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Prologue and Chapter 1: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=70525 Chapter 2: Back to the Nuthouse "Mohammed...I'm ready to go to Denretyu. To help your kingdom, possibly the entire universe of yours from utter peril," A user of this announced to Mohammed bravely. "....okay. But first, you'll need a weapon. You a'int taking my sword, but I know where you can get one. You're starting out with an easy sword, but later, you can upgrade your sword...maybe. We must go to Denretyu to get you your sword. Since Mr. Zed is now a guard guarding the front gate, we've hired a new blacksmith, SUX2BU." "How do we get there?" Mohammed had a puzzled look, as if User had asked the stupidest question. "Don't tell me..." Mohammed said quietly. "Um...User. I can't make the portal to Denretyu. I forgot my warp system, the Mirror of Treble. Oops." They couldn't get to Denretyu, unfortunately, and User was about to get FURIOUS. "JUST KIDDING! Alright, User. Hold on to my hand, put your mind at rest and let all of the existing matter's powers flow through you. Concentrate on your strengths, and your "witty" wits." Mohammed pointed the mirror at both of them. Suddenly, they both blacked out...later, they then opened their eyes to be face to face with a castle. They were at Toyku Kingdom. "Welcome to Denretyu, User." "Woah...." User said astonished. "This place looks amazing. But unfortunately your kingdom is not. Let's just get me a sword, so I can save your world, and get out of here!" User was starting to get a little anxious. He was worried about what would happen back at Earth. Mohammed and the stubborn, yet brave User walked up to the entrance, to find Mr. Zed blocking them. "Well, well well, if it isn't Mohammed" "Let us pass, Zed." "Sorry, no can do. You got me in this mess, I hate being the castle guard. Who's this imp?!" "This is User. He is the one Mecha Mento told us about, remember?" Mr. Zed was being grumpier than usual, then User questioned him. "Is he always like this?" "No, User. Zed, what's wrong?" "I hate this job!" "...that isn't why you're mad." Mr. Zed let out an exasperated sigh, then said softly..."PacmanandMariofan...he..." "Don't tell me," Mohammed interrupted. PacmanandMariofan was...dead. Mohammed and Zed's best friend, that was a hero to them. They always looked up to Pac...".......WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM?" Mohammed started having a psychotic episode of strangling Zed. The other guards rushed to Mohammed and started dragging him to the prison cells. "USER!" Mohammed shouted. "GET A SWORD FROM THE BLACKSMITH INSIDE THE CASTLE. YOU'RE OUR ONLY HOPE!" Mr. Zed took some deep breaths to recover. "...okay, kid. You want to pass? Fine by me. You'll have to calm down the king in order to progress to the mountains to take down one of the monster's lairs. This way. You better get things done, our kingdom is in some DEEEP trouble. Get out of my face, I have a castle to guard." Zed wasn't taking it well, all he's been through at the day was stressing him out. User passed, to meet a woman that looked very intimidating. It was the blacksmith, SUX2BU. "Hello, young one? I heard you're lookin' for a weapon. I'm your man. Well, I'm your woman. Wait, I'm not your woman, you're too young for relationship, but...JUST COME WITH ME." SUX lead User to a little hut. Inside was a lot of equipment and weapons such as swords and bows or tools like spades or pickaxes. What caught User's eye...was DenzGamer135. The bully that had bullied User back at his school at his home world. What had he been doing here? "This is my assistant, Denz. Denz, "User." User, Denz. Welcome to Smitty's Tool En-" "UGO, UGO, UGO!" "Shut up, over there! Sorry about Denz, ever since yesterday, all he could to is make caveman expressions. Anyways, you want your sword, he-" "UGO, UGO, UGO." Suddenly, Denz started sprouting hair all over his body right before User and SUX' eyes. He was morphing into a caveman. "I can still understand him by heart, though. He just said, 'User...you look familiar.'" "WUUUUUG" "He now says he got here by accidentally falling on concrete, blacking out and appearing in this world...do you know this guy, User?" "Yes. He's always crude to me..." "That's too bad...he doesn't seem harmful now. Maybe he has a heart." "Yeah, yeah, yeah! Now give me a sword!" SUX handed User the blade. "If you give us the Hera Stone from the labyrinth in the mountains, we'll enchant your sword. This sword I give you can help you fend off the monsters that come in your way throughout your adventure to save our universe. Go! With many blessings...." User left Smitty's and thought about going to the labyrinth. User was all alone because Mohammed was being put in an insane ward. Mohammed had to be saved, the he had a labyrinth to deal with, and finally...BARATHEMOS. He was about to be killed by the king because they thought Barathemos kidnapped the princess. Barathemos and the princess went somewhere, but only Barathemos came back. User ran forth to king Razor-987's lair. A cauldron with very hot water was right below Barathemos, tied to a rope. What shall User do? Suddenly, he had an idea. "PUT HIM IN THE CAULDRON!" The king yelled. User then, threw his sword at the rope, jumped over the cauldron, and caught him. Barathemos was now saved. "Huh?" "KING, RAZOR! This innocent young man did not kidnap your daughter." "Oh, nonsense, you're just a kid. How would you know? We've never even seen you around!" Suddenly, User spotted a scroll. There was writing on it, of course. "Dear, father. If anyone asks, Barathemos did not kidnap me. i am being held in a labyrinth of some sort by these...creatures," User read out loud. All the residents watching were in shock. "I am begging that anybody will come to help. I miss being with my brother, Eirinn....Sincerely, princess Eniitan." "Brother?" User asked? You mean this kid standing next to the butler? "Yes," the boy said. "I am prince Eirinn. Ever since Eniitan went missing, I've never been able to even People involved in chapter: A user of this : mohammedroxx3 : PacmanandMariofan : Eniitan : Eirinn : DenzGamer135 : SUX2BU : Mr. Zed : Razor-987 : Barathemos : MechaMento : Chapter 2: Back to the Nuthouse "Mohammed...I'm ready to go to Denretyu. To help your kingdom, possibly the entire universe of yours from utter peril," A user of this announced to Mohammed bravely. "....okay. But first, you'll need a weapon. You a'int taking my sword, but I know where you can get one. You're starting out with an easy sword, but later, you can upgrade your sword...maybe. We must go to Denretyu to get you your sword. Since Mr. Zed is now a guard guarding the front gate, we've hired a new blacksmith, SUX2BU." "How do we get there?" Mohammed had a puzzled look, as if User had asked the stupidest question. "Don't tell me..." Mohammed said quietly. "Um...User. I can't make the portal to Denretyu. I forgot my warp system, the Mirror of Treble. Oops." They couldn't get to Denretyu, unfortunately, and User was about to get FURIOUS. "JUST KIDDING! Alright, User. Hold on to my hand, put your mind at rest and let all of the existing matter's powers flow through you. Concentrate on your strengths, and your "witty" wits." Mohammed pointed the mirror at both of them. Suddenly, they both blacked out...later, they then opened their eyes to be face to face with a castle. They were at Toyku Kingdom. "Welcome to Denretyu, User." "Woah...." User said astonished. "This place looks amazing. But unfortunately your kingdom is not. Let's just get me a sword, so I can save your world, and get out of here!" User was starting to get a little anxious. He was worried about what would happen back at Earth. Mohammed and the stubborn, yet brave User walked up to the entrance, to find Mr. Zed blocking them. "Well, well well, if it isn't Mohammed" "Let us pass, Zed." "Sorry, no can do. You got me in this mess, I hate being the castle guard. Who's this imp?!" "This is User. He is the one Mecha Mento told us about, remember?" Mr. Zed was being grumpier than usual, then User questioned him. "Is he always like this?" "No, User. Zed, what's wrong?" "I hate this job!" "...that isn't why you're mad." Mr. Zed let out an exasperated sigh, then said softly..."PacmanandMariofan...he..." "Don't tell me," Mohammed interrupted. PacmanandMariofan was...dead. Mohammed and Zed's best friend, that was a hero to them. They always looked up to Pac...".......WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM?" Mohammed started having a psychotic episode of strangling Zed. The other guards rushed to Mohammed and started dragging him to the prison cells. "USER!" Mohammed shouted. "GET A SWORD FROM THE BLACKSMITH INSIDE THE CASTLE. YOU'RE OUR ONLY HOPE!" Mr. Zed took some deep breaths to recover. "...okay, kid. You want to pass? Fine by me. You'll have to calm down the king in order to progress to the mountains to take down one of the monster's lairs. This way. You better get things done, our kingdom is in some DEEEP trouble. Get out of my face, I have a castle to guard." Zed wasn't taking it well, all he's been through at the day was stressing him out. User passed, to meet a woman that looked very intimidating. It was the blacksmith, SUX2BU. "Hello, young one? I heard you're lookin' for a weapon. I'm your man. Well, I'm your woman. Wait, I'm not your woman, you're too young for relationship, but...JUST COME WITH ME." SUX lead User to a little hut. Inside was a lot of equipment and weapons such as swords and bows or tools like spades or pickaxes. What caught User's eye...was DenzGamer135. The bully that had bullied User back at his school at his home world. What had he been doing here? "This is my assistant, Denz. Denz, "User." User, Denz. Welcome to Smitty's Tool En-" "UGO, UGO, UGO!" "Shut up, over there! Sorry about Denz, ever since yesterday, all he could to is make caveman expressions. Anyways, you want your sword, he-" "UGO, UGO, UGO." Suddenly, Denz started sprouting hair all over his body right before User and SUX' eyes. He was morphing into a caveman. "I can still understand him by heart, though. He just said, 'User...you look familiar.'" "WUUUUUG" "He now says he got here by accidentally falling on concrete, blacking out and appearing in this world...do you know this guy, User?" "Yes. He's always crude to me..." "That's too bad...he doesn't seem harmful now. Maybe he has a heart." "Yeah, yeah, yeah! Now give me a sword!" SUX handed User the blade. "If you give us the Hera Stone from the labyrinth in the mountains, we'll enchant your sword. This sword I give you can help you fend off the monsters that come in your way throughout your adventure to save our universe. Go! With many blessings...." User left Smitty's and thought about going to the labyrinth. User was all alone because Mohammed was being put in an insane ward. Mohammed had to be saved, the he had a labyrinth to deal with, and finally...BARATHEMOS. He was about to be killed by the king because they thought Barathemos kidnapped the princess. Barathemos and the princess went somewhere, but only Barathemos came back. User ran forth to king Razor-987's lair. A cauldron with very hot water was right below Barathemos, tied to a rope. What shall User do? Suddenly, he had an idea. "PUT HIM IN THE CAULDRON!" The king yelled. User then, threw his sword at the rope, jumped over the cauldron, and caught him. Barathemos was now saved. "Huh?" "KING, RAZOR! This innocent young man did not kidnap your daughter." "Oh, nonsense, you're just a kid. How would you know? 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I AM INDEED INSANE! I mean, Awesome job yet again on the story pixel! I really enjoyed reading it. I'm really looking forward to see what happens next in chapter 3. Keep it up man! |
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PixelBrick : Nice story bro . Or chapter rather . It looks like its getting interesting . |
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And my quest of amazing awesomeness has begun! Nice chapter. |
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Wow...um I'm the princess.....wonderful job pixel, I await a new chapter from you. ^-^ |
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Nice job man I think this chapter of the story came out to be pretty awesome man, I like my role as the king and I can see that my part is becoming more involved and defined in this chapter. I must say, I really like the way things are unfolding and it definitely makes for an awesome story, like I said before, I think you have mad writing skills and this is becoming wicked amazing to read. Keep up the awesome work as always man, I am looking forward to the next chapter! |
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