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10-18-13 06:53 AM
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Hi everyone.....I thought of doing this considering I had problems. With some of my friends I know, if I do I am afraid to think of what they say sometimes...... I wasn't sure if they would forgive me or not. Back to the topic....I had a few rhymes in my head 
about this and decided to write it out before I forget....everyone has 
trouble with this word but, may I ask this? Do YOU know the meaning of
this word forgiveness? I took it upon myself of writing down how I feel 
and what people have missed in a way about it. I hope you enjoy this. 
^-^


Forgiveness

What does forgiveness mean to us?
Is it something we constantly not use but, instead cuss?
Many people may have hurt you in a way.
But, did you take the time to ask and say?


If you truly understand someone then you,
Would able to forgive them, instead of being so bland.
For those who still hold a grudge, why must.
You hold onto something, that is in the past? You need to budge.


You need to think on your own actions and see, where it leads.
You must need to face the truth no matter how hard it is.
Forgive and forget if not,
You will turn into another person, and will regret


So do this please before its too late.
those people you need to talk with, won't hate.
Take the time you need, to talk it out.
Instead of being afraid and being in doubt!


I think we all still need to learn from this word,
What I see when people so not using it, I find that absurd.
If you hear what people say, about a person with judgement,
Learn to know whats, right and somehow come to an agreement.


Move on from what happened in the past.
Call some kind of truce, and maybe you would lift off that pressure, at long last.
Its not easy to forgive I know but,
If we all take one step at a time, this is what will make us grow.


What I think of the word forgiveness is powerful,
But also so peaceful.
When you forgive someone that's the relief you get.
It will be as if, you paid of a lot of long debt.


So think wisely before you act.
I am not ordering you around, its a fact.
We all learn from what we do wrong.
And all that matters is being better, which makes us strong.


If you want to be a better person of today.
Learn what you must learn, and try to obey.
Even if the problem was really bad.
Do it and I guarantee, afterwards you will be glad.


Hope you liked it everyone. ^-^



Hi everyone.....I thought of doing this considering I had problems. With some of my friends I know, if I do I am afraid to think of what they say sometimes...... I wasn't sure if they would forgive me or not. Back to the topic....I had a few rhymes in my head 
about this and decided to write it out before I forget....everyone has 
trouble with this word but, may I ask this? Do YOU know the meaning of
this word forgiveness? I took it upon myself of writing down how I feel 
and what people have missed in a way about it. I hope you enjoy this. 
^-^


Forgiveness

What does forgiveness mean to us?
Is it something we constantly not use but, instead cuss?
Many people may have hurt you in a way.
But, did you take the time to ask and say?


If you truly understand someone then you,
Would able to forgive them, instead of being so bland.
For those who still hold a grudge, why must.
You hold onto something, that is in the past? You need to budge.


You need to think on your own actions and see, where it leads.
You must need to face the truth no matter how hard it is.
Forgive and forget if not,
You will turn into another person, and will regret


So do this please before its too late.
those people you need to talk with, won't hate.
Take the time you need, to talk it out.
Instead of being afraid and being in doubt!


I think we all still need to learn from this word,
What I see when people so not using it, I find that absurd.
If you hear what people say, about a person with judgement,
Learn to know whats, right and somehow come to an agreement.


Move on from what happened in the past.
Call some kind of truce, and maybe you would lift off that pressure, at long last.
Its not easy to forgive I know but,
If we all take one step at a time, this is what will make us grow.


What I think of the word forgiveness is powerful,
But also so peaceful.
When you forgive someone that's the relief you get.
It will be as if, you paid of a lot of long debt.


So think wisely before you act.
I am not ordering you around, its a fact.
We all learn from what we do wrong.
And all that matters is being better, which makes us strong.


If you want to be a better person of today.
Learn what you must learn, and try to obey.
Even if the problem was really bad.
Do it and I guarantee, afterwards you will be glad.


Hope you liked it everyone. ^-^



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(edited by Eniitan on 10-18-13 07:16 AM)     Post Rating: 5   Liked By: Awesome-Kid, FFFighterDill, Furret, PixelBrick, TornadoMudkip,

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Eniitan : Wow...this is very powerful of a poem! Thank you for makeing this, I really loved reading it! I look forward to reading your further poems from this one on.
Eniitan : Wow...this is very powerful of a poem! Thank you for makeing this, I really loved reading it! I look forward to reading your further poems from this one on.
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That was great. Perhaps one of the best ones yet. Good job
That was great. Perhaps one of the best ones yet. Good job
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This poem is absolutely beautiful. This should be read to some of the kids in my school, if not all of them. This really warmed my heart. Great job
This poem is absolutely beautiful. This should be read to some of the kids in my school, if not all of them. This really warmed my heart. Great job
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This was a really BEAUTIFUL poem!! There is no need for people to be JUDGEMENTAL because it just makes u WEAK!!
This was a really BEAUTIFUL poem!! There is no need for people to be JUDGEMENTAL because it just makes u WEAK!!
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Eniitan : This is... incredible! Very powerful and beautiful, I think this would fit a lot for a Poem. I like the topic of this Poem too. Something special and useful to know if you ask me.

Nice job again Enii, like I said many times before, you have a mysterious talent for writing Poems. This IS just your best Poem until now. This actually surprised me about how good it is. Your grammar was splendid and good as well. Keep it up with writing them, I am sure you can write a whole book with a lot of Poems in it! ~ I look forward to your next one!
Eniitan : This is... incredible! Very powerful and beautiful, I think this would fit a lot for a Poem. I like the topic of this Poem too. Something special and useful to know if you ask me.

Nice job again Enii, like I said many times before, you have a mysterious talent for writing Poems. This IS just your best Poem until now. This actually surprised me about how good it is. Your grammar was splendid and good as well. Keep it up with writing them, I am sure you can write a whole book with a lot of Poems in it! ~ I look forward to your next one!
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That was awesome! You are a great poet Enii! It was really heartwarming. And forgiveness holds a special place in my heart, so I was looking foreword to something good, and I got something better.
That was awesome! You are a great poet Enii! It was really heartwarming. And forgiveness holds a special place in my heart, so I was looking foreword to something good, and I got something better.
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