Hello Everyone for those of you that may not know a while back I made a remembrance thread talking about my time on Vizzed and I mentioned a specific friend of mine named NintendoFanKimmy, she has been my girlfriend officially for 10 days but we actually started talking and liking each other since the 1st of this month so  I was writing this for the 1st of March (but she couldn't wait that long so I'm posting it now to make her smile ). Either way I shouldn't ramble on but I will say sorry if this gets posted in the wrong place and if it needs to be taken down within a certain amount of time that's perfectly fine, once again thanks mods of this forum for all your great work and understanding so without further ado let's post this writing!


                                                                          "Saying thanks, to a dear girl"



"As I look back on today"
"There's not very much to say"
"Looking back on a month"
"When I was made so happy"
"Something that made my heart stretch so far out"
"Just like if you were to eat taffy"


"A month since I've been with this great girl"
"It makes me so happy that I could just twirl"
"Since her love for me is worth so much more"
"Than one million pearls"


"My emotions of love are bursting"
"Moving and Mixing into many different swirls"
"One thing's for sure"
"There are no other girls"
"Whom could make me as happy as this one"


"There's many reasons why"
"Mostly because now when I cry"
"I know it's not because of sadness"
"Instead only because I'm filled entirely with happiness"


"Another main reason is the fact"
"That now I wake up every morning"
"And see my face"
"I look like a cherry"
"Filled with over 50 shades of Red due to blushing"


"It makes me remember"
"How lucky I am to be with her"
"Even if I repeat myself forever"
"I know this love will do just the same"


"I can already picture her dressed in white"
"As she holds her bouquet in her hands"
"So beautifully dressed and looking at her best"


"If we can both say one thing"
"It's that our love has come closer"
"And dragged us deeper throughout each passing day"
"Faster than quicksand or any element in time"


"I must say so much thanks to this girl"
"Because she's made me"
"The happiest guy in the world"
"I never thought she'd love me this much"


"Though I must say this really does touch my heart"
"My one and only wish"
"Something that shines more than a nice dish"
"It's that I wish I could be there with her"


"So I could see her smile in front me"
"So that way when she gets sad"
"I could wipe her tears away"
"Then go to her ear and say"
"I'll love you forever"


"Holding her close to me"
"Hugging her and letting her emotions flow out"
"Soaking up all the sadness"
"In order to bring that beautiful smile again"


"From time when you feel lonely"
"Or feel like you're going to break apart"
"Just hold your hands close to your heart"
"And when you feel that beat"


"Remember that it means you have a reason to live"
"Even someone to live it with"
"My heart continues to beat"
"All for you"


"To the days when I stand out in the rain"
"Thinking of you relieves any pain"
"Even if other's call me insane"
"You're the cure to all my pains"


"My Dear Sweet Love Kimmeh"
"I'm always here for you"
"I hope you know that"
"I really do need you"


"My love will remain true to you"
"Since I always dream about us"
"Ever since that month when we became two"
"It still makes my mind become blown away"


"When I think that I've been with you this long"
"No amount of words can describe my thanks to you"
"Most people would say"
"Write a song or love note"


"Which I do but for you it's different"
"Because no voice or words"
"Can truly express how great you are"
"It's like art except that not even a million words"
"Are enough for you"


"The only girl in the world for me"
"With all the things you do"
"And all the qualities you have"
"They're the reason why I love you"


"Everything you do and say"
"Bring a special meaning to my life"
"As they've brought something to my heart"
"Something that was once torn apart"


"People always say that"
"These relationships only last in dreams"
"But our love shoves that idea off like a stream"
"A stream flowing in a river full of love"


"Even if I were to go back in time"
"Where there were 8 different girls"
"Or if I had 8 different lives"
"I'd still have fallen in love with this same girl"
"8 Different Times"


"Naturally we'll have difficult times"
"However I still won't give up either time"
"Since that's part of the journey of being in love"
"Which we've both begun our travels on"


"If someone asked me questions"
"Like if she was pretty, fat, wanted"
"or even Cry if she walked away"
"I know what I'd say"


"She's not pretty"
"There's one thing fat about her"
"She's not wanted"
"and I wouldn't cry if she walked away....BUT!!!"
"THATS BECAUSE!"


"She's not pretty, because she's BEAUTIFUL"
"The only thing fat about her, is her HUGE HEART"
"I don't want to be with her forever, because I NEED TO BE WITH HER FOREVER"
"I most certainly wouldn't cry if she left"
"Since I'd probably just fall and die"
"And this is sincerely not a lie!"


"If it seemed like I was kicking her down before"
"Then I'd surely fall to the floor"
"Hoping to be slammed by a door many times over"
"Since I'd be laughing over and over"
"Because above is the truth of it all"


"Just like these words below"


"Kimmeh"
"If I were the world"
"You'd be my sun and moon"
"My Sky and Sea"
"The light and relaxing darkness"
"You're the most beautiful tune"


"I'm not the kind of guy who loves you for your body"
"Even though it may be godly"
"My love for you is because of what you do"
"For both me and you"
"Having you become my happiness, ridding all my tears of sadness"


"If my love Kimmeh was an ocean"
"I'd dive down"
"Very deep"
"Until the I hit the floor with my feet"


"If my love Kimmeh was the sky"
"I'll look up at it endlessly"
"Always admiring it's beauty"
"Happy that it's surrounding me"


"No matter if she was the ground either"
"Since I'd love her every foot, square, and pound"
"As no matter where I'd go"
"She'd always be around"


"I'm saying my thanks"
"My thanks to this dear girl"
"Even to 1000 words in"
"But my heart for her still hasn't grown thin"


"Still to a time where we'd be kids"
"Other's laughing and making fun"
"Saying feelings for a girl/boy isn't fun and just plain dumb"
"I'll still hold my hand in front of them"


"Saying that I'll love her forever"
"Holding her close and laughing"
"Saying: you're just making fools out of one another"
"Because she'd still be my only lover at that day"
"Not caring about what others say nor even our age"


"I feel like a flower"
"With her smiles filling me with power"
"Like a daisy receiving it's daily drizzle"
"Of water falling on it's warming petal"


"From the time that she leaves"
"I sit and wait"
"Knowing that I won't wilt"
"As I wait for that same drizzle to come once more"


"I don't want to make this a bore"
"So I'll only write a little more"
"That way your beautiful eyes don't become sore"
"By looking at this poems loving lore"


"When our final day's come"
"I want them to be with you"
"Holding your hand, and hugging you too"
"As even when we part from here and into spirits"
"I want to hold your hand there still"


"When I say I love you"
"It's not just for today, or tomorrow either"
"Since I'll love you everyday"
"You'll be on my mind every second and in my heart"


"To end this off my love"
"Just know that"
"I'm always here loving and missing you"
"It's fine though because we'll always remain as two"


"Because I truly love you!"
"To my lovely and best gf ever - Kimmeh"


                                                                                                         - Your eternal love - Erick Davis (Sonic57)

Eniitan : I know I asked if you could look at this so when you get the chance here's a summons

sonicthehedgehog57 : aw Kawaii^^ ( Kawaii means cute/adorable) that you made this poem for kimmy hope you two have a good relationship 

deg2000 : Yes we've been having a great relationship together and I love every minute of it :')  I wanted to do something special for her that day so I made this ^^ she loved it!