listen guys its the same old fire red hack not much else to say of course there are gym leaders and the over powered bushes but the game doesn't offer that much the surprise of finding a legendary wares off very quickly and you need a national dex to evolve alot of the pokemon attainable in the beginning  of the game overall i found this to be very disappointing and a waste of my time the only thing that made me smile at all during the play through was the master ball on my starter other then that it completely sucked

You just barely made it past the requirement of 100 words. You really need to add more detail, information, and opinions. Expand on your points and try to add some length. Also, check your spelling, capitalization, punctuation, grammar, etc. And try to avoid using words like "sucked", it makes it sound immature and informal.

vanitas234 :

That's it? You call that a review?

VideogamemanX : By word count, sadly, yes.

By standards, no where close.

Please, don't post these kinds of things as a 'Review'. Reviews talk about the game as a whole, in categories based on Graphics, Sound, Addictiveness, Story, and Depth. 

This is more of a 'generalization' and more personal opinion then a review usually is. You had none of the required categories explained.

Also, try and make these longer. It hurts my little heart to see such pitiful reviews.

SadSecrets :  
VideogamemanX :  

You guys could be a little more encouraging and offer advice rather than just say his review is pitiful. If you really wanted to help him out and see him make better reviews, you should build him up by giving him advice, not tearing him down. 


Just break it down into categories and go from there with talking about the game. What were the best parts? The worst? What made the game good or bad? Explain. Define. If you really go into depth and detail with talking about each category then you will have a much better and longer review. Also be truthful about it, feel free to score accordingly to how the game made you feel and let the readers/audience know what they are getting when they play this game, okay? 

I really hope this helps man, I think you have potential if you dedicate yourself and do it more frequently, then you will master it eventually. Best of luck man and merry Christmas!

Razor-987 :

Sup razor! I'm sorry to tell you this but, you're being a little bit to kind.
This guy here had a grudge against this game and the players for a couple of weeks.
He wasn't acting mature, and when people pointed his behavior, he got mad.

It's sadly enough that the admins haven't closed this yet.
It's not a review even if it would have 100 words.

All my post I post would be a review then.
The guy used to less details, used offensive words what is against the rules.
He only pointed out the bad things about this game. A reviewer shall always give negative and positive criticisms.
It's not very mature of him to attack this game and the creator of this game by making such a bad review for it. And my honest opinion would be to close it, and thrash it.

also Razor, he wasn't planning on creating a review in the first place. He just thrashed against the game because he couldn't win it.
As always, your explanations are amazing but, don't give your kindness away to people for do not deserve it. Or use it.

I'm done.
PS : Sorry VGMX for not being online for a long time ( a week or 2?) My network system contained a virus called Sinowal. And our provider throw ed us from the connection so we had to first check and scan all our computers..

-Yngwie-

Yngwie : Thanks man, I would trash this if I could, but unfortunately I don't have that power to dos o. If you say he is being negative about the game and only made this review because he couldn't beat it, then that is his own fault. I am going to request or at least brig it to their attention that this is not a review and he is just hating the game because he couldn't beat it. He really doesn't go into detail about the game at all, rather he just points out all the negative about it and then ends it off by saying it sucked. 

You are older and more mature, and you should be able to make more detailed content without being immature about it. And even if you feel the game is bad, you shouldn't just end it off with that, go the extra mile and say what made it bad and how could it be better? Those are just some of the things you have to think about when you are making a good review. So please do keep this in mind when making reviews in the future. I hope that this helps you out. 

Local Mods : Not really a review even if he met the word count, he kind of just said the game sucked and didn't say much of anything about the game, just letting you know. 

Yngwie :
Razor-987 :  Well, this just went above 100 words, so this is legally a review, but like you two mentioned that he mostly just ranted about this game and not giving it enough words to explain why it is all negative about it. I think maybe saying on why it was horrible like is the graphics are horrible, or the sound and music, or is the game play too hard to play, I haven't really see the issue you have with this game.

So I'm going to close this and trash this review.
Just to let you know, if you want to tell why this game sucks, just explain it a little more and be a little mature about it.