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11-27-13 02:54 PM
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I'm pretty sure this my first Creepypasta, so it won't be very good. This is based off of the emptiness I felt when I came back to Vizzed after 3 major months of inactivity. *Note: Cowboy03 part has been added. Uhg, I hated that guy........ GameBoy1023 : james44028 : patar4097 : earthwarrior : hilacle : Popeye116 : Matthew2321 : Y'all are featured in this. Anyway, Hit it! I was just returning home from school and started to work on my latest project, when I suddenly realized: I haven’t been to Vizzed in a long time! Thus, I decided to return to my home in my home, as I referred to it when I was active. I fell in my chair, opened the laptop, and typed in the Vizzed address. I came to see it hadn’t changed other than a couple of small tweaks by the man, and a couple of my old pals seemed to still be active. It seemed like a good day to restart my posting career. I logged in and put “Long time, no see~” in all of my active friend’s comments. Everything seemed normal, and Popeye116 and James44028 were back. However, I noticed Matthew2321 just posted WHY. I was wondering his reasoning behind it when I get a flood of notifications and comments…… earthwarrior : HAVE, patar4097 : YOU, hilacle : FORGOTTEN, Popeye116 : US, james44028 : MOTHER 3, Gameboy1023: FAN 5!?. I was shocked at seeing this, but I knew they were just playing a sick joke on me, but as I went back to notifications, DAVIDEO7 had actually posted. Shocked, I went to my profile to see he had littered the comments with infinite “?”’s. Then out of nowhere, all of my threads were closed as geogree posted on every one of them: “YOU HAVE FORGOTTEN US, SO WE WILL FORGET YOU.” My blood was rushing, and I was wondering why everyone was drinking Mother3fan5 Haterade, when I noticed COWBOY03, that little spammer that james44028 & I fought with long ago posted, posting spam I couldn't read.... it looked like.... IKILYOUYOUMESSEDWITHMELONGAGOI'VECOMEBACKTunnounseYOUneglektdUSSSSSSS- I stopped reading and thought there must’ve been a hacker on the loose, so I contacted the Local Mods and Global Mods as my last hope. I waited for one, but suddenly I had 13 messages in my inbox, from every Local and Global, saying: Oh NoThInG’s WrOnG yOu’Ve JuSt BeEn JuSt LiKe OnE oF tHoSe SpAmMeRs YoU’vE nEgLeCtEd USSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS……………… At that point I felt like slapping myself, and I did. But it was all real. It was a nightmare in real life, and everyone was against me. I started to wander around the board, but I noticed something….. every time I clicked something, I was jump scared by a screech and a picture of MYSELF with my face in my hands, with bleeding red Letters reading out: YOU’VE NEGLECTED US. I’m about to shatter at this point, knowing this is all happening and getting jump scared everywhere I go normally would do this, and next thing you know I’m at the Memberlist, and I’m relieved. However, there’s music playing……… AUUUUGH, LAVENDER TOWN, LAVENDER TOWN, NO, NO…… My mind is racing and head is throbbing, and I notice……everybody, including newbies……. Has the same picture I was seeing earlier, exceeeeeeeeept…… my eyes were bleeding? My glasses seemed to be completely red, and there was blood trickling down from my face. I’m done with Vizzed board, I’m done, I’ll never come back…. Wait, the tab won’t close!? The Window won’t close…… suddenly, the image is zooming in, in, in, in…… out of nowhere, a hand with a pointing finger shot through my computer screen with a screech, yelling “WHY HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN USYOUPOORFRIENDWHYHAVEYOUFORGOTTENUSYOUMONSTER!?!?!?!?!?”I felt as if a ghost was trying to kill me, I run yelling off my chair I break as I leap off, yelling until I reach the front door. Suddenly, the front door bursts open with every member of Vizzed marching in, all of them with red bleeding eyes, wielding axes and chainsaws. They march after me, chanting the same thing, “WHY HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN USYOUPOORFRIENDWHYHAVEYOUFORGOTTENUSYOUMONSTER!?!?!?!?!?” I try to run, but eventually I trip and I’m backed into a corner, my eyes really showing fear in them. I make a last resort….. “GUYS, IT’S JUST ME, MOTHER3FAN5! I WAS BUSY WITH SCHOOL!” All of my friends come to the front, all wielding axes. They all chant: “YOUABANDONEDUSWETHOUGHTYOUHADDIEDWHYDIDYOUBETRAYUSYOUBACKSTABBERNOWWEWILLKILLYOU!!!!!!~!~!~!” I already have an empty, frightened look on my face, until Gameboy1023, wielding an axe so big no human could lift. I sputter out: “Cmon, Gameboy, be a pal…… keep these guys off!” He suddenly replies with a shriek: “ALLTHATFIGHTINGYOUHADTORTUREDME…… THISISMYCHANCE *Begins to swing axe* GOODBYEMOTHER 3 FAN FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII- The police came to the scene and investigated. They looked at the pool of blood, and noticed two things: a bone, shattered glasses, and a note: “AS HE HAD FORGOTTEN US, HE SHALL BE FORGOTTEN………………..” Samuel always wanted a new computer. Finally, the Laptop came in from Ebay. He started it as soon as it was out of the box. As it came to the desktop, there seemed to still be a Google Chrome tab open……….. Well, was it good? I hope it was somewhat likeable~ *Note: Cowboy03 part has been added. Uhg, I hated that guy........ GameBoy1023 : james44028 : patar4097 : earthwarrior : hilacle : Popeye116 : Matthew2321 : Y'all are featured in this. Anyway, Hit it! I was just returning home from school and started to work on my latest project, when I suddenly realized: I haven’t been to Vizzed in a long time! Thus, I decided to return to my home in my home, as I referred to it when I was active. I fell in my chair, opened the laptop, and typed in the Vizzed address. I came to see it hadn’t changed other than a couple of small tweaks by the man, and a couple of my old pals seemed to still be active. It seemed like a good day to restart my posting career. I logged in and put “Long time, no see~” in all of my active friend’s comments. Everything seemed normal, and Popeye116 and James44028 were back. However, I noticed Matthew2321 just posted WHY. I was wondering his reasoning behind it when I get a flood of notifications and comments…… earthwarrior : HAVE, patar4097 : YOU, hilacle : FORGOTTEN, Popeye116 : US, james44028 : MOTHER 3, Gameboy1023: FAN 5!?. I was shocked at seeing this, but I knew they were just playing a sick joke on me, but as I went back to notifications, DAVIDEO7 had actually posted. Shocked, I went to my profile to see he had littered the comments with infinite “?”’s. Then out of nowhere, all of my threads were closed as geogree posted on every one of them: “YOU HAVE FORGOTTEN US, SO WE WILL FORGET YOU.” My blood was rushing, and I was wondering why everyone was drinking Mother3fan5 Haterade, when I noticed COWBOY03, that little spammer that james44028 & I fought with long ago posted, posting spam I couldn't read.... it looked like.... IKILYOUYOUMESSEDWITHMELONGAGOI'VECOMEBACKTunnounseYOUneglektdUSSSSSSS- I stopped reading and thought there must’ve been a hacker on the loose, so I contacted the Local Mods and Global Mods as my last hope. I waited for one, but suddenly I had 13 messages in my inbox, from every Local and Global, saying: Oh NoThInG’s WrOnG yOu’Ve JuSt BeEn JuSt LiKe OnE oF tHoSe SpAmMeRs YoU’vE nEgLeCtEd USSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS……………… At that point I felt like slapping myself, and I did. But it was all real. It was a nightmare in real life, and everyone was against me. I started to wander around the board, but I noticed something….. every time I clicked something, I was jump scared by a screech and a picture of MYSELF with my face in my hands, with bleeding red Letters reading out: YOU’VE NEGLECTED US. I’m about to shatter at this point, knowing this is all happening and getting jump scared everywhere I go normally would do this, and next thing you know I’m at the Memberlist, and I’m relieved. However, there’s music playing……… AUUUUGH, LAVENDER TOWN, LAVENDER TOWN, NO, NO…… My mind is racing and head is throbbing, and I notice……everybody, including newbies……. Has the same picture I was seeing earlier, exceeeeeeeeept…… my eyes were bleeding? My glasses seemed to be completely red, and there was blood trickling down from my face. I’m done with Vizzed board, I’m done, I’ll never come back…. Wait, the tab won’t close!? The Window won’t close…… suddenly, the image is zooming in, in, in, in…… out of nowhere, a hand with a pointing finger shot through my computer screen with a screech, yelling “WHY HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN USYOUPOORFRIENDWHYHAVEYOUFORGOTTENUSYOUMONSTER!?!?!?!?!?”I felt as if a ghost was trying to kill me, I run yelling off my chair I break as I leap off, yelling until I reach the front door. Suddenly, the front door bursts open with every member of Vizzed marching in, all of them with red bleeding eyes, wielding axes and chainsaws. They march after me, chanting the same thing, “WHY HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN USYOUPOORFRIENDWHYHAVEYOUFORGOTTENUSYOUMONSTER!?!?!?!?!?” I try to run, but eventually I trip and I’m backed into a corner, my eyes really showing fear in them. I make a last resort….. “GUYS, IT’S JUST ME, MOTHER3FAN5! I WAS BUSY WITH SCHOOL!” All of my friends come to the front, all wielding axes. They all chant: “YOUABANDONEDUSWETHOUGHTYOUHADDIEDWHYDIDYOUBETRAYUSYOUBACKSTABBERNOWWEWILLKILLYOU!!!!!!~!~!~!” I already have an empty, frightened look on my face, until Gameboy1023, wielding an axe so big no human could lift. I sputter out: “Cmon, Gameboy, be a pal…… keep these guys off!” He suddenly replies with a shriek: “ALLTHATFIGHTINGYOUHADTORTUREDME…… THISISMYCHANCE *Begins to swing axe* GOODBYEMOTHER 3 FAN FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII- The police came to the scene and investigated. They looked at the pool of blood, and noticed two things: a bone, shattered glasses, and a note: “AS HE HAD FORGOTTEN US, HE SHALL BE FORGOTTEN………………..” Samuel always wanted a new computer. Finally, the Laptop came in from Ebay. He started it as soon as it was out of the box. As it came to the desktop, there seemed to still be a Google Chrome tab open……….. Well, was it good? I hope it was somewhat likeable~ |
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(edited by Mother3fan5 on 11-28-13 12:20 PM) Post Rating: 2 Liked By: GameBoy1023, patar4097,
11-27-13 03:02 PM
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That was incredibly good. I liked everything about it. I hope you write more of these because I would be interested in reading more. Awesome Job!!! |
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11-27-13 03:08 PM
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Haha that was awesome and hilarious! In a good way . I really liked the ending, too. Nice job. |
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Well, How do I put... this...
Evil, Mr. Burns, Saturn, Moderator, Squiggly, Axe, Blood, Monster, 79....... Ehh, It was good. The red in your layout went with the post, Scary, JUST HATRED FROM YOUR FREINDS. And me thinking "I'm The Boss" NOW! This is one of the highest quality pasta's I've ever Also, With that, Mother3fan5, Which song should I listen to for the next seven years, The Monster By Eminem ft. Rihhana Or a bunch of disturbing video game music? Evil, Mr. Burns, Saturn, Moderator, Squiggly, Axe, Blood, Monster, 79....... Ehh, It was good. The red in your layout went with the post, Scary, JUST HATRED FROM YOUR FREINDS. And me thinking "I'm The Boss" NOW! This is one of the highest quality pasta's I've ever Also, With that, Mother3fan5, Which song should I listen to for the next seven years, The Monster By Eminem ft. Rihhana Or a bunch of disturbing video game music? |
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11-27-13 04:07 PM
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....... ................. ...................................... Well...... That was a lot to take in. But I would never do that, we all knew you were busy. If you died, you still wouldn't be forgotten, we're all an important part of vizzed's history after all, even if it's a very little part. But if you had forgotten us, we'd understand. Friends come and go, they're always busy with their lives. Everybody can't remember everything--even some of their friends, or favorite websites. So I'd like to say: Welcome Back! ................. ...................................... Well...... That was a lot to take in. But I would never do that, we all knew you were busy. If you died, you still wouldn't be forgotten, we're all an important part of vizzed's history after all, even if it's a very little part. But if you had forgotten us, we'd understand. Friends come and go, they're always busy with their lives. Everybody can't remember everything--even some of their friends, or favorite websites. So I'd like to say: Welcome Back! |
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11-27-13 06:42 PM
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hilacle : I know~ It's just inspired from the awkward feeling when I first came along back. Writing the creepypasta got it out. GameBoy1023 : It was..... fitting to have you axe me, it seemed. Oh, and monster. Popeye116 : MoblinGardens : Thanks~! GameBoy1023 : It was..... fitting to have you axe me, it seemed. Oh, and monster. Popeye116 : MoblinGardens : Thanks~! |
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Mother3fan5 : I thought Monsters and disturbing video game music related to your story. And those songs relate to how scary it is. |
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Great job! I really liked it! I think it was actually a little bit funny! I didn't expect that at all from a creepypasta. |
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Well, I hate to be Mr. Bad Guy, especially with all of the positive feedback you got here, but I don't think the ~sakura~ part was in good taste. It seemed like a mockery of her (though I know that wasn't how you meant it at all). It felt a bit insensitive to a real life person with a terminal illness. Unfortunately, I couldn't bring myself to finish the rest of the story after seeing that, but if it was like the beginning, I'm sure it was good.
I would like to ask if you could edit that part out, out of respect to ~sakura~, not out of respect to me. I have no right to ask you to do that, myself. I just think it would go a long way in showing and paying respects, you know? Anyway, I honestly mean no hate here, and I am glad to see you posting in this forum. I enjoy the stories forum a lot, and seeing it being used regularly now, excites me. I would like to ask if you could edit that part out, out of respect to ~sakura~, not out of respect to me. I have no right to ask you to do that, myself. I just think it would go a long way in showing and paying respects, you know? Anyway, I honestly mean no hate here, and I am glad to see you posting in this forum. I enjoy the stories forum a lot, and seeing it being used regularly now, excites me. |
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that was awesome. :3 it kept me reading thats for sure. just one question, did i have an axe or a chainsaw? i'm just wondering. mwhahahahaahahahah mwhahahahaahahahah |
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Well I wasn't expecting that.. xD
I really enjoyed it, you didn't overdo anything in my opinion. It's funny how people can get so mad at someone because they were away at school I'd say this is pretty good for your first creepypasta. keep it up! I really enjoyed it, you didn't overdo anything in my opinion. It's funny how people can get so mad at someone because they were away at school I'd say this is pretty good for your first creepypasta. keep it up! |
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