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"Curses Nail"
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06-20-13 10:07 PM
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A Light Fang original Creepypasta related story.

Curses Nail

“It’s been three years since the incident…”

A trainer say crying softly over a grave outside of the Burned Tower
of Ecruteak City… The simple little grave beside the tower was well kept
by the town who had felt sorry for the trainer who on this very day
three years ago lost their trusted partner.

—————————————————————————————————-
*Three years ago*

A young trainer walked into the city of Ecruteak his partner an Eevee
who happily sat upon its trainers head. Everyone looked upon this joyful new traveling trainer happy at the innocent youth as he heads
toward the Pokémon center to heal both his Partner Eevee and team.

“Come to battle the Gym leader young man?”

The Nurse Joy asked the trainer who simply gave her a simple yes but
plans to do some training in the Burned tower and perhaps catch a rare
to find Magmar in there. When Nurse Joy returns his team to the young
man he smiles as his Eevee pops out to be beside its trainer for the
challenge for Normal types versus Ghost his eevee will need to learn to
bite… Everything had been going fine as he and Eevee trained and
successfully learned Bite but the simpleness of this training would
become much worse as the young trainer decides to go down the ladder to
where the three legendary dogs use to be… The basement but the strangest
part was of the brightly light upper floor the basement even with the
huge holes from the floor above, it was dark… Then things turned
terrible.

“Why is it so dark down here?”

The trainer questions how the light from above does nothing to the
lower level even with the holes but he brushes aside the eeriness of
the dark lower level of the Burned Tower but by doing so he sealed a
terrible fate. The sudden cry of a Pokémon frightens the young trainer
and his Eevee.

“A ghastly?!”


The trainer says in surprise as the Pokedex says that Ghastly don’t
reside in the Burned Tower or that they should be White with Red eyes
but again ignoring the sense of possible fear the trainer and his Eevee
go into battle against the white ghastly prepared to use the newly
learned move to win.

“Eevee use Bite!”

The Trainer declares and his Eevee pounces at the ghastly teeth ready
to bite but they go right through the ghastly which was unheard of so
the Eevee lands and tries again once again passing through until the
Ghastly decides to act a spectral like nail appears and drives itself
into the Eevee but unlike any other case of Ghost type using Curse this
one caused his Eevee to shriek and flail about in what looks like
sheer pain… Shortly after using the move the Ghastly vanished but the
trainers Eevee continued to shriek in pain as he picks her them up but
is shocked to find them BLEEDING!!!

“I HAVE TO GET YOU TO THE POKÉMON CENTER!”

The Trainer shouts and runs fighting back tears of fear for his
precious Pokémon partner but with every step he takes the Eevee
continues to Shriek and thrash about in his arms. The Trainer tries
running in hopes he can make it to the center before its to late but
this only makes the pain his partner is in get worse. By the time he
reached the Pokémon Center his Eevee was silent perhaps from the blood
loss but when he hands them to Nurse Joy she rushes the Eevee to ER
which terrifies the Trainer.

“I’m sorry but, she was to far gone to save.”

Nurse Joy tells the trainer that his Eevee had died from a Nail found
piercing her heart but when the nail was removed from the poor deceased
Pokémon’s heart it vanished… Later that month the trainer had his Eevee
buried beside the tower where their final adventure together had taken
place.
————————————————————————————————
*Present Day*

The Trainer readied to leave and began to walk away from the grave but took a look back… He swore he saw sitting on the grave was the spirit of his Eevee she was looking at him happily unaware she was dead even with a mysterious nail driven into and sticking out of her back.

“I’ll see you next year… Visit again master.”


The spirit says then fades away as the trainer leaves.
A Light Fang original Creepypasta related story.

Curses Nail

“It’s been three years since the incident…”

A trainer say crying softly over a grave outside of the Burned Tower
of Ecruteak City… The simple little grave beside the tower was well kept
by the town who had felt sorry for the trainer who on this very day
three years ago lost their trusted partner.

—————————————————————————————————-
*Three years ago*

A young trainer walked into the city of Ecruteak his partner an Eevee
who happily sat upon its trainers head. Everyone looked upon this joyful new traveling trainer happy at the innocent youth as he heads
toward the Pokémon center to heal both his Partner Eevee and team.

“Come to battle the Gym leader young man?”

The Nurse Joy asked the trainer who simply gave her a simple yes but
plans to do some training in the Burned tower and perhaps catch a rare
to find Magmar in there. When Nurse Joy returns his team to the young
man he smiles as his Eevee pops out to be beside its trainer for the
challenge for Normal types versus Ghost his eevee will need to learn to
bite… Everything had been going fine as he and Eevee trained and
successfully learned Bite but the simpleness of this training would
become much worse as the young trainer decides to go down the ladder to
where the three legendary dogs use to be… The basement but the strangest
part was of the brightly light upper floor the basement even with the
huge holes from the floor above, it was dark… Then things turned
terrible.

“Why is it so dark down here?”

The trainer questions how the light from above does nothing to the
lower level even with the holes but he brushes aside the eeriness of
the dark lower level of the Burned Tower but by doing so he sealed a
terrible fate. The sudden cry of a Pokémon frightens the young trainer
and his Eevee.

“A ghastly?!”


The trainer says in surprise as the Pokedex says that Ghastly don’t
reside in the Burned Tower or that they should be White with Red eyes
but again ignoring the sense of possible fear the trainer and his Eevee
go into battle against the white ghastly prepared to use the newly
learned move to win.

“Eevee use Bite!”

The Trainer declares and his Eevee pounces at the ghastly teeth ready
to bite but they go right through the ghastly which was unheard of so
the Eevee lands and tries again once again passing through until the
Ghastly decides to act a spectral like nail appears and drives itself
into the Eevee but unlike any other case of Ghost type using Curse this
one caused his Eevee to shriek and flail about in what looks like
sheer pain… Shortly after using the move the Ghastly vanished but the
trainers Eevee continued to shriek in pain as he picks her them up but
is shocked to find them BLEEDING!!!

“I HAVE TO GET YOU TO THE POKÉMON CENTER!”

The Trainer shouts and runs fighting back tears of fear for his
precious Pokémon partner but with every step he takes the Eevee
continues to Shriek and thrash about in his arms. The Trainer tries
running in hopes he can make it to the center before its to late but
this only makes the pain his partner is in get worse. By the time he
reached the Pokémon Center his Eevee was silent perhaps from the blood
loss but when he hands them to Nurse Joy she rushes the Eevee to ER
which terrifies the Trainer.

“I’m sorry but, she was to far gone to save.”

Nurse Joy tells the trainer that his Eevee had died from a Nail found
piercing her heart but when the nail was removed from the poor deceased
Pokémon’s heart it vanished… Later that month the trainer had his Eevee
buried beside the tower where their final adventure together had taken
place.
————————————————————————————————
*Present Day*

The Trainer readied to leave and began to walk away from the grave but took a look back… He swore he saw sitting on the grave was the spirit of his Eevee she was looking at him happily unaware she was dead even with a mysterious nail driven into and sticking out of her back.

“I’ll see you next year… Visit again master.”


The spirit says then fades away as the trainer leaves.
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From what I can see, this is an exact copy of the thread you already created. It isn't okay to make two of the same thread, just ask mods to move it.

Other than that, I didn't see any big deals with the story, besides some grammatical errors, but I find those in everything.

Local Mods : Please close this one, or the one in "your forum". They are the same exact thread.
From what I can see, this is an exact copy of the thread you already created. It isn't okay to make two of the same thread, just ask mods to move it.

Other than that, I didn't see any big deals with the story, besides some grammatical errors, but I find those in everything.

Local Mods : Please close this one, or the one in "your forum". They are the same exact thread.
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Yeah, this one definitely belongs in this forum, so I'll leave that up to the mods of "your forum" to close.

Lightning Fang07 : I see what happened here. It was an honest mistake, but just so you know next time, if you accidentally place a thread in the wrong forum, the mods of that forum can move the thread for you. That would be the way you want to handle a situation like that.
Yeah, this one definitely belongs in this forum, so I'll leave that up to the mods of "your forum" to close.

Lightning Fang07 : I see what happened here. It was an honest mistake, but just so you know next time, if you accidentally place a thread in the wrong forum, the mods of that forum can move the thread for you. That would be the way you want to handle a situation like that.
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Yeah i closed the other one x3
Yeah i closed the other one x3
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Thanks for helping moving then since I'm still learning more about the site... And thanks for not showing to much or any negativity in my writing.
Thanks for helping moving then since I'm still learning more about the site... And thanks for not showing to much or any negativity in my writing.
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I actually enjoyed this story, which surprised me since I'm not a fan of pokémon. The story was actually kind of touching, yet a bit creepy at parts. It felt a bit rushed, but all in all, it was good. I really liked the ending (despite Eevee dying).
I actually enjoyed this story, which surprised me since I'm not a fan of pokémon. The story was actually kind of touching, yet a bit creepy at parts. It felt a bit rushed, but all in all, it was good. I really liked the ending (despite Eevee dying).
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I enjoyed the story.
Kind of too violent and all but good job!
I am going to start writing my own creepypasta soon.
I enjoyed the story.
Kind of too violent and all but good job!
I am going to start writing my own creepypasta soon.
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GamingMonkey : If you do make one I'd be interested in reading it.
GamingMonkey : If you do make one I'd be interested in reading it.
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