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09-11-13 04:54 PM
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Ok for all those who have not seen the other chapters here are the links . 1 and 2 : https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=65147 . Chapter 3 : https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=65171 . That has 2 parts so scroll down after you read the first part . Chapter 4 : https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=65171 . This also has two parts so scroll down after you read the first . Chapter 5 : https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=65171 . That also has two parts so yeah . Do what you know you should do ![]() Here it is. Chapter 6 . Enjoy ![]() Zed and his crew and ship after being semi ravaged by the waterfalls are now ropeless and there fore sail less. John : " Captain . Ship off the port bow " Zed - " Alright get ready . We are going to get us some rope " . The Unlucky Charm sails toward the ship in range and approach it looking like another passer by . Then at the right moment ..... Zed - " Now !!! " The crew and captain drop planks from their ship to the other and board the vessel . The ship and its crew turn out to be one of privateers and not pirates . They all point their guns at Zed and his crew . Zed - " Well then. Well this was unexpected " The captain was named Drake and was sent by England to bring spices and such from the Caribbean to England . Drake - " And what do we have here ? A group of lousy , filthy , backstabbing and caniving pirates ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() The Unlucky Charm was now sailing like new again and Zed was in range of the Bog of the Beast . Mark - " Land hoe !!!! " The ship docked on an island that did not look too attractive for the sand was not white a or sand colored but rather a purplish blue color . Zed looked araound and could see but one person on the isle apart from him , his crew and his prisoner . Hermit - " Hello there" Zed - " Ahhh !!! . You spooked me there. Wait ? Weren't you the hermit that gave me the map ? Hermit - " Yes ![]() That was 6 . 7 Is coming up soon ![]() ![]() Here it is. Chapter 6 . Enjoy ![]() Zed and his crew and ship after being semi ravaged by the waterfalls are now ropeless and there fore sail less. John : " Captain . Ship off the port bow " Zed - " Alright get ready . We are going to get us some rope " . The Unlucky Charm sails toward the ship in range and approach it looking like another passer by . Then at the right moment ..... Zed - " Now !!! " The crew and captain drop planks from their ship to the other and board the vessel . The ship and its crew turn out to be one of privateers and not pirates . They all point their guns at Zed and his crew . Zed - " Well then. Well this was unexpected " The captain was named Drake and was sent by England to bring spices and such from the Caribbean to England . Drake - " And what do we have here ? A group of lousy , filthy , backstabbing and caniving pirates ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() The Unlucky Charm was now sailing like new again and Zed was in range of the Bog of the Beast . Mark - " Land hoe !!!! " The ship docked on an island that did not look too attractive for the sand was not white a or sand colored but rather a purplish blue color . Zed looked araound and could see but one person on the isle apart from him , his crew and his prisoner . Hermit - " Hello there" Zed - " Ahhh !!! . You spooked me there. Wait ? Weren't you the hermit that gave me the map ? Hermit - " Yes ![]() That was 6 . 7 Is coming up soon ![]() |
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09-14-13 03:04 PM
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Very nice zed will there be a cracken in one chapter? Very nice zed will there be a cracken in one chapter? |
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09-14-13 03:59 PM
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nzip : No there will be no Kraken . But I put a larger bear like creature and there will be the Lockness Monster in another. There were also some sharks in one. Maybe I can put some more sharks in my other one ![]() ![]() |
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09-14-13 04:15 PM
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If you are open to suggestions, maybe you can add a new character - a rival with enormous pride and a huge ego. He/she doesn't work for the good or bad side, but may be steered to work for one in a certain situation if his/her pride may be at stake. He/she is constantly a thorn in Zed's side. Anyways, your story is working out fantastic, so there's no need for new additions. Just a suggestion, that's all. Keep up the good work! Anyways, your story is working out fantastic, so there's no need for new additions. Just a suggestion, that's all. Keep up the good work! |
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Sidewinder : In the real POTC That person would be Barbosa. And I was thinking that person in this series could be Captain Roger . I think it was in his intro but if it wasn't then I am sorry for that. What do you think this character would look like. Name ? And does he have a crew . i specified " He " ![]() ![]() |
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Mr. Zed : Well, the character should be for you to decide! But if you ask me, maybe he can be sort of like a "Sonic vs Knuckles" thing, where Sonic would be Zed and Knuckles would be the rival. So you may possibly have the rival stronger in a certain category than Zed, and maybe a short rambunctious guy. He does have a crew, a substantial amount, and two guys are his close "mates", one smart guy and one-not-so smart guy. His name is for you to decide, I really am not so creative as you would be for this story. If the rival is indeed Captain Roger, maybe this little guy can be some sort of sidekick to Roger. Well, the character should be for you to decide! But if you ask me, maybe he can be sort of like a "Sonic vs Knuckles" thing, where Sonic would be Zed and Knuckles would be the rival. So you may possibly have the rival stronger in a certain category than Zed, and maybe a short rambunctious guy. He does have a crew, a substantial amount, and two guys are his close "mates", one smart guy and one-not-so smart guy. His name is for you to decide, I really am not so creative as you would be for this story. If the rival is indeed Captain Roger, maybe this little guy can be some sort of sidekick to Roger. |
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Sidewinder : Well Adding a new character with sidekicks would have me making even more dialogues for the sidekicks and the character . So I think I am going to make him Roger's Ally . Not too much of a sidekick but he does work for Roger . Thanks for the ideas bro ![]() ![]() |
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Hilarious as usual! "He'll Also... "Oh, well, in that case, I am no the captain, he is." ![]() Nice historical reference with Drake. Makes it feel more real. "He'll Also... "Oh, well, in that case, I am no the captain, he is." ![]() Nice historical reference with Drake. Makes it feel more real. |
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