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MONSTER: A tale of An Akaian chapter 20 ‘’Welcome to the twilight zone…?’’
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MONSTER: A tale of An Akaian chapter 20 ‘’Welcome to the twilight zone…?’’ ‘’Guys, this might be our biggest trip yet! There will be hardships, and struggles, but with the power… OF Eirinn we will survive!’’ Eirinn yelled at Monster and company, when monster was just awake for a few hours. ‘’Don’t think about going back! I will save you!’’ Eirinn continued ‘’Uhm.. you were one of the guys that went back before were done, y’know’’ Monster told Eirinn. ‘’…. I had a massive stomach ache, okay!’’ Eirinn replied ‘’Yeah… sure..’’ Yoshi replied. ‘’Now come with me, we are going to wa..lk?’’ Eirinn said, nobody listened, though. Because they were all stepping in to the limousine of Juul. ‘’ You coming or not, preach guy?’’ Yoshi asked Eirinn Eirinn was not happy about it, but he stepped in anyway. ‘’Off to the ZZed mountain!’’ Oni yelled as he was drinking beer and watching TV. ‘’Hey! Don’t drink alcohol when we are going to have a massive trip!’’ Eirinn said, even angrier. ‘’Hahaha, you call this massive? We’ve trained so much, I could do it Drunk, WITH my eyes closed!’’ Oni replied ‘’Your being different, oni…’’ Eirinn replied ‘’ Oleee, olee oleeee!!!’’ Oni replied ‘’Oni has not even nearly enough alcohol in his system to get drunk! What is happening’’ Eirinn asked. They arrived at the Mountain and went inside after a few minutes of looking. All of the memories were coming back to the team, when they went through the first door. It was a huge room, with nothing in it. ‘’.. Let’s not pull a Juul and run to the otherside of the room, guys’’ Monster told the team. ‘’HEYYYYYYYY’’ Oni yelled, it echoed throughout the room. Oni powered up, for what seemed like no reason, and he flew towards the team, and started kicking Monster. ‘’What in the’’ Monster said while he was trying to avoid all the kicks. ‘’AAAAH, this isn’t funny, Oni! Start taking this seriously!’’ Eirinn said But, then, Oni started powering up even more and kicking even harder, at this point the time realized, this was not a simple game by Oni, who wasn’t the person who plays games. Monster realized he had to fight back, he started to punch Oni, with not all of his power, so he got kicked to the wall, which was around 100 meters to the other side of the room.
‘’I really don’t want to do this, Oni..’’ Monster said in a sad voice Monster turned in to an Oceana Akaian and rushed towards Green, kicked him in the stomach, and knocked him out. ‘’Sorry, oni.’’ ‘’Yoshi, you stay with Oni, he shouldn’t wake up for at least 2 days.’’ Monster told Yoshi Eirinn, Faded and Monster continued, they walked through a long hallway, there seemed like no end. ‘’What is this, a twilight zone episode? First our friend just starts acting drunk and then attacks us, and now we’re in a never ending hallway.’’ Eirinn said ‘’Would you please just shut up?’’ Monster asked Eirinn sighed but he didn’t say another word, surprisingly, neither did Faded. About 3 hours later, there was still no end in sight. ‘’Why won’t we flyyyy?’’ Faded asked with a rather bored tone, ‘’If we do that, we might not have enough energy for the next obstacle, and Eirinn can’t fly, so we’ll have to carry him, too.’’ Monster replied with a disappointed voice. ‘’Do we have food? Preferably chicken, Because I love animals that go MOOOO!!!’’ ‘’Faded, would you just shut up about the food, we don’t have a lot of it, so we have to be careful, got that?’’ Eirinn said with an irritated face. ‘’ BUT WE’VE BEEN WALKING FOR LIKE 666 YEARS!’’ Faded yelled back at Eirinn, Eirinn had enough, and also started yelling. ‘’THAT’S NOT EVEN FUNNY, YOU DUMB NERD!’’ ‘’HEY, I’M NO NERD!’’ ‘’YES YOU ARE, YOU….’’ Monster was about to explode it seemed like. ‘’WOULD YOU TWO PLEASE SHUT UP, your acting like 5 year olds!’’ For the next 2 hours, no one said a word.. until. ‘’Do we have chicken..?’’ ‘’Damn, Faded, what is wrong with you?’’ Eirinn asked ‘’… Just….. Shut… UP!!!!! If anyone says one more word, I’ll knock them unconscious and let them leave them here. ‘’ Monster yelled at Eirinn and Faded. ‘’’Hey, guys!’’ A voice said. ‘’ I TOLD YOU TO SHUT UP DIDN’T I, WHO SAID SOMETHING!?’’ Monster asked Eirinn and faded, Eirinn and Faded both realized this was.. Juul! ‘’Monster, it’s me Juul, where are you guys?’’ ‘’We’re in a never ending hallway in the ZZed mountain…’’ Eirinn replied with a deep, sad voice. ‘’ZZed mountain eh? My last adventure, before I died.. good times.’’ ‘’You died like 10 months, ago juul.’’ Monster replied with a very dry voice. ‘’Don’t ruin my nostalgic moment, Monster!’’ Juul replied ‘’Well, I thought I was going to talk with you guys for a while, but I guess I can’t…’’ Juul said ‘’NO please do, I’m bored as all hell.’’ Faded replied with a desperate tone in his voice They talked for about an hour, and there was still.. no… end in… sight. ‘’This is just not normal, this is just not funny anymore I want to get out, I want to get…. Out..?’’ Eirinn said ‘’What’s wrong, guys?’’ ‘’We’re in.. my old neighbourhood…’’ Eirinn replied. ‘’Don’t play games, please.’’ Juul replied. ‘’We.. really are.’’ Eirinn replied. ‘’Look, there’s the place I was born! AwesomeIrishGuys Hospital!’’ Eirinn said with an excited voice. ‘’ I’m really afraid.. though, what in the world is going on… wait a minute… 13th of august? Oh, please, no.., no!!!!’’ Eirinn yelled ‘’What’s wrong with the 13th of august’’ Juul asked ‘’This was the day, the booja goblin warriors invaded our village.’’ Eirinn replied ‘’What, Booja goblin warriors, what in the world are you talking about!?’’ Monster asked. ‘’I can already hear their steps… the screams of all our people… oh, no.. this… is terrible.’’ TO BE CONTINUED. MONSTER: A tale of An Akaian chapter 20 ‘’Welcome to the twilight zone…?’’ ‘’Guys, this might be our biggest trip yet! There will be hardships, and struggles, but with the power… OF Eirinn we will survive!’’ Eirinn yelled at Monster and company, when monster was just awake for a few hours. ‘’Don’t think about going back! I will save you!’’ Eirinn continued ‘’Uhm.. you were one of the guys that went back before were done, y’know’’ Monster told Eirinn. ‘’…. I had a massive stomach ache, okay!’’ Eirinn replied ‘’Yeah… sure..’’ Yoshi replied. ‘’Now come with me, we are going to wa..lk?’’ Eirinn said, nobody listened, though. Because they were all stepping in to the limousine of Juul. ‘’ You coming or not, preach guy?’’ Yoshi asked Eirinn Eirinn was not happy about it, but he stepped in anyway. ‘’Off to the ZZed mountain!’’ Oni yelled as he was drinking beer and watching TV. ‘’Hey! Don’t drink alcohol when we are going to have a massive trip!’’ Eirinn said, even angrier. ‘’Hahaha, you call this massive? We’ve trained so much, I could do it Drunk, WITH my eyes closed!’’ Oni replied ‘’Your being different, oni…’’ Eirinn replied ‘’ Oleee, olee oleeee!!!’’ Oni replied ‘’Oni has not even nearly enough alcohol in his system to get drunk! What is happening’’ Eirinn asked. They arrived at the Mountain and went inside after a few minutes of looking. All of the memories were coming back to the team, when they went through the first door. It was a huge room, with nothing in it. ‘’.. Let’s not pull a Juul and run to the otherside of the room, guys’’ Monster told the team. ‘’HEYYYYYYYY’’ Oni yelled, it echoed throughout the room. Oni powered up, for what seemed like no reason, and he flew towards the team, and started kicking Monster. ‘’What in the’’ Monster said while he was trying to avoid all the kicks. ‘’AAAAH, this isn’t funny, Oni! Start taking this seriously!’’ Eirinn said But, then, Oni started powering up even more and kicking even harder, at this point the time realized, this was not a simple game by Oni, who wasn’t the person who plays games. Monster realized he had to fight back, he started to punch Oni, with not all of his power, so he got kicked to the wall, which was around 100 meters to the other side of the room.
‘’I really don’t want to do this, Oni..’’ Monster said in a sad voice Monster turned in to an Oceana Akaian and rushed towards Green, kicked him in the stomach, and knocked him out. ‘’Sorry, oni.’’ ‘’Yoshi, you stay with Oni, he shouldn’t wake up for at least 2 days.’’ Monster told Yoshi Eirinn, Faded and Monster continued, they walked through a long hallway, there seemed like no end. ‘’What is this, a twilight zone episode? First our friend just starts acting drunk and then attacks us, and now we’re in a never ending hallway.’’ Eirinn said ‘’Would you please just shut up?’’ Monster asked Eirinn sighed but he didn’t say another word, surprisingly, neither did Faded. About 3 hours later, there was still no end in sight. ‘’Why won’t we flyyyy?’’ Faded asked with a rather bored tone, ‘’If we do that, we might not have enough energy for the next obstacle, and Eirinn can’t fly, so we’ll have to carry him, too.’’ Monster replied with a disappointed voice. ‘’Do we have food? Preferably chicken, Because I love animals that go MOOOO!!!’’ ‘’Faded, would you just shut up about the food, we don’t have a lot of it, so we have to be careful, got that?’’ Eirinn said with an irritated face. ‘’ BUT WE’VE BEEN WALKING FOR LIKE 666 YEARS!’’ Faded yelled back at Eirinn, Eirinn had enough, and also started yelling. ‘’THAT’S NOT EVEN FUNNY, YOU DUMB NERD!’’ ‘’HEY, I’M NO NERD!’’ ‘’YES YOU ARE, YOU….’’ Monster was about to explode it seemed like. ‘’WOULD YOU TWO PLEASE SHUT UP, your acting like 5 year olds!’’ For the next 2 hours, no one said a word.. until. ‘’Do we have chicken..?’’ ‘’Damn, Faded, what is wrong with you?’’ Eirinn asked ‘’… Just….. Shut… UP!!!!! If anyone says one more word, I’ll knock them unconscious and let them leave them here. ‘’ Monster yelled at Eirinn and Faded. ‘’’Hey, guys!’’ A voice said. ‘’ I TOLD YOU TO SHUT UP DIDN’T I, WHO SAID SOMETHING!?’’ Monster asked Eirinn and faded, Eirinn and Faded both realized this was.. Juul! ‘’Monster, it’s me Juul, where are you guys?’’ ‘’We’re in a never ending hallway in the ZZed mountain…’’ Eirinn replied with a deep, sad voice. ‘’ZZed mountain eh? My last adventure, before I died.. good times.’’ ‘’You died like 10 months, ago juul.’’ Monster replied with a very dry voice. ‘’Don’t ruin my nostalgic moment, Monster!’’ Juul replied ‘’Well, I thought I was going to talk with you guys for a while, but I guess I can’t…’’ Juul said ‘’NO please do, I’m bored as all hell.’’ Faded replied with a desperate tone in his voice They talked for about an hour, and there was still.. no… end in… sight. ‘’This is just not normal, this is just not funny anymore I want to get out, I want to get…. Out..?’’ Eirinn said ‘’What’s wrong, guys?’’ ‘’We’re in.. my old neighbourhood…’’ Eirinn replied. ‘’Don’t play games, please.’’ Juul replied. ‘’We.. really are.’’ Eirinn replied. ‘’Look, there’s the place I was born! AwesomeIrishGuys Hospital!’’ Eirinn said with an excited voice. ‘’ I’m really afraid.. though, what in the world is going on… wait a minute… 13th of august? Oh, please, no.., no!!!!’’ Eirinn yelled ‘’What’s wrong with the 13th of august’’ Juul asked ‘’This was the day, the booja goblin warriors invaded our village.’’ Eirinn replied ‘’What, Booja goblin warriors, what in the world are you talking about!?’’ Monster asked. ‘’I can already hear their steps… the screams of all our people… oh, no.. this… is terrible.’’ TO BE CONTINUED. |
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imamonster : Booja Goblin warriors, huh? The next chapter seems interesting. I laughed when I saw Oni drinking :3. Similar to my Green, tho. Awesome work, and keep it up, friend! |
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‘’Look, there’s the place I was born! AwesomeIrishGuys Hospital!’’ That line...just... xD *rates story 5/5* I'm whiney, bossy, a windbag, and on the verge of fighting with Faded over an obsession with chicken...Sounds good! lol I'm so out of the loop: is this something of a reboot of the series? I really need to look up the chapters I've missed. ‘’Look, there’s the place I was born! AwesomeIrishGuys Hospital!’’ That line...just... xD *rates story 5/5* I'm whiney, bossy, a windbag, and on the verge of fighting with Faded over an obsession with chicken...Sounds good! lol I'm so out of the loop: is this something of a reboot of the series? I really need to look up the chapters I've missed. |
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Eirinn : Lol, thanks! No it's actually not a reboot, it's just a return to the ZZed mountain. Glad you liked it.
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Lol, so I'm a badass with a limousine but I'm also known for 'pulling a juul' and running like a coward? XD This really made me laugh man, it was cool to read this This really made me laugh man, it was cool to read this |
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