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03-23-14 01:50 PM
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This is the new version of a story I created a few years ago. I created this version today. Please let me know if I made any grammar and/or spelling mistakes.

Italic text: part of the story
Non-italic text: not part of the story

One day Pac-Man was watching his television in his house when someone knocked on his door.

"Who is it?" Pac-Man asked.

"This is Greeny. I came to battle you."

Greeny is a green ghost that I invented.

"I will be out there soon," Pac-Man told Greeny.

"Good luck with your battle," Ms. Pac-Man said to Pac-Man.

"Thank you," Pac-Man said to Ms. Pac-Man.

Pac-Man waved to Ms. Pac-Man and Jr. Pac-Man, and then he went outside.

Greeny attempted to attack Pac-Man. Pac-Man leapt over him and then Greeny crashed into Pac-Man's electrical fence.

Greeny was different from a normal ghost. He had a genetic mutation that caused him to be unable to pass through things.

"OUCH!" Greeny screamed, and then he fell onto the ground.

Pac-Man charged toward Greeny. Greeny immediately got up and then leapt. Pac-Man leapt and then punched Greeny's right eye. Greeny fell onto the ground, and then he leapt. He attempted to punch Pac-Man. Pac-Man dodged the punch and then kicked Greeny's back.

Yes, Pac-Man and Greeny had arms and legs.

Greeny fell onto the ground, and then he attempted to get up. Pac-Man pretended that he was about to punch Greeny. Greeny lost his balance and then fell onto the ground. Pac-Man dived down and then rapidly punched the top of Greeny five times. Greeny slowly got up and then charged toward Pac-Man. Pac-Man sprinted toward his electrical fence and then jumped over it. Greeny slowly ran toward Pac-Man's electrical fence and then crashed into it.

"OUCH!" he screamed.

Pac-Man sprinted toward his electrical fence and then jumped over it. He charged toward Greeny and then kicked his back.

"I SURRENDER!" Greeny shouted. Then he laid on the ground for ten seconds. He very slowly got up and then very slowly walked away from Pac-Man's house.

Pac-Man ran back into his house. He looked at Ms. Pac-Man and Jr. Pac-Man, who were looking out of the window in the kitchen.

"Jr. and I saw the entire fight! You are a really great fighter! Greeny is not! Ha ha ha!" Ms. Pac-Man said.

"He is so stupid! He thought he could beat me!" Pac-Man said.

Pac-Man's cell phone rang. He picked it up.

"Hello," he said.

"Hello," Greeny said. "Tomorrow, I will get revenge for what you did to me today! My friend Shiny and I will come over to your house and fight you! Shiny is a really good fighter! Mua ha ha ha ha ha ha!"

Shiny is a yellow ghost that I invented.

"Thank you for telling me that! Since you told me that, I can prepare for it!" Pac-Man said.

"AW CRAP! I did not think of that!" Greeny yelled.

The end.
This is the new version of a story I created a few years ago. I created this version today. Please let me know if I made any grammar and/or spelling mistakes.

Italic text: part of the story
Non-italic text: not part of the story

One day Pac-Man was watching his television in his house when someone knocked on his door.

"Who is it?" Pac-Man asked.

"This is Greeny. I came to battle you."

Greeny is a green ghost that I invented.

"I will be out there soon," Pac-Man told Greeny.

"Good luck with your battle," Ms. Pac-Man said to Pac-Man.

"Thank you," Pac-Man said to Ms. Pac-Man.

Pac-Man waved to Ms. Pac-Man and Jr. Pac-Man, and then he went outside.

Greeny attempted to attack Pac-Man. Pac-Man leapt over him and then Greeny crashed into Pac-Man's electrical fence.

Greeny was different from a normal ghost. He had a genetic mutation that caused him to be unable to pass through things.

"OUCH!" Greeny screamed, and then he fell onto the ground.

Pac-Man charged toward Greeny. Greeny immediately got up and then leapt. Pac-Man leapt and then punched Greeny's right eye. Greeny fell onto the ground, and then he leapt. He attempted to punch Pac-Man. Pac-Man dodged the punch and then kicked Greeny's back.

Yes, Pac-Man and Greeny had arms and legs.

Greeny fell onto the ground, and then he attempted to get up. Pac-Man pretended that he was about to punch Greeny. Greeny lost his balance and then fell onto the ground. Pac-Man dived down and then rapidly punched the top of Greeny five times. Greeny slowly got up and then charged toward Pac-Man. Pac-Man sprinted toward his electrical fence and then jumped over it. Greeny slowly ran toward Pac-Man's electrical fence and then crashed into it.

"OUCH!" he screamed.

Pac-Man sprinted toward his electrical fence and then jumped over it. He charged toward Greeny and then kicked his back.

"I SURRENDER!" Greeny shouted. Then he laid on the ground for ten seconds. He very slowly got up and then very slowly walked away from Pac-Man's house.

Pac-Man ran back into his house. He looked at Ms. Pac-Man and Jr. Pac-Man, who were looking out of the window in the kitchen.

"Jr. and I saw the entire fight! You are a really great fighter! Greeny is not! Ha ha ha!" Ms. Pac-Man said.

"He is so stupid! He thought he could beat me!" Pac-Man said.

Pac-Man's cell phone rang. He picked it up.

"Hello," he said.

"Hello," Greeny said. "Tomorrow, I will get revenge for what you did to me today! My friend Shiny and I will come over to your house and fight you! Shiny is a really good fighter! Mua ha ha ha ha ha ha!"

Shiny is a yellow ghost that I invented.

"Thank you for telling me that! Since you told me that, I can prepare for it!" Pac-Man said.

"AW CRAP! I did not think of that!" Greeny yelled.

The end.
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(edited by Frodlex on 04-01-14 06:22 PM)     Post Rating: 2   Liked By: Mohammedroxx3, Spicy,

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Pretty good story man! I like pac man and I think this story turned out pretty good. I like how Pac man just completely beat him up and made him surrender. Maybe he wouldn't be such a bad candidate for ssb4 after all with those moves XD.


Your layout was just perfect for the story as well. I don't see any grammar or spelling mistakes. Overall this turned out to be a pretty good story man, keep up the good work and I look forward to part 2! Hopefully Pac man will continue to emerge victorious! 
Pretty good story man! I like pac man and I think this story turned out pretty good. I like how Pac man just completely beat him up and made him surrender. Maybe he wouldn't be such a bad candidate for ssb4 after all with those moves XD.


Your layout was just perfect for the story as well. I don't see any grammar or spelling mistakes. Overall this turned out to be a pretty good story man, keep up the good work and I look forward to part 2! Hopefully Pac man will continue to emerge victorious! 
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