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10-17-13 11:00 AM
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Hi everyone as some of you know. In the past I did do stories, and maybe wondered why I stopped. As I said I was in training meaning not aloud so.....I have been given the get go to do it, I will share a brief info on what the story will be like. I won't give away the title but, I will say the story setting  will be holding in the year, of 1923 where the steam trained worked and how people were.

The main character her name is Teal I will share some info about the character and maybe what to expect. I needed to think of a good name for her so...I went to Google to look up, and the meaning. I didn't want to make up a name this time which I will stop from now on. I did this so it can be special in a way. She is the age of 15 and is living with her mother in a medium size town. For you see the father died while protecting people from an earthquake, that recently happened. Teal is not so rich or poor just between those. The mother struggle sometimes to payment bills.

Ok that's a little info about the plot now, I will tell you what teal is like, what she does and what her personality is.

Teal : She is a white girl her age is 15 as you know, the colour of her hair is brown it is long down to her shoulders with some curls at the end of her hair. Appearance wise>  She's pretty and has a baby face. Her height is not so long or short but, medium. She is slim (not to thin though)  with a nice figure. Ok for the clothes> she has one dress that she wears because the mother can not afford another one for her. So she takes care of this dress well making sure it doesn't rip and all. Its a nice long dress its black with colorful leaves on it to fit the design. She wears a scarf a long one though, the colour is yellow and she wears a hat too colour is black and nice looking to fit her style of dressing. Her nightgown she wears is a long dress to keep her warm the design for that is dotted with a color that goes with it. Her favorite colour is yellow, her scarf that she wears its her trademark, for that is the only one she has, her mother passed it down to her as her grandmother did for her mother too.

Ok now for her personality

Teal is a cheery girl despite of whats happened she always finds the time to smile. She is also imaginative, intuitive and adventurous as well. She likes to go and find new things that could be of use to her, and also tends to be visionary and may inspire others, she loves her mother dearly and does what she can to help her in all needs....

So that's it the brief done I hope you liked it so far and for the story to come out as well. I really thought hard about this and how the story will be. ^-^

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Hi everyone as some of you know. In the past I did do stories, and maybe wondered why I stopped. As I said I was in training meaning not aloud so.....I have been given the get go to do it, I will share a brief info on what the story will be like. I won't give away the title but, I will say the story setting  will be holding in the year, of 1923 where the steam trained worked and how people were.

The main character her name is Teal I will share some info about the character and maybe what to expect. I needed to think of a good name for her so...I went to Google to look up, and the meaning. I didn't want to make up a name this time which I will stop from now on. I did this so it can be special in a way. She is the age of 15 and is living with her mother in a medium size town. For you see the father died while protecting people from an earthquake, that recently happened. Teal is not so rich or poor just between those. The mother struggle sometimes to payment bills.

Ok that's a little info about the plot now, I will tell you what teal is like, what she does and what her personality is.

Teal : She is a white girl her age is 15 as you know, the colour of her hair is brown it is long down to her shoulders with some curls at the end of her hair. Appearance wise>  She's pretty and has a baby face. Her height is not so long or short but, medium. She is slim (not to thin though)  with a nice figure. Ok for the clothes> she has one dress that she wears because the mother can not afford another one for her. So she takes care of this dress well making sure it doesn't rip and all. Its a nice long dress its black with colorful leaves on it to fit the design. She wears a scarf a long one though, the colour is yellow and she wears a hat too colour is black and nice looking to fit her style of dressing. Her nightgown she wears is a long dress to keep her warm the design for that is dotted with a color that goes with it. Her favorite colour is yellow, her scarf that she wears its her trademark, for that is the only one she has, her mother passed it down to her as her grandmother did for her mother too.

Ok now for her personality

Teal is a cheery girl despite of whats happened she always finds the time to smile. She is also imaginative, intuitive and adventurous as well. She likes to go and find new things that could be of use to her, and also tends to be visionary and may inspire others, she loves her mother dearly and does what she can to help her in all needs....

So that's it the brief done I hope you liked it so far and for the story to come out as well. I really thought hard about this and how the story will be. ^-^

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This sounds pretty good. I actually can't wait until I see the story Eni! I really like how you made a brief intro about your story. This must mean that the story your about to make must really be epic!
This sounds pretty good. I actually can't wait until I see the story Eni! I really like how you made a brief intro about your story. This must mean that the story your about to make must really be epic!
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This is an AMAZING detail!! You really are very CREATIVE!! Teal is a really SPECIAL girl!! Things will one day be better for her and Mother for sure because Teal will sure find a way to make things better after the loss of her father from this DANG earthquake!!


That story is gonna create some EXCITMENT!!
This is an AMAZING detail!! You really are very CREATIVE!! Teal is a really SPECIAL girl!! Things will one day be better for her and Mother for sure because Teal will sure find a way to make things better after the loss of her father from this DANG earthquake!!


That story is gonna create some EXCITMENT!!
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Sounds good! Can't wait to read it! Let me know when you post it, ok? It sounds like it could be pretty interesting.
Sounds good! Can't wait to read it! Let me know when you post it, ok? It sounds like it could be pretty interesting.
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Eniitan : sounds interesting eni but remember if its 1923 that's after the end of WW1 and you should remember current (past) events at that time.

heres a time line from 1923 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/1923 

some things that happened but not all:
march 1st the USS Connecticut gets decommissioned and Greece adopts the Georgian calendar
march 2nd Time magazine hits news stands in the us for the first time
march 8th Lenin has a third stroke and retires as chairman of the soviet government
april 4th warner brothers is founded
april 28th Yankee stadium opens its doors

those are just some I picked that happened in 2 months so read the timeline so you know whats going on.

Eniitan : sounds interesting eni but remember if its 1923 that's after the end of WW1 and you should remember current (past) events at that time.

heres a time line from 1923 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/1923 

some things that happened but not all:
march 1st the USS Connecticut gets decommissioned and Greece adopts the Georgian calendar
march 2nd Time magazine hits news stands in the us for the first time
march 8th Lenin has a third stroke and retires as chairman of the soviet government
april 4th warner brothers is founded
april 28th Yankee stadium opens its doors

those are just some I picked that happened in 2 months so read the timeline so you know whats going on.
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Pretty good topic you have here! It will be really great to read what you come up with! I hope it comes soon!
Pretty good topic you have here! It will be really great to read what you come up with! I hope it comes soon!
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I was surprised at how much detail you have gone into. Good job; I'm glad your doing research on how life was back then. Teal seems like a nice character, looking forward to seeing her more interesting traits. About the scarf, I'm not sure a scarf from her Great Grandmother wouldn't be tattered... but maybe you already know how you are going to work it in.

Good job, thanks for sending me the link.
I was surprised at how much detail you have gone into. Good job; I'm glad your doing research on how life was back then. Teal seems like a nice character, looking forward to seeing her more interesting traits. About the scarf, I'm not sure a scarf from her Great Grandmother wouldn't be tattered... but maybe you already know how you are going to work it in.

Good job, thanks for sending me the link.
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   Nice . I must be honest and say I did not read ALL of the description .BUT I did not need to to know this is going to be a great story . Nice name by the way , Teal . And I never knew you wrote stories . Send me a link of the first chapter in case I can't find it please
   Nice . I must be honest and say I did not read ALL of the description .BUT I did not need to to know this is going to be a great story . Nice name by the way , Teal . And I never knew you wrote stories . Send me a link of the first chapter in case I can't find it please
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This is great to hear, I can't wait to read about it!  I think it is cool how you give a brief intro to your story, and you also sum it up nicely. So good job with that. I am sure that your story will be pretty awesome because every story you make is awesome!


So thanks for the heads up and the intro to your next story, I can't wait to read it! I know it will be awesome! You are very creative and all of your stories are simply amazing keep at it eniitan! You are just naturally good at this sort of thing! 
This is great to hear, I can't wait to read about it!  I think it is cool how you give a brief intro to your story, and you also sum it up nicely. So good job with that. I am sure that your story will be pretty awesome because every story you make is awesome!


So thanks for the heads up and the intro to your next story, I can't wait to read it! I know it will be awesome! You are very creative and all of your stories are simply amazing keep at it eniitan! You are just naturally good at this sort of thing! 
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