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( Or grey, if that's how you spell it.) Another color poem.
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12-08-13 01:06 PM
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(NOTE: Three in one day? I guess so. Another color poem, because gray's "personality" is perhaps one of my favorites, and I love writing characters who aren't all evil and darkness or goodness and light, but shades of gray. It's not my favorite color visually, but the ideas behind gray are fascinating.)

Gray is the color of turmoil,
Of rolling, thundering storm clouds, and the shades in between
It is full of conflict, the eternal battle between darkness and light
Trying to decide,
The world shuddering with the force of the battle.
(NOTE: Three in one day? I guess so. Another color poem, because gray's "personality" is perhaps one of my favorites, and I love writing characters who aren't all evil and darkness or goodness and light, but shades of gray. It's not my favorite color visually, but the ideas behind gray are fascinating.)

Gray is the color of turmoil,
Of rolling, thundering storm clouds, and the shades in between
It is full of conflict, the eternal battle between darkness and light
Trying to decide,
The world shuddering with the force of the battle.
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Another great poem

"The eternal battle between darkness and light",great line to describe the colour
Another great poem

"The eternal battle between darkness and light",great line to describe the colour
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I really like that one line "an eternal battle between darkness and light" I just think that is the icing on the cake for this poem. I will say this is a great poem and it is short and sweet and I think you accurately describe the color of grey. It is indecisive and full of conflict. Overall  I reallythink you described the color in a great way and I hope you continue to do so with all of your other color poems. Nice job, keep up the great work! 

I look forward to reading your next poem, Merry Christmas! 
I really like that one line "an eternal battle between darkness and light" I just think that is the icing on the cake for this poem. I will say this is a great poem and it is short and sweet and I think you accurately describe the color of grey. It is indecisive and full of conflict. Overall  I reallythink you described the color in a great way and I hope you continue to do so with all of your other color poems. Nice job, keep up the great work! 

I look forward to reading your next poem, Merry Christmas! 
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PokefanKala : Nice poem . You have changed my perspective on the colour " grey " and you only had to use like 40 words . I mean ... wow . 
PokefanKala : Nice poem . You have changed my perspective on the colour " grey " and you only had to use like 40 words . I mean ... wow . 
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