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The Awakening of a New Soldier (Prologue)

 

01-13-14 11:05 PM
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Hey guys. So today, I will be making a story... about a guy who became a soldier in an unexpected way. Due to the lack of time, I may rush threw making this story but I will try my best. I hope you all like it. but also, if you are NOT going to read or at least skim through it well, then please DON'T reply. Not trying to backseat mod but it just doesn't make me smile when I see replies to my stories that seems like as if they didn't bother to read.  Anyways, let us get started!

Prologue:

It was around the end of summer time and the 1st day of school was coming. There was once a boy who is around the age of 13. His name was Tom. Some people seemed happy with their names they were born with and some hated their names they were born with, however, Tom didn't seem to care about his name. He is not sad but he is not happy either about his name. Others seem to always wonder whether someone is happy or sad for their name, however, they were never able to get a clear answer from Tom. When someone asks him whether he was satisfied with his name, he sometimes said, "Uhh, I guess?" and he sometimes said, "Huh. Good." If someone really begins to bother him about it, he would say something like, "Ok man. Geesh. Why do you care so much?" And sometimes, he would just go off topic. His father's name was Johnathan and his mother's name was Mary. One of the first things Tom's close friends would say about is that both him and his parents really love each other but in an odd way. When others talk about it in the school Tom goes to, he would blush and be silent. He seems to shy away from this kind of topic from everyone, but his own parents. Tom has no brothers or sisters. Tom lives in a fairly big house with his own room, his own bathroom, and a living room with his parents. His parents also has one big room and a bathroom. When other asks him if he wishes to have a brother or sister, he does not seem to answer just like when someone asks him whether he likes his own name or not. Indeed, people said that he was strange. They didn't seem sure whether he was strange in a good or bad way. Other strange things is that people always can't seem to remember Tom's height or weight. Some said they think he weighs a 100 pounds and is 5 feet or 4 inches tall and some people said he was even taller. But Tom didn't care, he said, "As long as I have the health to run, jump, and do whatever I desire then why should I care?". In last summer, it was one of Tom's favorite and good times of his life. The main reason was because he spent his whole summer with his family. He did nothing but fun and games. He even went to Florida, went to the beach nearly everyday with this family and swim in the pool. He said that he was gonna really miss the summer because he knows that once school comes, he won't be able to spend as much time with his family as before. Though, he was also somewhat happy to be able to see some of his friends at school again. Some of his friends were his close friends, some were in between close and yet a bully, and some were total bullies. His friends that were both a bully and yet a close friends are usually about 2 or more years older than Tom. They love to prank him a lot and yet they were kind of most cases where he needed help. One of Tom's best friends was Bob. He was a big and fat boy of 14 years old. He knows Tom very well and he knows Bob very well. Except, the only thing Bob was never able to know about Tom was whether he liked his own name or not. Usually, Bob and Tom would keep loads of secrets between each other that no one in the whole world will ever know, just except for the both of them. They usually seem to love to backbite quite a lot about the bullies in their school. They would also make fun of them behind their backs and they really enjoy it which makes themselves feel better at times they are stressed out. Later on, as time went by, there was a new war beginning in an "unknown" area. However, no one in Tom's area seemed to care because all they knew was that, "it was far away from their area", however, some of the teachers in his school seemed like they know something that no one else knows. The teachers would always discuss something after class and they would lock the doors and let all the students out of the classrooms. Tom was always curious. He was usually the one here who would always want to be the one who is the first one to find out about a secret that no one else knows yet. Tom was beginning to suspect that the teachers really do know something that no one else knows. He was worried but yet somewhat excited to actually know what they were talking about. He was really about to think about eavesdropping among the teachers in the classroom to find out. He then went to his friend Bob next door and told him about this. Bob then said, "Hmm... sounds fun! I don't mind helping you out and spying on the teachers after school. I really wonder what I grade I got in my summer homework!" Then Tom said, "Uhh... I'm not exactly sure if they are talking about any homework or grades. I think it is something very serious..." Bob then interrupted with his deep voice saying, "Whats more important to a teacher than thinking about grades?" Then Tom quickly said back, "Well, that is what I am trying to find out man! It would be one heck of a disappointment if they were only talking about grades. I just... I must know what they are talking about!!!" Then Bob said back half-asleep, "What are they talking about?" Then Tom said, "Bob, just go to sleep man. It's as if you are randomly getting drunk out of nowhere. Tomorrow morning when we go to school, I will let you know around recess time and I will arrange a plan for finding out what the teachers are talking about and on how we will spy on them without getting caught!" Bob then laughed and said, "Yea, I think I need some sleep. I feel stupid." He then walks away. Afterwards, when Bob was about to enter his house, They both waved to each other and smiled. Tom then went back home, sat down in his chair at his room, and started drawing a diagram for his plan. He seemed really excited for tomorrow. 

Will Tom ever find out what are the teachers possibly hiding? Will he find out something good? Or something unfortunate? Stay tuned in the 1st chapter. That is all for now. I may or may not complete the whole story depending if I have time to make stories or if anyone is even interested in my stories. XD Thank you for reading this everyone and I hope you all have a good day on vizzed.
Hey guys. So today, I will be making a story... about a guy who became a soldier in an unexpected way. Due to the lack of time, I may rush threw making this story but I will try my best. I hope you all like it. but also, if you are NOT going to read or at least skim through it well, then please DON'T reply. Not trying to backseat mod but it just doesn't make me smile when I see replies to my stories that seems like as if they didn't bother to read.  Anyways, let us get started!

Prologue:

It was around the end of summer time and the 1st day of school was coming. There was once a boy who is around the age of 13. His name was Tom. Some people seemed happy with their names they were born with and some hated their names they were born with, however, Tom didn't seem to care about his name. He is not sad but he is not happy either about his name. Others seem to always wonder whether someone is happy or sad for their name, however, they were never able to get a clear answer from Tom. When someone asks him whether he was satisfied with his name, he sometimes said, "Uhh, I guess?" and he sometimes said, "Huh. Good." If someone really begins to bother him about it, he would say something like, "Ok man. Geesh. Why do you care so much?" And sometimes, he would just go off topic. His father's name was Johnathan and his mother's name was Mary. One of the first things Tom's close friends would say about is that both him and his parents really love each other but in an odd way. When others talk about it in the school Tom goes to, he would blush and be silent. He seems to shy away from this kind of topic from everyone, but his own parents. Tom has no brothers or sisters. Tom lives in a fairly big house with his own room, his own bathroom, and a living room with his parents. His parents also has one big room and a bathroom. When other asks him if he wishes to have a brother or sister, he does not seem to answer just like when someone asks him whether he likes his own name or not. Indeed, people said that he was strange. They didn't seem sure whether he was strange in a good or bad way. Other strange things is that people always can't seem to remember Tom's height or weight. Some said they think he weighs a 100 pounds and is 5 feet or 4 inches tall and some people said he was even taller. But Tom didn't care, he said, "As long as I have the health to run, jump, and do whatever I desire then why should I care?". In last summer, it was one of Tom's favorite and good times of his life. The main reason was because he spent his whole summer with his family. He did nothing but fun and games. He even went to Florida, went to the beach nearly everyday with this family and swim in the pool. He said that he was gonna really miss the summer because he knows that once school comes, he won't be able to spend as much time with his family as before. Though, he was also somewhat happy to be able to see some of his friends at school again. Some of his friends were his close friends, some were in between close and yet a bully, and some were total bullies. His friends that were both a bully and yet a close friends are usually about 2 or more years older than Tom. They love to prank him a lot and yet they were kind of most cases where he needed help. One of Tom's best friends was Bob. He was a big and fat boy of 14 years old. He knows Tom very well and he knows Bob very well. Except, the only thing Bob was never able to know about Tom was whether he liked his own name or not. Usually, Bob and Tom would keep loads of secrets between each other that no one in the whole world will ever know, just except for the both of them. They usually seem to love to backbite quite a lot about the bullies in their school. They would also make fun of them behind their backs and they really enjoy it which makes themselves feel better at times they are stressed out. Later on, as time went by, there was a new war beginning in an "unknown" area. However, no one in Tom's area seemed to care because all they knew was that, "it was far away from their area", however, some of the teachers in his school seemed like they know something that no one else knows. The teachers would always discuss something after class and they would lock the doors and let all the students out of the classrooms. Tom was always curious. He was usually the one here who would always want to be the one who is the first one to find out about a secret that no one else knows yet. Tom was beginning to suspect that the teachers really do know something that no one else knows. He was worried but yet somewhat excited to actually know what they were talking about. He was really about to think about eavesdropping among the teachers in the classroom to find out. He then went to his friend Bob next door and told him about this. Bob then said, "Hmm... sounds fun! I don't mind helping you out and spying on the teachers after school. I really wonder what I grade I got in my summer homework!" Then Tom said, "Uhh... I'm not exactly sure if they are talking about any homework or grades. I think it is something very serious..." Bob then interrupted with his deep voice saying, "Whats more important to a teacher than thinking about grades?" Then Tom quickly said back, "Well, that is what I am trying to find out man! It would be one heck of a disappointment if they were only talking about grades. I just... I must know what they are talking about!!!" Then Bob said back half-asleep, "What are they talking about?" Then Tom said, "Bob, just go to sleep man. It's as if you are randomly getting drunk out of nowhere. Tomorrow morning when we go to school, I will let you know around recess time and I will arrange a plan for finding out what the teachers are talking about and on how we will spy on them without getting caught!" Bob then laughed and said, "Yea, I think I need some sleep. I feel stupid." He then walks away. Afterwards, when Bob was about to enter his house, They both waved to each other and smiled. Tom then went back home, sat down in his chair at his room, and started drawing a diagram for his plan. He seemed really excited for tomorrow. 

Will Tom ever find out what are the teachers possibly hiding? Will he find out something good? Or something unfortunate? Stay tuned in the 1st chapter. That is all for now. I may or may not complete the whole story depending if I have time to make stories or if anyone is even interested in my stories. XD Thank you for reading this everyone and I hope you all have a good day on vizzed.
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I finished reading and I like what I've read! Their conversation while eavesdropping was pretty funny, dude! 
I'm a little behind, but I'll try catching up on all of the chapters. You've gotten me interested.
I finished reading and I like what I've read! Their conversation while eavesdropping was pretty funny, dude! 
I'm a little behind, but I'll try catching up on all of the chapters. You've gotten me interested.
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So far I like what you have done so far. I like the part about teachers thinking besides grades part. 
So far I like what you have done so far. I like the part about teachers thinking besides grades part. 
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Hmm...Intriguing so far. I like the story already! I can't wait to catch up!
Hmm...Intriguing so far. I like the story already! I can't wait to catch up!
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