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This series is just a joke. Don't get your Viz in a knot.


LAST TIME ON A VIZZED LOVE STORY-




OUR CAST BOARDED THE ALIEN SPACESHIP AND LOOKED AROUND, BUT THEN


ALIENS STARTED ATTACKING THE GROUPS.  THE ONLY ONE WHO BROUGHT A WEAPON


WITH THEM IS SUX, BUT SHE SEEMS ANGRY ABOUT SOMETHING. WHY IS SHE


ALWAYS SO ANGRY. ;-;

Here are the groups to refresh your memories.

Group 1- User, Zero, deg, and moss



Group 2- Zlinq, Wanderer, Mak, and Paper



Group 3- Yoshi, SUX, Panzer, and Kimmy






We turn our attention to Group 2,

however, not all of the group is there. Wanderer and Mak are tied to

weird alien-looking chairs, while Paper and Zlinq are nowhere to be

seen. A figure emerges from the shadows, and it looks like a standing

horse...

Wanderer - Who are you!? Step into the light so we can see you!

The

figure steps into the light, and it is in fact, a zebra standing on 2

legs. And it can talk. Both Wanderer and Maka passed out due to the sight of seeing the figure. Both of their walkie-talkies are on the floor away from them.

Zero

(Walkie-Talkie) - Zlinq? Zlinq are you there! Zlinq if you can hear me,

I have the group with me and we're heading down the hallway. We just

passed a door that says "Top Secret Weapon Development" labeled on it.

Should I go in?

The zebra hears Zero over the walkie-talkie and smashes it with his hoof. He walks over to the intercom and speaks into it.

Leggy

- All troops head to Sector D next to the Top Secret Lab. We have

intruders. Lock down the area, and don't let them escape.

We go to Group 3, now.

SUX - I'M GONNA FIND THAT STUPID GOOMY IF IT'S THE LAST THING I DO!!!
Yoshi - STAHP. YUR GOING 2 FAST.
Kimmy - Forget this. They can handle themselves. I'm only here to save green, nothing else. I should look inside this door.

Kimmy

goes inside the room without reading the label on the door. The label

read "DO NOT ENTER. CONTAMINATED FACILITY". The doors shut tightly and

lock her inside. Multiple shadowy figures surround her.

Kimmy - What the heck...stop.....stay away from me! HELLLLPPPP!!!!!

Her screams can be heard echoing throughout the corridors of the entire ship.

The rest of Group 3 doesn't notice that Kimmy is missing. The group eventually finds the Goomy they were looking for.

SUX - FINALLY.
Patar - You fools. I may look like a small little critter, but I hold great power that you couldn't possibly imagine!
SUX - YEAH WHATEVER JUST SHUTUP AND DIE ALREADY.

Sux fires the gun at Patar, but nothing happened.

Panzer - Not even a scratch...?
Patar - Now...witness my TRUE form!!!

Patar begins to morph and changes into a giant purple monster of some sort. It looked very slimy.

Panzer - .....Really?
Patar - DIE!!!

Patar fires multiple energy beams out from his body. Thankfully, the group managed to dodge them just in time.

Panzer - My god...

Patar fires some more energy beams, and one of them hits Yoshi.

Yoshi - NUUUUUUUU. OWOEWOEWOEOWEOEOW.
Patar

- These aren't just regular old energy beams, you know? If you get hit

by one of them, even a slight scrape from it, it will sap your life energy and convert it into energy for bigger lasers!!!

Panzer - You're mad...one more hit from that laser and Yoshi's a goner...Sux! Save your br-

Sux was no longer anywhere to be found.

Panzer - Aw you gotta be joking!!!
Patar - The power is all mine!! Time to end this!

Patar fires another laser at Yoshi, this laser being much larger than the last one.

Panzer - YOSHI, GET OUT OF THE WAY!!!
Yoshi - I can't...move...nu...energy...
Patar - You're done for! HAHAHAHAHAAH!!!

Panzer pushes Yoshi out of the way, and he gets his with the laser, instantly killing him.

Patar

- What's this!? Are you an idiot!? You knew it was going to kill you

but you tried to save someone you barely knew anyways! Oh well. It's not

like he can hear me now that he's dead.

Panzer lies there motionless on the ground, with Yoshi staring at the body with his weak eyes.

Patar - I think it's time I take a nap. So just lie down and die quietly, please.
Yoshi - Yoo....killed him...even tho he tried too save meh...yoo r a monster...
Patar - Of course I'm a monster! Look at me! Enough of this nonsense! Time to end this...

Before Patar could fire his next beam, he screams in pain, as if something has sliced his back. It was Group 1!

Patar - There's more of them? Wonderful. That just means more power for me!
Zero - User, jump above Patar and stab him on his spine!
User - *sniff sniff, sob* Okay...

User does what he is told, and does it swiftly.

Patar - How are you so fast!? Gaghgkk!
Zero - Deg and moss, get behind Patar and pull his tail as hard as you can!
Patar - Oh no you don't!!!

Patar fires an energy beam headed straight for Zero, but she absorbs it with her beam sword.

Yoshi - Wehere...did yoo git dat?
Zero - I found it in that room where a bunch of alien troops were trying to kill us. Of course, we beat them all.

Zero unleashes the absorbed energy back at Patar.

Patar- Gah!! No! How could this be happening!?

Zero

quickly sprints in front of Patar, to where they meet eye to eye. She

quickly slices her beam sword in every direction known to man, inflicting massive damage to Patar.

Zero - IF YOU EVER TOUCH ONE OF MY FRIENDS AGAIN I WILL MAKE YOU WATCH EVERYTHING YOU LOVE CEASE TO EXIST, YOU GOT THAT!?

Patar reverts back to his original, small Goomy self, and he turns into goo and escapes through the air vent.

We find Paper and Zlinq strapped into a machine of some sort...

Furret - ....Begin the transformation....

END OF CHAPTER



Summons -

A user of this :
deg2000 :
ZeroTails :
Zlinqx :
WandererExiled :
Makalya :
paper luigi :
yoshirulez! :
SUX2BU :
MysteriousPanzer :
NintendoFanKimmy :
greenluigi :
patar4097 :
Furret :
legacyme3 :
m0ssb3rg935 :

This series is just a joke. Don't get your Viz in a knot.


LAST TIME ON A VIZZED LOVE STORY-




OUR CAST BOARDED THE ALIEN SPACESHIP AND LOOKED AROUND, BUT THEN


ALIENS STARTED ATTACKING THE GROUPS.  THE ONLY ONE WHO BROUGHT A WEAPON


WITH THEM IS SUX, BUT SHE SEEMS ANGRY ABOUT SOMETHING. WHY IS SHE


ALWAYS SO ANGRY. ;-;

Here are the groups to refresh your memories.

Group 1- User, Zero, deg, and moss



Group 2- Zlinq, Wanderer, Mak, and Paper



Group 3- Yoshi, SUX, Panzer, and Kimmy






We turn our attention to Group 2,

however, not all of the group is there. Wanderer and Mak are tied to

weird alien-looking chairs, while Paper and Zlinq are nowhere to be

seen. A figure emerges from the shadows, and it looks like a standing

horse...

Wanderer - Who are you!? Step into the light so we can see you!

The

figure steps into the light, and it is in fact, a zebra standing on 2

legs. And it can talk. Both Wanderer and Maka passed out due to the sight of seeing the figure. Both of their walkie-talkies are on the floor away from them.

Zero

(Walkie-Talkie) - Zlinq? Zlinq are you there! Zlinq if you can hear me,

I have the group with me and we're heading down the hallway. We just

passed a door that says "Top Secret Weapon Development" labeled on it.

Should I go in?

The zebra hears Zero over the walkie-talkie and smashes it with his hoof. He walks over to the intercom and speaks into it.

Leggy

- All troops head to Sector D next to the Top Secret Lab. We have

intruders. Lock down the area, and don't let them escape.

We go to Group 3, now.

SUX - I'M GONNA FIND THAT STUPID GOOMY IF IT'S THE LAST THING I DO!!!
Yoshi - STAHP. YUR GOING 2 FAST.
Kimmy - Forget this. They can handle themselves. I'm only here to save green, nothing else. I should look inside this door.

Kimmy

goes inside the room without reading the label on the door. The label

read "DO NOT ENTER. CONTAMINATED FACILITY". The doors shut tightly and

lock her inside. Multiple shadowy figures surround her.

Kimmy - What the heck...stop.....stay away from me! HELLLLPPPP!!!!!

Her screams can be heard echoing throughout the corridors of the entire ship.

The rest of Group 3 doesn't notice that Kimmy is missing. The group eventually finds the Goomy they were looking for.

SUX - FINALLY.
Patar - You fools. I may look like a small little critter, but I hold great power that you couldn't possibly imagine!
SUX - YEAH WHATEVER JUST SHUTUP AND DIE ALREADY.

Sux fires the gun at Patar, but nothing happened.

Panzer - Not even a scratch...?
Patar - Now...witness my TRUE form!!!

Patar begins to morph and changes into a giant purple monster of some sort. It looked very slimy.

Panzer - .....Really?
Patar - DIE!!!

Patar fires multiple energy beams out from his body. Thankfully, the group managed to dodge them just in time.

Panzer - My god...

Patar fires some more energy beams, and one of them hits Yoshi.

Yoshi - NUUUUUUUU. OWOEWOEWOEOWEOEOW.
Patar

- These aren't just regular old energy beams, you know? If you get hit

by one of them, even a slight scrape from it, it will sap your life energy and convert it into energy for bigger lasers!!!

Panzer - You're mad...one more hit from that laser and Yoshi's a goner...Sux! Save your br-

Sux was no longer anywhere to be found.

Panzer - Aw you gotta be joking!!!
Patar - The power is all mine!! Time to end this!

Patar fires another laser at Yoshi, this laser being much larger than the last one.

Panzer - YOSHI, GET OUT OF THE WAY!!!
Yoshi - I can't...move...nu...energy...
Patar - You're done for! HAHAHAHAHAAH!!!

Panzer pushes Yoshi out of the way, and he gets his with the laser, instantly killing him.

Patar

- What's this!? Are you an idiot!? You knew it was going to kill you

but you tried to save someone you barely knew anyways! Oh well. It's not

like he can hear me now that he's dead.

Panzer lies there motionless on the ground, with Yoshi staring at the body with his weak eyes.

Patar - I think it's time I take a nap. So just lie down and die quietly, please.
Yoshi - Yoo....killed him...even tho he tried too save meh...yoo r a monster...
Patar - Of course I'm a monster! Look at me! Enough of this nonsense! Time to end this...

Before Patar could fire his next beam, he screams in pain, as if something has sliced his back. It was Group 1!

Patar - There's more of them? Wonderful. That just means more power for me!
Zero - User, jump above Patar and stab him on his spine!
User - *sniff sniff, sob* Okay...

User does what he is told, and does it swiftly.

Patar - How are you so fast!? Gaghgkk!
Zero - Deg and moss, get behind Patar and pull his tail as hard as you can!
Patar - Oh no you don't!!!

Patar fires an energy beam headed straight for Zero, but she absorbs it with her beam sword.

Yoshi - Wehere...did yoo git dat?
Zero - I found it in that room where a bunch of alien troops were trying to kill us. Of course, we beat them all.

Zero unleashes the absorbed energy back at Patar.

Patar- Gah!! No! How could this be happening!?

Zero

quickly sprints in front of Patar, to where they meet eye to eye. She

quickly slices her beam sword in every direction known to man, inflicting massive damage to Patar.

Zero - IF YOU EVER TOUCH ONE OF MY FRIENDS AGAIN I WILL MAKE YOU WATCH EVERYTHING YOU LOVE CEASE TO EXIST, YOU GOT THAT!?

Patar reverts back to his original, small Goomy self, and he turns into goo and escapes through the air vent.

We find Paper and Zlinq strapped into a machine of some sort...

Furret - ....Begin the transformation....

END OF CHAPTER



Summons -

A user of this :
deg2000 :
ZeroTails :
Zlinqx :
WandererExiled :
Makalya :
paper luigi :
yoshirulez! :
SUX2BU :
MysteriousPanzer :
NintendoFanKimmy :
greenluigi :
patar4097 :
Furret :
legacyme3 :
m0ssb3rg935 :

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(edited by LunarDarkness2 on 01-04-16 02:47 PM)     Post Rating: 5   Liked By: greenluigi, MarioLucarioFan64, NintendoFanDrew, patar4097, Uzar,

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Sorry about how the post, looks. I typed this early this morning before Vizzed went down. I copy/pasted it before I hit submit post, and now the formatting is messed up. I tried editing it, but it won't fix. Sorry about this.
Sorry about how the post, looks. I typed this early this morning before Vizzed went down. I copy/pasted it before I hit submit post, and now the formatting is messed up. I tried editing it, but it won't fix. Sorry about this.
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"in every direction known to man"

...Something about this is so silly. How would you even do that, lol?

Despite the bad format on this one, it was pretty fun to read. These sorts of stories really make me want to write again.

I probably should've read the first two before this, but oh well. :^)
"in every direction known to man"

...Something about this is so silly. How would you even do that, lol?

Despite the bad format on this one, it was pretty fun to read. These sorts of stories really make me want to write again.

I probably should've read the first two before this, but oh well. :^)
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SWTerra :

The reason the formatting is terrible is because of Vizzed. Vizzed apparently shut down for a bit while I was typing this. Before I clicked submit post I copied the whole thing to be safe. When I clicked submit post, I found out Vizzed shut down. So when it got back up I pasted the whole thing, and the formatting messed up. I tried editing the post to fix the formatting, but when I clicked edit post, the formatting was the same. I stated my apologies in the post above you. :p
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The reason the formatting is terrible is because of Vizzed. Vizzed apparently shut down for a bit while I was typing this. Before I clicked submit post I copied the whole thing to be safe. When I clicked submit post, I found out Vizzed shut down. So when it got back up I pasted the whole thing, and the formatting messed up. I tried editing the post to fix the formatting, but when I clicked edit post, the formatting was the same. I stated my apologies in the post above you. :p
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LunarDarkness2 : Yeah, I had read why it was. I was just saying that despite that it was still fun to read. It did get in the way a bit, but it wasn't too much of a distraction.
LunarDarkness2 : Yeah, I had read why it was. I was just saying that despite that it was still fun to read. It did get in the way a bit, but it wasn't too much of a distraction.
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Anyone else excited for my dramatic entrance? I sure am  

Despite the formatting thing I enjoyed reading this one. RIP panzer D:
Anyone else excited for my dramatic entrance? I sure am  

Despite the formatting thing I enjoyed reading this one. RIP panzer D:
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Obviously I'm just listening to orders now, but later it's revealed I own furret and I shall conquer VIZZED USING HIM AS MY SHIELD.
(whisper)
Oh I don't do that..... Okay, great chapter either way I feel bad for hurting pattycakes tho < 3. And I'm surprised you made someone die this late :V 

And the formatting wasn't that big of an issue for me a bit confusing at the beginning but I got used to it.
Obviously I'm just listening to orders now, but later it's revealed I own furret and I shall conquer VIZZED USING HIM AS MY SHIELD.
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Oh I don't do that..... Okay, great chapter either way I feel bad for hurting pattycakes tho < 3. And I'm surprised you made someone die this late :V 

And the formatting wasn't that big of an issue for me a bit confusing at the beginning but I got used to it.
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11/10 chapter - I didn't expect the story to take this turn. Keep 'em coming, pls.
11/10 chapter - I didn't expect the story to take this turn. Keep 'em coming, pls.
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Plot twist - one of the shadowy figures turns out be Green, and he and I team up and turn the rest of the figures to dust in the most epic of all battles .

And yes, I too am hyped for Furret's dramatic entrance .

chill out patar omg
Plot twist - one of the shadowy figures turns out be Green, and he and I team up and turn the rest of the figures to dust in the most epic of all battles .

And yes, I too am hyped for Furret's dramatic entrance .

chill out patar omg
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Spoiler green is dead jk. That last sentence from Furret to me came off as a crazy German scientist. He is Dr Wily in Disguise!
Spoiler green is dead jk. That last sentence from Furret to me came off as a crazy German scientist. He is Dr Wily in Disguise!
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Heh, I'm a zebra on two legs
Heh, I'm a zebra on two legs
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~Dreams of walking along a rainbow trail and suddenly finds myself in a middle of a ♪♫ Pink Fluffy Unicorns Dancing on Rainbows♫♪ number... Excepted they are striped and it seems I'm under some kind of sherbet water~
~Dreams of walking along a rainbow trail and suddenly finds myself in a middle of a ♪♫ Pink Fluffy Unicorns Dancing on Rainbows♫♪ number... Excepted they are striped and it seems I'm under some kind of sherbet water~
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