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06-20-13 12:08 AM
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I tried posting my first ever creepy pasta story to Creepypasta and the second I push to add it on the site a moderator looked at it, deleted it, and told me I shouldn't even both writing any more stories.

It made me cry because I thought it was good it had a creepy feeling, a character died, a mysterious evil, maybe it was the touching ending I put in...Compaired to others it must have been to nice.
I tried posting my first ever creepy pasta story to Creepypasta and the second I push to add it on the site a moderator looked at it, deleted it, and told me I shouldn't even both writing any more stories.

It made me cry because I thought it was good it had a creepy feeling, a character died, a mysterious evil, maybe it was the touching ending I put in...Compaired to others it must have been to nice.
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That was a bit harsh are you sure a moderator did that?
A moderator simply trashed a creepy pasta and said those harsh words to you.
That's a bit to far if you ask me.
That was a bit harsh are you sure a moderator did that?
A moderator simply trashed a creepy pasta and said those harsh words to you.
That's a bit to far if you ask me.
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06-20-13 01:12 AM
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I think it was... I lost track of everything except my story 'Cursed Nail.' I haven't even read a Creepypasta in months last one I remember reading was... Attraction mode






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I think it was... I lost track of everything except my story 'Cursed Nail.' I haven't even read a Creepypasta in months last one I remember reading was... Attraction mode






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Have you tries posting your stories on vizzed? You might get good constructive feedback and eventually develop your skill.

Have you tries posting your stories on vizzed? You might get good constructive feedback and eventually develop your skill.

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I was like you once man, I got my reviews frowned upon and trashed, you just cannot let them get to you. This moderator must have a reason, but if you could specify the moderator maybe we'd know if he/she was abusing their mod powers. Anyways, you just have to experiment with different styles of writing. I used to do very sloppy reviews (I am not implying your creepypasta is sloppy), but then I tried making them more formal, give them more backbone and more information. What I cannot stress enough to you is that you can't give up something you like doing or have talent in.
I was like you once man, I got my reviews frowned upon and trashed, you just cannot let them get to you. This moderator must have a reason, but if you could specify the moderator maybe we'd know if he/she was abusing their mod powers. Anyways, you just have to experiment with different styles of writing. I used to do very sloppy reviews (I am not implying your creepypasta is sloppy), but then I tried making them more formal, give them more backbone and more information. What I cannot stress enough to you is that you can't give up something you like doing or have talent in.
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And if you've decided to tell who that mentioned moderator is, please don't post it here out in the public. It would be best if you'll just send it through pm to the staff.
And if you've decided to tell who that mentioned moderator is, please don't post it here out in the public. It would be best if you'll just send it through pm to the staff.
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I know how you feel. My friend Jimmy used to be really nice and he would laugh at all my jokes but now every time I try to say something funny, he just says, "no" or he totally ignores me and makes a joke of his own. I don't even know why I bothered to still hang out with him at school
I know how you feel. My friend Jimmy used to be really nice and he would laugh at all my jokes but now every time I try to say something funny, he just says, "no" or he totally ignores me and makes a joke of his own. I don't even know why I bothered to still hang out with him at school
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PacmanandMariofan : What the heck does that have to do with anything...?

But really, that's harsh. That mod is mean and should be banned.
PacmanandMariofan : What the heck does that have to do with anything...?

But really, that's harsh. That mod is mean and should be banned.
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My story has to do with this topic because something I did wasn't liked...
My story has to do with this topic because something I did wasn't liked...
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Lightning Fang07 : Ouch. . . That is just too harsh. . . What kind of mod would ever do this? Almost all the mods that I know are very kind. . .

That was really mean! Correct me if I am wrong, but I think you should PM the staff members saying who was it and that mod who did it to you will be punished for sure. 

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Lightning Fang07 : Ouch. . . That is just too harsh. . . What kind of mod would ever do this? Almost all the mods that I know are very kind. . .

That was really mean! Correct me if I am wrong, but I think you should PM the staff members saying who was it and that mod who did it to you will be punished for sure. 

Good luck on vizzed!
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I'm going to put the Creepypasta I wrote 'Cursed Nail' here I'd like to know what people think of it... but I'm having second thoughts I feel scared to post it.
I'm going to put the Creepypasta I wrote 'Cursed Nail' here I'd like to know what people think of it... but I'm having second thoughts I feel scared to post it.
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(edited by Lightning Fang07 on 06-20-13 05:43 PM)    

06-20-13 07:54 PM
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Lightning Fang07 :
dont.
how did the mod communicate with you? a private message or a reply to the thread? global mods are responsible for staff so you should send them a message. give them the thread link, tell them what mod did it, If he sent you a message about it take a screenshot and you can send the mod it.
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dont.
how did the mod communicate with you? a private message or a reply to the thread? global mods are responsible for staff so you should send them a message. give them the thread link, tell them what mod did it, If he sent you a message about it take a screenshot and you can send the mod it.
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I'm not going to bother... I'm still writing but I'm just not going to post there anymore...Oh and I'm going to post my story
I'm not going to bother... I'm still writing but I'm just not going to post there anymore...Oh and I'm going to post my story
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(edited by Lightning Fang07 on 06-20-13 09:36 PM)    

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Lightning Fang07 : Dang, that is harsh. As long as you keep writing, you would get better and that would give no one an excuse to delete your story.
Lightning Fang07 : Dang, that is harsh. As long as you keep writing, you would get better and that would give no one an excuse to delete your story.
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Post it somewhere else and link it here so we can read it.
Post it somewhere else and link it here so we can read it.
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Man that sucks, and I agree, that is taking it a bit too far, if it was not in the right place or not getting a lot of views and replies, the least they could do is address, instead of telling you to not even bother. That is terrible to hear. I am sorry about that and I am sure it was a good creepypasta. I would have been happy to read it and I am sure that you put a lot of effort into making it good and worth reading. I am sorry that this happened to you and I think that you should continue writing stories here on vizzed, I will be sure to reply to them and leave positive feedback. I hope you don't give up, I am sure that they are good stories!
Man that sucks, and I agree, that is taking it a bit too far, if it was not in the right place or not getting a lot of views and replies, the least they could do is address, instead of telling you to not even bother. That is terrible to hear. I am sorry about that and I am sure it was a good creepypasta. I would have been happy to read it and I am sure that you put a lot of effort into making it good and worth reading. I am sorry that this happened to you and I think that you should continue writing stories here on vizzed, I will be sure to reply to them and leave positive feedback. I hope you don't give up, I am sure that they are good stories!
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When I write?
I write for myself and no one else.
I really do not care if anyone else gets it or not.
After that?
I really have zero drive to put anything on the net anywhere.
Everyone is a critic.
How many places can you go that regulate material on a 5th grade grammar level?
I do not even know pros that follow all of the rules and my library weighs in at approximately 4 to 5 tons. (That's about 2 and a half pallets, at max, built to four feet high in specs.)
If you do the math?
That is a lot of writers that break traditional rules. (And that does not even cover the comic books or magazines.)
So cheer up.
Everything is about taste and "flavour of the month" when it comes to the internet.
So don't fret any.
It happens.
Good Luck.

Good Luck To All.
I'm done. Stick a fork in me.
Peace.
When I write?
I write for myself and no one else.
I really do not care if anyone else gets it or not.
After that?
I really have zero drive to put anything on the net anywhere.
Everyone is a critic.
How many places can you go that regulate material on a 5th grade grammar level?
I do not even know pros that follow all of the rules and my library weighs in at approximately 4 to 5 tons. (That's about 2 and a half pallets, at max, built to four feet high in specs.)
If you do the math?
That is a lot of writers that break traditional rules. (And that does not even cover the comic books or magazines.)
So cheer up.
Everything is about taste and "flavour of the month" when it comes to the internet.
So don't fret any.
It happens.
Good Luck.

Good Luck To All.
I'm done. Stick a fork in me.
Peace.
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Lightning Fang07 : Wow that is rather really Harsh Man, If a mod doesn't like someone's reading they shouldn't Just sugarcoat what they hate and then trash it, How rude.. I would rather tell what a person can do to improve there writing

Lightning Fang07 : Wow that is rather really Harsh Man, If a mod doesn't like someone's reading they shouldn't Just sugarcoat what they hate and then trash it, How rude.. I would rather tell what a person can do to improve there writing
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Lightning Fang07 : Woah! That was a really gesture. That moderator should have given you a chance. Have you tried posting your work on here? I'd be really thrilled to check it out. I love writing, if you want to check out my reviews. 

Was there anything in your story that was offensive or unacceptable? It may have violated their rules in some way. They are some liable reasons and explanations.
Lightning Fang07 : Woah! That was a really gesture. That moderator should have given you a chance. Have you tried posting your work on here? I'd be really thrilled to check it out. I love writing, if you want to check out my reviews. 

Was there anything in your story that was offensive or unacceptable? It may have violated their rules in some way. They are some liable reasons and explanations.
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Dean2k13 : https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=60742 I did post my story here it is... Tell me what you think.
Dean2k13 : https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=60742 I did post my story here it is... Tell me what you think.
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