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Feed the Children!
10-06-13 04:39 PM
Barathemos is Offline
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Differently.... Edit* You guys will also be in chapter 2. Differently.... Edit* You guys will also be in chapter 2. |
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10-06-13 04:44 PM
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Ooh, nice story! It's a pretty interesting topic... Feeding Wailords to hungry children. And then being happy and filling gas. xD As this was part one, it seems really interesting. Can't wait for more! ![]() As this was part one, it seems really interesting. Can't wait for more! ![]() |
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This is awesome Barathemos! I must say, you write extremely well! I don't recall ever reading a short story by you if you've written one, and this was a pleasant surprise! You actually made me laugh on several occasions, the first being when the delivery man shouted "Thank the lords!" I don't know if you intended that pun or I'm really lame (wailord, get it?), but it was totally awesome! Plus, I could just hear him screaming it as he ran away as quickly as he could, totally relieved to get those off his hands. XD Thank you very, very much! I told you that you could do it! Stunning job... I'm so proud of you! Keep up the good work and always have faith in yourself! Don't let the small things get you down and grin because life is more fun when you do. ![]() Thank you very, very much! I told you that you could do it! Stunning job... I'm so proud of you! Keep up the good work and always have faith in yourself! Don't let the small things get you down and grin because life is more fun when you do. ![]() |
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10-06-13 04:45 PM
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I am assuming you copied and pasted from MS Word or another source because it is all messed up. Anyway, the story isn't bad, but isn't the most exciting. I am assuming that in the next part something awesome will happen, so be sure to summon me! |
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10-06-13 04:48 PM
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Haha I loved this story bara it is really good. And made me laugh lol I enjoyed this a lot thanks dear friend. ^-^ |
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10-06-13 04:51 PM
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Barathemos : Wow! Awesome story Bara! And its true. I am always the type of person who would "Chill out", lol. Be sure to summon me on your next part and thanks for including me in the story! ![]() ![]() |
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10-06-13 04:55 PM
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Whoa, this is pretty amazing dude, nice story! I thank you for mentioning me in your story here, I think that is awesome! Your writing skills are very well defined in this story. Awesome job man! This is definitely unique and funny at the same time. So know I have 3 different stories to keep tabs on, this one, the ones from goodboy and tgags. But anyways, nice job on this story, I think it is definitely an interesting read and this is pretty lengthy as well. Keep up the awesome work as always man! I look forward to reading your next story! I know it will be great! You have several important elements that a good story should have in this piece, so nice work on that! Keep up the awesome work as always man! I look forward to reading your next story! I know it will be great! You have several important elements that a good story should have in this piece, so nice work on that! |
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10-09-13 10:23 AM
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I read the chapters backwards, but now that I finished this one, I feel that I understand what's going on a bit better, and I like it even more. If you do more after part 2, I will make sure to keep reading. I read the chapters backwards, but now that I finished this one, I feel that I understand what's going on a bit better, and I like it even more. If you do more after part 2, I will make sure to keep reading. |
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