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Greetings, Vizzed! Welcome to my review of the video game available to play within the Retro Game Room of Super Mario Brothers! The video game of Super Mario Brothers had been created and published by the publisher of video games of Nintendo for the video gaming system of the Nintendo Entertainment System. I wish for Vizzed to greatly prefer and enjoy my review of the video game available to play within the Retro Game Room of Super Mario Brothers!





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Overall: I do believe Super Mario Brothers is such an entertaining video game! My very own rate of overall of this video game must be six and seven tenths out of ten. Why do I think Super Mario Brothers is such an entertaining video game? Actually, it is simple. Excluding the rate of maximum of ten of overall, combining the rate of maximum of ten of graphics, the rate of maximum of ten of graphics, the rate of maximum of ten of sound, the rate of maximum of ten of addictiveness, the rate of maximum of ten of story, the rate of maximum of ten of depth, and the rate of maximum of ten of difficulty shall be equivalent to sixty. Excluding my very own rate of overall of originality of this video game must be six and seven tenths out of ten, combining my rate of ten of graphics, my rate of ten of sound, my rate of ten of addictiveness, my rate of two of story, my rate of five of depth, and my rate of three of difficulty shall be equivalent to forty. Dividing forty by sixty shall be equivalent to the six and six tenths. Rounding the repeating decimal of six and six tenths to the nearest tenth must be six and seven tenths. This is the cause of my rate of six and seven tenths out of ten of overall.





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Graphics: I do believe the graphics of Super Mario Brothers are excellent! My very own rate of graphics of this video game actually must be ten out of ten. Why do I think the graphics of this video game are excellent? Actually, it is simple. Super Mario Brothers had been begun to become mass produced throughout the year of 1998. Throughout that year, if anybody were to compare these graphics to any other video game, many would agree the graphics of the video game of Super Mario Brothers are excellent. Also, I do not mind the graphics of a video game. If I am able to play a video game without experiencing any graphical issue, then I do not mind. This is the cause of my rate of ten out of ten of graphics.





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Sound: I do believe the sound of the video game of Super Mario Brothers is entertaining. My very own rate of graphics of this video game actually must be ten out of ten. Why do I think the sound of the video game of Super Mario Brothers is entertaining? Actually, it is simple. Considering I visit the website of Youtube to sometimes listen to tunes of this video game, this expresses that I am unable to withstand listening to these tunes. Actually, my greatest preferred tunes of video games had originated from a video game of Mario. Also, sometimes I hum tunes of Mario to myself whenever I feel dull. This expresses that these tunes are catchy and liven myself. Anyways, this is the cause of my rate of ten out of ten of sound.





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Adictiveness: I do believe Super Mario Brothers is addicting. My very own rate of addictiveness of this video game must be ten out of ten. Why do I think Super Mario Brothers is addicting? Actually, it is simple. When I play this video game, I am never able to halt playing until I complete it, considering it is simple to commit so for myself. Also, considering the sound is entertaining, this is another reason why I discover Super Mario Brothers to be addicting. Anyways, this is the cause of my rate of ten out of ten of addictiveness.





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Story: I do believe the video game of Super Mario Brothers does not consist of a thorough story. My very own rate of story of the video game of Super Mario Brothers must be of two out of ten. Why do I think Super Mario Brothers does not consist of a thorough story? Actually, it is quite simple. I am certain everybody knows the story of nearly each and every singular video game of Mario. That story is Bowser or King Koopa kidnaps Princess Peach or Princess Toadstool and returns Princess Peach or Princess Toadstool to his castle. Then, Mario must complete a series of courses. Although, every time Mario completes a fortress, multiple Toads or one Toad, depending on which numeral world you had currently completed, that is the multiple amount of Toads or one Toad, that shall approach Mario. These Toads or one Toad shall repeat every fortress, "Sorry, but your princess is in another castle!" After that, you advance or proceed into adjacent world. Mario shall then travel onward to arrive within the castle of Bowser. From then on, he must safely make his way through the evil castle and conflict with Bowser once more before rescuing Princess Peach or Princess Toadstool. When Mario defeats Bowser or King Koopa, he shall advance or proceed toward the princess and rescue herself. Before they both return to the castle of Mushroom Kingdom, in this case, the princess, as always, kisses the cheek of Mario and then they return to their castle. Considering this story is consisted within approximately each and every singular video game of Mario, it begins to become a tad less intrigying each time. Although, it is an original and reminds of multiple things, I was unable to rate it one, thus I had rated it two. Anyways, this is the cause of my rate of two out of ten of story.





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Depth: I do believe this video game provides approximately half of the amount of depth of video games of extreme length to its players. My very own rate of depth must be five out of ten. Why do I think this video game provides only approximately half of the amount of depth of video games of extreme length to its players? Actually, it is simple. Considering I am able to complete this video game approximately beneath one hour, I do not believe there is much content provided. I have watched videos of Youtube of players speed running this video game within approximately five minutes and twenty seconds. This demonstrates that this video game is too short to be rated greater than five. Although, this video game is complete with multiple items, enemies, and obstacles, so it had felt mandatory to rate depth a tad greater than my original thoughts and ideas. Also, there are eight worlds included within this video game. There is not much scenery, but the active scenery is not even as exciting. It is dull and repetitive. I do enjoy when a fortress is completed, multiple Toads or one Toad, depending on which numeral world you had currently completed, approach Mario with the usage of a different strategy each and every singular time, I commend Nintendo for acting creative with that detail. Anyways, this is the cause of my rate of ?five out of ten depth.





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Difficulty: I do believe Super Mario Brothers is not such an difficult video game, although, it does have some of its obstacles. Anyways, my very own rate of difficulty must be three out of ten. Why do I think Super Mario Brothers is not such an difficult video game? Actually, it is simple. As I had mentioned earlier, I am able to complete this video game within approximately one hour. Second, I am able to complete courses within less than approximately one minute. Finally, I am able to pass the obstacles that are the "greatest difficult" throughout the video game without any issues. I mean, these conflicts involving Bowser are quite too simple and these basic enemies are not effective enough to cause much harm to Mario. These three reasons demonstrate that Super Mario Brothers is not such an difficult video game, but it does have minor moments of difficultness. In addition, this is the cause of my rate of three out of ten of difficulty.





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In conclusion, the video game of Super Mario Brothers is a decent one and Nintendo deserves to be commended for their excellent designage. Excluding my rate of overall, half of my rates are ten out of ten, which includes graphics, sound, and addictiveness. The remainder of the rates are not too great to cause the overall rate to rise. Anyways, Super Mario Brothers is an entertaining and excellent video game and I may not await another enjoyable time of playtime throughout itself.?I wish Vizzed had greatly preferred and enjoyed my review of the video game available to play within the Retro Game Room of Super Mario Brothers! Goodbye, Vizzed!
Greetings, Vizzed! Welcome to my review of the video game available to play within the Retro Game Room of Super Mario Brothers! The video game of Super Mario Brothers had been created and published by the publisher of video games of Nintendo for the video gaming system of the Nintendo Entertainment System. I wish for Vizzed to greatly prefer and enjoy my review of the video game available to play within the Retro Game Room of Super Mario Brothers!





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Overall: I do believe Super Mario Brothers is such an entertaining video game! My very own rate of overall of this video game must be six and seven tenths out of ten. Why do I think Super Mario Brothers is such an entertaining video game? Actually, it is simple. Excluding the rate of maximum of ten of overall, combining the rate of maximum of ten of graphics, the rate of maximum of ten of graphics, the rate of maximum of ten of sound, the rate of maximum of ten of addictiveness, the rate of maximum of ten of story, the rate of maximum of ten of depth, and the rate of maximum of ten of difficulty shall be equivalent to sixty. Excluding my very own rate of overall of originality of this video game must be six and seven tenths out of ten, combining my rate of ten of graphics, my rate of ten of sound, my rate of ten of addictiveness, my rate of two of story, my rate of five of depth, and my rate of three of difficulty shall be equivalent to forty. Dividing forty by sixty shall be equivalent to the six and six tenths. Rounding the repeating decimal of six and six tenths to the nearest tenth must be six and seven tenths. This is the cause of my rate of six and seven tenths out of ten of overall.





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Graphics: I do believe the graphics of Super Mario Brothers are excellent! My very own rate of graphics of this video game actually must be ten out of ten. Why do I think the graphics of this video game are excellent? Actually, it is simple. Super Mario Brothers had been begun to become mass produced throughout the year of 1998. Throughout that year, if anybody were to compare these graphics to any other video game, many would agree the graphics of the video game of Super Mario Brothers are excellent. Also, I do not mind the graphics of a video game. If I am able to play a video game without experiencing any graphical issue, then I do not mind. This is the cause of my rate of ten out of ten of graphics.





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Sound: I do believe the sound of the video game of Super Mario Brothers is entertaining. My very own rate of graphics of this video game actually must be ten out of ten. Why do I think the sound of the video game of Super Mario Brothers is entertaining? Actually, it is simple. Considering I visit the website of Youtube to sometimes listen to tunes of this video game, this expresses that I am unable to withstand listening to these tunes. Actually, my greatest preferred tunes of video games had originated from a video game of Mario. Also, sometimes I hum tunes of Mario to myself whenever I feel dull. This expresses that these tunes are catchy and liven myself. Anyways, this is the cause of my rate of ten out of ten of sound.





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Adictiveness: I do believe Super Mario Brothers is addicting. My very own rate of addictiveness of this video game must be ten out of ten. Why do I think Super Mario Brothers is addicting? Actually, it is simple. When I play this video game, I am never able to halt playing until I complete it, considering it is simple to commit so for myself. Also, considering the sound is entertaining, this is another reason why I discover Super Mario Brothers to be addicting. Anyways, this is the cause of my rate of ten out of ten of addictiveness.





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Story: I do believe the video game of Super Mario Brothers does not consist of a thorough story. My very own rate of story of the video game of Super Mario Brothers must be of two out of ten. Why do I think Super Mario Brothers does not consist of a thorough story? Actually, it is quite simple. I am certain everybody knows the story of nearly each and every singular video game of Mario. That story is Bowser or King Koopa kidnaps Princess Peach or Princess Toadstool and returns Princess Peach or Princess Toadstool to his castle. Then, Mario must complete a series of courses. Although, every time Mario completes a fortress, multiple Toads or one Toad, depending on which numeral world you had currently completed, that is the multiple amount of Toads or one Toad, that shall approach Mario. These Toads or one Toad shall repeat every fortress, "Sorry, but your princess is in another castle!" After that, you advance or proceed into adjacent world. Mario shall then travel onward to arrive within the castle of Bowser. From then on, he must safely make his way through the evil castle and conflict with Bowser once more before rescuing Princess Peach or Princess Toadstool. When Mario defeats Bowser or King Koopa, he shall advance or proceed toward the princess and rescue herself. Before they both return to the castle of Mushroom Kingdom, in this case, the princess, as always, kisses the cheek of Mario and then they return to their castle. Considering this story is consisted within approximately each and every singular video game of Mario, it begins to become a tad less intrigying each time. Although, it is an original and reminds of multiple things, I was unable to rate it one, thus I had rated it two. Anyways, this is the cause of my rate of two out of ten of story.





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Depth: I do believe this video game provides approximately half of the amount of depth of video games of extreme length to its players. My very own rate of depth must be five out of ten. Why do I think this video game provides only approximately half of the amount of depth of video games of extreme length to its players? Actually, it is simple. Considering I am able to complete this video game approximately beneath one hour, I do not believe there is much content provided. I have watched videos of Youtube of players speed running this video game within approximately five minutes and twenty seconds. This demonstrates that this video game is too short to be rated greater than five. Although, this video game is complete with multiple items, enemies, and obstacles, so it had felt mandatory to rate depth a tad greater than my original thoughts and ideas. Also, there are eight worlds included within this video game. There is not much scenery, but the active scenery is not even as exciting. It is dull and repetitive. I do enjoy when a fortress is completed, multiple Toads or one Toad, depending on which numeral world you had currently completed, approach Mario with the usage of a different strategy each and every singular time, I commend Nintendo for acting creative with that detail. Anyways, this is the cause of my rate of ?five out of ten depth.





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Difficulty: I do believe Super Mario Brothers is not such an difficult video game, although, it does have some of its obstacles. Anyways, my very own rate of difficulty must be three out of ten. Why do I think Super Mario Brothers is not such an difficult video game? Actually, it is simple. As I had mentioned earlier, I am able to complete this video game within approximately one hour. Second, I am able to complete courses within less than approximately one minute. Finally, I am able to pass the obstacles that are the "greatest difficult" throughout the video game without any issues. I mean, these conflicts involving Bowser are quite too simple and these basic enemies are not effective enough to cause much harm to Mario. These three reasons demonstrate that Super Mario Brothers is not such an difficult video game, but it does have minor moments of difficultness. In addition, this is the cause of my rate of three out of ten of difficulty.





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In conclusion, the video game of Super Mario Brothers is a decent one and Nintendo deserves to be commended for their excellent designage. Excluding my rate of overall, half of my rates are ten out of ten, which includes graphics, sound, and addictiveness. The remainder of the rates are not too great to cause the overall rate to rise. Anyways, Super Mario Brothers is an entertaining and excellent video game and I may not await another enjoyable time of playtime throughout itself.?I wish Vizzed had greatly preferred and enjoyed my review of the video game available to play within the Retro Game Room of Super Mario Brothers! Goodbye, Vizzed!
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Ok this is a game play thread interasting but6. Something come on
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Dude, i can tell that you just wanted to add a little bit more to this in hope of getting the red. I don't know exactly why you had to put that question in at the end, except for the fact that you want more words. But the rest of the review was, um, different. What does the middle part in the overall even mean? Please write a good review next time man. This was just weird.
Dude, i can tell that you just wanted to add a little bit more to this in hope of getting the red. I don't know exactly why you had to put that question in at the end, except for the fact that you want more words. But the rest of the review was, um, different. What does the middle part in the overall even mean? Please write a good review next time man. This was just weird.
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Oh super Mario bros wat a wonderful game I have beat a lot and good review anyway
Oh super Mario bros wat a wonderful game I have beat a lot and good review anyway
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DenzGamer135 : This is spam, well at least the last part with your ''small'' question. It wasn't small at all, it took very much of the works you used. Around 500 words? Just a small guess. Please don't do this again, it's bad to do something like this. A Review is meant about what you think of the game you Review not about your favorite game you don't Review. I think like Barathemos said you did this because you wanted to add something for the Red Jersey.

The Review was different, pretty decent after all. You could write your ratings in the Review too. + I think the Overall part could be better placed at the end of the Review. I noticed you started the whole time with: I do believe (Sub-Title thing.) is/are etc. You could do something different at the start. Thanks to this, it's pretty boring to start with reading. Continue with making Reviews will make you better at writing them after all.

Local Mods : Please close or trash this Thread or edit the part of the ''small'' question. It's up to you.
DenzGamer135 : This is spam, well at least the last part with your ''small'' question. It wasn't small at all, it took very much of the works you used. Around 500 words? Just a small guess. Please don't do this again, it's bad to do something like this. A Review is meant about what you think of the game you Review not about your favorite game you don't Review. I think like Barathemos said you did this because you wanted to add something for the Red Jersey.

The Review was different, pretty decent after all. You could write your ratings in the Review too. + I think the Overall part could be better placed at the end of the Review. I noticed you started the whole time with: I do believe (Sub-Title thing.) is/are etc. You could do something different at the start. Thanks to this, it's pretty boring to start with reading. Continue with making Reviews will make you better at writing them after all.

Local Mods : Please close or trash this Thread or edit the part of the ''small'' question. It's up to you.
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TornadoMudkip : I got that all taken care of.

As for this review, nice work on this review though
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As for this review, nice work on this review though
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Barathemos : Let me even out that unfair dislike that you got.


The review was decent overall, But as play4fun mentioned in his thread"Longer reviews, don't mean better reviews, good reviews are in appropiate Lengths!"


It would be better if you edited the uneeded detail out.

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The review was decent overall, But as play4fun mentioned in his thread"Longer reviews, don't mean better reviews, good reviews are in appropiate Lengths!"


It would be better if you edited the uneeded detail out.

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TornadoMudkip : I have grammatical issue, similar to OCD I would assume. I feel everything must be precise or I would become tense and anxious. Also, I do not believe it needs to be trashed. -.- Just have it edited. I regret this review, considering it is terrible and had been a waste of my time and the time of the users on Vizzed. Anyways, I appreciate the motivation.

IgorBird122 : My apologies for this crappy review. My competitiveness had gotten the best of me. Please remove that pointless poll if you please. Also, I appreciate the compliment.

dvkbuddy10623 : That reply creates absolute nonsense. -.-

Brenman213 : Did you actually read this review of Super Mario Brothers? I appreciate the compliment. It had not been that great of a review, though.

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Barathemos had earned a dislike? He is such a quality poster of Vizzed!
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IgorBird122 : My apologies for this crappy review. My competitiveness had gotten the best of me. Please remove that pointless poll if you please. Also, I appreciate the compliment.

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Barathemos had earned a dislike? He is such a quality poster of Vizzed!
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DenzGamer135 : Yeah, I have removed the poll part of the review, it's a typical mistake and I can assure you, this won't be the last thing I'll see from anyone, and I might see much worse things as well than this review. But still, no problem though
DenzGamer135 : Yeah, I have removed the poll part of the review, it's a typical mistake and I can assure you, this won't be the last thing I'll see from anyone, and I might see much worse things as well than this review. But still, no problem though
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The thing is, it is clear a lot of buffer was put to just boost your word count aside from the question part that you deleted. Pretty much the entire 'overall' paragraph in the beginning was just buffer. All this saying  "rate of maximum of the numeral of ten of _______" NINE times is ridiculous. You say you have grammatical issues and it has to look perfect. If that were the case, you wouldn't do this because that is not grammatically correct and redundant. Then going into the whole buffed up wording on rounding this, dividing that, adding this, and repeating the phrase "my rate of the numeral of" another 8 times in the same paragraph is just poor sportsmanship. If I see something like this in another review, I will ignore the word count and report it in the DQ thread. Do not use the review forum to be your word count buffer. I don't tolerate it.
The thing is, it is clear a lot of buffer was put to just boost your word count aside from the question part that you deleted. Pretty much the entire 'overall' paragraph in the beginning was just buffer. All this saying  "rate of maximum of the numeral of ten of _______" NINE times is ridiculous. You say you have grammatical issues and it has to look perfect. If that were the case, you wouldn't do this because that is not grammatically correct and redundant. Then going into the whole buffed up wording on rounding this, dividing that, adding this, and repeating the phrase "my rate of the numeral of" another 8 times in the same paragraph is just poor sportsmanship. If I see something like this in another review, I will ignore the word count and report it in the DQ thread. Do not use the review forum to be your word count buffer. I don't tolerate it.
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rcarter2 : You do not comprehend how difficult it is for me not to type similar to that. You may edit the post if you would prefer to. Also, I am terrible at creating reviews, so I do not believe I shall create one for a while. Anyways, my apologies for this terrible review.
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DenzGamer135 : well I like all reviews
DenzGamer135 : well I like all reviews
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I just wanted to let you know, after talking with Play4fun regarding this review, he told me that Denz didn't post those additional words for points to go for the red jersey. he mostly asked on what game you liked and why he also like his game and he didn't know, but you guys have got onto him thinking he was going for red.
I just wanted to let you know, after talking with Play4fun regarding this review, he told me that Denz didn't post those additional words for points to go for the red jersey. he mostly asked on what game you liked and why he also like his game and he didn't know, but you guys have got onto him thinking he was going for red.
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IgorBird122 : Had this information been meant for myself or another user who had replied to this thread?
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DenzGamer135 : Well, to let everyone else know, because I was told by Play4fun about this review you made and everyone got onto you about a mistake you made.Yeah, everyone makes mistakes once in a while.
DenzGamer135 : Well, to let everyone else know, because I was told by Play4fun about this review you made and everyone got onto you about a mistake you made.Yeah, everyone makes mistakes once in a while.
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DenzGamer135 : I will admit like Mudkip explained reviews should be on games you enjoy and not ones you dislike, I'm not really sure if I follow the whole trying to get a red jersey idea because if someone were to see work just rushed then obviously that work could get revoked and making the jersey void. However; in light of all this I do believe you did put somewhat of an effort into this review in hopes of getting some appeal factor inside but next time if you do write a review and this is just a word of advice "But try making an attractive intro or either or only write how much is actually needed." 

Still this isn't the worst review I've seen on vizzed nor is it the best, it's just ok.
DenzGamer135 : I will admit like Mudkip explained reviews should be on games you enjoy and not ones you dislike, I'm not really sure if I follow the whole trying to get a red jersey idea because if someone were to see work just rushed then obviously that work could get revoked and making the jersey void. However; in light of all this I do believe you did put somewhat of an effort into this review in hopes of getting some appeal factor inside but next time if you do write a review and this is just a word of advice "But try making an attractive intro or either or only write how much is actually needed." 

Still this isn't the worst review I've seen on vizzed nor is it the best, it's just ok.
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DenzGamer135 : I don't agree with the score. However, the review is great because it has big length, plenty of detail, and is categorized well. Good job.
DenzGamer135 : I don't agree with the score. However, the review is great because it has big length, plenty of detail, and is categorized well. Good job.
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This review is okay in overall to me.

As I read through your review, it feels like all fluff and fandom without actual good backed up details. The way you explained your sections in general is just because you love it for the heck of it without actual reasoning. I don't agree with the scores that you put but you have to persuade on me why you rated them like that with actual reasons. I get that you love this game. I tend to plan on reviewing some of the games that I've played and liked but there has to be some sort of depth in it somewhere. As much as people would love to rate all of their favorites with a full overall in general, some people have to think about the negatives as well but they overlook them anyway to enjoy the game.

This is not the best nor this is the worst game review that I have read but I think you can try better next time. Don't give up though! It takes time to improve.
This review is okay in overall to me.

As I read through your review, it feels like all fluff and fandom without actual good backed up details. The way you explained your sections in general is just because you love it for the heck of it without actual reasoning. I don't agree with the scores that you put but you have to persuade on me why you rated them like that with actual reasons. I get that you love this game. I tend to plan on reviewing some of the games that I've played and liked but there has to be some sort of depth in it somewhere. As much as people would love to rate all of their favorites with a full overall in general, some people have to think about the negatives as well but they overlook them anyway to enjoy the game.

This is not the best nor this is the worst game review that I have read but I think you can try better next time. Don't give up though! It takes time to improve.
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