the left door,
headed to the basement. The basement was the darkest room in the Giant Castle,
and it was rarely visited.



“I hate this place…” Gulley said, feeling terrified.



“Dude, it’s just a dumb room. No one is gonna kill you. We,
as young Gods, are immortal.” Thundero tried to calm down his friend. Thundero
was always more courageous than his friend, and Gulley was more like a cry
baby.



“You’re right…” Gulley said in a deep voice, feeling embarrassed.
“Anyway, let’s get the cleaning done.” The two grabbed two brooms that are on
the floor, and started sweeping the floor.



“You know.” Began the younger God. “I forgot how fun it was
removing the dust… do you feel the same way?” he asked, in an amused voice.



“Yeah… sweeping is fun.” They were repeating the same action
for a few minutes, until Thundero grabbed a bucket full of water to mob the
floor.



“Be careful! You may slip over the water!” warned Thundero to
his older friend as he was throwing the water from the bucket to the floor.



“Hey, have you ever seen this door?” stood Gulley to a box,
and pointed to a dirty door.



“No. I wonder where it leads to… Should we access it?” asked
Thundero, waiting a response to his friend.



“Of course. If it’s a new room that we never knew about, then
let’s go!” said Gulley, feeling enthusiastic. The boys slowly walked to the
door, trying not to slip over the water.



“This is quite a dirty door. As if someone never accessed it
for many years…” said Thundero, after examining the dirtiness of the ‘strange’
door.



“Let’s open it, already!” said an impatient Gulley. Thundero
placed his left hand to the lock of the door, and slowly opened it. They
approached to the room, and in there, they see a giant clock in the far top of
the room.



“What is this room?” asked Gulley, as he’s gazing the
paintings that’s around him in the room.



“I have no idea. No one ever told us about this room.” Said a
clueless Thundero. “Hey, what’s that!?” he pointed to a lock-glass door.



“Thanks to my good visions, I can see a man, locked in a
glass room. Let’s check him out!” said Gulley after he took a good look of the
locked door. The two boys approached the lock-glass room, and they saw a tall
man, wearing a top hat, hair just above his shoulders, purple cape, purple tie,
red jacket, black jeans, black boots, and a small wand.



“PLEASE!” the stranger begged. “Open this door to me! I can’t
breathe anymore!” he begged even more.



“Should we open the door for him?” whispered Gulley to
Thundero’s left ear. “I have a bad feeling about this…”



“I guess. We will do a good deed, then!” said Thundero,
ignoring the horrible stuff that could happen later.



“Dude.” The older cousin whispered again. “He may not look as
innocent as he appears to be.”



“I’ll open the door for him, and we’ll see what happens!” Thundero
ignored what Gulley said to him. He opened the door for the tall man with an
impulsive behavior.



“Yes… thank you.” The tall man thanked the boys.



“You’re welcome.” Said Thundero. The tall man walked to the
main center of he room. He gazed the paintings around him.



“Could it be?!” he suddenly began.”I…AM FINALLY FREE! After
so many years being imprisoned by this stupid door, I can now seek revenge to the
one who did this to me! All the fun just returned! YAAAAAY!!” he said
maniacally.



“Oh no… We’re in big trouble…” stepped back Thundero.



“I told you shouldn’t have done that.” Said Gulley, feeling a
bit angry.



“Shut up, you two!” the man turned to the boys. “How about I
do the same thing to you
J? Yes, it will be marvelous!” he thought of a ‘good’ plan. A
dark purple aura was glowing from his right hand. He raised his right hand, and
blasted a ball that pushed the two boys into the glass room, and the door
locked to them by itself.



“I, Daulpher, shall make the green guy pay for what he has
done to me!” said Daulpher.



What was he talking about? ‘Green guy’, what does the message
mean? Find out next time on season 1 BV!



imamonster:



juuldude:


BV Series



Hey, all. Most of you are going to be quite disappointed, but
I am thinking of rebooting my series. I never said it was ‘dead’. There are
couples of reasons why I took this decision, and I will list the most important
ones. First of all…



Why is the series getting a remake?



The beginning of the series was bad. Bad grammar, lack of
punctuation etc… Also, I want to get a new fresh start, so people will
understand more the meaning of each sentences I write.



But, you can simply get back to where you were, and
continue at the pace! Why remaking everything?



I want to add many more scenes. I want to make my series
clear, and I’ll make it a bit more original.



I listed the reasons with the answers of these two questions
above.



I’m officially back in writing. Sorry for being a very lazy
and retired writer, but I’m back, at least. Oh, and this question must be
answered:



What does ‘BV’ stand for?





The term ‘BV’ stand for ‘Better
version’. Basically, it’s a remastered version of my series. If you have any
questions about my series, send me a PM. Also, you get to see the very first
chapter in BV in this thread! That’s right! After 1.5 years the series began,
the very first chapter will be re-released in BV right now!





Legend of Green, Season 1 BV, chapter
1:



The curse has been released!



The scene was completely white. There wasn’t a sky, no
houses, no villages, no people, no ocean, no islands… NO NOTHING! Just,
completely white. It was, like, as white as the snow. Suddenly, from very far
away, a short boy was slowly approaching. It was noticed by his black
silhouette. The boy was wearing a green hat, blue overalls, green long sleeves,
green shirt, blue jeans, and brown boots. He has big eyes, black eye color, and
black irises.



“W-where am I!?” he asked to himself as he’s looking the
scene around him. “Don’t tell me it’s another of these stupid dreams!” He got
mad. He was no ordinary boy. Lately, he has been having very awkward dreams, as
if someone was hunting him down… What was special about him? Does he have
hidden abilities? No one knows, including him. Why is he having all of these
strange dreams? How did he recognize himself in a dream? Or, was the ‘dream’
actually happening right now? No one ones. Suddenly, the young boy hears a bird
flapping wings.



“Why is the flapping of this bird so strong!?” He said,
feeling scared. “Is it a beast?” The bird found the young boy. It had long red
and black wings, black ears, blue eyes, and its whole skin was red and black.
The bird was in the shape of the letter ‘Y’.



“GAAAAAHH!” the giant bird growled.



“Euh…” he stepped back. “N-nice birdy! Don’t get too close!”
he was trying to calm the bird down, trying not to hurt him.



“GAAAAHH!” the beast growled again, but this time with a
louder and sharper voice.



“Only one way to survive, then.” He began. “RUN!!” he
screamed as he turned his back, and started to run away from the monster.



“GAAHHHH!” the beast growled again. This time, the monster
began pursuing the young boy. We can hear the fast footsteps the boy makes. He
doesn’t know where he is going. He didn’t care much about the awkwardness
that’s around him. He cares that he musn’t die, and be safe.



“GAAHHHHH!!!” the bird suddenly blasted a red beam from its
wide mouth. It was so big, and it did a big noise.



“Oh no!” The young boy noticed the beam. “AH-“



“AAAAAHHHHHH!!” he suddenly screamed and stood up from his
bed. “Huh?” he looked around him. “I knew it was just a silly dream...” he said
in a deep voice.



“What time is it?” he looked into the clock that was next to
him. “3 AM!?” he said, shockingly. “Well, I gotta wake up few hours later, and
I better this day, because it will be my BD! I, Green, will be turning 7 years
old!”



Author note: I’m not a seven year old. I’m 13. Don’t worry,
my story counterpart is a lot different than me…



Green had a small smile to his face, as his BD remembered his
specialness today. He happily went back to his puffy and wooden bed, closed his
eyes, and went to sleep.



Meanwhile, in the clouds…



Didn’t I tell you that even in the clouds, there are lots of
population? No? Well, now you know it! There’s a giant castle called the ‘Goddess
Castle’. What is it? Basically, it’s where lives the Goddess Royal Family!
Everybody in Cloud Town shows lots of respect towards the family. However, very
deep inside the castle, there’s a very dark secret that no one has yet to
cover, until today…



“We’ll be gone for a couple of hours. You’ll stay here with
Gulley to clean the basement.” Said a tall woman, wearing a blue dress.



“What?! I hate cleaning!” the young blonde-purple haired boy
complained.



“Thundero, please, we all have an important meeting, except
for you two. Someone has to clean the basement today, and that goes for you,
boys.” She ordered.



“Fine!” he said with a heavy breath. Thundero and Gulley
hates when their families leave them alone. They hate being home alone. They
were wondering why every time they have to leave them alone for a meeting or
something.



“I don’t understand these adults…” Gulley began. “Every time,
they leave children alone. They need more responsibility!” he said in a loud,
serious voice.



“I know…” Thundero said in a deep voice. “Let’s just clean
the basement, and we’ll play together later.” Those two were the youngest in
the Goddess Royal Family, except that Gulley is older than 2 months than
Thundero. They are the best cousins and friends in the whole world. Thundero
hates being treated as a ‘very cute guy’, as he’s the youngest. Anyway, the two
friends head to the main, wide room. It was a big wide square room. This is the
most important place in the castle. It is also called the ‘Dining Room’.



“Now, which door leads to the basement, yet?” asked Gulley,
as he was looking the multiple doors that was around the room. He doesn’t have
a strong memory. He often forgets things, even the simplest one.



“The one in the right, stupid.” His friend replied with a
mocking voice, as he pointed the left door.



“I have Amnesia, so take it easy. I don’t have the best
memory.” Gulley said with a ““ expression. The two opened the left door,
headed to the basement. The basement was the darkest room in the Giant Castle,
and it was rarely visited.



“I hate this place…” Gulley said, feeling terrified.



“Dude, it’s just a dumb room. No one is gonna kill you. We,
as young Gods, are immortal.” Thundero tried to calm down his friend. Thundero
was always more courageous than his friend, and Gulley was more like a cry
baby.



“You’re right…” Gulley said in a deep voice, feeling embarrassed.
“Anyway, let’s get the cleaning done.” The two grabbed two brooms that are on
the floor, and started sweeping the floor.



“You know.” Began the younger God. “I forgot how fun it was
removing the dust… do you feel the same way?” he asked, in an amused voice.



“Yeah… sweeping is fun.” They were repeating the same action
for a few minutes, until Thundero grabbed a bucket full of water to mob the
floor.



“Be careful! You may slip over the water!” warned Thundero to
his older friend as he was throwing the water from the bucket to the floor.



“Hey, have you ever seen this door?” stood Gulley to a box,
and pointed to a dirty door.



“No. I wonder where it leads to… Should we access it?” asked
Thundero, waiting a response to his friend.



“Of course. If it’s a new room that we never knew about, then
let’s go!” said Gulley, feeling enthusiastic. The boys slowly walked to the
door, trying not to slip over the water.



“This is quite a dirty door. As if someone never accessed it
for many years…” said Thundero, after examining the dirtiness of the ‘strange’
door.



“Let’s open it, already!” said an impatient Gulley. Thundero
placed his left hand to the lock of the door, and slowly opened it. They
approached to the room, and in there, they see a giant clock in the far top of
the room.



“What is this room?” asked Gulley, as he’s gazing the
paintings that’s around him in the room.



“I have no idea. No one ever told us about this room.” Said a
clueless Thundero. “Hey, what’s that!?” he pointed to a lock-glass door.



“Thanks to my good visions, I can see a man, locked in a
glass room. Let’s check him out!” said Gulley after he took a good look of the
locked door. The two boys approached the lock-glass room, and they saw a tall
man, wearing a top hat, hair just above his shoulders, purple cape, purple tie,
red jacket, black jeans, black boots, and a small wand.



“PLEASE!” the stranger begged. “Open this door to me! I can’t
breathe anymore!” he begged even more.



“Should we open the door for him?” whispered Gulley to
Thundero’s left ear. “I have a bad feeling about this…”



“I guess. We will do a good deed, then!” said Thundero,
ignoring the horrible stuff that could happen later.



“Dude.” The older cousin whispered again. “He may not look as
innocent as he appears to be.”



“I’ll open the door for him, and we’ll see what happens!” Thundero
ignored what Gulley said to him. He opened the door for the tall man with an
impulsive behavior.



“Yes… thank you.” The tall man thanked the boys.



“You’re welcome.” Said Thundero. The tall man walked to the
main center of he room. He gazed the paintings around him.



“Could it be?!” he suddenly began.”I…AM FINALLY FREE! After
so many years being imprisoned by this stupid door, I can now seek revenge to the
one who did this to me! All the fun just returned! YAAAAAY!!” he said
maniacally.



“Oh no… We’re in big trouble…” stepped back Thundero.



“I told you shouldn’t have done that.” Said Gulley, feeling a
bit angry.



“Shut up, you two!” the man turned to the boys. “How about I
do the same thing to you
J? Yes, it will be marvelous!” he thought of a ‘good’ plan. A
dark purple aura was glowing from his right hand. He raised his right hand, and
blasted a ball that pushed the two boys into the glass room, and the door
locked to them by itself.



“I, Daulpher, shall make the green guy pay for what he has
done to me!” said Daulpher.



What was he talking about? ‘Green guy’, what does the message
mean? Find out next time on season 1 BV!



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Summon failed. Also, it's not my fault that when I paste it, the chapter is harder to me. I don't know why it does to me when I want to paste a chapter.
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Summon failed. Also, it's not my fault that when I paste it, the chapter is harder to me. I don't know why it does to me when I want to paste a chapter.
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greenluigi : I already told you, copy it with the microsoft word function..
Anyway, this was alright. but it seems like you don't know what amnesia means.
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