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The Awakening of a New Soldier (Chapter 1-3)
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(I was supposed to actually submit this yesterday but I forgot and fell a Okay. Hey guys. So I am now finally going to (try) to continue on with my other story I have been working on. It took me a while to plan on what to write for the future chapters and hopefully I am able to improve and make my stories more interesting. So now, we are finally at chapter 1, 2 & 3! If you would like to see the prologue, please have a look at it here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71309 Also, you should really read the prologue before reading any further to make things more clear for you so you wouldn't be confused. Also, I may not be that great of a writer to be honest (obviously XD), but I will try the best I can do at this moment. Anyways, now let us go on with this story: Chapter 1: That Strange Midnight It was around midnight. Tom had about 6 more hours or so of Chapter 2: The Supposedly Normal 1st Day of School It was nearly time for Tom to wake up for his 1st day of school. Tom seemed like he was completely calm and Chapter 3: Time to Start Tom's Plan! Tom and Bob were very excited. It was last period and the school day was almost over. The teacher wasn't really doing much but introducing herself for nearly an hour. She seemed to like to brag and talk quite a lot about herself very quickly but yet saying way too much things about herself. All of the students were literally bored to death and they were starting to imitate her without her attention. Tom was staring at his clock on his wrist and he said to himself, "Darn it! Come on! Just a minute left. Hurry up stupid time!" There was about a minute left until class was dismissed and recess time was about to come. About half of the school day was nearly over. Bob was also very excited and trembling. He was also staring at his watch just like what Tom was currently doing as if he was imitating him. Afterwards, the teacher was about to give out homework. It was a gigantic worksheet. Tom was shocked and he was afraid it may ruin his plans since it looked like a very fat work-sheet that can take up the rest of the day to complete from the looks of it. So right before she was about to hand out a work-sheet, Tom raised his hands to ask a question. The teacher answered right before she was about to had out the work-sheets and he asked a question about her life and how she was able to become a teacher today. The teacher of course managed to get fooled by Tom and she started blabbering about how she became a teacher and she continued to brag about herself. She continued until she actually forgot to hand out the Homework they had to do. All the students looked at Tom and smiled and gave him a thumbs-up. Tom was surprised that a little trick like that to a teacher actually worked and he almost started giggling. Most the students were about to start laughing but they tried to hold their laughter for as long as they can before the bell rings. And finally... The bell has rang very loudly. It was about time the bell rang. It seemed to Tom as if the bell rang louder than last year or maybe he just haven't heard a bell ring in such a long time. Tom thought that he just went through his longest and most boring minute of his life. And of course, all of the students, Tom, and Bob quickly ran out of the classroom right before the teacher remembered to give out the homework. But she was too late. By the time she yelled "Students! Wait! You forgot all of your Homework! Comeback! No!!! You will fall behind!!!" The Classroom was already empty. She then whispered to herself saying that she will give the students one heck of a gigantic punishment for actually daring to leave her without taking their own homework. Tom and Bob then ran up to the hall ways and Tom said, "Okay Bob, I'm very glad I was able to run away before she gave out the homework! We now have no homework for today!" Bob said, "I know right man? Be sure to continue asking questions like this all the time man. If you do this everyday, we may never get homework from that teacher!" Then Tom replied, "Alright. Now we got no homework and we have nothing else that we need to do so we shouldn't worry and everything for our plan should turn out right! Now, the first thing we got to do is to run to the cafeteria like what I have planned! Also, when you run, try running at the same speed as I do and try your best to not make much sounds as possible before others are to suspect something and possibly go after us." Bob said in a dumb voice as if he hadn't heard half of what Tom said, "Uhh huh. What? You mean what WE have planned? Right?" Tom said, "Whatever, ok. What we have planned. Anyways, lets get moving with OUR plan before it is too late man!" They both started running to the cafeteria. Tom was able to run fast and almost quite but Bob did make some sluggish noises and had difficulties catching up but he eventually caught up with Tom's pace. Luckily, there were surprisingly no teachers around to actually suspect that something was up with them. They both have made it to the cafeteria without being followed by anyone and it was totally empty. Not a single living creature anywhere in the cafeteria and not a single thing moving. They now stood against the corner and Tom whispered, "Okay Bob, now, the next thing we must do is wait until we here an announcement where all teachers must report to a certain classroom. We must hear the classroom number and then once all the teachers go inside the classroom, we will go after them and stand right by the door and try to hear what they are saying. Also, we can NOT miss the classroom location or number or else it will cause us some trouble to figure out where they are. So, we must stay quite and be vigilant right now! Got it?" Bob said, "Alright! Lets do this thing!" Will Tom's plan work? Or will it fail? Will they get caught? What will they find out? That is it for chapter 1, 2, & 3. guys! Stay tuned for chapter 4 if you're even interested in reading my stories! thank you for reading if you actually did bother to read and I hope you all have a fantastic day on vizzed! Okay. Hey guys. So I am now finally going to (try) to continue on with my other story I have been working on. It took me a while to plan on what to write for the future chapters and hopefully I am able to improve and make my stories more interesting. So now, we are finally at chapter 1, 2 & 3! If you would like to see the prologue, please have a look at it here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71309 Also, you should really read the prologue before reading any further to make things more clear for you so you wouldn't be confused. Also, I may not be that great of a writer to be honest (obviously XD), but I will try the best I can do at this moment. Anyways, now let us go on with this story: Chapter 1: That Strange Midnight It was around midnight. Tom had about 6 more hours or so of Chapter 2: The Supposedly Normal 1st Day of School It was nearly time for Tom to wake up for his 1st day of school. Tom seemed like he was completely calm and Chapter 3: Time to Start Tom's Plan! Tom and Bob were very excited. It was last period and the school day was almost over. The teacher wasn't really doing much but introducing herself for nearly an hour. She seemed to like to brag and talk quite a lot about herself very quickly but yet saying way too much things about herself. All of the students were literally bored to death and they were starting to imitate her without her attention. Tom was staring at his clock on his wrist and he said to himself, "Darn it! Come on! Just a minute left. Hurry up stupid time!" There was about a minute left until class was dismissed and recess time was about to come. About half of the school day was nearly over. Bob was also very excited and trembling. He was also staring at his watch just like what Tom was currently doing as if he was imitating him. Afterwards, the teacher was about to give out homework. It was a gigantic worksheet. Tom was shocked and he was afraid it may ruin his plans since it looked like a very fat work-sheet that can take up the rest of the day to complete from the looks of it. So right before she was about to hand out a work-sheet, Tom raised his hands to ask a question. The teacher answered right before she was about to had out the work-sheets and he asked a question about her life and how she was able to become a teacher today. The teacher of course managed to get fooled by Tom and she started blabbering about how she became a teacher and she continued to brag about herself. She continued until she actually forgot to hand out the Homework they had to do. All the students looked at Tom and smiled and gave him a thumbs-up. Tom was surprised that a little trick like that to a teacher actually worked and he almost started giggling. Most the students were about to start laughing but they tried to hold their laughter for as long as they can before the bell rings. And finally... The bell has rang very loudly. It was about time the bell rang. It seemed to Tom as if the bell rang louder than last year or maybe he just haven't heard a bell ring in such a long time. Tom thought that he just went through his longest and most boring minute of his life. And of course, all of the students, Tom, and Bob quickly ran out of the classroom right before the teacher remembered to give out the homework. But she was too late. By the time she yelled "Students! Wait! You forgot all of your Homework! Comeback! No!!! You will fall behind!!!" The Classroom was already empty. She then whispered to herself saying that she will give the students one heck of a gigantic punishment for actually daring to leave her without taking their own homework. Tom and Bob then ran up to the hall ways and Tom said, "Okay Bob, I'm very glad I was able to run away before she gave out the homework! We now have no homework for today!" Bob said, "I know right man? Be sure to continue asking questions like this all the time man. If you do this everyday, we may never get homework from that teacher!" Then Tom replied, "Alright. Now we got no homework and we have nothing else that we need to do so we shouldn't worry and everything for our plan should turn out right! Now, the first thing we got to do is to run to the cafeteria like what I have planned! Also, when you run, try running at the same speed as I do and try your best to not make much sounds as possible before others are to suspect something and possibly go after us." Bob said in a dumb voice as if he hadn't heard half of what Tom said, "Uhh huh. What? You mean what WE have planned? Right?" Tom said, "Whatever, ok. What we have planned. Anyways, lets get moving with OUR plan before it is too late man!" They both started running to the cafeteria. Tom was able to run fast and almost quite but Bob did make some sluggish noises and had difficulties catching up but he eventually caught up with Tom's pace. Luckily, there were surprisingly no teachers around to actually suspect that something was up with them. They both have made it to the cafeteria without being followed by anyone and it was totally empty. Not a single living creature anywhere in the cafeteria and not a single thing moving. They now stood against the corner and Tom whispered, "Okay Bob, now, the next thing we must do is wait until we here an announcement where all teachers must report to a certain classroom. We must hear the classroom number and then once all the teachers go inside the classroom, we will go after them and stand right by the door and try to hear what they are saying. Also, we can NOT miss the classroom location or number or else it will cause us some trouble to figure out where they are. So, we must stay quite and be vigilant right now! Got it?" Bob said, "Alright! Lets do this thing!" Will Tom's plan work? Or will it fail? Will they get caught? What will they find out? That is it for chapter 1, 2, & 3. guys! Stay tuned for chapter 4 if you're even interested in reading my stories! thank you for reading if you actually did bother to read and I hope you all have a fantastic day on vizzed! |
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