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06-08-14 10:21 PM
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Wonderfall City
"You beat me? Ha! Your only superpower is being a wh*re!" The sharp quip came from Sanita.

"I've had enough!" Diana replied.

Diana shape shifts into Wonder Woman and punches her in the face. In a desperate attempt to fight back, Sanita lowers the temperature around them.

"You can't win." Diana taunted.

Diana hog ties Sanita with Wonder Womans lasso of truth.

Defeated, Sanita replies "Next time I come with back up! You cant beat everyone all by yourself Diana!"

I punches Sanita in the mouth. Then flies back to her room on Super Fawn Ave.

"I hate to admit it but..she's right...I need help...Ill make my own team.. Team..Team Wonderfall"

Diana opens her laptop and searches "Superheroes in the Wonderfall" A story from 14 news comes up. "Boy starts fire in local apartment after getting in fight with Step Father" I read on, "Deg Super starts a fire in his apartment complex after fighting with his Step Father. Step Father left with 5th degree burns all over his body. When asked deg responded that he started the fire. Not to kill his stepfather, but to scare him. Deg will be transported to a correctional facility this afternoon. No lighters were found on the scene, Police suggest he is an Extra-Terrorist. A superhero terrorist."

"Terrorist? Thats a little harsh. Well he needs me...I need him..Looks like we have a match. I wonder if he has the power to make fire or like explode or something cool. Huh...Kinda cute for a Terrorist."

I smirk a little. I grab my purse, then head for Duglous correctional facility. I get in my 2012 Nissan Versa and drive. When I get there I walk up to the first security guard I see.

"Can I help you miss?" the guard asks.

"Yes, You can take me to Deg Super."

"Yes...Yes I do. Right this way." he answers.

I follow the Guard to a dark room. I enter the room and then lock it behind me. I walk over to Deg. Hes sitting in a chair with metal balls over his hands. He looks up at me with a zero degree look.

"Who are you? Another reporter? My lawyer said I don't have to say sh*t to you guys." he says defensively.

"Nope I'm Diana, and You're coming with me to become a superhero."

T.B.C...
Wonderfall City
"You beat me? Ha! Your only superpower is being a wh*re!" The sharp quip came from Sanita.

"I've had enough!" Diana replied.

Diana shape shifts into Wonder Woman and punches her in the face. In a desperate attempt to fight back, Sanita lowers the temperature around them.

"You can't win." Diana taunted.

Diana hog ties Sanita with Wonder Womans lasso of truth.

Defeated, Sanita replies "Next time I come with back up! You cant beat everyone all by yourself Diana!"

I punches Sanita in the mouth. Then flies back to her room on Super Fawn Ave.

"I hate to admit it but..she's right...I need help...Ill make my own team.. Team..Team Wonderfall"

Diana opens her laptop and searches "Superheroes in the Wonderfall" A story from 14 news comes up. "Boy starts fire in local apartment after getting in fight with Step Father" I read on, "Deg Super starts a fire in his apartment complex after fighting with his Step Father. Step Father left with 5th degree burns all over his body. When asked deg responded that he started the fire. Not to kill his stepfather, but to scare him. Deg will be transported to a correctional facility this afternoon. No lighters were found on the scene, Police suggest he is an Extra-Terrorist. A superhero terrorist."

"Terrorist? Thats a little harsh. Well he needs me...I need him..Looks like we have a match. I wonder if he has the power to make fire or like explode or something cool. Huh...Kinda cute for a Terrorist."

I smirk a little. I grab my purse, then head for Duglous correctional facility. I get in my 2012 Nissan Versa and drive. When I get there I walk up to the first security guard I see.

"Can I help you miss?" the guard asks.

"Yes, You can take me to Deg Super."

"Yes...Yes I do. Right this way." he answers.

I follow the Guard to a dark room. I enter the room and then lock it behind me. I walk over to Deg. Hes sitting in a chair with metal balls over his hands. He looks up at me with a zero degree look.

"Who are you? Another reporter? My lawyer said I don't have to say sh*t to you guys." he says defensively.

"Nope I'm Diana, and You're coming with me to become a superhero."

T.B.C...
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(edited by Eirinn on 06-09-14 12:12 AM)     Post Rating: 1   Liked By: deggle,

06-08-14 10:28 PM
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That story seemed a bit rushed and just not long enough to be an okay story in my opinion.
 
 Also you did not follow 2 of the rules in posting literature. Read the rules before posting any here.
 
 The rules you broke were you have to remove your layout before posting literature and you have to make dialog properly.
 
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That story seemed a bit rushed and just not long enough to be an okay story in my opinion.
 
 Also you did not follow 2 of the rules in posting literature. Read the rules before posting any here.
 
 The rules you broke were you have to remove your layout before posting literature and you have to make dialog properly.
 
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06-08-14 10:43 PM
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It's cool. I can remove the layout and do the dialogue work this time. Just try to remember those rules next time.

Also, it's great to see that you posted a story on Vizzed. I always enjoy seeing people share their creative work on Vizzed.
It's cool. I can remove the layout and do the dialogue work this time. Just try to remember those rules next time.

Also, it's great to see that you posted a story on Vizzed. I always enjoy seeing people share their creative work on Vizzed.
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This story is great. Apart from what the other said here, this is creative and it is funny too. I cracked up on most parts. ^-^
This story is great. Apart from what the other said here, this is creative and it is funny too. I cracked up on most parts. ^-^
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Seems like everyone already said what I wanted to lol.

Amazing story, I hope to see more of these from you, it's awesome~
Seems like everyone already said what I wanted to lol.

Amazing story, I hope to see more of these from you, it's awesome~
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maguc : Thank you!
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