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The Awakening of a New Soldier (Chapter 1-3)

 

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(I was supposed to actually submit this yesterday but I forgot and fell asleep and oddly enough, I was very close to forgetting to submit this again XD but this time, I won't forget)
Okay. Hey guys. So I am now finally going to (try) to continue on with my other story I have been working on. It took me a while to plan on what to write for the future chapters and hopefully I am able to improve and make my stories more interesting. So now, we are finally at chapter 1, 2 & 3! If you would like to see the prologue, please have a look at it here:

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71309

Also, you should really read the prologue before reading any further to make things more clear for you so you wouldn't be confused. Also, I may not be that great of a writer to be honest (obviously XD), but I will try the best I can do at this moment. Anyways, now let us go on with this story:

Chapter 1: That Strange Midnight

It was around midnight. Tom had about 6 more hours or so of sleep left before the 1st day of school starts. He then suddenly woke up at midnight in a very random and unusual manner. He was completely unsure on why or how he suddenly woke up like this. He normally doesn't wake up in a time like this since he knows he was a deep-sleeper based off in his past experiences and troubles in waking up. He didn't seem like he needed to use the bathroom like usual at night or anything. He just had this "unknown" feeling. It is as if something dragged and forced him to stand up for an unknown reason. As if he must know something right now before it's too late. Tom thought he just needed some water even though he had no sense of thirst at that moment. He decided to go and drink a bit of water. The extremely cold water made him stand still with lots of goosebumps for about nearly a minute. Tom's parents upstairs in his house seemed to be completely asleep. He hears nothing from then but his dad's loud snoring. He then walked to his bathroom to wash his face. After he washed his face, his eyes felt better, however, he randomly started staring at the mirror in his bathroom and he stared at himself in an unsure manner. He continued to stand there. Randomly, he saw the room getting darker filled with a dark mist whispering to him in a somewhat audible voice, "Enjoy your last days as a student that is happy with his own family." Then the mist slowly vanished and Tom gain consciousness again. He had realized that he stood staring at the mirror for nearly 10 minutes. He completely ignored what he heard and he thought that he was just dreaming, however, he was somewhat worried afterwards. He then thought that he was just simply sleep walking and he ran back to his room and hopped to the bed hoping that this weird feelings and sightings will go away. As he was sleeping, he continued to roll around in fear. He was just unsure why and how. He continued to struggle as if there were a group of bullies dragging him around and attempting to capture him. He then started whispering, "No! No!" "Bob! help me!!!" and then, within a few minutes of rolling around, he totally fell asleep and he was completely quite and relieved now for the rest of his night. Who knows what can happen? What if those sightings were real? Did they actually mean something?

Chapter 2: The Supposedly Normal 1st Day of School

It was nearly time for Tom to wake up for his 1st day of school. Tom seemed like he was completely calm and sleeping normally now. One of the very first things Tom heard when he woke up was, "Come on Tom! Wake up! Wanna be late for the 1st day of school already?" It was Tom's father. Tom now woke up and he smiled when he saw his father. His father smiled back saying, "Well, lets get those good grades already!" Tom now jumped off his bed and went to the bathroom. He washed his face, brushed his teeth and smiled at the mirror. This time, the mirror did not give Tom any weird sightings. Tom was very curious so he stared at the mirror once more waiting for another weird sighting to happen. Nothing came, it was just like a normal mirror. Tom then mocked the sighting. He was laughing quietly and whispered, "Hehe, you can't fool me when I'm awake!" He then walked out and changed into his clothes. He was wearing jeans and a blue T-Shirt. He then put on his sneakers and went into the car. His mother then said, "You better make a good impression to the teachers and don't go to their bad sides in the first day." Tom said back, "I know mom, I'll be sure to go on the good sides of the teachers on the first day." He was pretending to listen to his mother, but, he does know that there is a risk of going on the bad sides of the teachers on the first day since he was going to eavesdrop on them after school with his best friend Bob but he was confident about never getting caught. Strangely, the road was clear, there was no sign of traffic or cars in the way. After about half an hour, they arrived to school on time. Tom then was thinking on whether he should be excited for school or not. He was happy to see some of his friends again but not all of them and he was definitely not happy to get loads of work everyday, however, it is the first day of school after all so Tom didn't worry much about getting loads of homework yet. Then when his dad parked the car in front of the school, Tom got out of the car and quickly ran inside before others hear his father saying to him to "Be good at school son!" and his mother saying afterwards, "Good luck on the first day sweetie!" Tom was embarrassed and he knows that his bullies usually make fun of him when they hear that from his parents. He then entered the school and he went to his classroom. Class was about to start in a few minutes and Tom was in his seat sitting next to Bob and he was ready for class. He got his his pencil case and his notebook. After 3 periods of different subjects went by, it was now recess time. Tom called onto Bob and they went into a separate lunch table to discuss their plans for eavesdropping on the teachers. This is what Tom said, "Okay Bob, now, here is my plan." He took out his diagram he drew last night before he slept. He pointed at a classroom in his diagram and said, "This is where we have last period before dismissal. Afterwards once the bell rings for the end of school..." He then moved his finger over to the hallway near the cafeteria, he then continued, "Normally, based on my experiences last year, there are teachers passing by through every room at the end of the school day, however, the cafeteria is always empty! We will wait until all the teachers are to enter the classroom where they talk about things behind the students..." He then pointed to another classroom on the diagram and he continued, "We will stay by the door and listen to all what they say. At the last 5 minutes of their meeting, we will leave school and I'll write down all I heard from the teachers! That is it for my plan. We may continue to keep doing this depending on what they are talking about." Bob then said, "Yuup, sounds good to me. but what if there was a day where we are filled with homework?" Tom then said, "We are not gonna have any homework on the first day of school man. We'll worry about that later. Lets find out on what they are talking about first then we'll see." Bob then nodded. Afterwards, the bell rang and recess was over. It was now class time.

Chapter 3: Time to Start Tom's Plan!

Tom and Bob were very excited. It was last period and the school day was almost over. The teacher wasn't really doing much but introducing herself for nearly an hour. She seemed to like to brag and talk quite a lot about herself very quickly but yet saying way too much things about herself. All of the students were literally bored to death and they were starting to imitate her without her attention. Tom was staring at his clock on his wrist and he said to himself, "Darn it! Come on! Just a minute left. Hurry up stupid time!" There was about a minute left until class was dismissed and recess time was about to come. About half of the school day was nearly over. Bob was also very excited and trembling. He was also staring at his watch just like what Tom was currently doing as if he was imitating him. Afterwards, the teacher was about to give out homework. It was a gigantic worksheet. Tom was shocked and he was afraid it may ruin his plans since it looked like a very fat work-sheet that can take up the rest of the day to complete from the looks of it. So right before she was about to hand out a work-sheet, Tom raised his hands to ask a question. The teacher answered right before she was about to had out the work-sheets and he asked a question about her life and how she was able to become a teacher today. The teacher of course managed to get fooled by Tom and she started blabbering about how she became a teacher and she continued to brag about herself. She continued until she actually forgot to hand out the Homework they had to do. All the students looked at Tom and smiled and gave him a thumbs-up. Tom was surprised that a little trick like that to a teacher actually worked and he almost started giggling. Most the students were about to start laughing but they tried to hold their laughter for as long as they can before the bell rings. And finally... The bell has rang very loudly. It was about time the bell rang. It seemed to Tom as if the bell rang louder than last year or maybe he just haven't heard a bell ring in such a long time. Tom thought that he just went through his longest and most boring minute of his life. And of course, all of the students, Tom, and Bob quickly ran out of the classroom right before the teacher remembered to give out the homework. But she was too late. By the time she yelled "Students! Wait! You forgot all of your Homework! Comeback! No!!! You will fall behind!!!" The Classroom was already empty. She then whispered to herself saying that she will give the students one heck of a gigantic punishment for actually daring to leave her without taking their own homework. Tom and Bob then ran up to the hall ways and Tom said, "Okay Bob, I'm very glad I was able to run away before she gave out the homework! We now have no homework for today!" Bob said, "I know right man? Be sure to continue asking questions like this all the time man. If you do this everyday, we may never get homework from that teacher!" Then Tom replied, "Alright. Now we got no homework and we have nothing else that we need to do so we shouldn't worry and everything for our plan should turn out right! Now, the first thing we got to do is to run to the cafeteria like what I have planned! Also, when you run, try running at the same speed as I do and try your best to not make much sounds as possible before others are to suspect something and possibly go after us." Bob said in a dumb voice as if he hadn't heard half of what Tom said, "Uhh huh. What? You mean what WE have planned? Right?" Tom said, "Whatever, ok. What we have planned. Anyways, lets get moving with OUR plan before it is too late man!" They both started running to the cafeteria. Tom was able to run fast and almost quite but Bob did make some sluggish noises and had difficulties catching up but he eventually caught up with Tom's pace. Luckily, there were surprisingly no teachers around to actually suspect that something was up with them. They both have made it to the cafeteria without being followed by anyone and it was totally empty. Not a single living creature anywhere in the cafeteria and not a single thing moving. They now stood against the corner and Tom whispered, "Okay Bob, now, the next thing we must do is wait until we here an announcement where all teachers must report to a certain classroom. We must hear the classroom number and then once all the teachers go inside the classroom, we will go after them and stand right by the door and try to hear what they are saying. Also, we can NOT miss the classroom location or number or else it will cause us some trouble to figure out where they are. So, we must stay quite and be vigilant right now! Got it?" Bob said, "Alright! Lets do this thing!"


Will Tom's plan work? Or will it fail? Will they get caught? What will they find out? That is it for chapter 1, 2, & 3. guys! Stay tuned for chapter 4 if you're even interested in reading my stories! thank you for reading if you actually did bother to read and I hope you all have a fantastic day on vizzed!
(I was supposed to actually submit this yesterday but I forgot and fell asleep and oddly enough, I was very close to forgetting to submit this again XD but this time, I won't forget)
Okay. Hey guys. So I am now finally going to (try) to continue on with my other story I have been working on. It took me a while to plan on what to write for the future chapters and hopefully I am able to improve and make my stories more interesting. So now, we are finally at chapter 1, 2 & 3! If you would like to see the prologue, please have a look at it here:

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71309

Also, you should really read the prologue before reading any further to make things more clear for you so you wouldn't be confused. Also, I may not be that great of a writer to be honest (obviously XD), but I will try the best I can do at this moment. Anyways, now let us go on with this story:

Chapter 1: That Strange Midnight

It was around midnight. Tom had about 6 more hours or so of sleep left before the 1st day of school starts. He then suddenly woke up at midnight in a very random and unusual manner. He was completely unsure on why or how he suddenly woke up like this. He normally doesn't wake up in a time like this since he knows he was a deep-sleeper based off in his past experiences and troubles in waking up. He didn't seem like he needed to use the bathroom like usual at night or anything. He just had this "unknown" feeling. It is as if something dragged and forced him to stand up for an unknown reason. As if he must know something right now before it's too late. Tom thought he just needed some water even though he had no sense of thirst at that moment. He decided to go and drink a bit of water. The extremely cold water made him stand still with lots of goosebumps for about nearly a minute. Tom's parents upstairs in his house seemed to be completely asleep. He hears nothing from then but his dad's loud snoring. He then walked to his bathroom to wash his face. After he washed his face, his eyes felt better, however, he randomly started staring at the mirror in his bathroom and he stared at himself in an unsure manner. He continued to stand there. Randomly, he saw the room getting darker filled with a dark mist whispering to him in a somewhat audible voice, "Enjoy your last days as a student that is happy with his own family." Then the mist slowly vanished and Tom gain consciousness again. He had realized that he stood staring at the mirror for nearly 10 minutes. He completely ignored what he heard and he thought that he was just dreaming, however, he was somewhat worried afterwards. He then thought that he was just simply sleep walking and he ran back to his room and hopped to the bed hoping that this weird feelings and sightings will go away. As he was sleeping, he continued to roll around in fear. He was just unsure why and how. He continued to struggle as if there were a group of bullies dragging him around and attempting to capture him. He then started whispering, "No! No!" "Bob! help me!!!" and then, within a few minutes of rolling around, he totally fell asleep and he was completely quite and relieved now for the rest of his night. Who knows what can happen? What if those sightings were real? Did they actually mean something?

Chapter 2: The Supposedly Normal 1st Day of School

It was nearly time for Tom to wake up for his 1st day of school. Tom seemed like he was completely calm and sleeping normally now. One of the very first things Tom heard when he woke up was, "Come on Tom! Wake up! Wanna be late for the 1st day of school already?" It was Tom's father. Tom now woke up and he smiled when he saw his father. His father smiled back saying, "Well, lets get those good grades already!" Tom now jumped off his bed and went to the bathroom. He washed his face, brushed his teeth and smiled at the mirror. This time, the mirror did not give Tom any weird sightings. Tom was very curious so he stared at the mirror once more waiting for another weird sighting to happen. Nothing came, it was just like a normal mirror. Tom then mocked the sighting. He was laughing quietly and whispered, "Hehe, you can't fool me when I'm awake!" He then walked out and changed into his clothes. He was wearing jeans and a blue T-Shirt. He then put on his sneakers and went into the car. His mother then said, "You better make a good impression to the teachers and don't go to their bad sides in the first day." Tom said back, "I know mom, I'll be sure to go on the good sides of the teachers on the first day." He was pretending to listen to his mother, but, he does know that there is a risk of going on the bad sides of the teachers on the first day since he was going to eavesdrop on them after school with his best friend Bob but he was confident about never getting caught. Strangely, the road was clear, there was no sign of traffic or cars in the way. After about half an hour, they arrived to school on time. Tom then was thinking on whether he should be excited for school or not. He was happy to see some of his friends again but not all of them and he was definitely not happy to get loads of work everyday, however, it is the first day of school after all so Tom didn't worry much about getting loads of homework yet. Then when his dad parked the car in front of the school, Tom got out of the car and quickly ran inside before others hear his father saying to him to "Be good at school son!" and his mother saying afterwards, "Good luck on the first day sweetie!" Tom was embarrassed and he knows that his bullies usually make fun of him when they hear that from his parents. He then entered the school and he went to his classroom. Class was about to start in a few minutes and Tom was in his seat sitting next to Bob and he was ready for class. He got his his pencil case and his notebook. After 3 periods of different subjects went by, it was now recess time. Tom called onto Bob and they went into a separate lunch table to discuss their plans for eavesdropping on the teachers. This is what Tom said, "Okay Bob, now, here is my plan." He took out his diagram he drew last night before he slept. He pointed at a classroom in his diagram and said, "This is where we have last period before dismissal. Afterwards once the bell rings for the end of school..." He then moved his finger over to the hallway near the cafeteria, he then continued, "Normally, based on my experiences last year, there are teachers passing by through every room at the end of the school day, however, the cafeteria is always empty! We will wait until all the teachers are to enter the classroom where they talk about things behind the students..." He then pointed to another classroom on the diagram and he continued, "We will stay by the door and listen to all what they say. At the last 5 minutes of their meeting, we will leave school and I'll write down all I heard from the teachers! That is it for my plan. We may continue to keep doing this depending on what they are talking about." Bob then said, "Yuup, sounds good to me. but what if there was a day where we are filled with homework?" Tom then said, "We are not gonna have any homework on the first day of school man. We'll worry about that later. Lets find out on what they are talking about first then we'll see." Bob then nodded. Afterwards, the bell rang and recess was over. It was now class time.

Chapter 3: Time to Start Tom's Plan!

Tom and Bob were very excited. It was last period and the school day was almost over. The teacher wasn't really doing much but introducing herself for nearly an hour. She seemed to like to brag and talk quite a lot about herself very quickly but yet saying way too much things about herself. All of the students were literally bored to death and they were starting to imitate her without her attention. Tom was staring at his clock on his wrist and he said to himself, "Darn it! Come on! Just a minute left. Hurry up stupid time!" There was about a minute left until class was dismissed and recess time was about to come. About half of the school day was nearly over. Bob was also very excited and trembling. He was also staring at his watch just like what Tom was currently doing as if he was imitating him. Afterwards, the teacher was about to give out homework. It was a gigantic worksheet. Tom was shocked and he was afraid it may ruin his plans since it looked like a very fat work-sheet that can take up the rest of the day to complete from the looks of it. So right before she was about to hand out a work-sheet, Tom raised his hands to ask a question. The teacher answered right before she was about to had out the work-sheets and he asked a question about her life and how she was able to become a teacher today. The teacher of course managed to get fooled by Tom and she started blabbering about how she became a teacher and she continued to brag about herself. She continued until she actually forgot to hand out the Homework they had to do. All the students looked at Tom and smiled and gave him a thumbs-up. Tom was surprised that a little trick like that to a teacher actually worked and he almost started giggling. Most the students were about to start laughing but they tried to hold their laughter for as long as they can before the bell rings. And finally... The bell has rang very loudly. It was about time the bell rang. It seemed to Tom as if the bell rang louder than last year or maybe he just haven't heard a bell ring in such a long time. Tom thought that he just went through his longest and most boring minute of his life. And of course, all of the students, Tom, and Bob quickly ran out of the classroom right before the teacher remembered to give out the homework. But she was too late. By the time she yelled "Students! Wait! You forgot all of your Homework! Comeback! No!!! You will fall behind!!!" The Classroom was already empty. She then whispered to herself saying that she will give the students one heck of a gigantic punishment for actually daring to leave her without taking their own homework. Tom and Bob then ran up to the hall ways and Tom said, "Okay Bob, I'm very glad I was able to run away before she gave out the homework! We now have no homework for today!" Bob said, "I know right man? Be sure to continue asking questions like this all the time man. If you do this everyday, we may never get homework from that teacher!" Then Tom replied, "Alright. Now we got no homework and we have nothing else that we need to do so we shouldn't worry and everything for our plan should turn out right! Now, the first thing we got to do is to run to the cafeteria like what I have planned! Also, when you run, try running at the same speed as I do and try your best to not make much sounds as possible before others are to suspect something and possibly go after us." Bob said in a dumb voice as if he hadn't heard half of what Tom said, "Uhh huh. What? You mean what WE have planned? Right?" Tom said, "Whatever, ok. What we have planned. Anyways, lets get moving with OUR plan before it is too late man!" They both started running to the cafeteria. Tom was able to run fast and almost quite but Bob did make some sluggish noises and had difficulties catching up but he eventually caught up with Tom's pace. Luckily, there were surprisingly no teachers around to actually suspect that something was up with them. They both have made it to the cafeteria without being followed by anyone and it was totally empty. Not a single living creature anywhere in the cafeteria and not a single thing moving. They now stood against the corner and Tom whispered, "Okay Bob, now, the next thing we must do is wait until we here an announcement where all teachers must report to a certain classroom. We must hear the classroom number and then once all the teachers go inside the classroom, we will go after them and stand right by the door and try to hear what they are saying. Also, we can NOT miss the classroom location or number or else it will cause us some trouble to figure out where they are. So, we must stay quite and be vigilant right now! Got it?" Bob said, "Alright! Lets do this thing!"


Will Tom's plan work? Or will it fail? Will they get caught? What will they find out? That is it for chapter 1, 2, & 3. guys! Stay tuned for chapter 4 if you're even interested in reading my stories! thank you for reading if you actually did bother to read and I hope you all have a fantastic day on vizzed!
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I wonder what WILL happen...Maybe they need to crawl in the vents? Who knows? (Besides you, and anyone reading past, and me in a few minuets. )
I wonder what WILL happen...Maybe they need to crawl in the vents? Who knows? (Besides you, and anyone reading past, and me in a few minuets. )
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You told me you made stories and I just had to check it out It's pretty interesting and creative I will have to check out the other chapters.. I see you have them posted. 
You told me you made stories and I just had to check it out It's pretty interesting and creative I will have to check out the other chapters.. I see you have them posted. 
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