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The seven stories of MrBeingcool1

 

12-30-15 12:58 PM
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There was a young man, named Oscar. Oscar was used to be an boy who would likes to make new friends... But this story i found today, is another chapter of MrBeingcool1's seven stories...

Chapter 2: Oscar

Oscar went for a ride on his bicycle. However, his wife called him up with her phone. Oscar went home.

Oscar: "Hey, Zoe. What's wrong?"
Zoe was a girl who was the same age as Oscar was. But there was something they were excited about: Zoe was 8 months pregnant.
Zoe: "Oh, hi! I tried to open the door, but then i forgot the laundry upstairs. I'm not going up because there's a big rat up there!"
Oscar "Is that all?"
He was a little bit skeptic about what Zoe told him.
Zoe: "Yes... Sorry for disturbing your ride..."
Oscar: "It's okay. I'm done anyway."

Later that day, they were having dinner. At 5:45 PM


Zoe: "Oscar..."
Oscar: "Yeah?"
Zoe: "I'm curious about something... Did you ever had a child with your ex-wife?"
Oscar: "No. She wanted to, though... But i refused and that's when we broke up..."
Zoe: "She seems short-tempered..."
Oscar: "I know, right?"
Zoe: "So... Enjoying your spaghetti? I made it with love!"
Oscar: "Did YOU cooked this? I thought it was ordered in a restaurant, it's delicious!"
Zoe: "Thanks!"
Oscar: "But... Actually..."
He was staring at his spaghetti.
Oscar continued: "I think you should rest some more. You're doing too much. It's not good to be doing so much stuff. Especially for the baby."
Zoe: "I... guess you're right... Okay, i will..."

Suddenly, someone knocked on the door.

KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK!
Oscar: "Huh? Who could that be?"
He stood up and walked towards the door.
There was an elder man, with an age of 59. He was disguised, so that nobody knew who he actually was.
Oscar: "Uhm... Hello."
Old man: "..."
Oscar: "Hello? I'm here."
Zoe stood up too, and walked to her husband.
Oscar closed the door, but couldn't because the old man's foot was between it. He suddenly grabbed a piece of paper. It turned out to be a letter.

Oscar started to read it:
"Oscar! I wrote this letter, but i don't have enough time! You see, my voice is gone, because my face is part melted away. I know, it's a horrible story. My daughter just died while saving me on a horrible island, and i'm about to warn people of zombies. The point is: Will they believe me? Now i got the cops behind me, but i remember your appartment. Go downstairs to the basement, and seek for a chest from Paul McGree. There's stuff inside that belongs to me, but you and your wife need it more than i do.

From: An old friend."

Oscar was done reading, but when he looked up, he was somewhere else... He was in... He was in a house. Not his house, though. But it was the basement of another house. There was a newspaper blown through the basement window. Oscar picked it up. Date: 16th of January, 1916.

Oscar: "Wh-...wha?... How... I'm way back in the 20th century! But..."
A pair of red-glowing eyes were staring in the darkness of the basement. They became bigger. And bigger. Until a wild bear was clearly seen. The bear started growling and tried to attack Oscar.
Oscar: "Gaaaaaagh!"
Oscar has been attacked by the bear. He fell on the wooden ground with his eyes closed. He didn't seem to wake up.

???: "Oscar!! Where are you!!"
Oscar woke up...
Oscar: "Huh..."
???: "Oscar!! H-help... me!!"
Oscar: "Zoe!!"
Zoe: "Please, honey! Show yourself..."
Oscar stood up and began searching for Zoe. She sounded so close, yet she seemed so far away.
5 minutes later...
Oscar: "Zoe!!"
Zoe: "I'm behind... Ow!..."
Oscar found Zoe. She was hurt badly... Well, it looked like she was hurt...
Oscar: "Wha..."
Zoe: "Please... Help me..."
Oscar: "What... happened?"
Zoe: "The baby is... OW!!... coming!"
Oscar gets nervous. He isn't ready for this, as they were in a place that isn't quite nice... In a haunted basement...

Oscar hears a voice.

???: "Oscar!!"
Oscar: "No... It's... you!!"

To be continued...

There was a young man, named Oscar. Oscar was used to be an boy who would likes to make new friends... But this story i found today, is another chapter of MrBeingcool1's seven stories...

Chapter 2: Oscar

Oscar went for a ride on his bicycle. However, his wife called him up with her phone. Oscar went home.

Oscar: "Hey, Zoe. What's wrong?"
Zoe was a girl who was the same age as Oscar was. But there was something they were excited about: Zoe was 8 months pregnant.
Zoe: "Oh, hi! I tried to open the door, but then i forgot the laundry upstairs. I'm not going up because there's a big rat up there!"
Oscar "Is that all?"
He was a little bit skeptic about what Zoe told him.
Zoe: "Yes... Sorry for disturbing your ride..."
Oscar: "It's okay. I'm done anyway."

Later that day, they were having dinner. At 5:45 PM


Zoe: "Oscar..."
Oscar: "Yeah?"
Zoe: "I'm curious about something... Did you ever had a child with your ex-wife?"
Oscar: "No. She wanted to, though... But i refused and that's when we broke up..."
Zoe: "She seems short-tempered..."
Oscar: "I know, right?"
Zoe: "So... Enjoying your spaghetti? I made it with love!"
Oscar: "Did YOU cooked this? I thought it was ordered in a restaurant, it's delicious!"
Zoe: "Thanks!"
Oscar: "But... Actually..."
He was staring at his spaghetti.
Oscar continued: "I think you should rest some more. You're doing too much. It's not good to be doing so much stuff. Especially for the baby."
Zoe: "I... guess you're right... Okay, i will..."

Suddenly, someone knocked on the door.

KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK!
Oscar: "Huh? Who could that be?"
He stood up and walked towards the door.
There was an elder man, with an age of 59. He was disguised, so that nobody knew who he actually was.
Oscar: "Uhm... Hello."
Old man: "..."
Oscar: "Hello? I'm here."
Zoe stood up too, and walked to her husband.
Oscar closed the door, but couldn't because the old man's foot was between it. He suddenly grabbed a piece of paper. It turned out to be a letter.

Oscar started to read it:
"Oscar! I wrote this letter, but i don't have enough time! You see, my voice is gone, because my face is part melted away. I know, it's a horrible story. My daughter just died while saving me on a horrible island, and i'm about to warn people of zombies. The point is: Will they believe me? Now i got the cops behind me, but i remember your appartment. Go downstairs to the basement, and seek for a chest from Paul McGree. There's stuff inside that belongs to me, but you and your wife need it more than i do.

From: An old friend."

Oscar was done reading, but when he looked up, he was somewhere else... He was in... He was in a house. Not his house, though. But it was the basement of another house. There was a newspaper blown through the basement window. Oscar picked it up. Date: 16th of January, 1916.

Oscar: "Wh-...wha?... How... I'm way back in the 20th century! But..."
A pair of red-glowing eyes were staring in the darkness of the basement. They became bigger. And bigger. Until a wild bear was clearly seen. The bear started growling and tried to attack Oscar.
Oscar: "Gaaaaaagh!"
Oscar has been attacked by the bear. He fell on the wooden ground with his eyes closed. He didn't seem to wake up.

???: "Oscar!! Where are you!!"
Oscar woke up...
Oscar: "Huh..."
???: "Oscar!! H-help... me!!"
Oscar: "Zoe!!"
Zoe: "Please, honey! Show yourself..."
Oscar stood up and began searching for Zoe. She sounded so close, yet she seemed so far away.
5 minutes later...
Oscar: "Zoe!!"
Zoe: "I'm behind... Ow!..."
Oscar found Zoe. She was hurt badly... Well, it looked like she was hurt...
Oscar: "Wha..."
Zoe: "Please... Help me..."
Oscar: "What... happened?"
Zoe: "The baby is... OW!!... coming!"
Oscar gets nervous. He isn't ready for this, as they were in a place that isn't quite nice... In a haunted basement...

Oscar hears a voice.

???: "Oscar!!"
Oscar: "No... It's... you!!"

To be continued...

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(edited by Eirinn on 01-02-16 03:12 AM)     Post Rating: 4   Liked By: Andvillon, Eniitan, greenluigi, Tama10,

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I like personally how you structured your story. When you highlight the characters for when they talk it helps to bring out something there. I haven't seen people who actually have used the highlight the best way that you would to fit your characters in the stories that you make. I look forward to reading more from you.
I like personally how you structured your story. When you highlight the characters for when they talk it helps to bring out something there. I haven't seen people who actually have used the highlight the best way that you would to fit your characters in the stories that you make. I look forward to reading more from you.
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Thanks, Eniitan! It's just the fun fact that i like doing it that way!
Thanks, Eniitan! It's just the fun fact that i like doing it that way!
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As I've said while we were chatting , you did great story again.   You should try writing fan fictions. 
Keep it up buddy!
As I've said while we were chatting , you did great story again.   You should try writing fan fictions. 
Keep it up buddy!
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