Um, ok.....I forgot to finish this one ages ago.....I saw it on my notebook on my phone, and I decided to finish it off. And its over due.
Frod, I am so sorry for this being late! I hope you like what you see. ^-^

A Poem About My Sensei

Frodlex, is my sensei just to let you know.
Hes very strict, and can be mean sometimes, just to help me grow.
I really adore him so much.
He noticed my talent, and wanted to help out, thanks a bunch.

He really cares about, what I do.
So as his student, I will work very hard too!
I just wanted to write this poem, and show much I appreciate him.
Even though at times, he makes me feel grim.

All he wants, is to see how well, that I am doing..
That is what, all teachers want for their students, as they are pursuing.
Studying and more I will do.
Solving things, I cannot understand and clues.

I will do my very best!
And I will remember, to take my rest.
I will be tested that's for sure.
I will train hard for it, as I am mature!

I love to learn so that's ok.
And I will be, well behaved and always obey!
He may snap, and shout at me at times.
But, it is for my own good, I miss what I study, I pay for my crimes.

I will study so, I don't leave any work behind.
Making sure I complete, what I was assigned.
Hes just looking out for me, that's all.
I will always come running, when he calls.

Frodlex : I hope you like it. ^-^
Sorry that it took so long to do.....

Quack! Great poem. Especially to a person who cares for you. I would like to say merry christmas, but I have reasons I should not.

You shouldn't be sorry for any reason at all Eniitan, no reason at all. Thank you for making me a poem, it shows that someone out there somewhere ( I'm not saying that you are just "Someone" or anything, just an example.) cares enough about me to take the time to do this. I do really appreciate it and I enjoyed reading it.

Nice job with this poem eniitan, your work is very nice and you always put a lot of heart, thought and consideration into everything you do. This is an awesome poem and as frodlex said, you must really care about someone to put the time and dedication aside to make this poem for someone. I appreciate all of the hard work, time, effort and consideration you put into your work for others. I think it is very thoughtful of you to do that. 


This is an awesome poem because you had many poetic elements in it and it was from the heart. Nice job and merry Christmas! Keep on making awesome poems like this! Your work is great! 

Nice Poem Enni . Good unique rhyming scheme and I am sure that Frod is very impressed

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