Welcome to this 600 word special chapter! Thanks for reading this SPECIAL chapter! This will be a mix of the requested things. Green; What the heck....... Eirinn:Is he a wizard or something. That would be cool...... Sword Legion; No time for jokes!! Eirinn; It wasnt a joke. TheFadedWarrior;Your a wizard harry. Sword legion;I said no time for jokes!!!!! TheFadedWarrior;It was not a joke monster is HARRY POTTER! Sword legion: This is getting ridicoulos. BAM! TheFadedWarrior got blown up by the green bomberman. Green;Son of a... AAAAAAAH BAM he blew up The green bomber. Green;Hmmph filth. Eirinn: I have never seen Green like this. Green; HAHAHAHAHA. WHAT FILTH WHAT FILTH I will just get my sword to kill everyone. Wait what. The sword was gone...... Green:Nevermind BAM BAM BAM He was so fast you could not see it. Hmpph. The voice spoke again.It said SO YOU HAVE COMPLETED BOMBERMAN HAHAHAHA I HAVE A PRESENT Swoosh Everyone that got blown up were alive again. They were in a arena. There was no audience. The voice spoke again. HAHAHA HERE HERE. The elephant bandits came out! we are Seigh Beigh and Feigh. BOW DOWN TO US. AND to these 2 These Arent Taartles. Bebop shut up.. Eirinn: WHAT BEBOP AND ROCKSTEADY!? The voice spoke again. HAHAHAHAHA FIGHT FIGHT. Green: No first where is my sword... WHERE IS THE SWORD OF V YOU IDIOT. The voice spoke again. The sword? HAHAHAHAHAHA I WILL NEVER TELL YOU. NEVER. Seigh: Hello. Seigh stood behind green a fist right trough his stomach. Green: Ah aahh...... Cough cough. Blood was all over the place. Seigh id you really think i was that stupid? DID YOU REALLY THINK I WAS THAT STUPID AAAAAHHH. Punch after punch until... green died. Eirinn; NOOO Sword legion; ..... This cant be he was the leader. The voice spoke again. DID YOU REALLY THINK THAT. MONSTER WAS THE ONE THAT HELPED EVERYONE FROM THE START. Suddenly the voice of monster spoke. No No Green was the leader. I dont deserve it.. AAAAAAH BAM A blow to head by rocksteady to eirinn. Rocksteady. Did you really think that this fight was over just because you have problems? Eirinn: OUCH! Feigh; Ah well.... Bebop: THIS IS TO EASY. Kirbman: NO ITS NOT. YOU KILLED MY FRIEND. YOU KILLRF MY FRIEND. YOU WILL PAY Bam bam bam punch after punch in the stomach of Seigh. AAAAH YOU WILL PAY DIE! A beam shot out of the hand of Kirbman Seigh got got in the beam and was pulverized. Feigh: What the. Kirbman:Like that! Eirinn: THAT WAS SO EPIC! IT WAS SO COOL! Kirbmanhut up. Eirinn: Oh. Kirbman: This fight is not over . Bam the fists of Kirbman and Rocksteady clashed. It was epic Fist after fist. Rocksteady punched Kirbman in the face! Kirbman: Oh no you did not. BAM now kirbman delivered a punch to rocksteady's face. Meanwhile Green was in a strange world. Someone that looked like ellen from the ellen show. Said. Hello there. How did you die. Green Dead!? i think i got killed. The stranger that looked like ellen said; Killed huh? My name is Ellean. Im the twin sister of Ellen from the ellen show! Green; What the..... Ellean said If the gods like you enough they can made you a Sheader. If you are a sheader it means that you have special privelages. So i can help you. What is your name? Green replied. my name is Green Luigi. You have killed someone. So i think i need to take you to the gods. They will tell me. Green said. Did i kill someone? Ellean: Yes it saids right here killed bombers. Greeneriously that was a video game. Ellean:No it says right here you blew them up. so the walk to the gods begun

imamonster : great chapter monster ^^! but i never knew green will be killed by one of the elephant bandits XD!

greenluigi : Yeah lol! anyway  are there some things you would like to see in the story?

For some reason I found the exchange between Sword, tfw, and I hilarious. " Sword legion: This is getting ridicoulos." Made me laugh pretty good with that one.

The only thing I could suggest would be better spacing especially between lines. Like:

Eirinn - I'm awesome
imamonster - No, really you're not, and you know that.

Or even better

"I'm awesome" Eirinn said.

imamonster looked at him with a frown and replied "No, really you're not, and you know that."

Each new comment should start on a new line, unless it's the same person saying two different things. Like this:

"I'm awesome." Eirinn said with a smile. "Don't you think I'm awesome, Monster?" He asked as he kicked another bomb at the White Bomberman.

"No, not at all." Imamonster replied dryly.

I hope that makes sense. And even if you don't try that, I can't wait to see what happens next in the chapter.

Eirinn : Yeah i will do that. Still a little ill its hard to see words. They are scrambled lol.

imamonster : so what Viz warriors are gonna actually survive because i have been seeing a few deathes and i wondering who is gonna survive the outcome of the story it's seems like a good story though

deg2000 : Well everyone got resurrected only green is dead. Thanks for reading!