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The Awakening of a New Soldier (Chapter 4-5)
01-17-14 11:51 PM
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Hey guys! Well, I guess it is now time to continue on with my story. I know no one probably doesn't even bother or care to see my stories but oh well. I guess I still need to continue on anyways. So now, we are currently at chapter 4 of my story. If you haven't already, then please read the prologue and previous chapters before reading on! The Prologue can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71309 Chapters 1-3 can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71409 Ok, now lets begin writing! Chapter 4: Waiting For the Delayed Announcement Tom and Bob continued to stand right in the corner. Right in the same spot for about 20 whole minutes. Bob was starting to get impatient and he whispered to Tom how much longer they must wait until it is finally Time. Bob whispered, "Hey Tom, how much longer do we have to wait? It has been forever!" Tom whispered back, "Chill man. We don't even have any homework to do so we can wait. And I doubt they will take any longer. I'm sure the announcement will come up soon. Anyways, stay vigilant and remember what I told you. If you misheard the correct classroom, this will surely ruin most of our plans." Bob whispers back, "Alright... Uhh... Can I sit down on the floor for a little bit until the announcement comes up?" Tom said, "Very well then. Go ahead. As long as you don't fall a Chapter 5: The Lack of Vigilance & Good Luck Tom and Bob were both still sitting on the floor and they continued to talk. They both haven't waken up yet to their plan. Their close friendship distracted them from what they are supposed to do. They still continued to talk and the whole cafeteria was still silent with no one around. They were the only 2 who were talking and and moving in the cafeteria. Shortly after that. The announcement on the microphone came. Tom jumped because he got shocked. Afterwards, this is all what he heard from the rest of the announcement, "All teachers, once again be sure that they are no students left in the school and all teachers report to the classroom. Thank you." Bob whispers, "Uhh... Tom, did you hear the classroom number?" Tom was silent. He was embarrassed and he stood still. He had a blank face and he just didn't know what to do. Tom then said, "We failed. We were not watchful enough to hear the classroom number. We missed most of the announcement. I wasn't paying attention and we got distracted." Bob then whispers back in a saddened voice, "I'm very sorry Tom for being stupid. It was all my fault for starting this conversation and distracting ourselves." Tom then said, "No, Bob. It was my fault for reminding you to shut up. but we can still figure things out but our plan won't go so great as planned." Bob then noticed something vibrating in his pocket. It was his Iphone. Bob's Iphone displayed a message saying that there was not enough storage left to continue recording. Bob then got a big grin on his face and said, "Tom! Guess what? I left my Iphone to record a video while it was in my pocket! I forgot to stop it from recording! It must mean that it also recorded our whole conversation and the announcement!" Tom then got a big grin on his face from this crazy amount of luck and he said, "Wow. We are really lucky this time. Next time, we must watch out. Now, quickly, replay the video and lets hear the announcement!" Bob then tapped on the screen of his Iphone to play. Oddly enough, the video was almost 12 hours long. He must have left his Iphone to record something for a long time. Bob started skipping around to look for the announcement in his video. Skipping around on a 12 hour long video was one heck of a challenge for Bob to pull off. He continued to have trouble especially since he had large fingers. Bob then gave the Iphone to Tom and said, "Tom, my fingers are too big, can you possibly find the announcement in this long video for me?" Tom then took the Iphone and when he noticed that it was almost 12 hours long, he said, "Oh my goodness! What were you doing?" Bob said, "Well, I simply forgot to stop my Iphone from recording." Tom laughed. And then Bob grinned back saying, "Well, would do you expect from me?" Tom continued to skip around through this extremely long video. Most of the video was nothing but darkness because it was in his pocket the whole time. He started hearing a teacher brag about herself in the video. Tom knew that he probably recorded the whole school day. Tom then continued to skip until he started hearing the conversation between him and Bob about last summer and his family. Tom said, "Almost there..." And then he found the announcement. He then put his ear onto the Iphone and he heard the full announcement. Tom then said, "It's in room 142! That is in first floor! Now we know were to go Bob! Way to go man!" Bob then said, "I redeemed myself so quickly." Tom then said, "Come on, lets run down to first floor. Once we reach first floor, we will quietly walk through the hallways and make sure that no teacher is in our way. Once we find the room, we will stand near the door, put our ears nearby and hear what they are saying! Got it?" Bob said, "Alrighty." They then began to run down the stairs as quick as possible. Bob tried his hardest to keep up with Tom. They then arrived to first floor. They slowly walked through the hallways cautiously and ready for anything. Or at least, Tom was ready for anything after what just happened. They continued to walk. They were getting closer and closer to reaching the correct room. What will Tom and Bob hear from the teachers? Will they get caught? Will they hear something important or insignificant? Find out in the upcoming chapters! Stay tuned for what will (or may) happen next! Thanks for reading (if you actually even bothered to read anything) and have an awesome vizzed day everyone! The Prologue can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71309 Chapters 1-3 can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71409 Ok, now lets begin writing! Chapter 4: Waiting For the Delayed Announcement Tom and Bob continued to stand right in the corner. Right in the same spot for about 20 whole minutes. Bob was starting to get impatient and he whispered to Tom how much longer they must wait until it is finally Time. Bob whispered, "Hey Tom, how much longer do we have to wait? It has been forever!" Tom whispered back, "Chill man. We don't even have any homework to do so we can wait. And I doubt they will take any longer. I'm sure the announcement will come up soon. Anyways, stay vigilant and remember what I told you. If you misheard the correct classroom, this will surely ruin most of our plans." Bob whispers back, "Alright... Uhh... Can I sit down on the floor for a little bit until the announcement comes up?" Tom said, "Very well then. Go ahead. As long as you don't fall a Chapter 5: The Lack of Vigilance & Good Luck Tom and Bob were both still sitting on the floor and they continued to talk. They both haven't waken up yet to their plan. Their close friendship distracted them from what they are supposed to do. They still continued to talk and the whole cafeteria was still silent with no one around. They were the only 2 who were talking and and moving in the cafeteria. Shortly after that. The announcement on the microphone came. Tom jumped because he got shocked. Afterwards, this is all what he heard from the rest of the announcement, "All teachers, once again be sure that they are no students left in the school and all teachers report to the classroom. Thank you." Bob whispers, "Uhh... Tom, did you hear the classroom number?" Tom was silent. He was embarrassed and he stood still. He had a blank face and he just didn't know what to do. Tom then said, "We failed. We were not watchful enough to hear the classroom number. We missed most of the announcement. I wasn't paying attention and we got distracted." Bob then whispers back in a saddened voice, "I'm very sorry Tom for being stupid. It was all my fault for starting this conversation and distracting ourselves." Tom then said, "No, Bob. It was my fault for reminding you to shut up. but we can still figure things out but our plan won't go so great as planned." Bob then noticed something vibrating in his pocket. It was his Iphone. Bob's Iphone displayed a message saying that there was not enough storage left to continue recording. Bob then got a big grin on his face and said, "Tom! Guess what? I left my Iphone to record a video while it was in my pocket! I forgot to stop it from recording! It must mean that it also recorded our whole conversation and the announcement!" Tom then got a big grin on his face from this crazy amount of luck and he said, "Wow. We are really lucky this time. Next time, we must watch out. Now, quickly, replay the video and lets hear the announcement!" Bob then tapped on the screen of his Iphone to play. Oddly enough, the video was almost 12 hours long. He must have left his Iphone to record something for a long time. Bob started skipping around to look for the announcement in his video. Skipping around on a 12 hour long video was one heck of a challenge for Bob to pull off. He continued to have trouble especially since he had large fingers. Bob then gave the Iphone to Tom and said, "Tom, my fingers are too big, can you possibly find the announcement in this long video for me?" Tom then took the Iphone and when he noticed that it was almost 12 hours long, he said, "Oh my goodness! What were you doing?" Bob said, "Well, I simply forgot to stop my Iphone from recording." Tom laughed. And then Bob grinned back saying, "Well, would do you expect from me?" Tom continued to skip around through this extremely long video. Most of the video was nothing but darkness because it was in his pocket the whole time. He started hearing a teacher brag about herself in the video. Tom knew that he probably recorded the whole school day. Tom then continued to skip until he started hearing the conversation between him and Bob about last summer and his family. Tom said, "Almost there..." And then he found the announcement. He then put his ear onto the Iphone and he heard the full announcement. Tom then said, "It's in room 142! That is in first floor! Now we know were to go Bob! Way to go man!" Bob then said, "I redeemed myself so quickly." Tom then said, "Come on, lets run down to first floor. Once we reach first floor, we will quietly walk through the hallways and make sure that no teacher is in our way. Once we find the room, we will stand near the door, put our ears nearby and hear what they are saying! Got it?" Bob said, "Alrighty." They then began to run down the stairs as quick as possible. Bob tried his hardest to keep up with Tom. They then arrived to first floor. They slowly walked through the hallways cautiously and ready for anything. Or at least, Tom was ready for anything after what just happened. They continued to walk. They were getting closer and closer to reaching the correct room. What will Tom and Bob hear from the teachers? Will they get caught? Will they hear something important or insignificant? Find out in the upcoming chapters! Stay tuned for what will (or may) happen next! Thanks for reading (if you actually even bothered to read anything) and have an awesome vizzed day everyone! |
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