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A Poem About Me
my first poem i did back when i was in school.....
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07-02-13 12:04 PM
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um hello again this is my 11th thread and what I'm going to show you now is I did a poem back when I was in secondary school and I'm not sure what you will think of it....

A Poem About Me

Am I funny?
am I smart?
am I pretty?
or maybe I'm ugly and a nobody

I want my friends to stay
or should I go away

what can I be?
what can my friends see?

is there a way
if anybody can say

I'm sorry I did not mean to be mean to you
or are they kidding me

I don't know what to do
if only who

by eni from eni


sigh.....I had a good reason to write that I was so hurt back in secondary school because I was disabled I made that to never make any friends but now.... I'm not so sad to see this I have friends here on vizzed who back me up no matter how horrible my life is and care for me deeply thank you my friends your the best thing that's ever happened to me.....
um hello again this is my 11th thread and what I'm going to show you now is I did a poem back when I was in secondary school and I'm not sure what you will think of it....

A Poem About Me

Am I funny?
am I smart?
am I pretty?
or maybe I'm ugly and a nobody

I want my friends to stay
or should I go away

what can I be?
what can my friends see?

is there a way
if anybody can say

I'm sorry I did not mean to be mean to you
or are they kidding me

I don't know what to do
if only who

by eni from eni


sigh.....I had a good reason to write that I was so hurt back in secondary school because I was disabled I made that to never make any friends but now.... I'm not so sad to see this I have friends here on vizzed who back me up no matter how horrible my life is and care for me deeply thank you my friends your the best thing that's ever happened to me.....
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07-02-13 12:09 PM
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Eniitan : Nice poem, enii! Enjoyed reading it, of course I back you up. You are not ugle and you are not a nobody.
Eniitan : Nice poem, enii! Enjoyed reading it, of course I back you up. You are not ugle and you are not a nobody.
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Ummmm Nice poem... it is a bit creepy but it does describe that you were feeling lonely (or at least that's what I thought) but it was Interesting. But If you Have more poems I love to hear them! This has been a short But still great message from Paper Luigi!
Ummmm Nice poem... it is a bit creepy but it does describe that you were feeling lonely (or at least that's what I thought) but it was Interesting. But If you Have more poems I love to hear them! This has been a short But still great message from Paper Luigi!
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Nice Poem Eniitan! I enjoyed to read your Poem. 
If you want, can you make some more Poems soon? I really like them a lot you must know that!
Nice Poem Eniitan! I enjoyed to read your Poem. 
If you want, can you make some more Poems soon? I really like them a lot you must know that!
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Wow! Nice poem Eniitan! Don't worry! You are definitely not ugly, and you are indeed somebody! Somebody amazing I can say!

It's nice to know more about you and keep up the great work my friend!
Wow! Nice poem Eniitan! Don't worry! You are definitely not ugly, and you are indeed somebody! Somebody amazing I can say!

It's nice to know more about you and keep up the great work my friend!
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Eniitan : I love your poem!!! I really hope I get to read more!!! But the only problem I had with it is that u said something about you being ugly??? Your not ugly at all. You are a beautiful young lady who will blossom into a smart, successful, and beautiful woman. Don't ever doubt your true beauty. Yes people's looks are considered how beautiful or handsome someone is but it's your true beauty that counts. Your true beauty is inside you. It's your personality. You could be the most beautiful women who is the most famous model in the world... But if you had a heart as black as charchol then you are not beautiful. Now if you were really ugly on the outside but had a living, caring, kind-hearted personality... Then that my dear eniitan... Is true beauty. And in all honesty you have both true beauty and outer beauty so your two times as beautiful in my eyes  
Eniitan : I love your poem!!! I really hope I get to read more!!! But the only problem I had with it is that u said something about you being ugly??? Your not ugly at all. You are a beautiful young lady who will blossom into a smart, successful, and beautiful woman. Don't ever doubt your true beauty. Yes people's looks are considered how beautiful or handsome someone is but it's your true beauty that counts. Your true beauty is inside you. It's your personality. You could be the most beautiful women who is the most famous model in the world... But if you had a heart as black as charchol then you are not beautiful. Now if you were really ugly on the outside but had a living, caring, kind-hearted personality... Then that my dear eniitan... Is true beauty. And in all honesty you have both true beauty and outer beauty so your two times as beautiful in my eyes  
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I don't think any of those things are true, you are awesome and this poem is really good to. You have a great talent for writing I must say, you are doing an amazing job with it, Keep up the amazing work and keep making more poems and stories, I enjoy reading them, you do a really good job and I really like and appreciate your work. Keep it up and keep writing!
I don't think any of those things are true, you are awesome and this poem is really good to. You have a great talent for writing I must say, you are doing an amazing job with it, Keep up the amazing work and keep making more poems and stories, I enjoy reading them, you do a really good job and I really like and appreciate your work. Keep it up and keep writing!
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Okay... That was okay.. I only replied because you told me to..
Okay... That was okay.. I only replied because you told me to..
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That was a really good poem! *applauds* Also, you're not nobody or ugly, and you are smart, so don't let anyone else get you down or convince you otherwise, eni!
That was a really good poem! *applauds* Also, you're not nobody or ugly, and you are smart, so don't let anyone else get you down or convince you otherwise, eni!
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Beautiful... Just Beautiful.

You're really nice at making poems... Wait, Ugly and a nobody?! 
Lies!

Really, You gotta keep writing poems... You're more than good at them!

Keep it up, Enii!^^
Beautiful... Just Beautiful.

You're really nice at making poems... Wait, Ugly and a nobody?! 
Lies!

Really, You gotta keep writing poems... You're more than good at them!

Keep it up, Enii!^^
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Nice poem Neatly written and composed. I really Like it, It's very nice Keep it up eni, Infact you kind of inspired me, to perhaps make a poem 1 day Once I learn the basics of doing it..
Nice poem Neatly written and composed. I really Like it, It's very nice Keep it up eni, Infact you kind of inspired me, to perhaps make a poem 1 day Once I learn the basics of doing it..
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Eniitan : Thank you for sharing that poem with all of the users here.You did a very nice job, keep up the good work, and by the way my username is in italic leeters for the rest of today, so feel free to complement on it!!
Eniitan : Thank you for sharing that poem with all of the users here.You did a very nice job, keep up the good work, and by the way my username is in italic leeters for the rest of today, so feel free to complement on it!!
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Wow. I am crying. That was just so beautiful. I loved how you shared that in a poem! It was just so wonderful!
Wow. I am crying. That was just so beautiful. I loved how you shared that in a poem! It was just so wonderful!
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This one is more bitter that I thought "sniff"..Your somebody.."sniff" not a nobody..
Damn it why I'm so emotional about poetry..



This one is more bitter that I thought "sniff"..Your somebody.."sniff" not a nobody..
Damn it why I'm so emotional about poetry..
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