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The story of deg2000 chapter 1

 

05-24-14 02:50 PM
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Hello guys this has been wanted for a while but i never got the time to start it due to life. but here it is The Story/Fable of deg2000.

The sunlight gleamed through my windows as it shined and glimmered. I opened my eyes to see that I never logged out of Vizzed.

deg: Aw man I guess I forgot to log-out again. Well might as well see which users are online at this time.
I move over to see my profile's clock as it shows 1:00Pm May 24, 2014.

deg: Of course I had to sleep-in as well great I groaned.
I walk down out of my profile I got to the Board as I caught a glimpse of NintendoFanKimmy and greenluigi working on more stories.

Then passing by on Chat to say hello to pokemon x doing a great job working hard to keep Chat clean and non-spammy.

I finally made to the Board and go to Vizzed Central where Davideo7 was going to make an announcement.

David Hello my users today I bare strange and yet confusing news for you all.
As everyone had an odd look on their faces, also saying what? odd news?

As I heard his voice on the speakers as I was yet not there. Right then a bright white flash appeared over the sky and dark clouds all over the place then I said.

deg: Too late David I think I get what you mean by weird.
It was snowing in May Vizzed Ville was now Snow Ville. As Lot's of the users were confused some were excited most were angry cause they thought the winter finally had left.

Then as David seems to speak into a litt'e mic around his ear.

David: Geeo it's come. call the other mods and staff members to log-out as many users as possible.

Geeo: Yes sir, as he turns Juliet and Frod are waiting for orders. Juliet get mrfe and get all of the normal members and Trusted out of here. Frodlex find all of the newbies while i try to shut down registrations.

All: Yes sir we will do our best.

deg: Are you serious! As tons of users panic and run from the apacolpyse and log-out fast or so it seems.
Just I got what they meant by apacolypse some of the snow drop became long icy spears and rammed in the ground almost hurting one of newbies.

David: Everyone please calm down! Now hurry to the lou-out sections please no pushing wait for your turn. this is how we'll do it. I know there are multiple portals but let all of the Newbies and Normal Members out first.
As all of the users are now at the Log-out portals the newbies are slowly clearing away.

But the more that leave the more the phenomenal Snow Ville grows.

Kimmy: Heya deg! as she jumps on my back as she starts laughing really hard as I try to get her off.

Green: Kimmy come on this is really serious I wonder what's going to happen here I hope nothing bad that's for sure.

As Kimmy get's an annoyed look on her face she jumps off me

Kimmy: Well that was fun and Deg you should really try to lighten up as she shows a bright smile. And I just grunt boredly.
Right then Eniitan followed by AriaAngelDream, bobq, sop, Styrofoamboots, and a few more users. Come up towards the little group also waiting to get out.

Frodlex : Ah seems all of the newbies are gone. Okay now All Normal users would you please leave now please be quick about it we still have lot's of users left.

Kimmy: Oh no I forgot something i'll be back as she runs back to her profile.

Enii: Oh dear that's really dangerous wait! Kimmy come back as she and the others run after them. But Aria quickly comes but.

Aria: Hey get your head out of the clouds come on as she grabs my hand and pulls me with her.

Frodlex : Alright guess that's everyone now Trusted and Elites please go now.
As the storm rages on harder I thought I saw a glimpse of a shadow of someone or something.

Geeo: Alright that should be everyone now time to close off the entrance and exit no one coming in or out. Beep beep huh? What's this oh no there are still users here.

David: This isn't good they are all stuck here until this problem is solved. Who is left?

This is the end of chapter 1 turn the page for the next chapter
Summons!
AriaAngelDream :
NintendoFanKimmy :
greenluigi :
Eniitan :
sop281 :
styrofoamboots :
bobq :

Characters to come in next chapter
A user of this :
SUX2BU :
yoshirulez! :
zeross121 :
sonicmcmuffin :
and lot's more


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Hello guys this has been wanted for a while but i never got the time to start it due to life. but here it is The Story/Fable of deg2000.

The sunlight gleamed through my windows as it shined and glimmered. I opened my eyes to see that I never logged out of Vizzed.

deg: Aw man I guess I forgot to log-out again. Well might as well see which users are online at this time.
I move over to see my profile's clock as it shows 1:00Pm May 24, 2014.

deg: Of course I had to sleep-in as well great I groaned.
I walk down out of my profile I got to the Board as I caught a glimpse of NintendoFanKimmy and greenluigi working on more stories.

Then passing by on Chat to say hello to pokemon x doing a great job working hard to keep Chat clean and non-spammy.

I finally made to the Board and go to Vizzed Central where Davideo7 was going to make an announcement.

David Hello my users today I bare strange and yet confusing news for you all.
As everyone had an odd look on their faces, also saying what? odd news?

As I heard his voice on the speakers as I was yet not there. Right then a bright white flash appeared over the sky and dark clouds all over the place then I said.

deg: Too late David I think I get what you mean by weird.
It was snowing in May Vizzed Ville was now Snow Ville. As Lot's of the users were confused some were excited most were angry cause they thought the winter finally had left.

Then as David seems to speak into a litt'e mic around his ear.

David: Geeo it's come. call the other mods and staff members to log-out as many users as possible.

Geeo: Yes sir, as he turns Juliet and Frod are waiting for orders. Juliet get mrfe and get all of the normal members and Trusted out of here. Frodlex find all of the newbies while i try to shut down registrations.

All: Yes sir we will do our best.

deg: Are you serious! As tons of users panic and run from the apacolpyse and log-out fast or so it seems.
Just I got what they meant by apacolypse some of the snow drop became long icy spears and rammed in the ground almost hurting one of newbies.

David: Everyone please calm down! Now hurry to the lou-out sections please no pushing wait for your turn. this is how we'll do it. I know there are multiple portals but let all of the Newbies and Normal Members out first.
As all of the users are now at the Log-out portals the newbies are slowly clearing away.

But the more that leave the more the phenomenal Snow Ville grows.

Kimmy: Heya deg! as she jumps on my back as she starts laughing really hard as I try to get her off.

Green: Kimmy come on this is really serious I wonder what's going to happen here I hope nothing bad that's for sure.

As Kimmy get's an annoyed look on her face she jumps off me

Kimmy: Well that was fun and Deg you should really try to lighten up as she shows a bright smile. And I just grunt boredly.
Right then Eniitan followed by AriaAngelDream, bobq, sop, Styrofoamboots, and a few more users. Come up towards the little group also waiting to get out.

Frodlex : Ah seems all of the newbies are gone. Okay now All Normal users would you please leave now please be quick about it we still have lot's of users left.

Kimmy: Oh no I forgot something i'll be back as she runs back to her profile.

Enii: Oh dear that's really dangerous wait! Kimmy come back as she and the others run after them. But Aria quickly comes but.

Aria: Hey get your head out of the clouds come on as she grabs my hand and pulls me with her.

Frodlex : Alright guess that's everyone now Trusted and Elites please go now.
As the storm rages on harder I thought I saw a glimpse of a shadow of someone or something.

Geeo: Alright that should be everyone now time to close off the entrance and exit no one coming in or out. Beep beep huh? What's this oh no there are still users here.

David: This isn't good they are all stuck here until this problem is solved. Who is left?

This is the end of chapter 1 turn the page for the next chapter
Summons!
AriaAngelDream :
NintendoFanKimmy :
greenluigi :
Eniitan :
sop281 :
styrofoamboots :
bobq :

Characters to come in next chapter
A user of this :
SUX2BU :
yoshirulez! :
zeross121 :
sonicmcmuffin :
and lot's more


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(edited by deg2000 on 05-24-14 04:06 PM)     Post Rating: 4   Liked By: Eniitan, Gingercream1, greenluigi, NintendoFanDrew, SUX2BU,

05-24-14 02:56 PM
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This is very good for a first! I have some tips tough. instead of this Imamonster: Do Imamonster- Get it? I still loved it.

greenluigi : You might like this.
This is very good for a first! I have some tips tough. instead of this Imamonster: Do Imamonster- Get it? I still loved it.

greenluigi : You might like this.
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Wow.....what a impressive epic story! I enjoyed reading this one deg. I hope to see more chapters soon! btw I'll fix those fail summons for you. ^-^

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Wow.....what a impressive epic story! I enjoyed reading this one deg. I hope to see more chapters soon! btw I'll fix those fail summons for you. ^-^

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05-24-14 05:35 PM
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Boy, I sure had an important role in that first chapter lmao

Sometimes its hard to tell what part is a quote, and what part is narration, so be careful to separate those two (unless you intend to keep it blended) Ive seen both types of writing done before, and both are acceptable, so Ill just say, keep it consistent.
Boy, I sure had an important role in that first chapter lmao

Sometimes its hard to tell what part is a quote, and what part is narration, so be careful to separate those two (unless you intend to keep it blended) Ive seen both types of writing done before, and both are acceptable, so Ill just say, keep it consistent.
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deg2000 : Nice! I haven't gotten to read many of your stories yet, because I've been alittle busy lately, but this sounds pretty interesting And I'm in the next chapter? I can't wait to see my lines!
deg2000 : Nice! I haven't gotten to read many of your stories yet, because I've been alittle busy lately, but this sounds pretty interesting And I'm in the next chapter? I can't wait to see my lines!
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