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My first poem on Vizzed.

 

05-14-14 12:12 PM
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I've seen many members here writing stories and poems, but I've never done anything of this kind, although my family says I'm good at poems, so I decided to make a forum since I'm normally not a creative member, I might as well give it a try. Here it is:

This is my first poem, probably not the best.
But if you like, then it surely won't be my last!
I really don't know what to put here,
but I make sure it rhymes my dear.
Writing poems is really cool and nice to do,
and I hope that this inspires others to write them too.
Gee, I'm doing good so far right?
If I keep this up, I'll be finished when it's night.
This is the ninth rule, the next will be tenth,
so I decide to stop it now, this is the end.

Well, that's my poem! I didn't know a good subject but if you like it and have a good subject for me, then please tell me!
I'll fry you with my crimson flames!
I've seen many members here writing stories and poems, but I've never done anything of this kind, although my family says I'm good at poems, so I decided to make a forum since I'm normally not a creative member, I might as well give it a try. Here it is:

This is my first poem, probably not the best.
But if you like, then it surely won't be my last!
I really don't know what to put here,
but I make sure it rhymes my dear.
Writing poems is really cool and nice to do,
and I hope that this inspires others to write them too.
Gee, I'm doing good so far right?
If I keep this up, I'll be finished when it's night.
This is the ninth rule, the next will be tenth,
so I decide to stop it now, this is the end.

Well, that's my poem! I didn't know a good subject but if you like it and have a good subject for me, then please tell me!

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05-14-14 12:17 PM
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Wow.....not bad. You did really good. I enjoyed it. ^-^
Wow.....not bad. You did really good. I enjoyed it. ^-^

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Eniitan : Thank you! I was inspired by your poems so I wanted to write one too
I'll fry you with my crimson flames!
Eniitan : Thank you! I was inspired by your poems so I wanted to write one too

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This is really good bro. Eniitan does make good poems. I used some of Her poetry to inspire a couple of my own poems. Your on your way my friend. Keep it up. One day you might be better then your big brother :-P 
This is really good bro. Eniitan does make good poems. I used some of Her poetry to inspire a couple of my own poems. Your on your way my friend. Keep it up. One day you might be better then your big brother :-P 

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Hahaha cool I'm not so good at poems but I kind of am at stories. I have madea lot of stories on vizzed. I really enjoyed the poem keep writing them.
Hahaha cool I'm not so good at poems but I kind of am at stories. I have madea lot of stories on vizzed. I really enjoyed the poem keep writing them.

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generalspleen : Thanks! I'll try to keep up with you

imamonster : Thanks, I'm happy to see you like it as well. I'll read some of your stories once
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generalspleen : Thanks! I'll try to keep up with you

imamonster : Thanks, I'm happy to see you like it as well. I'll read some of your stories once

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Thought it was a great start ,I liked it very much.
Thought it was a great start ,I liked it very much.

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rebelyell : Thank you, the beginning is a nice touch to the poem in my opinion
I'll fry you with my crimson flames!
rebelyell : Thank you, the beginning is a nice touch to the poem in my opinion

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