I will write anyone a story of anything they want it to be about.
It will be a short story but not inappropriate.
It can be any amount of viz, just at least more than 100.
It will be appreciated.
So yeah, want me to write a story I will do it for some vizzed.

I'll send you 1,500 Viz (at first, and more later) for a story about forgiveness learned within a family.  The father is an alcoholic, and the mother is depressed.  Would like her to learn something from her child(ren) in a profound way, if you can.  The characters can be as developed as you want them to be, but would like the ending to focus to be on the mother's realization of something that implies that she can look to the future more optimistically.  Can't wait to see what you come up with!

supernerd117 : Ok, here it comes! I will make the son the main character but the mum is the main plot.


Tommy, a smart boy, active and brave. Is a very bright boy. But then, he is poor, no tuition and his dad... is an alcoholic.
His mother is depressed about this and Tommy will try and get a solution.

Tommy enters the house, seeing his baby sister and brother running around, nappies/diapers not changed. Food all over their bibs.
He then saw his mother depressed.
"Mother, why are you depressed? Is there anything I can help you with?"
She did not answer, then the door swung open and hit a fly on the wall!
"Aye! Women, make me a sandwich!" This was his no good, cat stealing father. As he entered the room.
"Please Sam! I am not in the mood for your drunken games!" The Mother said.
"Shut it!" Said the father.
He sent a slap across her face and started abusing her!
"Dad, stop!" Tommy said.
"When was you the man of the house you little baby!" He kicked Tommy sending him on the wall.
The babies started crying, then suddenly. Tommy's brother Jim came downstairs and saw his dad doing so.
"Get off her!" Jim jumped on his dad and pinned him on the ground. He sent a punch to his dad face knocking him out.
Jim was 21 years old and the new carer of the family.
"Get him out of here! Call the police!" Jim shouted.
"No! It is just that he is drunk! He needs rehab!" Said the mother.
"Mum, will you ever have the courage to get a divorce?!" Shouted Jim.
"No! This will bring more trouble to the family! We need to send him to rehabilitation!"
This decision was final. Nothing will change their mothers mind.
The next day, Tommy was tormented at school for his dad being a alcoholic.
"Ha ha! Poor boy! No wonder you can not even buy a candy bar!" Said one of the bullies.
"Shut up... I don't see your family try anything but to scam people off with car insurance." Tommy said.
"Probably you have to share rations, but your mum must always eat all of them." 
"Don't say anything about my mum punk!" 
The bully charged at Tommy and pinned him to the ground!
Countless of punches later a crowd formed!
"Kick him in the knees!" Said one of the people in the crowd, not knowing who he was cheering for.
"BREAK IT UP!" It was Miss.Crabapple, she bullied Tommy but did not allow fights against him.
"We all know we should not fight people who have no education! They don't know how to throw a punch!" Laughed Miss.Crabapple.
"No wonder she can't marry someone... What a hippo." Tommy said under his breathe.
Miss.Crabapple was a fat bossy lady, she even bullies his mum as she did when she was a child.
This was one of the reasons why the teacher bullies Tommy, he is smarter than her but she just likes to boast about how she is wealthier than him.
When Tommy got home, he saw his dad, apologizing to his sexist drunken comment to his mum. He explained he was very drunk that day after a party with his friends. He promised he will go to rehab. He phoned the rehabilitation people and they were coming to pick him up.
His mum though, was still depressed, she was barely paid at work and might of turned to alcohol. But she did not want to give up now!
She needed some advice from experts or from her own children, she knew that Tommy had a bad time at school as she did at home. So there was no point giving up.
"Tommy, do you have any way I could stop myself from drinking because of depression?" The mother asked.
"Calm." This was Tommy's only answer. The mother was confused about "calm". Then it snapped into her head!
Tommy is bullied everyday at school, but his mum never gets any complaints! Then she knew, she had to stay calm and take what is happening to her.
The next day, Tommy went to school. He was taking his own words as calm. He only had two friends so it was not much of a big deal of being bullied, he at least had two good friends.
One of them is called Jose, he is a immigrant from Mexico and his parents seeked a new life in England.
The other one is called Joseph, he is a African American coming to England, simply because he did not like America along with his parents. In class, he was sleeping in class because he stayed up late, he decided to take it easy.
He was dreaming, a life of his mum and dad. Living a happy life. Having a house, not messy and filled with baby poop.
Suddenly, Miss.Crabapple not even teaching anything but to take the mickey. Woke up Tommy.
"Heh, no wonder you have no education. Like your stupid mother!" Miss Crabapple shouted.
Even the bullies did not laugh at this and knew this was taken to far.
"Hey, miss. Carry on the lesson..." Said Joseph.
"If he has no education why even bother tormenting him? If he is stupid." Said Jose.
"Ummm." Miss.Crabapple was speechless.
"If dumb people want to learn, they need to be awake!" Laughed miss.Crabapple.
"I'm.. not..dumb." Tommy stated.
"Then why are you poor?" Miss Crabapple stated stupidly.
"I AM NOT STUPID!" 
Tommy ran outside of the class!
"Run Tommy! Run as fast as you can!" Shouted Joseph.
Miss.Crabapple chased him. He readied a recorder to see if she says anything rude to him.
He recorded now!
"You stupid! Stupid! Boy! Come back here you little weasel!" Shouted Miss.Crabapple.
Stanley ran across the road as she cursed him. While saying this she said "I am going to sue you! I am going to sue you and your stupid mother!" Suddenly, a car came by and ran her over! Not killing her but injuring her! 
Tommy knew she had a reason to sue him and his family now.
Miss.Crabapple was unconscious.
"Um, 999? I think I ran over some poor sod here. Yes, it is a female." Said the man in a British accent.
A man grabbed Tommy!
"Hey kid... I heard that school teacher was going to try to sue you and your family.." Said the mysterious figure.
"Yes, she was.." Said Tommy.
"Ok, my name is Adam. Adam Phoenix. I will be your lower after this incident. Free of charge. You need one."
This man reminded him of Phoenix Wright from Ace Attorney. But this did not matter in this situation.
The man walked away. And gave Tommy his number.
Tommy went home but his Mum was called to court and it was arranged for tomorrow.
"Oh Tommy... What have we done?" Said his Mum. 
The next day, they were in court and he told his mum about the man who told them to contact him.
The mother got him to come and the Court was in order.
"This is going to be quick..." Said Adam
"Good." Said the mother.
Tommy's dad was in rehab still so Miss.Crabapple could of used a statement that Tommy was raised badly.
Jim was there with the two babies.
A argument was going on about his need to run away from school.
"She embarrassed him in front of the whole class! She can not be a teacher!" Stated Adam.
"And here is the proof!" He played a recording of what Tommy has recorded. Tommy had given the proof to Adam!
"This is a outrage!" Stated Miss.Crabapple
"This is the proof! She called him a weasel!" Stated Adam.
Miss.Crabapples Lawyer was speechless.
"Screw this! I am out of here!" The lawyer ran out.
This was finished.
"Thank you Adam." Said the mother.
But her depression was not finished.
"Mum, do not do anything like I did. Be calm..." Said Tommy.
She agreed with him.
She had to get back to her job and carry on with life.
Miss.Crabapple has been sued. Yes. But he told his mum. Even if a certain person was annoying you. Don't sue them. Because you could of lost.
She looked to the future and what will happen if she got more money.
It turned out she has got a fair amount of money after going back to work.
She could afford the most simplest things in the world now, it was all she ever wanted. A life with the simplest needs or more.
The most simple needs.

Done, give me as much vizzed you want if you enjoyed it
Remember, it has to be more than 100 Viz.

I liked that his lawyer reminded him of Pheonix Wright.  I thought that was funny.  As for the rest of the story, I feel it was a good bit too intense throughout with too many exclamation points used.  It needs a bit of work, but you've definitely got potential there.  If you like revising your stories, try making it a bit less intense next time.  I found it hard to focus on the positive messages because of all the violence and shouting going on.  I hope this helps you become a better writer.  Thanks for putting out the effort!  I really appreciate the time you put into this.  Prepare for more Viz :-)

zeross121 :
Ok, but should the person I am writing as be a raider/fiend as well?
I would like to know so. What do you want the characters to be characterized?
Just say the word.

GamingMonkey : He was born into the life of a fiend raised on drugs to be a killer like them. I'm not picky, I'm just curious to see it. Any other questions just use your best guess.

I'll give about... 1,500 Vizz for a tale about "Medea". Or her "Two sons".
You get to pick.

There are so many "Bad Girls" in comics, Movies, and Video Games that I think it to be an interesting idea to go over one of the first ones that they do not teach in schools.
The alternative (her two sons) would be interesting as well. Either / OR / Both. (Does not matter.)

Here is a link to the "Wiki" for Research.

http://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=medea&source=web&cd=1&sqi=2&ved=0CCoQFjAA&url=http%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FMedea&ei=3rLdUbvBAeigiQKjsIDwDA&usg=AFQjCNHlaLhZ14VW4xttle4s_5c0QcCz1A

Hope that Loads. (If it does not? then type up "Medea" and "Myth" together in the search bar and check it out.)
Good Luck.

Good Luck To All.
I'm done. Stick a fork in me.
Peace.

zeross121 : Sorry for the delay! My computer was messing up.
I will begin! Thanks for the patience!
Nightrider. A fiend born in the Mojave wasteland and was grown to be a fiend. His mum, a traveler from the wastes. Was forced against her will to make this baby. His dad? His name was Clubber. He was a known fiend amongst the fiends. He used a flamer, it was used with flamer fuel! One day, he found her and you know the rest. She was only a pawn to give the baby the milk. After he was fit and active. She was executed. Tied on a rope on a stick, then shot. Nightrider was now motherless. He only had a drug induced, crazy, psychopathic and drunk dad. When he grew up, he was a fiend...
He was also born in 2260.

21 years later....

"Ok, Nightrider. I got a mission for you..." This was motor-runner. Leader of the fiends and the sanest one out of all of them. He could take control of all these psychopaths.
"What is it? Killing? Taking drugs?! AMBUSHING!" Said Nightrider in a crazed voice.
"Well, we just need you to get some Psycho from the Great Khans. They are a powerful gang. So do not screw up and keep your mouth shut when doing this. Also, if you see some NCR troops or a wastelander in a armored vault jumpsuit. Kill em." Motor Runner explained to Nightrider. "And no. Your dad is not coming with you. Just some other fiends. Wheeler, Fish and Wrench. They are your team mates for this mission. So don't play around. Got that?" Said Motor Runner.
"Yes I do... Boss." Said Nightrider.
"You do know where Red Rock Canyon is? Do you?" Said Motor Runner.
"Yeah, I have a map." Said Nightrider.
"Good."
Nightrider gathered up the other fiends and were going.
"ALRIGHT! WE GET THIS PSYCHO DRUG AND WE WILL GET HIGH ONCE AGAIN!" Said Nightrider.
"YEAH!" Said the fiends in unison.
"Okay! Lets go!"
They set out in the Mojave wasteland. It was dark and cold. Maybe they will encounter a death claw. Not a super mutant. Most of them are in Jacobstown. But what if a Nightkiin came? They can use their stealth boys on the fiends and kill all of them! But Nightrider was determined for anything.
"Hey guys, you hear that?!" Said one of fiends.
"No, you must be drunk." Said another one.
Then suddenly! A blade swung across one of their heads! Blood gushing everywhere! It was a nightkiin!
"KILL IT!" Said one of the fiends.
"ARGHHHHH!" The nightkiin was moaning this.
Then suddenly, nightrider aimed his hunting rifle to the nightkins head then BAM!
The nightkin was dead.
"Holy moly..." Said one of the fiends.
"TAKE ITS STEALTH BOY!" Said one of the fiends.
They all dashed to it like a stampede of bulls to grab it and kept on pushing and shoving each other to get it!
"I GOT IT YOU FOOLS!" Said one of the fiends. He used it and disappeared! Not to mention he left the group.
"What an idiot! Stealth boys do not last forever. He can die in the wastes!" Said Nightrider.
They made their way to Red Rock canyon and reached there. Finally.
"Phew, now lets get that Psycho." Said Nightrider.
"Right"
When they entered Red Rock Canyon, they got the psycho from the great khans.
Jessup, a notable members of the Great Khans, gave it to them.
"Just don't waste it, I heard some guy that I just shot in the head is still alive. Watch out, he will be looking for treasure. I will be in Boulder City kicking some NCR out of there. Even killing them." Said Jessup.
"Yeah, whatever." Said nightrider.
The Fiend group went back to the fiends and noticed they were not there! But this was nothing to worry about.
Someone has left a note with bad handwriting saying "Meet us at vault 3".
"Hmm, looks like we got vault number 3?!" Said Fish.
"Aye, you three have not talked that much? Fish, Wheeler Wrench. Even if you were the main ones to protect me." Said Nightrider.
"Yes. Protect you. You punk. Not to talk to you." Said Wrench.
"Fair enough".
They continued there way to vault 3. Suddenly, they saw NCR troops! Scouting!
"Aw man... I am too tired to spill some blood, and fiends are never tired to do these killings." Said Wheeler.
"Shut up." Said Nightrider.
"We just need to get past them... Who has a switchblade?"
"I do..." Said a random fiend.
"SLIT THEIR THROATS WITH IT!" Said that fiend.
Nightrider sneaked up to one with the sniper rifle. Then he sent the knife across his neck! This made the NCR's neck bleed and he fell to his death.
"Hmmm, a sniper rifle." Said Nightrider.
He went into prone and aimed around the whole area to find some NCR. But then, he just saw a veteran, and trust me, they can take bullets. Sometimes in the head!
"Ughh. The armor is covering his heart, might as well shoot his head. Since I can take the chance." Before doing so, he injected himself with some psycho drugs.
"Wooh! Now I am pumped!!!" He said really hyped.
He then aimed at the veterans head and fired!
This hit him with force and striked him down!
"WOO, GET THEM GUYS!" Shouted Nightrider with a loud and powerful shout!
They all got up and fired at the NCR troops and they were falling to the ground like headless chickens!
A few fiends died and their heads were splattered against the walls.
"I thought we were supposed to sneak past them... Not kill all of them!" Said Wrench
"Yeah, but they would of spot us!" Said Nightrider
"Why are your eyes red anyway? Have you been using that psycho?" Said Wrench
"No." Said Nightrider.
Nightrider was lying and he knew if they found out he would get severe punishments from his father and Motor-Runner.
They made their way to Vault 3, then seeing some Khans delivering some psycho also.
"You are late.." Said Clubber, Nightriders dad.
"Cook-cook got some new meat, and you missed the fun... She escaped though... Some NCR found her and took her back."
"Ha ha. Very funny, but I do not give a damn about women right now, here are the psycho you asked for. Give it to Motor-Runner." Said Nightrider.
"Good... Good... Go inside the Vault and give it to him at the lower levels." Said Clubber.
Nightrider entered the vault.
He saw dead inhabitants of Vault 3 and some prisoners. He saw one of them which was a ghoul.
"What the hell are you looking at smoothskin?" Said the ghoul.
"Nothing... Zombie." Said Nightrider.
He saw Motor-Runner with his two dogs. Bonegnash and GhashBone.
"Hmm, if you did not get the right stuff, I will be making the dogs eat you and the great khans." Said Motor-Runner.
"Here is it." Nightrider threw the bag towards him.
"Good...Good..." Said Motor-Runner.
"How about you getting into the real business?"
"You see... there is some gang... A small gang compared to our group of raiders... They are called the scorpions. These deadbeats think they own west side. Let's pay them a visit and teach them a lesson.. I am not going though. You, your dad, a few other fiends and those 3 guys helping you..... They will be with you. Now go!
They made their way to westide, it was a few walks away from the strip so they hoped the NCR would butt out of this. they just needed to get the scorpions attention, everyone seemed to go inside. A man even let a super mutant hide with him.
Then,  the scorpions came....
They did not realise it was us at first.
"Aye, you are on our turf." Said one of them.
"You know wha.... Oh man... Oh man! It's the fiends! Run!"
"Shoot them!" Said Clubber. "Before they run away!"
We aimed our rifles and small guns at them and fired.
Most of them were getting shot and most of them were fighting back.
Suddenly, a man. With Vault 21 armor. Came down the roads and shot one of the Scorpions and Fiends head at the same time!
"What the hell!" Said Fish.
Then a bullet was sent to Wheelers chest!
"Run...." Said Wheeler, in his dying breathe.
All the fiends were running for their lifes, and most were getting shot!
Fish and Wrench escaped, just a few bullets flying through their shoulders (above).
Nightrider got into cover after being shot in the elbow!
He sat down and kept on injecting himself with psycho.
"I live for psycho! I live for psycho!" He then saw his dad dead, right next to him.
"I... live.. for... Psycho. Not dad." Said the delusional Nightrider.
Then the mysterious man approached him....
"Any last words?" Said the man...
"You... your that courier." Said Nightrider.
"Kill me then..."
Then there was a bam!
Nightriders days of raiding was over. No more psycho and no more life.
After this event, the man took out the fiends in Vault 3. Killing Motor runner and taking his hat for a trophy.
It seemed he pretended to be a Great Khan to transport some psycho to them.
The fiends were over, They were to interest in drugs that it got them killed. The NCR has won this war.
But not the war with the legion. This was most of the fiends final wish. That the NCR would just die. Forever and forgotten...
War.. War never changes.

Done I hoped you liked it.
Correct me if I have done any spelling mistakes. I hoped you enjoyed it!

I am sending you some Viz now. 

I want a random story, a fan fic, about me. XD Whatever you can come up with. 

Write me a story that involves magic, curses, gemstones, orbs, legacies, policies, amnesia and all that stuff. Make it really really really funny at the beginning, then start making it serious with a bit of humor in the middle, then go back to making it funny, and then make it all sad and really serious, and the end... make it happy. I want a good happy ending that will make me smile. (I'll send you 300 viz)

thing1 :  
hilacle :
Barathemos : I will do it as soon as possible. I will think about the story.


zeross121 : Yes, I do infact watch anime. That explains my layout XD.
Ok, whats the story? I need a anime that I will probably know or that I can easily do research on.

GamingMonkey : Sorry to be impatient but, it's been more then a week and you haven't wrote me the story yet. When will you write it?

Barathemos :
hilacle :
zeross121 : Sorry for the inactivity. My charger port literally melted and I could not play my laptop. I will now start making the stories and tell me the payment you have gave me and I will decrease it. 

I have made a lot of viz, so how will you take 600-1,000?

Barathemos :
You know the Meta world peace story? What do you want the plot to be like. Because the stories that I couldn't finish are very complicated to be honest.