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kirb's adventure's part 3

 

10-30-14 05:50 PM
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kirbmanboggle
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monster:i'm huuuuuungrrrrrryyyyy
kirbmanboggle : if you shut up maybe we can stop for some food
juuldude : he's right you are anoying somtimes, anyways we need to find a food place thats not filled with corrupted elite's
??? : i'll give you some info to help
kirbmanboggle : you again? who are you
??? : you'll learn in time theres a bar that serves food  not too far from here its the only place that dosn't have corrupts in miles as for the local she goes by the name of misstress she used to be one of david's most valued employees but jigsaw wanted one more powerful local to join his army
kirbmanboggle : well i guess we could go and eat
*30 mins later*
julius:this should be it
*orders three burgers*
kirbmanboggle : well are you guys ready to fight the next guy soon?
juul:well....we have bad equipment
kirbmanboggle : true true
*slides bartender a $20 bill*
you know i good place to get some gear
bartender:yea meet me out back after work
*much much later*
*bartender equips everyone with iron armor and swords and juuldude with a gold dagger*
bartender:these are for the heroes you can keep the gear after you beat the town local but if you can't witch is very likely you'll die
all:O.O
*2 hours later*
woaaa....this misstress likes torture
ennii:help my name is eniitian i'm tied up in this straight jacket this is so painful*tries to untie eniitian and her head is chopped of and topples on the floor*
kirbmanboggle : no...why would you do hat to such a sweet girl
miss:well to answer that because can*makes a develish smirk*
juul:this is ooooooonnnneeee messed up girl 
miss:yes and you add a fine collection to my body room
*misstress releases a hooked kunai into kirb's chest and breaking his armour and kirb fall to the ground as she rips it out and a pool of blood comes out of kirbs chest*
NOOOO!!!*monster tends to kirbs wound as juuldude fights mistress*
miss:well it seems your a brave one
julius:yes i am*slices mistress arm*
miss:ahahaha! you think pain is gonna make me flinch
juul:well...yea
miss:well than your not as smart as you look*throws needles at juul's weakpoints*
juul:my left arm is parlyzed!!!
miss:silly i hit your presure points
julius:i can't go on *falls*
miss:brave but not brave enough*smirks* now time to finish your other buddy's
juul:NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!*juul knocks down misstress and stabs her repedidtly over and over again*
monster:julius!!
juul:she...desserved it
*as misstress dies juul hears a fain wisper*
wisper:see you in hell*laughter*
*juul panting*
julius:hows kirb doing
monster:not good we need to get medical supplies or he's gonna die
narrator:will kirbmanboggle live or die?
will juuldude do somthing courages again to save his life?
will they survive later on?
tune in next time 
so how'd you guys like part 3
please people post what you think i get discouraged to make more if i feel ignored or hated too much
monster:i'm huuuuuungrrrrrryyyyy
kirbmanboggle : if you shut up maybe we can stop for some food
juuldude : he's right you are anoying somtimes, anyways we need to find a food place thats not filled with corrupted elite's
??? : i'll give you some info to help
kirbmanboggle : you again? who are you
??? : you'll learn in time theres a bar that serves food  not too far from here its the only place that dosn't have corrupts in miles as for the local she goes by the name of misstress she used to be one of david's most valued employees but jigsaw wanted one more powerful local to join his army
kirbmanboggle : well i guess we could go and eat
*30 mins later*
julius:this should be it
*orders three burgers*
kirbmanboggle : well are you guys ready to fight the next guy soon?
juul:well....we have bad equipment
kirbmanboggle : true true
*slides bartender a $20 bill*
you know i good place to get some gear
bartender:yea meet me out back after work
*much much later*
*bartender equips everyone with iron armor and swords and juuldude with a gold dagger*
bartender:these are for the heroes you can keep the gear after you beat the town local but if you can't witch is very likely you'll die
all:O.O
*2 hours later*
woaaa....this misstress likes torture
ennii:help my name is eniitian i'm tied up in this straight jacket this is so painful*tries to untie eniitian and her head is chopped of and topples on the floor*
kirbmanboggle : no...why would you do hat to such a sweet girl
miss:well to answer that because can*makes a develish smirk*
juul:this is ooooooonnnneeee messed up girl 
miss:yes and you add a fine collection to my body room
*misstress releases a hooked kunai into kirb's chest and breaking his armour and kirb fall to the ground as she rips it out and a pool of blood comes out of kirbs chest*
NOOOO!!!*monster tends to kirbs wound as juuldude fights mistress*
miss:well it seems your a brave one
julius:yes i am*slices mistress arm*
miss:ahahaha! you think pain is gonna make me flinch
juul:well...yea
miss:well than your not as smart as you look*throws needles at juul's weakpoints*
juul:my left arm is parlyzed!!!
miss:silly i hit your presure points
julius:i can't go on *falls*
miss:brave but not brave enough*smirks* now time to finish your other buddy's
juul:NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!*juul knocks down misstress and stabs her repedidtly over and over again*
monster:julius!!
juul:she...desserved it
*as misstress dies juul hears a fain wisper*
wisper:see you in hell*laughter*
*juul panting*
julius:hows kirb doing
monster:not good we need to get medical supplies or he's gonna die
narrator:will kirbmanboggle live or die?
will juuldude do somthing courages again to save his life?
will they survive later on?
tune in next time 
so how'd you guys like part 3
please people post what you think i get discouraged to make more if i feel ignored or hated too much
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Post Rating: 2   Liked By: juuldude, TheReaper7290,

10-31-14 04:22 AM
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greenluigi
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kirbmanboggle : Ok Boogle. Your story is ok, I like it. It is interesting. But there is a major flaw. You need to space it. It is a hole block of text. If you space it, it will be much easier to read. You keep summoning yourself put for example this: "Kirb: I know a place for training!". Or, you can say "I know a place for training!" Kirb said as he was excited. I'm just giving advice. But the story itself is really good!! I used to be like that when I typed without spacing but Frod helped me and it became much better!! So I'd better say thx to him :3.
kirbmanboggle : Ok Boogle. Your story is ok, I like it. It is interesting. But there is a major flaw. You need to space it. It is a hole block of text. If you space it, it will be much easier to read. You keep summoning yourself put for example this: "Kirb: I know a place for training!". Or, you can say "I know a place for training!" Kirb said as he was excited. I'm just giving advice. But the story itself is really good!! I used to be like that when I typed without spacing but Frod helped me and it became much better!! So I'd better say thx to him :3.
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Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'

Registered: 07-02-13
Location: non
Last Post: 457 days
Last Active: 37 days

Post Rating: 1   Liked By: kirbmanboggle,

10-31-14 09:55 AM
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juuldude
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CP: 13285.8
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Likes: 0  Dislikes: 0
Awesome! I'm such a cool warrior
But I'm going to hell? D:
I'll save you kirb, don't worry
Awesome! I'm such a cool warrior
But I'm going to hell? D:
I'll save you kirb, don't worry
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Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'

Registered: 02-26-11
Location: Holland, The Netherlands, which you prefer
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