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Kyro: What! Is this! I scream from the top of my lungs
(I didn't know others would get hurt I don't anybody to be hurt no!)

Chapter 5 were we chosen for this or were we meant for this?

Kyro : ( I don't know what to think what to say how to act)

Rita : ( Maybe I'm wrong maybe he is cruel he won't even shed a tear.. No! I
know he is a good person inside) sniff cough okay guys let's move!

Kyro : huh? As I look up to see nothing but a blinding light then I'm in a dark shadowy
room.

?? : Kyro?

Kyro : Why is this happening was I chosen for this?

?? : were you?

Kyro : What are you saying I just asked that!?

?? : did you? Are you are they?

Kyro : They as I think back towards everyone.. Hey! What is this place who are
you

?? : Who I think you mean what?

Kyro : ( what? Does it mean it can't be an inanimateobject can it?) hey can you answer one
question then?

?? : okay the orbs

Kyro : ( Wow usually the person asking gets to choose the subject but fine)
yeah what are they why are there creatures inside them

?? : those aren't creatures they are spirits of departed souls who wish to
reclaim their life and they chose you because you have the power to summon
them.

Kyro: ( It put that really confusing) summon them how? why'd they choose me?

?? : Because Kyro you have a special power no one else does. to summon them
just call out their name and maybe you might have to make a pledge.

Kyro: How do i know their name and pledging?

?? : if they think your worthy they will tell you but you have to concentrate
and listen. Pledging you'll find out i'm sure. goodbye Kyro we'll meet again
someday.

Kyro: Wait! as i start to fall into a dark pit and ?wake up seeing
everyone getting ready to leave. Hey guys we'll have to split up.

All: Gasp why what do you mean?

Kyro: We'll cover more ground that way Rita you lead a group too the school
ruins and find weapons. Trina you and someone go find a map at the University
building.

Rita and Trina: Right! what about you though?

Kyro: don't worry about me besides we shouldn't spend so much time idling around
here we might all get attacked again let's move on!

as i run away from the group i see Dando and Trina running in the opposite
direction then i see Tachi and Rita going back to the ruins of our school. i
run to find Riley and maybe some other people who can help out.

Kyro : wait a minute as i stop running aw dammit i don't even know where the
heck i'm going great as i sigh. then all of a sudden an earthquake shakes me
around and i fall down and then out of nowhere trees appear all over the place
and then houses animals you name it. ?

Kyro: what is going on here? why did trees and houses appear where did those
deer and their fawn come from?

?: Kyro? is that you?

Kyro: huh as i look up to see Riley standing there with a bunch of weapons hey!
i've been looking all over for you

Riley: you have? well i;m here now come on up as he tries to help me up. but i
object and say i can do it myself and he just smiles.

Kyro: (he is a little odd but i do sense a great kindness to him) soo you know
why this has been happening?

Riley: you expect me to know!? hows that work out well i just found you like
that okay

Kyro: i groan really so you anything about this place were at.

Riley: no idea hey are we the only two people here that are normal?

Kyro: as i try to figure out what he meant by Normal. No i there is more of us
four to be exact we split up.

Riley: Why did you do that don't you know how dangerous this place is there are
monsters and stuff everywhere.

Kyro: i Know that's why i have a sword as he looks disapointed that i just have
a sword. i say hey why don't we go back to where i came from and look for them?

Riley: yeah sure.. as his voice trails off
and then a rumbling noise starts to move towards us.

Kyro: are you serious? as this weird thing with a mask comes up to us with
large sharp teeth sticking out of the mask.

Riley: oh no a scary monster as he pulls his guns out and starts shooting it's
face but all it does it scream but it still just keeps running. oh s*** it
won't give up.

Kyro: fine we'll teach him a lesson it won't forget as i unsheath my sword i
jump towards it slashing it's face in half just to have the mask tearing off
and saw the horrid face inside. Ah! that's hideous i keep slashing midair but
only landing baby cut's since gravity was coming in too early.

but as it was pulling it's face towards mine going to bite me off a javelin
goes right through it with blood going on my face and the monster goes into
dust.

Kyro: thanks a bunch Riley it would have eaten me as i grab his weapon and hand
it back. and we start running towards the school to meet up with everyone
again. ( I wonder if there are others like us chosen for this task?)

??: You'll find out soon enough Kyro just regroup and the journey to save this
place there are more like you i can't tell you too much but remember this my
name is Callabra i will guide you but you must find the tomb of Randerstand
then together we'll find the rest of the competitors to save this place.

there was a lot of dialogue but this chapter did explain a little of what's gonna
happen later in the story guys stay tuned.

AHH summons stink!!
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Eniitan :
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Bintsy :
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Kyro: What! Is this! I scream from the top of my lungs
(I didn't know others would get hurt I don't anybody to be hurt no!)

Chapter 5 were we chosen for this or were we meant for this?

Kyro : ( I don't know what to think what to say how to act)

Rita : ( Maybe I'm wrong maybe he is cruel he won't even shed a tear.. No! I
know he is a good person inside) sniff cough okay guys let's move!

Kyro : huh? As I look up to see nothing but a blinding light then I'm in a dark shadowy
room.

?? : Kyro?

Kyro : Why is this happening was I chosen for this?

?? : were you?

Kyro : What are you saying I just asked that!?

?? : did you? Are you are they?

Kyro : They as I think back towards everyone.. Hey! What is this place who are
you

?? : Who I think you mean what?

Kyro : ( what? Does it mean it can't be an inanimateobject can it?) hey can you answer one
question then?

?? : okay the orbs

Kyro : ( Wow usually the person asking gets to choose the subject but fine)
yeah what are they why are there creatures inside them

?? : those aren't creatures they are spirits of departed souls who wish to
reclaim their life and they chose you because you have the power to summon
them.

Kyro: ( It put that really confusing) summon them how? why'd they choose me?

?? : Because Kyro you have a special power no one else does. to summon them
just call out their name and maybe you might have to make a pledge.

Kyro: How do i know their name and pledging?

?? : if they think your worthy they will tell you but you have to concentrate
and listen. Pledging you'll find out i'm sure. goodbye Kyro we'll meet again
someday.

Kyro: Wait! as i start to fall into a dark pit and ?wake up seeing
everyone getting ready to leave. Hey guys we'll have to split up.

All: Gasp why what do you mean?

Kyro: We'll cover more ground that way Rita you lead a group too the school
ruins and find weapons. Trina you and someone go find a map at the University
building.

Rita and Trina: Right! what about you though?

Kyro: don't worry about me besides we shouldn't spend so much time idling around
here we might all get attacked again let's move on!

as i run away from the group i see Dando and Trina running in the opposite
direction then i see Tachi and Rita going back to the ruins of our school. i
run to find Riley and maybe some other people who can help out.

Kyro : wait a minute as i stop running aw dammit i don't even know where the
heck i'm going great as i sigh. then all of a sudden an earthquake shakes me
around and i fall down and then out of nowhere trees appear all over the place
and then houses animals you name it. ?

Kyro: what is going on here? why did trees and houses appear where did those
deer and their fawn come from?

?: Kyro? is that you?

Kyro: huh as i look up to see Riley standing there with a bunch of weapons hey!
i've been looking all over for you

Riley: you have? well i;m here now come on up as he tries to help me up. but i
object and say i can do it myself and he just smiles.

Kyro: (he is a little odd but i do sense a great kindness to him) soo you know
why this has been happening?

Riley: you expect me to know!? hows that work out well i just found you like
that okay

Kyro: i groan really so you anything about this place were at.

Riley: no idea hey are we the only two people here that are normal?

Kyro: as i try to figure out what he meant by Normal. No i there is more of us
four to be exact we split up.

Riley: Why did you do that don't you know how dangerous this place is there are
monsters and stuff everywhere.

Kyro: i Know that's why i have a sword as he looks disapointed that i just have
a sword. i say hey why don't we go back to where i came from and look for them?

Riley: yeah sure.. as his voice trails off
and then a rumbling noise starts to move towards us.

Kyro: are you serious? as this weird thing with a mask comes up to us with
large sharp teeth sticking out of the mask.

Riley: oh no a scary monster as he pulls his guns out and starts shooting it's
face but all it does it scream but it still just keeps running. oh s*** it
won't give up.

Kyro: fine we'll teach him a lesson it won't forget as i unsheath my sword i
jump towards it slashing it's face in half just to have the mask tearing off
and saw the horrid face inside. Ah! that's hideous i keep slashing midair but
only landing baby cut's since gravity was coming in too early.

but as it was pulling it's face towards mine going to bite me off a javelin
goes right through it with blood going on my face and the monster goes into
dust.

Kyro: thanks a bunch Riley it would have eaten me as i grab his weapon and hand
it back. and we start running towards the school to meet up with everyone
again. ( I wonder if there are others like us chosen for this task?)

??: You'll find out soon enough Kyro just regroup and the journey to save this
place there are more like you i can't tell you too much but remember this my
name is Callabra i will guide you but you must find the tomb of Randerstand
then together we'll find the rest of the competitors to save this place.

there was a lot of dialogue but this chapter did explain a little of what's gonna
happen later in the story guys stay tuned.

AHH summons stink!!
AriaAngelDream :
Eniitan :
zanderlex :
Frodlex :
Bintsy :
NintendoFanKimmy :
greenluigi :
SUX2BU :
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