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OH, MY GOD, I HAVE ELEVEN- Oh.

 

01-03-15 10:48 AM
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"Goodbye!" Kimmy said yesterday

To the internet, for she was going away

With her cousin greenluigi to their grandmother's house

In the mountains, where they'd be free to shout

And laugh and dance and play and fight,

For it was silent compared to Beirut, yes, quite.

Cold and rainy it was when they arrived,

Yet the cousins' happiness was not deprived,

For the garden was not all that mattered -

It was their grandma's food (she was told and flattered)!

The next day, today, before returning to the city,

Kimmy and Green were feeling a bit if-y.

"Green, there's something I want to say, and that is:

It's starting to get a bit boring. Vizzed."

Green nodded in agreement and added a few words:

"I used to get more notifications! That's for sure!"

"It's why I'm not on as often," Kimmy added,

"It's so quiet and dull; I've almost had it!"

Later, when she returned home,

Kimmy turned her laptop on.

She went on Vizzed and, to her surprise,

saw eleven notifications! She blinked her eyes.

"OH, MY GOD, I HAVE ELEVEN- Oh." 

She suspected something. 

"Why? I think I know."

Her eyes turned their attention slightly to the left,

And then they read the latest announcement.

"Tour de Vizzed... let the games begin... I guessed right.

But maybe it won't ruin the rest of my night!"

With a thin ray of hope lighting her heart, she checked the reply.

"LOLOLOLOL!" it read.

Why, you guys, WHY?!?!
"Goodbye!" Kimmy said yesterday

To the internet, for she was going away

With her cousin greenluigi to their grandmother's house

In the mountains, where they'd be free to shout

And laugh and dance and play and fight,

For it was silent compared to Beirut, yes, quite.

Cold and rainy it was when they arrived,

Yet the cousins' happiness was not deprived,

For the garden was not all that mattered -

It was their grandma's food (she was told and flattered)!

The next day, today, before returning to the city,

Kimmy and Green were feeling a bit if-y.

"Green, there's something I want to say, and that is:

It's starting to get a bit boring. Vizzed."

Green nodded in agreement and added a few words:

"I used to get more notifications! That's for sure!"

"It's why I'm not on as often," Kimmy added,

"It's so quiet and dull; I've almost had it!"

Later, when she returned home,

Kimmy turned her laptop on.

She went on Vizzed and, to her surprise,

saw eleven notifications! She blinked her eyes.

"OH, MY GOD, I HAVE ELEVEN- Oh." 

She suspected something. 

"Why? I think I know."

Her eyes turned their attention slightly to the left,

And then they read the latest announcement.

"Tour de Vizzed... let the games begin... I guessed right.

But maybe it won't ruin the rest of my night!"

With a thin ray of hope lighting her heart, she checked the reply.

"LOLOLOLOL!" it read.

Why, you guys, WHY?!?!
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(edited by NintendoFanKimmy on 01-03-15 10:50 AM)     Post Rating: 4   Liked By: greenluigi, Singelli, Snu, Uzar,

01-03-15 01:26 PM
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LOLOLOLOL!

Just kidding! Kimmy, where are you going? Come baaaaaaaaaaaaaaack! ;-;

Don't despair! I, for one, am not going to seriously participate. Anything I submit will be because I want to submit it, not because I want internet pointz. I also...failed Zander again. I was going to participate in the Greenlight review thing, but real life got in the way. Sooo....I'm going to try to finish at least one review for a Greenlight game before Monday. I've become a better writer! I WILL SUCCEED!
LOLOLOLOL!

Just kidding! Kimmy, where are you going? Come baaaaaaaaaaaaaaack! ;-;

Don't despair! I, for one, am not going to seriously participate. Anything I submit will be because I want to submit it, not because I want internet pointz. I also...failed Zander again. I was going to participate in the Greenlight review thing, but real life got in the way. Sooo....I'm going to try to finish at least one review for a Greenlight game before Monday. I've become a better writer! I WILL SUCCEED!
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01-03-15 01:43 PM
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Um...I hope you have/had fun? No, actually, nice poem! I am not the most poetic, but it's fun to read these! Great work!
Um...I hope you have/had fun? No, actually, nice poem! I am not the most poetic, but it's fun to read these! Great work!
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01-03-15 01:55 PM
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Wow Kimmy.. this is... the BEST vizzed-related poem I have EVER read! This had me in a pit of giggles... thank you.  This is certainly a great exhibition on why you totally deserved 'most creative' in the anniversary rewards.  I knew you wrote great prose, but I didn't know you were so talented at poetry as well! This poem actually flows better than most of my own poetry!  

Great job.

Now I just have to hope my comments were substantial enough to make a notification notification-worthy!  

(Also, I feel your pain Kimmy... I feel your pain.)
Wow Kimmy.. this is... the BEST vizzed-related poem I have EVER read! This had me in a pit of giggles... thank you.  This is certainly a great exhibition on why you totally deserved 'most creative' in the anniversary rewards.  I knew you wrote great prose, but I didn't know you were so talented at poetry as well! This poem actually flows better than most of my own poetry!  

Great job.

Now I just have to hope my comments were substantial enough to make a notification notification-worthy!  

(Also, I feel your pain Kimmy... I feel your pain.)
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