Back with Prince Fou…

Prince Fou-“WHEN WE WILL ARRIVE IN VIZZED TOWN!?”

Fawful-“Few minutes! I…HAVE…CHORTLES!!!”

Prince Fou-“*laughs* THOSE GIRLS ARE SO NAÏVE!! THEY THOUGHT
MY NAME IS JAKE BUT ITS FOU! My older brother is called Jake!” FLASHBACK: After
Prince Fou trapped Clock Town in a huuuuuge force field.

Lina-“Hey, I thought you loved me!”

Prince Fou-“You? A four year old girl and I SHOULD LOVE
HER!?”

Lina-“I’m 16 you idiot!”

Prince Fou-“WHATEVER! BLACK KYUREM AND WHITE KYUREM RETURN
NOW!” END OF FLASHBACK.

Zangya-“Master look! There’s a sign called ‘Welcome to
Vizzed Town! Have a nice day!’.”

Prince Fou-“Excellent! HERE I COME!” Prince Fou and his
minions arrived in Vizzed Town.

Imamonster-“Who are you? I’m monster!”

Prince Fou-“Out of my way kid! Let me trap this town into a
FORCE FIELD!”

Imamonster-“FORCE FIELD? OH NO, DAVIDEO7!!!!” imamonster
calls every Viz members. Prince Fou uses a blast canon at Eniitan. Enii fainted
:C!

Frodlex-“You! I’LL KILL YOU!” Frod takes out his sword to
attack Prince Fou. Prince Fou uses his blood sword and he stabs Frodlex.

Kimmeh-“FRODLEX! Btw…. Where’s Green?”

Zangya-“The green guy? We sent him in another dimension!”

Saria-“How dare you do this to my boyfriend!”

David-“This is bad! User, use your UNICORN POWER ATTACK!”

User-“With pleasure!” User uses his UNICORN ATTACK at
Zangya. Zangya deflects it and User got paralyzed. User got transformed into a
human!

User-“WHAT HAPPENED TO ME!? *He sees that he can use PSI
powers* Ha ha… NOW YOU’RE FINISHED!”

Saria-“We should leave immediately!” Fawful opens the same
blue portal like last time. Saria uses her sage powers to teleport some viz
members and her friends: imamonster, Eniitan, Link, Mido, user, the dead
frodlex, and some others.

Kimmeh-“HEY YOU FORGOT ME SARIA! OH OH NOT THE PORTAL!”
Zangya pushes Kimmeh in the portal. Back with Green… he’s having now a fierce
battle against all of his old villains. He finishes Asura.

Commander Yanmark-“After you, Zoro!”

Zoro-“Ha, you’re such a gentleman buddy!” Zoro charges at
Green. Suddenly, a man with orange clothes, golden hair attacks Zoro instead.

Green-“What the?” Another man with blue clothes, golden hair
prepares his special attack at all villains.

???-“An attack of the prince of all saiyans: FINAL FLASH!” A
beam of electricity injures all the villains.

???-“Come on, let’s take you to King Kai!”

Green-“King Kai? Who are you guys?”

???-“Hey, I’m Goku! The serious guy next to me is called
Vegeta!”

Green-“Nice to meet you both of you!”

Vegeta-“Come on, we’ll just use Instant transmission and we
arrive at King Kai immediately!” Vegeta and Goku uses Instant Transmission and
they arrive at King Kai’s planet.

Green-“That’s a beautiful place!” He sees a blue creature,
black clothes with black glasses.

???-“Welcome, Green.”

Green-“You know my name?”

Goku-“Of course he does! King Kai knows everything!”

King Kai-“*laughs*. Anyway Green, the world is in danger
again. Let me explain: The diabolical prince has returned. You can’t defeat him
with your own strength. You need a special item!”

Green-“What about my upgraded clothes by the Goddesses?”

King Kai-“I said you need a special item! You need ‘the dark
wand’.”

Green-“Dark wand?”

King Kai-“Yes, you need Whis’s permission first.” Green
laughs and he falls down to the floor.

Green-“WHIS COMES FROM THIS DEMENSION!?”

Vegeta-“Yes, he’s the god of destruction. I think he’s one
of the gods sages.”

Green-“I never knew that!”

King Kai-“BUT, the dark wand ISN’T at its full power. You
need the seven dragon balls to revive it!”

Green-“I see… I’m worried now about Saria :C!”

King Kai-“You need my apprentices help: Goku and Vegeta!”

Vegeta-“WHAT!? I THE PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS WILL NEVER ACCEPT
TO HELP A CHUMP!”

King Kai-“That’s no chump! He is the Goddesses’s chosen one!”

Goku-“HA HA VEGETA!” Kimmy falls on King Kai’s planet.

Green-“YIKES HE GOT KIMMY!”

King Kai-“Don’t worry about her! I’ll train her and
meanwhile, go see Whis!”

Goku-“Let’s go!” Goku uses Instant Transmission to teleport
to Earth.  They visit Whis’s house.

Whis-“Green? Why are you here? I’m training my students to
attack with feet and NO hands!”

Vegeta-“We need the dark wand!”

Whis-“MY WAND!? Why do you need it?”

Green-“The diabolical prince has returned that’s why!”

Whis-“Prince Fou? Take my wand then. REMEMBER, you have to
revive it at its full power! I’ll give you my dragon ball!”

Goku-“The one star dragon ball! Yes! 6 more to go!” Back
with Prince Fou…

Prince Fou-“BLACK KYUREM AND WHITE KYUREM! TRAP VIZZED TOWN
INTO A FORCE FIELD!!” They trap vizzed town into a force field. An unknown
person with a black coat, is spying on Prince Fou. Back with Green!

Vegeta-“Let’s search for the second dragon ball!”

Green-“HELL YEAH!” The magical goddess stone began to speak!

Psycha-“Heh heh, you made two new friends!”

Green-“What about it?”

Psycha-“Your journey will be difficult as usual! Be careful,
there’s some elite mavericks in this dimension as well!”

Green-“WHAT :C!? The mavericks will never die?”

Psycha-“Exactly! That’s why we chose the Ultra heroes to
stop the maverick war!”

Green-“I see… btw, how’s Roy?”

Psycha-“He’s fine. Now, I have to resume to read my books!
BYE!”

Goku-“That was a random haphazard!” The trio
starts another quest…

Oh hey..! It's me! *Waits a few measly seconds and reads the next few lines* Oh hey! I'm dead! Neat! I was thinking maybe you should post all your chapters in your bio in order, make it easier for people to access the earlier chapters in your story and potentially getting a little more noticed.

However a major flaw here is that there is barely any depth here, you never really go into detail about anything, this is going to end up making your story look really bad and honestly it probably already has, you really need to work on this because honestly all it seems to be is a rough script at this point.

Epic chapter dude. I really enjoyed it. Fun fact. My First  and second name is Fouad Anthony.. So... maybe I'm prince fou too.... spooky ^^