Now this thread is based of my bio . It  comprises of the story of a captain who constantly has to settle debts made earlier in his life time. The story has different books and chapters. Different books will consist of different characters. But I will outline the characters for each book.


Main characters for this book includes - Captain Zed . Amy Heart . Mathew . Mark . Luke . John . Lord Herrald . Captain Dedmond.  And maybe Captain  Jolly Roger but I am not sure as yet


Born on boxing day Capt. Zed was meant to be a taker rather than giver . From a tender age he was exposed to thievery , robbery , and of course piracy. Zed started out as a cabin boy but then almost had to walk the plank ( with heavy ankle weights ) because someone found out he was stealing from the captain Harvy . Zed later commited mutiny and overthrew captain Harvey with the help of his long time friend Delroy Dredson but everyone else called him Dedmond. Together they sailed the seas plundering every ship in site. Zed and Dedmond were the best of friends until Zed made a deal with a strange shadowy pirate that would change Dedmond's life forever . When Zed had gotten his wish and was to fulfill his part of the deal he , of course ; being the pirate he be did not fullfill this promise . As punishment Dredson was turned into the entity of death with rotting bones and flesh , cursed by the pirate . Now Dedmond was to go around pludering souls that die by his sword or aboard his ship and transporting the afterlife . Every Friday 13th of every year , Dedmond had to carry all the souls encased in his sword to his former mortal body which acts as a portal to the afterlife. Now Dedmond wanted to kill Zed but of course did not get the chance to . Dedmond can also only exist in the night . As a result of this A storm cloud appears where every Dedmond and his crew go .
Weaponry : Zed walks with a standard pirate sword and a gun . He is semi abidextrous but will only swordfight with his right hand if he simulteaneously shooting with his left as it is the only hand that can shoot with . Zed's gun sling is on this right thigh which means he pulls out the gun with his left hand. So to is the location of his swordholder.
Zed's ship is comprised of five canons on each side . It has Red sails an looks like any other pirate ship .
Dedmond carries two guns . One on each foot. His sword is used to reap the souls of those who perish by its blade or aboard his ship. Dedmond's ship has the unique ability to turn invisible at midnight . Dedmond's ship has eight cannons on each side and is your standard graveyard vessel . Complete with boats made from bones to the flag actually having a real skull and cross bones attached to it .
This is where Zed's adventure begins . There will be some characters which I will introduce as they come in. Dialogue will indicated by the use of dashes or hyphens or quotation marks.
Book 1 : The monster slayer " Captain Zed " . ( This is the title not the dialogue ) . Chapter one : Escape
Executioner - " Zed . You have commited crimes against the law and crown of Scotland . You have done these things of a sound mind and with being in full mental health. " . Zed - " That sounds about right . Go on  . Executioner - " You know the crimes that you have commited and the penalty of these is death." Zed - " And what kind of death will I be facing ?" Executioner - " You will be boiled in oil ." Zed. - " Well that sounds very unpleasant . Can I at least have a last meal ? I would prefer a banana please ." Now even when staring death right in the face Zed still managed to keep his cool . Of course the cunning captain had a plan . He was just waiting for the right moment. He was being carried in a rectangular cage held up by six men. Three on each side. When Zed is finished eating his banana he first sides his hand down to reach for the key . And with steady hands , completes step one. Zed now every so skillfully throws the peel a few feet in front of the first carrier. 3 2 1 and First carrier on the left side slips causing the entire group of men to fall and Zed to escape using the key * . Zed now starts running and running and ......... now he is jogging .... and starts running again until finally reaches a horse. Zed jumps on the horse but the only problem is he is on backwards . The horse still runs but now Zed has to fend off the men that were after him. Passing a crate full of apples he grabs it and starts chucking apples at the men behind him. When he was finally out of apples he throws the crate at one guy . Now he passes a rum barrel. Slices it open and immediately shoots at it causing an explosion right behind him. He was now free and was heading to a store to get some clothes to blend in .
Chapter 2 : Breaking in and out
Zed has now found clothes and blends in perfectly with the Scottish commoners. The only thing left to do now is to break into one of the prisons and free his shipmates who were caught along with him. Zed - * Walks with head down and walks into somebody * . " How about the next time you are walking open your eyes so you can see ?" Woman - " How about ..... Wait I know that voice."  . Zed - " No . No you don't. Um... I am a very good impersonator . I have a large aray of voices. Now. On your way. " Woman - " I know you from somewhere. Only one person has that voice and its ..... ZZZEEDDDDDYYYY !!!!!!!!" Zed - Pipe down woman . You want the entire Scotland to know where I am ? And my name is Zed . Not Zeddy ." Woman - " Remember me ? We met back in Ginaue." Zed - Ahh seamonkeys . Amy . What a pleasure meeting you here . Not really ." Amy - You ran away when I told you I lov ..." Zed - * Interupts * I ran away cause you talked too much . I wonder if I turn myself I could be held prisoner instead of being around you so much ?" Amy - " What are you doing here ?" Zed - " If you must know I am trying to free some inmates . I need a crew . Amy - " I can help with that. Meet me here tommorrow and I'll help you help them escape. Zed - " Wait. You have been around me too long to not have some kind of demand ." Amy - " Yes. When I help you escape I get to travel with you ." Zed * Speaks to himself * " Lets see I'll have a crew but I'll have to deal with her. On the other hand I can not have a crew and get caught and die . Meh . Fine . We have a deal ." Amy - " Just don't run away like you did last time or I'll tell everyone your location ." Zed - " Whatever ."
The next day the two meet up at the spot specified by yesterdays agreements . Zed - " Now then. What is the plan ? Amy - " We go in . Knock out some guards. Escape and run as fast as we can ." Zed - " I could of thought of that . " Now Amy walks up to the guard at the gate of the prison and asks him directions to the court house as a distraction while Zed descends from a rope which he found next to a horse stand in the city . He sneaks up behind the guard without making a single sound and * Bonk . Guard falls to floor . * Zed steals the guard's clothes and disguises himself . Now the two approach the prison as if they worked there . Amy now stops to ask directions for the cells and of course the guards get knocked out afterwards. Now they are in the prison at the cells only needing the keys to unlock them . Amy points out to Zed that a guard to his left is holding said keys. She deliberately drops a book on the floor asking the guard to pick it up . And when he comes back up he is knocked out by the handle of Zed's sword . Matthew - "Hey John . You ever dream of escaping the prison and becoming a pirate who sails the high seas ?" . John - " Nope . And I doubt if that would ever happen anyway ." Mark - " Meh. But if I had the oppurtunity to ditch this place I would take it in a heartbeat." Luke - " I hear you there brother ." Zed - " Alright listen up I am in search of a crew. Now I will set you free but you must promise to work for me . Do we have a deal ?" Prisoners - " AAAYYEE !! . " Zed - " Wow. That was easier than I though it would be . "
The all the prisoners were now set free and on the outside running for their freedom. Zed noticed the horse stand that the had passed earlier and grabbed Amy pulling her upon the horse . Everyone else did the same . Sure people noticed that the were escaping but there was not much they could do about it . Zed and his new crew were now at shore just needing a boat to sail in . Amy - " Where is your ship ?" . Zed - " I have no ship .... yet ." Amy - How did you expect to escape without a ship ." Zed - " I did not expect to escape . I just prefer to play along and um... innovate . . That one over there with the red sails looks decent . I'll take that one . " Zed and his crew quickly commendered the vessel and were all aboard except the Captain . Man - " Hold it right there ZED !!!" Zed - " Well if it isn't Lord Herrold the fourth. Come to wish me a farewell ?" Lord Herrold - " I have come to arrest ye far your crimes ." Lord Herrold was medium in build and size and had a red beard . He was Scotish by birth . Zed - " Is there anyway I might be able to pursuade you ? Anyway at all ?" Lord Herrold - Sarry Zed but ye have nuthing in yar possesion to offr me . " Zed - " You can take Amy . Heheh ." Amy - " What was that ?" Zed - Nothing." img src=images/smilies/biggrin.gif align=absmiddle>. * The Lord points sword at Zed. * Lord Herrald - " Cuff him and his crew . The woman will work for the king. " Amy - " WOMAN ?!!!!" Zed - Shush Amy . Lord Herrald - " Seize them !!!" Zed - " Wait !! Your fish supplies are dwindling aren't they ? Yes The Lockness monster has been eating your fish and terrorizing your ships has't it ?" Lord Herrald - " Yes . And what do ye intend to do about it ?" Zed - " Well what if I brought you back its head ?" The beach echoed with laughter . Even Zed's crew were giggling at the comment made by the Captain . Lord Herrald - " You can't kill o'l Nessy. You'll die !!! Wait a minute ? Fine . I'll give three weeks to bring me back the head of the Lockness monster and If ya don't then I'll send a party to sink your ship but spear you . I want to see you boiled in oil . " Zed - Sounds fair . " The two shake hands in agreement . Now Zed and his crew are allowed to leave the harbour in peace
 

Thats all for now. Tell me what you think

Mr. Zed : Talk about long stories! This is amazing! Slight over use of quotations, periods, and dashes, but overall it is long! I like the plot of this story!

DittoDude44 : Wow . Thanks. I actually wrote this whilst listening to Pirates of The Caribbean soundtrack . I am not finished yet and I have lots more Ideas. I will not write all at once so it won't seem so lengthy next time . It was the Intro so that is why it seemed so long , Wadaya think of my layout? Tornado Mudkip is a misstress at them

Interesting, this is a really great story. It is really........ different. Good job!

Nice job dude! Very creative! And really long!

Wow . I don'y know what to say actually. I did not expect so many people to actually see this . Thanks . I am going to make a thread for every chapter in case no one replies after me . I 'll start on it right now . 

Would you say this is more fictional, or is it more about you?