Ok i'm gonna try and make a real review this time. Graphics:The graphics in the game are meh, this game came out in 1992, the same year the SNES came out. There is to many sprite flickering and the color sceam is just dull with mostly green, black, and dark blue.Sound:The sound makes my ears numb, it sounds like someone is just scratching a chalkboard and screaming at the same time. The only song I like is the Dam Busters theme, at least that one doesn't hurt my ears.Story:...um... there is no story in this game, except in cheetahmen but it's so dumb, a gamemaster gets sucked in his tv and finds 3 cheetahmen and they will fight for him... so dumb!Gameplay:This game has platformers, shooters, puzzles, and yeah thats it. They all suffer from glitches, bad controls, and crashing. I'll describe a few games. A game called Ooze is a platformer where you jump with the B button, if you press B and right at the same time you will lock in a vertical jump until you let go of B... WHY????? A game called Alfredo doesn't even work, another game like that doesn't work is called Jigsaw. Most of the games are space shooters i believe 14 of them, their all the same except with differnt graphics.Final Verdict:This game is bad, bad controls, no story, bad glitches, games that don't work, games that crash, games that suck, and bad graphics. Also they charged $200 dollars for the game

Not a bad review, you at least have a decent length. But I will suggest that you break your review into categories and explain more in depth what contributed to it being a bad game, was it the graphics, music, the story, break it down and really discuss what  what made it a bad game in your opinion. Once you break down your review and go into detail with explaining why it was bad, it will be a lengthier and overall a better review. 

Just make sure you give strong reasons that support why the game is bad, you can't just say it and not specify. So do that and I think you have real potential to be a really good reviewer.  Keep up the good work man, and the only way to get better at reviewing is through practice, so keep writing! You are off to a good start!