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Poems For These 3 Special People

 

05-28-14 11:28 AM
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Hi everyone.....I was still sad yesterday when I posted up goodboys anniversary thread. I got my sign again, what I mean by that is I don't think of the words, I let them come to me. thus why my poems are not always active. I got a flash of words this morning. I had a sudden urge to write a poem, as I felt the words going through my head. This happened how? I looked at the window, it was another dull day and it was raining.....so anyways, I hope you enjoy this poem. As I wrote this all from my heart.

*Another dull, gloomy day* I sigh, as I looked up to the sky.
Remembering 3 of my old friends on vizzed, which flew by.
*How long must I wait?* I continue to question this.
As I still remember their friendship and bliss.

Time goes by, when you least expect it.
I'm still worried about, them after their quit.
And I say to myself *guys please come back*
*You have worried a lot of people, and some are in the black*

I have so many unanswered questions.
*Are they ok, what has happened?* and more comes by with suggestions.
All I can do is pray, hope, have faith and to believe.
And try not to think of the worst, and to grieve.

I am still upset with those 3 for leaving.
They left without a word! That was also perceiving.....
I'll give them a tough time when they come!
That can be their punishment, for what they had done.

I am still yet sad of, thinking about the past.
And never thought something like this, would not last.
People would say *Eni please don't worry*
How can I not? It hurts so much, I feel so scurry.

I hope that they come back one day.
It would be joyful to see, and to say.
I can't help but to think about them everyday.
And as I try not to always feel so gray.

Goodboy, supercrash and ditto we love you guys.
Even though there will be cries.
So come back to vizzed soon please!
When that happens, the others and I can finally be at ease.


tgags:
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TornadoMudkip : As promised, I summoned you.
sonicmcmuffin :
Hi everyone.....I was still sad yesterday when I posted up goodboys anniversary thread. I got my sign again, what I mean by that is I don't think of the words, I let them come to me. thus why my poems are not always active. I got a flash of words this morning. I had a sudden urge to write a poem, as I felt the words going through my head. This happened how? I looked at the window, it was another dull day and it was raining.....so anyways, I hope you enjoy this poem. As I wrote this all from my heart.

*Another dull, gloomy day* I sigh, as I looked up to the sky.
Remembering 3 of my old friends on vizzed, which flew by.
*How long must I wait?* I continue to question this.
As I still remember their friendship and bliss.

Time goes by, when you least expect it.
I'm still worried about, them after their quit.
And I say to myself *guys please come back*
*You have worried a lot of people, and some are in the black*

I have so many unanswered questions.
*Are they ok, what has happened?* and more comes by with suggestions.
All I can do is pray, hope, have faith and to believe.
And try not to think of the worst, and to grieve.

I am still upset with those 3 for leaving.
They left without a word! That was also perceiving.....
I'll give them a tough time when they come!
That can be their punishment, for what they had done.

I am still yet sad of, thinking about the past.
And never thought something like this, would not last.
People would say *Eni please don't worry*
How can I not? It hurts so much, I feel so scurry.

I hope that they come back one day.
It would be joyful to see, and to say.
I can't help but to think about them everyday.
And as I try not to always feel so gray.

Goodboy, supercrash and ditto we love you guys.
Even though there will be cries.
So come back to vizzed soon please!
When that happens, the others and I can finally be at ease.


tgags:
Razor-987 :
TornadoMudkip : As promised, I summoned you.
sonicmcmuffin :
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(edited by Eniitan on 05-28-14 11:50 AM)     Post Rating: 3   Liked By: sonicthehedgehog57, tgags123, TornadoMudkip,

05-28-14 11:31 AM
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Eniitan : It's a great poem. I think any poem is great if you can get a sense of what the person is feeling when they wrote the poem.. So good work!

tgags123 : You was summoned here .. Hopefully this summon works and isn't a complete failure

WRITE ALL THE POETRY X3
Eniitan : It's a great poem. I think any poem is great if you can get a sense of what the person is feeling when they wrote the poem.. So good work!

tgags123 : You was summoned here .. Hopefully this summon works and isn't a complete failure

WRITE ALL THE POETRY X3
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05-28-14 11:32 AM
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I know how you feel, Enii. Good job on the poem though, I liked it. There are a lot of old friends who left...But we can only hope for the best for them.

tgags123 : You are summoned.
I know how you feel, Enii. Good job on the poem though, I liked it. There are a lot of old friends who left...But we can only hope for the best for them.

tgags123 : You are summoned.
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05-28-14 02:39 PM
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Great poem. You are much better at putting your feelings into words than I am. I feel the same way, but I don't have the talent to write a poem this good. Great job with this. I hope they come back...
Great poem. You are much better at putting your feelings into words than I am. I feel the same way, but I don't have the talent to write a poem this good. Great job with this. I hope they come back...
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